应用文写作专项“MusicandEmotion”开播致辞第二段突破课件高考英语一轮复习

应用文写作专项“MusicandEmotion”开播致辞第二段突破讲师：王雪冰考情解码考情解码学习目标01从“事实句+扩充句”到“高级句型升级02会写、写优、写亮第二段0405智能导览·极速定位01考情解码02体系构建03核心突破04实战演练05目录CONTENTS体系构建考情分析第一节（满分15分）假定你是李华，你校英语广播站计划开设一个全新的版块“MusicandEmotions”。现请你以广播站的名义写一篇开播致辞，内容包括：1.开播目的；2.版块介绍。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dearteachersandfellowstudents,写作目标•聚焦：开播致辞第二段（3-4句核心段）•掌握：“事实句+扩充句”基础结构•升级：用高级句型让表达更出彩主题短语储备事实类短语（陈述核心信息）•playsoftmusic,sharestoriesbehindclassicsongs,invitestudentstotalkaboutfavoritemusic,collectmusicrecommendations扩充类短语（补充细节/效果）•easestudypressure,carrydeepemotions,connectwithclassmates,maketheprogrammoreinteresting训练一

基础“事实句+扩充句1.ThisnewsectionwillplaysoftmusiceveryWednesday.（事实句）+这些轻柔的旋律能缓解你的学习压力，帮你在忙碌一天后放松下来。（扩充句）

2.Wewillsharestoriesbehindclassicsongs.（事实句）+这些动人的故事承载着深厚的情感，能让你更好地理解音乐的力量。（扩充句）Thegentlemelodiescaneaseyourstudypressureandhelpyourelaxafterabusyday.Thesetouchingstoriescarrydeepemotionsandletyoubetterunderstandthepowerofmusic.训练一

基础“事实句+扩充句3.Wewillinvitestudentstotalkabouttheirfavoritemusic.（事实句）+分享你的感受能让你和有相同喜好的同学产生共鸣，让节目更有趣。

Sharingyourfeelingscanletyouconnectwithclassmateswhohavethesametasteandmaketheprogrammoreinteresting.结果/影响训练二

基础版→高级句型1.ThisnewsectionwillplaysoftmusiceveryWednesday.Thegentlemelodiescaneaseyourstudypressureandhelpyourelaxafterabusyday.（定从）

ThisnewsectionwillplaysoftmusiceveryWednesday.Thegentlemelodies,whichcaneaseyourstudypressure,willhelpyourelaxafterabusyday.2.Wewillsharestoriesbehindclassicsongs.Thesetouchingstoriescarrydeepemotionsandletyoubetterunderstandthepowerofmusic.（现在分词短语）Wewillsharestoriesbehindclassicsongs.Listeningtothesestories,youcanbetterunderstandthepowerofmusic.训练二

基础版→高级句型3.Wewillinvitestudentstotalkabouttheirfavoritemusic.Sharingyourfeelingscanletyouconnectwithclassmateswhohavethesametasteandmaketheprogrammoreinteresting.（with复合结构）

Wewillinvitestudentstotalkabouttheirfavoritemusic.Withmorestudentsjoiningin,theprogramwillbecomemoreinteresting.训练三

连句成段1.引出目的/原因•为了……（To...）•鉴于……（Inviewof...）•由于……（Dueto...）•考虑到……（Considering...2.递进/补充信息•此外……（Furthermore...）•另外……（Inaddition...）•不仅如此……（What’smore...）•更重要的是……（Moreimportantly...）3.转折/让步•然而……（However...）•尽管如此……（Nevertheless...）•虽然……（Although...）•相反……（Onthecontrary...）4.总结/收尾•综上所述……（Tosumup...）•总之……（Inconclusion...）•因此……（Therefore...）•最后……（Finally...）训练三

范文呈现

ThisnewsectionwillplaysoftmusiceveryWednesday.Thegentlemelodies,whichcaneaseyourstudypressure,willhelpyourelaxafterabusyday.Besides,wewillsharestoriesbehindclassicsongs.Listeningtothesestories,youcanbetterunderstandthepowerofmusic.Moreover,wewillinvitestudentstotalkabouttheirfavoritemusic.Withmorestudentsjoiningin,theprogramwillbecomemoreinteresting.训练四

实战演练

新任务：为“MusicandEmotion”板块补充一个新活动•事实句提示：Wewillholdamonthlymusicrecommendationcontest.要求：1.先补充2个事实句（用前面的短语）；2.为每个事实句加扩充句（汉译英）；3.升级为高级句型（至少用2种）；4.用衔接词连成完整第二段，并标注高级句型。训练四

小组互评

同伴互评标准：•✅有3-4句（事实+扩充）•✅至少2种高级句型•✅逻辑连贯（用衔接词）

总结升华

1.核心流程回顾短语储备→事实句→扩充句（汉译英）→高级句型升级→连句成段2.得分技巧•扩充句：从“效果、细节、情感”切入，不空洞；•高级句型：定语从句、非谓语、with结构优先用，用对即得分；•连贯度：衔接词自然插入，