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2026届读后续写训练（三）高考真题篇022025I卷第①句第②句第③句第④句第⑤句The“321”Principle（十句五定法）

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原文解码(whattoread)读原文MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehadpreparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.when

(time)初夏举办小型聚会前what（conflict冲突）筹备聚会，妻子准备零食，“我”整理后院where(setting场景)emotionalchange期待who(character)我、妻子theme读原文Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn‘tcountedon（依靠；期望；料想到）:MybrotherchosetobringhisdogToby,a50poundballoffire（比喻精力旺盛，充满激情，有时候甚至难以控制的人，尤指小孩儿）.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockover（撞到）myniece'ssmallboysandmysixmontholdgranddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.when

(time)聚会进行时，哥哥到达后what（conflict冲突）哥哥带狗Toby赴约，“我”因担心狗撞到孩子心狗撞到孩子，要求哥哥看住狗并让其待在后院where(setting场景)emotionalchange担忧、谨慎who(character)我、哥哥、Tobytheme读原文Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekidsplentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.when

(time)聚会期间，晚饭后what（conflict冲突）起初一切顺利，Toby在后院消耗精力，后天下雨，大家进屋where(setting场景)emotionalchange平静转突发who(character)我、哥哥、众人、Tobytheme读原文Itwasanawkwardmoment.I

didn’twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn'thappywithdrivinghomewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.when

(time)众人进屋后，因Toby去留问题产生分歧时what（conflict冲突）就Toby是否进屋陷入尴尬，哥哥最终决定离开where(setting场景)emotionalchange尴尬、不悦who(character)我、哥哥themeAfewdayspassed,andIhadn‘theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:“Notachance.”Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted（离开）.Afterall,Ihadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he’llgetover（克服，恢复，原谅）

it,Ireasoned.（推断）when

(time)聚会结束几天后what（conflict冲突）“我”联系哥哥希望他再来，遭拒后认为他会消气where(setting场景)emotionalchange意外、不以为意who(character)我、哥哥themeTwomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,myconscience(良心)keptbotheringme.Itriedtoputmyselfinmybrother'sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeofthirtyfiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstantcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.when

(time)聚会结束两个月后what（conflict冲突）妻子建议“我”联系哥哥，“我”起初抗拒，后良心不安，换位思考理解哥哥处境及Toby对他的意义where(setting场景)emotionalchange愧疚、醒悟who(character)我、妻子、哥哥themePara.whowhatwhenemotion1

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我、妻子我、哥哥、Toby我、哥哥、众人、Toby我、哥哥我、哥哥我、妻子、哥哥筹备聚会，妻子准备零食，“我”整理后院哥哥带狗Toby赴约，“我”因担心狗撞到孩子，要求哥哥看住狗并让其待在后院起初一切顺利，Toby在后院消耗精力，后天下雨，大家进屋就Toby是否进屋陷入尴尬，哥哥最终决定离开“我”联系哥哥希望他再来，遭拒后认为他会消气妻子建议“我”联系哥哥，“我”起初抗拒，后良心不安，换位思考理解哥哥处境及Toby对他的意义初夏举办小型聚会前聚会进行时，哥哥到达后聚会期间，晚饭后众人进屋后，因Toby去留问题产生分歧时聚会结束几天后聚会结束两个月后期待担忧、谨慎平静转突发尴尬、不悦意外、不以为意愧疚、醒悟注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault._______________________本段要详细描写“我”是如何认识到自己错误的，最终内心的愧疚感必须转化为“必须去道歉”的具体行动决心。①whatwasmyfault?②howdidIdo?③whatdidIdecidetodoandwhatdidweprepare?Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.______本段描写和解场面：抵达时的紧张、真诚的道歉、哥哥渐进的反应，并可以利用Toby的动作作为“催化剂”来打破僵局，最终以一个象征和解的开放式动作（如开门邀请）结尾。①whoansweredthedoor?Whatweretheirreaction?②whatdidIsayanddo?Whatwasmybrother’sresponse?③whatdidwedotogether?④whatwasthetheme?忽略哥哥“妻子去世、健康不佳”的背景，续写时仅简单道歉，未体现对哥哥情感需求的理解，导致情节单薄。例如：只写“我向哥哥说对不起”，未提及Toby对哥哥的特殊意义，偏离人物动机。​常见误读案例贰

构思逻辑(whattowrite)情节构思三原则​逻辑连贯：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________细节支撑：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________呼应主旨：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“我”意识到错误后主动道歉，符合前文“良心不安”的铺垫；带妻子做的饼干（呼应前文妻子的角色）和对Toby的关怀，体现诚意。​通过Toby的反应（摇尾巴、嗅饼干）缓和气氛，用哥哥“眼神软化”“声音沙哑”等细节展现情绪变化。​结尾以拥抱和解，强调亲情的修复，呼应“换位思考与包容”的主题。续写线索：反思过错——电话留言道歉——约定见面——带饼干登门——拥抱沉默——谈心和解——领悟亲情叁

语言提升(howtowrite)Paragraph1Paragraph1：

Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault._______________________Iletthemleaveintherainwithoutbeingunderstood.

