Unit12单元话题写作（课件）-九年级英语全一册课件（人教版）

Unit12Lifeisfulloftheunexpected.单元写作

[ˌʌnɪkˈspektɪd]adj.出乎意料的；始料不及的TeachingObjectives语言知识:能熟练描述自己幸运/不幸的事情。01学习能力:用一般过去时和过去完成时书写自己或他人难忘的经历。02文化意识:了解不及时做某事而造成的危害。03思维品质:培养学生良好的行为习惯。04本单元以“unexpectedevents”为话题展开学习，重点学习了语法——过去完成时态。该话题涉及内容较多，可以讲述自己的亲身经历，也可以讲述自己的亲眼所见或亲耳所闻。话题命题形式常采用语言描述形式，涉及日记、记叙文等文体。具体到本单元书面表达中，要求同学们能运用一般过去时和过去完成时描述自己或他人的经历。单元话题解析Canyourememberaluckyoranunluckyday?Whathappened?Makesomenotesaboutwhatyouremember.3aWhatwasthedate?Whathappenedfirst?Wasthisluckyorunlucky?Why?Whathappenednext?Howdidthedayend?Howdidyoufeelaboutthisday?catchthebusrushoutofthedoorrunquickly/fasttocatchthebusbeoutofbreathaftermyrungetenoughsleepbegoodathaveatalentforkeepcalm/mycoollookforiteverywhere,ask...

aboutmy...giveitbacktomewina(n)...competitionfindthelostthingsExamplesmissthelastbusthealarm(clock)doesn’tgooffrain/snowheavilyforgettosetmyalarmtoonervous/worried/afraidto...notpracticehardworried,sadmyeyesfillwithtearslosea(n)...

competition

losethingsExamplesMylucky/unluckydayIwillalwaysrememberthedate…Thiswastheluckiest/unluckiestdayofmylife…WhenIwokeupthatmorning…Laterthatday,…Icouldn’tbelieve…Then/Afterthat,…Finally,…Ithink…Whatalucky/anunluckyday!开篇点题描述经历总结感慨3bWriteastoryaboutyourluckyorunluckydayandtellyourstorytoapartnerortheclass.

写作指导【审清题目】内容：记叙幸运或不幸的一天

文体：记叙文时态：以一般过去时和过去完成时为主

人称：以第一人称为主逻辑顺序：事情的发展顺序或时间顺序头脑风暴lucky/unluckdaylucky/unluckeventswinthegame/losethegamefeelingscatchthebus/missthebuslosethings/findthingshappy,excited,sad,unhappy,upset巧构思开篇点题阐述经历Mylucky/unluckdayIwillalwaysrememberthedate...Thiswastheluckiest/unluckiestdayofmylife...WhenIwokeupthatmorning...Laterthatday...Icouldn’tbelieve...Then/Afterthat,...Finally,...Whatalucky/anunluckyday!总结感慨巧衔接连词first,firstofall，tobeginwith…third,intheend,aboveall,inaword,generallyspeaking…second,then,inaddition…顺序/步骤becauseassothereforeasaresult…因果关系1.Itwasthe(un)luckiestdayofmylife!

2.Youcan’timaginehow...

Iwas.3.Iwasso...

that...

4.Icouldn’tbelievethat...5.What’smore,Ieven...

6.Afterthecompetition/game/show,Ilearned/realizedthat...7.Whatgood/badluck!

8.Howlucky/unluckyIwas!添佳句SampleWriting1

MyluckydayIwillalwaysrememberthedateSeptember14th,2016.Thiswastheluckiestdayofmylife.

WhenIwokeupthatmorning,itwasraining.

Iwasabouttogotothebusstationtotakethebustoschoolwhenmyunclecalledmeup.Myunclesaid(that)hecouldgivemealiftinhiscar.开头点题:谈论幸运的一天以第一人称为主,时态用一般过去时和过去完成时

Laterthatday,IrealizedthatIhadforgottenmywalletandcouldn’tbuylunch.Icouldn’tbelieveit.ThenmyfriendLisasaidthatshecouldshareherlunchwithme.Afterthat,Iwaspraisedbymymathteacher.BecauseI

got

the

highestscore

in

the

math

exam.Thatnightmyparentsweresohappythat.theypromisedmethattheywouldbuyabikeformeasaprize.

IthinkthatwasthebestdayI’dhadinalongtime.Whataluckyday!以第一人称为主,时态用一般过去时和过去完成时总结感慨，抒发感情SampleWriting1SampleWriting2MyUnluckyDayIwillalwaysrememberthedate–AprilFool’sDaylastyear.Thiswastheunluckiestdayofmylife.

WhenIwokeupthatmorning,Ibrushedmyteeth,washedmyface,andthenIreadEnglishforhalfanhour.Itwastimetoeatmybreakfast.MylittlebrothergavemeapieceofOreo.Iwasverygladtoeatitfirst.ThenIfeltstrange.Ittastedspecial.Laterthatday,IknewmybrotherputtoothpasteintotheOreo.Icouldn’tbelieveIwasfooledbyhim.Ibrushedmyteethagain.Afterthat,Iwenttoschool.MyclassmateLilytoldmeIgotbadgrades.Ithoughtshewasjoking.Finally,Iwasunhappytoknowthat’strue!.IthinkIhadasadandunluckyday.Whatbadluck!◆开头句①…was

the

luckiest

day

of

my

life.②Life

is

full

of

the

unexpected.

