Section Ⅴ　Writing-如何介绍地点

SectionⅤ

Writing——如何介绍地点通·题型解读地点描写类作文，通常属于说明文。在具体考试中常以应用文，特别是书信式的应用文来考查。写作内容常包括某地点的地理位置、面积、人口、气候特点、历史、特产或特色景点、建筑等。有时，也可介绍一下人文风貌和文化特色。析·谋篇思路积·满分素材表达位置、人口1．ChinaliesintheeastofAsiaandonthewesterncoastofthePacificOcean.中国位于亚洲东部，太平洋的西岸。2．Thebeautifultownislocatedalongtheshoreofthelake.这个美丽的城镇坐落于湖的沿岸。3．Thevillageissituatedamongthemountains．这个村子坐落在群山之中。4．Shanghaiisabigcitywithapopulationofover20million.上海是一个有两千多万人口的大城市。表达特色1．HainanProvinceconsistsofHainanIslandandneighbouringislesaswellaswideseaareas.海南省由海南岛和附近的群岛及广阔的海域组成。2．Builtinthe16thcentury,thecastlehaswitnessedtoomuchcomingandgoinginhistory.建于16世纪，这座城堡见证了太多的历史浮沉。3．Thereisoneplaceyoucan'tmisswhilevisitingKaifeng—theKaifengHouse.参观开封时，有一个地方你不能错过——开封府。4．Withitsrichnaturalresourcesandamazingscenery,Xi'anisoneofChina'smajortouristcities.拥有丰富的自然资源和美丽的景色，西安是中国主要的旅游城市之一。表达变化1．Greatchangeshavetakenplaceoverthepastfiveyearsinmyhometown.我的家乡在过去的五年中发生了巨大的变化。2．Thankstothereformandopening-uppolicy，Chinahastakenonanewlook．得益于改革开放政策，中国的面貌已焕然一新。练·写作规范假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Alex要到你家乡的城市——重庆来玩，请你写封邮件向他介绍你家乡的城市。内容要点：1．邀请并欢迎Alex到你家乡的城市来；2．这个城市的地理位置、面积、人口、历史、名胜、名小吃、风土人情；3．祝愿旅途愉快。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearAlex,

.Yours，LiHua

第一步：认真审题谋篇布局

第二步：斟词酌句靓化表达1．得知你要来我的家乡重庆，我很想把它介绍给你。(一句多译)①_________________________________________________________(状语从句)②_________________________________________________________(分词作状语)WhenIlearnthatyouarecomingtomyhometownChongqing,Iwouldliketointroduceittoyoueagerly.LearningthatyouarecomingtomyhometownChongqing,Iwouldliketointroduceittoyoueagerly.2．重庆市位于长江上游地区(theupperreaches)。重庆拥有大约3000年的历史。___________________________________________________________.Chongqing________________________________．→_________________________________________________________(分词作定语)→_________________________________________________________(定语从句)ThecityofChongqingislocatedintheupperreachesoftheYangtzeRiver

hasahistoryofabout3，000yearsThecityofChongqing,locatedintheupperreachesoftheYangtzeRiver,hasahistoryofabout3，000years.ThecityofChongqingislocatedintheupperreachesoftheYangtzeRiver,whichhasahistoryofabout3，000years.3．重庆有超过3200万人口，面积82400平方千米。___________________________________________________________→__________________________________________________________(分词作状语)Chongqinghasapopulationofmorethan32million,andcoversanareaof82，400km2.Chongqinghasapopulationofmorethan32million,coveringanareaof82，400km2.4．重庆是一个山城，有许多景点，如解放碑(重庆象征性建筑)、武隆天坑。___________________________________________________________→_________________________________________________________(升级为定语从句)Chongqingisamountainouscitywithanumberofscenicspots,suchasJiefangbei(asymbolicbuildinginChongqing),andWulongTiankeng.Chongqingisalsoamountainouscity,wherethereareanumberofscenicspots,suchasJiefangbei(asymbolicbuildinginChongqing),andWulongTiankeng.

第三步：合理过渡完美卷面DearAlex,

.Yours，LiHua参考范文：Dear

Alex，LearningthatyouarecomingtomyhometownChongqing,Iwouldliketointroduceittoyoueagerly.ThecityofChongqing,locatedintheupperreachesoftheYangtzeRiver,hasahistoryofabout3，000years.Ithasapopulationofmorethan32million,coveringanareaof82，400km2.Itisalsoamountainouscity,wherethereareanumberofscenicspots,suchasJiefangbei(asymbolicbuildinginChongqing),andWulongTiankeng.InChongqing,youaresuretohaveagoodtasteofChongqinghotpot.JustlikethespicydishesinChongqing,peopleherearealsowarm-heartedandfriendly.Idobelieveyouwillhaveagoodtimehere.Yours，Li

Hua03.晚练(五)默写练习一Ⅰ.默写重点单词（每空2分，满分40分）1．

adj.具有民族特色的；异国风味的；民族的；种族的2．

adv.在市中心；往市中心

adj.商业区的，市中心的3．

n．传教（区）；重要任务；使命4．

n．连环画杂志；漫画杂志；喜剧演员

adj.滑稽的；使人发笑的5．

vt.&vi.(sought，sought)寻找；寻求；争取；（向人）请求ethnicdowntownmissioncomicseek6．

n．简图；图解；图表；示意图7．

n．日志；日记；报纸；刊物8．

vt.&n．夺取（生命）；宣称；断言9．

vi.&vt.逃走；逃脱；避开n．逃跑；逃脱；解脱10．

n．机会；运气→

adj.幸运的→

adv.幸运地diagramjournalclaimescapefortunefortunatefortunately11．

adj.加有香料的；辛辣的→

n．（调味）香料12．

adv.肯定；确实→

adj.清楚的；明确的13．

vi.发生；出现→

n．发生；发生的事14．

n．少数民族；少数派；少数人→

adj.轻微的；次要的spicyspicedefinitelydefiniteoccuroccurrenceminorityminorⅡ.词形变化填空（每空2分，满分10分）1．Formanyfamilies，average

