北师大高一英语上学期段考复习应用文写作课件

段考应用文写作目录Contents不定式作成分评分标准01020304段考真题作文拆解语料积累佳作赏析评分标准01第五档(很好)(13~15分):完全完成了试题规定的任务。(1)覆盖所有内容要点,表达清楚、合理;(2)应用了较多复杂、高级的语法结构和词汇;(3)语法结构或词汇方面使用准确,即使有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;表现了较强的语言运用能力;自然流畅地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。整体而言，完全达到了预期的写作目的。终极目标1.覆盖所有要点2.语法复杂，词汇高级3.衔接词流畅01好印象——卷面整洁02好形式——合理分段03好给分——要点全面04好内容——虎头凤尾0506好逻辑——巧用连词好

语言——语言华丽目标分解02佳作赏析2.Hearingthat

......,Iamwritingto因为听到...,所以...So,withdrawyourhesitationandjoinin,yourpresenceishighlyappreciated!所以，放下你的犹豫，加入我们吧，你的到来将备受期待！stimulatevt刺激，激励stimulatethepassionforlaunchvt发起，开始regardingprep关于Theschoolwilllaunchacourseregarding......practicaladj实用的Iwouldbemorethangladifyoufindmysuggestionspractical.raiseawarenessof提升意识callonpeopletotakeaction呼吁人们采取行动衔接词moreveradv此外而且thusadv因此Havingread....extendmyhearfeltgratitudeto表达诚挚感激immersesbin

沉浸于betotallycaptured/grippedby....完全被吸引最终，最后（衔接词）UltimatelyEventuallycordiallyadv诚挚地initiallyadv最初地vividadj生动的boostn增长，刺激aboostfor/toWordsfailtoconveymygratitudeforsth.Mygratitudetosbforsthisbeyonddescription.03段考真题作文拆解(24年合肥一中段1)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Ben得知你校开展了丰富多彩的校本课，请你给他写信介绍你最喜欢的体育校本课

(PEschool-basedcourse)的相关情况，内容如下：1.上课的时间和内容；2.喜欢的原因和收获。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。真题拆解

内容要点

背景介绍DearBen,Myschoolhaslaunchedaseriesofschool-basedcourses.I’mwritingtosharewithyoumyfavoriteone,PEschool-basedcourse.Thecourse,

scheduled

tobeheldeveryFridayafternoon,isverycolorful,including

allkindsofsportssuchasbasketball,soccer,volleyball,andbadminton.Itisalsothebestpartofmyweek,because

notonlycanit

enhancemyphysicalfitness,makingmefreshandenergeticthroughouttheday,butalso

helpmemakelike-mindedfriends

whilelearning.What’sthemostimportantisthatIhavegained

adeeper

insightinto

teamspirit.Howaboutyourfavoriteschool-basedcourse?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua

背景介绍收尾Myschoolhaslaunchedaseriesofschool-basedcourses.I’mwritingtosharewithyoumyfavoriteone,PEschool-basedcourse.范文拆解----开头背景介绍：Hearing/Knowingthatyouareinterestedintheschool-basedcoursesheldinourcampus,Iamwritingtosharewithyoumyfavouriteone,PEschool-basedcourse.Thecourse,

scheduled

tobeheldeveryFridayafternoon,isverycolorful,including

allkindsofsportssuchasbasketball,soccer,volleyball,andbadminton.范文拆解—活动内容安排在bescheduledforbescheduledtodosthScheduledforFridayafternoons,thiscourse

providesavarietyofsportsprogramthatincludesactivitiessuchasbasketball,soccer,volleyball,andbadminton.非谓语！！Itisalsothebestpartofmyweek,because

notonlycanit

enhancemyphysicalfitness,makingmefreshandenergeticthroughouttheday,butalso

helpmemakelike-mindedfriends

whilelearning.范文拆解—喜欢原因“Notonly”部分倒装（助动词/情态动词/be动词提前，主语后置）

“Butalso”部分不倒装（保持正常语序）倒装规则：notonlybutalso练习Heforgotthekeys.Heleftthelightsonaswell.Notonly

didheforgetthekeys,buthealsoleftthelightson.Sheisatalentedsinger.Sheisalsoaskilleddancer.Notonly

issheatalentedsinger,butsheisalsoaskilleddancer.助动词did提前be动词提前04语料积累

Facedwithchallengingtraining,whateverchallengesarose,shealwaysinsistedonusingallherleisuretimetovoluntarilystrengthentraininguntilsheentirelygraspeditwithhighquality.

Sufferingfromstressfultraining,toughasitwas,shebecameaddictedtoit.

非谓语写作运用Facedwithchallengingtraining.Facingchallengingtraining.befacedwith被动语态变成非谓语toughasitwas形容词/名词/副词/动词+as/though+主语+谓语

让步状语从句Childasheis,heknowsalot.他虽然是个孩子，但懂得很多。死扣一个例子记住！DoggyasIam,

Iwillnotdosuchathing.Sufferingfromstressfultraining,toughasitwas,shebecameaddictedtoit.whateverchallengesarosewhatever=nomatterwhat不论，不管

让步状语从句Whereveryougo,

Iwillfollowyou.Facedwithchallengingtraining,whateverchallengesarose,shealwaysinsistedon....nomatterwhatchallengesarose好作文必备五大结构1.分词的使用2.with结构3.It句式4.倒装句5.定语从句表时间先后（Havingdone动作已完成）Hearingthis,afewpeoplebegantorunafterhim.表逻辑关系（主动/被动）Encouragedbythefactthat…,wemadeeveryefforttodo…描述人物、景色、事件或者状态强调句

Itis+被强调部分+that…主语从句

It作形式主语的主语从句

形式主语Itis+adj./n.+forsb.todosth.Only/Notonly...b.地点状语放句首

c.As引导的倒装句

Onthewallhangsapictureofourfamily.引出新人物、新事物a.两句合成一句（限制性定从）b.用which指代