It’s

normal

to

experience

something

good

or

bad.◆中间句①By

the

time

I

got

to

school,the

bell

had

rung.②Unfortunately,something

unexpected

happened.◆结尾句①I

think

that

is

the

best

day

I’ve

ever

had.②Thanks

to

the

experience,I

understand

the

saying

that

friendship

first,competition

second.【名言积累】①Plans

always

fall

behind

changes.计划赶不上变化。②Every

cloud

has

a

silver

lining.乌云背后有阳光。/否极泰来。/因祸得福。

有时候,计划不如变化快。计划好去短途旅行,结果突然下起了大雨；和朋友约好去图书馆,结果朋友突然感冒发烧……在现实生活中,很多事情会让你意想不到,充满了未知和不确定性。假设你是李华,请以“Life

Is

Full

of

the

Unexpected”为题,结合自己的实际生活并根据提示，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文,记述一件你所经历的出乎意料的事情,在英语课上与大家交流。

要点如下：

1.What

happened

that

day?

2.How

did

you

feel?

3.What

have

you

learned

from

it?审题指导1.文体：夹叙夹议2.人称：以第一人称为主3.时态：一般现在时和一般过去时4.写作要点：①描写那天发生的事情；②表达自己的感受；③总结从中学到了什么思路点拨范文赏析Life

Is

Full

of

the

Unexpected

Life

is

full

of

the

unexpected.

It

is

normal

to

experience

something

good

or

bad.①It’s

important

because

it

can

teach

us

something.

②This

reminds

me

of

an

experience

of

mine

two

years

ago.One

day,we

had

a

basketball

game

at

school.③Unluckily,something

unexpected

happened.

I

was

about

to

shoot

the

ball

when

a

player

in

the

other

team

stopped

the

ball.④I

was

eager

to

win

so

I

couldn’t

stop

shouting

at

him.What’s

worse,it

turned

into

a

terrible

quarrel.⑤As

a

result,the

teacher

warned

us

and

we

couldn’t

take

part

in

the

competition

anymore.⑥I

was

very

regretful

that

day.

⑦Thanks

to

the

experience,I

understand

the

saying

that

friendship

first,competition

second.

To

win

is

important,but

to

have

fun

is

more

important.

【温馨提示】请将上述加黑的部分按对应的序号在下面的方框中一一升格！#1.2Life

Is

Full

of

the

Unexpected

Life

is

full

of

the

unexpected.

It

is

normal

to

experience

something

good

or

bad.①______________________________________________升格技巧技巧一：巧用what引导的主语从句升格①What’s

important

is

that

it

can

teach

us

something.

②________________________________________________________One

day,we

had

a

basketball

game

at

school.③_____________（不幸地）,something

unexpected

happened.

I

was

about

to

shoot

the

ball

when

a

player

in

the

other

team

stopped

the

ball.技巧二：巧用that引导的定语从句升格②

This

reminds

me

of

an

experience

that

I

had

two

years

ago.Unfortunately④_________________________________________________________What’s

worse,it

turned

into

a

terrible

quarrel.⑤_______________________________________

and

we

couldn’t

take

part

in

the

competition

anymore.⑥____________________________技巧三：巧用so…that…句型升格④技巧四：巧用被动语态升格⑤

I

was

so

eager

to

win

that

I

couldn’t

stop

shouting

at

him.As

a

result,we

were

warned

by

the

teacherHow

regretful

I

was

that

day!续表

Thanks

to

the

⑦________（珍贵的）

experience,I

understand

the

saying

that

friendship

first,competition

second.

To

win

is

important,but

to

have

fun

is

more

important.技巧五：巧用how引导的感叹句升格⑥技巧六：巧用高级词汇升格③⑦valuable

生活就像开盲盒,你永远不知道下一个是什么,每一天的生活都充满了不确定性。这一天可能是幸运的,也可能是倒霉的；这一天可能是快乐的,也可能是悲伤的。请根据下面的提示，以“My

____

Day”为题写一篇英语短文,描述你的一天。

提示：

（1）When

was

your…day?

（2）What

happened

on

that

day?

（3）How

did

you

feel

and

what

did

you

learn

from

it?

注意：

（1）短文须包括提示中的全部要点，可适当发挥。

（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

（3）词数80个左右。审题指导1.文体：__________2.人称：__________3.时态：________________________4.写作要点：①________________；②________________；③__________夹叙夹议第一人称一般过去时和一般现在时事情发生的时间事情发生的经过个人感受思路点拨（温馨提示：请先完成下面的写作提纲）LuckyWhen

was

the

day?What

happened

to

me?How

did

I

feel?小试身手My

_______

Day_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lucky

December

20th,2024

was

the

luckiest

day

of

my

life.

When

I

woke

up

that

morning,the

sky

was

very

dark.

I

rushed

to

the

bus