Iheadedtomybrother’shome.Ifeltguilty(内疚的）.词汇：guilty；ashamed；embarrassed；awkward.Howtoshowguiltindifferentways?情绪描写表情描写（五官）动作描写（肢体语言）语言描写词块和句的积累scene1:Discoveringthetruth,theoldmanrealizedhismisjudgment,hewasdeeplyashamedofhisbehaviorAwaveof______washedoverhim,makingithardforhimtobreathe.tip1：具体描写使文章内容更生动，更

有表现力。shameThenextfewdays_________hisconsciencebeingtortureddeeply,feelinglikesittinginpinsandneedles.(如坐针毡）witnessedscene2:Theoldmanfailedtokeephispromiseanddidn’tknowwhattodonext.hewasashamed.He_______hisfacewithhishandsinshameforwhathehaddone.coveredscene3:Theoldmanmisunderstoodhisson.tip2：动作描写使表达多样化。第一段情节细化（围绕“Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.”）

1.愧疚感加剧，回忆冲突细节短语：sinkin（逐渐意识到）、replaythesceneinmymind（在脑海中回放场景）hurthisfeelingsdeeply（深深伤害他的感情）actwithoutthinking（不假思索地行动）athoughtstruckme（我突然想到）1.这只狗对他来说不仅仅是宠物，这是他的家人。Thedogwasn’tjustapetforhim;itwashisfamily.

2.我的不体谅迫使他和托比冒雨离开，无人理解。MyinconsiderationforcedhimandTobytoleaveintherainwithoutbeingunderstood.

第一段情节细化（围绕“Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.”）

一.愧疚感加剧，回忆冲突细节3.他离开时失望的表情一直萦绕在我脑海。Thememoryofhisdisappointedfacewhenheleftkepthauntingme.

4.一想到这，我就感到内疚和羞愧，呼吸困难。Atthethoughtofthis,afeelingofguiltandshamewashedoverme,makingithardformetobreathe.

5.一个内心的声音一直在我的脑海中回荡，我不能再拖延这个道歉了。AninnervoicekeptechoinginmymindthatIcouldn’tdelaythisapologyanylonger.

二.理解哥哥的处境，自责情绪加深6.当我告诉妻子我的计划时，她表示支持并建议烤一些哥哥最喜欢吃的饼干。WhenItoldmywifemyplan,shewassupportiveand

suggestedbakingsomeofmybrother’sfavoritebiscuits7.我抓起钥匙，跳进车里，毫不犹豫地往哥哥家去。Igrabbedmykeys,jumpedintothecarandheadedto

mybrother’shomewithoutasecondthought.三.下定决心道歉，计划行动8.我不能让这个误会毁掉我们的关系。Icouldn’tletthismisunderstandingruinourrelationship.Paragraph2Paragraph2：

Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.______Mybrotheropenedthedoor.

Iapologizetomybrother.Tobywaggedhistail.Wesattogetherinthelivingroom.tips:everycreaturehasasoul/spirit(万物有灵）第二段情节细化（围绕“Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother’sdoor.”）

1.到达门前的紧张与犹豫短语：heartracing（心跳加速）、hesitateforasecond（犹豫片刻）、gathermycourage（鼓起勇气）、knockonthedoor（敲门）、prayforforgiveness（祈求原谅）1.我的心因紧张砰砰直跳。我深吸一口气，敲了门。Myheartpoundedwithnervousness.Takingadeepbreath,Iknockedatthedoor.1.我抬手敲门时，手在颤抖。MyhandstrembledasIliftedthemtoknock.2.见面时的互动（哥哥开门，Toby的反应）短语：openthedoorslowly（慢慢开门）、alookofsurprise（惊讶的表情）、Tobybarksoftly（Toby轻轻吠叫）、waghistail（摇尾巴）、stareatmesilently（静静地盯着我）3.我看到了一个惊讶的表情，夹杂着哥哥的冷漠和恼怒。Isawalook/expressionofsurprise,mixedwithindifferenceandannoyancefrommybrother.2.托比冲了出来，疯狂地摇尾巴。Tobyrushedout,wagginghistailwildly.

