年人教版英语九年级中考写作复习（建议信）课件

中考英语写作复习课（建议信）基于中考话题的应用文写作(Howtowritealetterofadvice?)教材链接话题Unit1What’sthematter?(八下)HealthproblemsandadviceUnit4Whydon’tyoutalktoyourparents?(八下)Personalproblemsandadvice学习目标在本节课学习结束时,学生能够：1.基于写作目的、文体和要求,分析范文结构，列出描述自身问题和给出建议的内容

要点；2.确定描述和评价建议的具体内容和改进方法；3.发现范文中作者给出建议的生动表达方式和句型，将其运用到自己的写作中；4.通过自评和互评，改进初稿的结构、内容和语言。Let’slookandsay:What’thematterwithhimorher?

hurtherselfcan’tgetonwellwithclassmatesparentsdon’tunderstandmefeelanxiousaboutexamsFreetalk:Whatotherproblemsdoyouhaveinyourdailylife?

Howcanwedealwiththem?problemsadviceGroup1healthGroup2schoolworkGroup3parentsGroup4friendsA:__________.WhatshouldIdo?B:Youshoulddo...You’resupposedtodo...You’dbetterdo...Whynotdo......schoolwork

parentshealthfriendsPair-work写作范例假如你是Peter,你的好朋友Jaiden遇到以下烦恼，请你给他写一份信来安慰她，并提出你的建议。Let’slistenandcheck(√)theproblemsJaidentalksabout.____I’mundergreatpressureonmystudy.____Idon’tgetenoughsleep.____I’mtooshytotakepartintheschoolactivities.____Idon’thaveanyfriends.____Ihadafightwithmyparents.√√√WhatadvicecanyougivetoJaiden?

I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchproblems.I’mgladtohelpyou.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou._____,althoughyou’reundergreatpressureaboutyourstudy.Youshouldaskteachersforhelp._____,lifeshouldn’tjustbeaboutgrades.Youshoulddofreetimeactivities,suchassportsandhangingoutwithfriends._____,youshouldn’tcompetewithyourclassmatestogetbettergrades.Youshouldhelpeachothertoimprove.Afterall,it’simportantforustolearnhowtounderstandeachother.Ihopeeverythingwillgowellsoon.

Whatdoyouthinkofthiswriting?Yours,BeautyWang.BeginningBodyEndingDearJaiden,First/Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith...Second/Secondly...Third/Thirdly/Finally/Atlast...结构(开头/正文/结尾)内容(要点是否齐全、是否有补充、是否有语法和拼写错误)句型

(单一还是多变)连词

(是否使用连词)You’resupposedtoYou’dbetterWhynotdo...?/Howaboutdoing...?假如你是李华，你的朋友Sam觉得父母给的压力太大，让他学习很多的技能，睡眠不好导致身体和精神状态很差，并且他不知道如何跟同学相处。请根据下面要点提出你的建议。Let’shelp:Whatshouldhedo?要求：1.文中须包含提示的所有信息；2.补充至少两条建议；3.合理增加细节，以使行文连贯；注意：1.词数80左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.邮件中不得出现真实姓名和校名；

建议……在学校：与同学友好相处其他：丰富业余活动，锻炼身体在家里：多与父母沟通DearSam,How’sitgoing?I’msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchproblems.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（正文部分需要涵盖-------连词+要点+补充）Ihopeeverythingwillgowellwithyousoon.Yours,LiHuaWritingGroup-workFirst,whydon’tyou...Second,you’dbetter...Third,maybeyoucould...Workinagroupoffourandshareyouradvicewitheachother.Thenmakeareportaboutyouradvice.onepossibleversion项目标准

自我评价同伴评价结构结构分明，衔接自然内容要点齐全，拓展合理语言语言优美，词汇丰富书写书写工整，无乱涂乱画What’syourfavoritesentence?____________________________________healthschoolworkparentsfriendsFirstly,...Secondly,...Finally,...Firstofall,...Besides,...Atlast,...Inthefirstplace,...What’smore,...Intheend,...Tobeginwith,...Inaddition,...Lastbutnotleast,...1.Whynotdo.../Whydon’tyoudo...2.Howabout/Whataboutdoing…?3.You'dbetterdo.../You’dbetternotdo...4.It'snecessarytodo...5.Youaresupposedtodo...6.It'sagood/greatideatodo...7.Doing...isagoodchoice/abetterchoice.healthschoolworkparentsfriends

stressmileDon’tbeafriadtoaskforhelp.Faceandsolvetheproblemsbravely.Keepmovingforward.

leepalkateadpendHomework1.Trytohelpothersbygivingthems