(earn)arearound20，000yuanperyear.2．Iam

(fortune)enoughtoreadpoetrywrittenbytheworld-famouspoet.3．Theysoughttogetintotheclubbutwererefused

(admit).4．Asforthe

(select)ofbusinessmedia,wouldyouliketosharesomethoughtswithus?5．Hispurposeistogatherasgreata

(diverse)ofmaterialsaspossible.earningsfortunateadmissionselectiondiversityⅢ.默写核心短语（每空2分，满分20分）1．

（朝……）前进；（向……）去2．

寻找成功致富之路；闯世界3．

谋生4．

一系列或一连串（事件）5．

除了……外（还）；此外6．

导致；引起headtoseekone'sfortuneearnalivingaseriesofapartfrombringabout7．amixof

.8．join...to...

.9．abitof

.10．can'twait(todosth.)

.……的混合把……和……连接起来一点迫不及待（做某事）Ⅳ.选词填空（每空2分，满分10分）从上面默写核心短语中选择合适的完成下列句子1．Inthepastfewdecades，manyimmigrants

inAmericabydoingvarietiesofjobs.2．Ifelt

emotions，suchasdepression，lossanddespair.haveearnedalivingamixof3．Hiscomplainingtomeabouthismatters

mylosingmytemperjustnow.4．Apartfrommyclassmates，Ialso

thebookstoretoreadclassicsafterschoolthisafternoon.5．Themomentthebellrang，themajorityofthestudents

。dashoutoftheclassroom.broughtaboutheadedtocouldn'twaittoⅤ.微写作（满分20分）结合课文主题，使用本单元词汇与句型写一篇80词左右的短文1．现今，

几乎每个国家都重视多样的(diverse)文化，

保护文化多样性(diversity)也是我们的使命(mission)。2．通过这样做，我们可能(it'slikelythat)会从中受益。3．我们必须承认(admit),许多外国人来市中心(downtown)的目的就是希望目睹许多的(aseriesof)建筑物。4．除了(apartfrom)作为中国传统建筑的典型代表，这些建筑还是当地文化的象征。参考范文：Nowadays,almosteverycountrypaysattentiontodiversecultures,andit'sourmissiontoprotectculturaldiversity.It'slikelythatwecanbenefitfromitbydoingso.Wemustadmitthatindowntownarea,manyforeignvisitorscomeherewishingtowitnessaseriesofbuildings.ApartfrombeingthetypicalexamplesoftraditionalChinesearchitecture,thesebuildingsareasymbolofthelocalculture.

03.晚练(五)默写练习二Ⅰ.默写重点单词（每空2分，满分40分）1．

adv.特别；格外

adj.顶好的；超级的2．

n．配饰；附件；配件3．

n．纪念物；纪念品4．

n．百分率；百分比5．

n．气候6．

adj.温和的；和善的；轻微的7．

n．材料；布料；素材

adj.物质的；实际的superaccessorysouvenirpercentageclimatemildmaterial8．

n．衣服；服装9．

n．作品集；收集物；收藏品→

adj.集体的，共同的→

vt.搜集；收藏10．

vt.&vi.定居；结束（争论）；解决（纠纷）→

。n．解决；定居→

n．殖民者；移居者11．

n．建筑；建造；建造物；（句子、短语等的）结构→

v．建筑；修建；建造→

vt.重建；再建12．

vt.适合；满足……需要；相配；合身

n.西服；套装→

。adj.合适的；适当的→

adj.不合适的clothingcollectioncollectivecollectsettlesettlementsettlerconstructionconstructreconstructsuitsuitableunsuitableⅡ.词形变化填空（每空3分，满分15分）1．Therewasa

(neat)foldedpinksweateronthebackofthechair.2．Therearepoisonousmushroomsinthis

(contain).3．Thehousesdesignedforimmigrantsareunder

(construct).4．Ipromisethatyoursuitwillbedefinitelyreadyfor

(collect)onTuesday.5．Apartfromallthework，hehad

(finance)dilemmas.neatlycontainerconstructioncollectionfinancialⅢ.默写核心短语（每空2分，满分20分）1．

仅举几例2．

第一手；亲自3．atouristdraw

.

4．allyearround

.

5．turninto

.tonamebutafew(at)firsthand旅游景点一整年；全年变成；成为6．themajorityof

.7．inreallife

.8．varietiesof

.9．belocatedin/on...

.10．behometo...

.大多数在现实生活中各种各样的位于……；坐落于…………的栖息地/产地/家园Ⅳ.选词填空（每空2分，满分10分）从上面默写核心短语中选择合适的完成下列句子1．Iheadedtothefamousrestaurantwhich

thedowntowndistrict.2．Therainforest

diverseanimalsandplants.3．Aseriesofaccidentsthatoccurredinhislifeenabledhimto

.astrong-mindedman.islocatedinishometoturninto4．

mycolleaguespreferpractisingtaichi，whileafewlikekungfu.5．Hewritesjournals

，meaningthathedoessoeveryday.ThemajorityofallyearroundⅤ.语法填空（每空1.5分，满分15分）文中加黑词汇为本单元的重点词汇Althoughonlyasmallpercentageofpeoplesupportedhim，ayoungman1.

(wear)jeansandbootsstillheadedtoabigcity，whereheclaimedtoseekhisfortune.2.

(stand)onthebusystreet，hewhisperedtohimself,“Nowthatyoucan'treceivefinancialsupportfromyourfamily，youhavenochoi