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Toby立刻认出了我，用鼻子蹭我的手，仿佛在劝他原谅。Tobyrecognizedmeatonceandnuzzledmyhand,asifurginghimtoforgive.真诚道歉，解释自己的疏忽短语：saysorryfromthebottomofmyheart（发自内心道歉）、admitmymistake（承认错误）、explainmycarelessness（解释我的疏忽）、askforforgiveness（请求原谅）、expressregret（表达后悔）5.他接过饼干，示意我进去。Hetookthebiscuitsandsignaledmetoenter.6.当我们坐在舒适的客厅时，尴尬慢慢消失了，取而代之的是故事，笑声和泪水。Aswesatinthelivingroom,theawkwardnessslowlyfaded,replacedbystories,laughterandtears.

4.我来真诚地道歉，非常抱歉给你造成的痛苦。Icametoapologizesincerely.I’msosorryforthePainIcausedyou.

4.抱歉让你陷入那样的境地，我本该想到你有多不容易。I’msorryIputyouinthatposition.Ishould’vethoughtabouthowhardthingshavebeenforyou.

4.哥哥的回应与和解短语：softenhistone（语气缓和）、letoutasigh（叹了口气）、admithisownstubbornness（承认自己的固执）、invitemein（邀请我进屋）、patchthingsup（修复关系）

5.关系缓和的温馨细节短语：shareacupoftea（一起喝茶）、chatlikeoldtimes（像以前一样聊天）、Tobycurlupnearby（Toby在旁边蜷着）、asenseofrelief（如释重负）、restoreourbond（修复我们的关系）8.通过坦诚的对话，我们逐渐治愈了伤口，打破了我们之间的僵局。Throughopen-heartedconversations,wegraduallyhealedthewoundandbroketheicywallbetweenus.7.他拍了拍我的肩膀说：“或许我们都被自尊困住了。”Hepattedmyshoulderandsaid,“Iguesswebothletourpridegetintheway.”8.我们聊天时，我知道我们之间的隔阂终于在消除。Aswetalked,Iknewtheriftbetweenuswasfinallyhealing.亲情友情主题升华Asthesayinggoes,“Honestyisthebestpolicy./Nopains,nogains./Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.”

俗话说：“诚实是上策。/不劳无获。/患难见真情。”2.ItwasatthatmomentthatIhadafullunderstandingofthesignificanceoffamily.

就是在那一刻，我完全明白了家庭的重要性。3.Theirfriendshipgrewstrongerastheyembracedeachother'simperfectionsandstoodbyeachother'sside.

随着彼此接纳对方的不完美并始终相互支持，他们的友谊变得更加牢固。4.Thereisnoshameinadmittingourmistakesorforgivingeachotherbecauseweareafamily.

承认错误或原谅彼此并不可耻，因为我们是一家人。Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Thedogwasn‘tjustapetforhim;itwashisfamily.MyinconsiderationforcedhimandTobytoleaveintherainwithoutbeingunderstood.Atthethoughtofthis,afeelingofguiltandshamewashedoverme,makingithardformetobreathe.AninnervoicekeptechoinginmymindthatIcouldn’tdelaythisapologyanylonger.whenItoldmywifemyplan,shewassupportiveandsuggestedbakingsomeofmybrother'sfavoritebiscuits.Igrabbedmykeys,jumpedintothecarandheadedtomybrother'shomewithoutasecondthought.

Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.Myheartpoundedwithnervousness.Takingadeepbreath,Iknockedatthedoor.ThedoorcreakedopenandoutrushedToby,withhistailwaggingwildly.ThenIsawalookofsurprise,mixedwithindifferenceandannoyancefrommybrother.Itookadeepbreathandbegan,"Brother,Icametoapologizesincerely.I’msosorryforthepainIcausedyou.

Tobyisasmuchapartofyourfamilyasanyhumanmember,andIshouldhaveshowngreaterempathy."Almostinstantly,hiseyeswetwithtearsashetookthebiscuitsandsignaledmetoenter.Aswesatinthecozylivingroom,theawkwardnessslowlyfaded,replacedbystories,laughterandtears.Throughopen-heartedconversations,wegraduallyhealedthewoundandbroketheicywallbetweenus,(provingthatempathy,forgivenessandcommunicationarethetruebridgestomendbrokenbonds.)肆

实践演练写作示例​Irealized