冀教八下英语Unit 8《单元写作》课件

单元写作自然灾害Unit8Naturaldisasters写作维度本单元的写作主题是“自然灾害和防范”，一般涉及以下几个方面：(1)描述某类自然灾害的特点与影响(2)给出特定场景下的防灾建议(3)叙述一次灾害经历或模拟逃生过程等。写作模板自然灾害第一步，介绍这次自然灾害的结果；第二步，介绍我们国家是如何应对这次自然灾害的；第三步，介绍作为学生应该做什么。黄金语料(从教材内外积累好句)开头段①Earthquakesalwayshappensuddenly,soitisdifficulttowarnpeopleaboutthem.②Disastrousheavyrainsoccurredinourhometown.③InDecember2023,somepartsofourcountryexperiencedaheavysnowstorm.中间段①Whenyou’reinside,youmustn’tjumpoutofhighbuildings.②Youshouldstayawayfromwindowsandheavyfurniture.③Thesnowstormwasachallenge,butwitheveryone’seffort,weovercameit.④What’smore,youmustkeepcalm,bebraveandhelpful.⑤Andtheydidtheirbesttofightagainst...⑥Manytreesfelldown,blockingtheroadsanddestroyingpowerlines.⑦Ourcountrytookquickactiontodealwiththesnowstorm.⑧Whenyouareoutside,you’dbetterkeepawayfrom...结尾段①Afteralongtime,everythingwentonverywell.②Asstudents,weshouldalsodoourpart.③Weshouldlearntounderstandhowtodealwithnaturaldisasters.经典例题(从经典例题学会审题)2023年12月，我们国家的部分地区遭遇了多年不遇的罕见暴雪。请以“TheSnowstorm”为题，根据提示并结合所学内容，写一篇不少于80词的英语作文。提示词：experience，destroy(破坏)，falldown，traffic(交通)，send①Whatwastheresultofthesnowstorm?②Whatdidourcountrydowiththesnowstorm?③Whatshouldwedoasastudent?TheSnowstorm__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审要点：雪灾结果、国家的应对措施、学生应采取的行动审体裁：记叙文（夹叙夹议）审时态：一般过去时、一般现在时审人称：第一人称、第三人称精彩范文展示TheSnowstormInDecember2023,somepartsofourcountryexperiencedaheavysnowstormthatwasrarelyseenbefore.Manytreesfelldown,blockingtheroadsanddestroyingpowerlines.Thetrafficwasseriouslyaffected,andmanypeoplehadtostayathome.①In2023,Canadaexperiencedmanybigforestfires,affectinganareaofover60,000squarekilometres.（教材P106）Ourcountrytookquickactiontodealwiththesnowstorm.Thegovernmentsentrescueteamstocleartheroadsandrestorethepowersupply.Theyalsoprovidedfoodandwarmclothesforthoseinneed.②ThePLAtroopsfoughtagainstthisterriblefloodandprotectedmillionsofpeoplefromdrowning.（教材P106）Asstudents,weshouldalsodoourpart.Wecanhelpclearthesnowinourneighborhoodorvolunteertohelpthoseaffected.Weshouldlearntounderstandhowtodealwithnaturaldisasters.③Fortyphoons,weshouldstayindoors,awayfromwindowsandfromanydangerousobjectsoutside.（教材P100）Thesnowstormwasachallenge,butwitheveryone’seffort,weovercameit.【亮点词块】takequickaction立刻行动providesth.forsb.为某人提供某物thoseinneed有需要的人witheveryone’seffort在大家的努力下【高分句子】InDecember2023,somepartsofourcountryexperiencedaheavysnowstormthatwasrarelyseenbefore.(定语从句)2023年12月，我国部分地区经历了一场罕见的强暴雪。实战演练自然灾害时有发生，而且发生得很突然，很难预警。请你以“地震”为主题，根据以下提示写一篇主题报告，给同学们提供一些地震逃生的建议。InsideOutside*Don’tjumpoutofhighbuildings.*Stayawayfrombridges...*Hideunderthetable,butstayawayfrom...*Ifyouareinacar,stayinside.*Whenthegroundstopsshaking,...*Inthemountains,becarefulof...Staycalm,bebrave...注意事项：1.短文词数：不少于80。2.短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。Whattodoinanearthquake__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文参考WhattodoinanearthquakeEarthquakesalwayshappensuddenly,soitisdifficulttowarnpeopleaboutthem.Hereissomeadviceforyoutokeepsafe.Whenyou’reinside,youmustn’tjumpoutofhighbuildings.Youcanhideunderatable.Andyoushouldstayawayfromwindowsandheavyfurniture.You’dbetterleavethebuildingquicklywhenthegroundstopsshaking.Butdon’tusethelifts.Whenyouareoutside,you’dbetterkeepawayfrombridges,trees,streetlightsorpowerlines.Whenyou’reinacaroronabus,youshouldstayinside.Whenyouareinthemounta