险境求生篇（复习）（解析版）

险境求生篇“陷入绝境”是险境求生主题中比较常见的情节之一，故事中的主人公在外出游玩或探险的过程中，遭遇各种意外被困或面临野兽袭击，在实施自救或获得救援之前往往经历了一段异常艰难的时期。本情节一般包含“突遭意外”“雪上加霜”和“峰回路转”三个部分。知识点1五大万能句型万能句式1：突遭意外，陷入绝境句式：Withoutwarning,________struck,andIwassuddenly.（替换“”为灾难场景+被动状态，突出“突发性”与“无助感”）例句：Withoutwarning,alandslidestruck,andIwassuddenlyburiedunderrocksandmud.（毫无预兆地，山体滑坡突然发生，我瞬间被埋在了岩石和泥土之下。）仿写句1：毫无预兆地，洪水袭来，我们瞬间被困在了屋顶上。Withoutwarning,thefloodwatersrose,andweweresuddenlytrappedontheroof.仿写句2：毫无预兆地，野火蔓延，我瞬间被浓烟包围。Withoutwarning,thewildfirespread,andIwassuddenlysurroundedbythicksmoke.仿写句3：毫无预兆地，地震爆发，整个山谷瞬间陷入混乱。Withoutwarning,theearthquakehit,andtheentirevalleywassuddenlyinchaos.万能句式2：雪上加霜，危机升级句式：JustwhenIthoughtthingscouldn’tgetworse,________happened.（强调“最坏时刻”的二次打击，增强戏剧张力）例句：JustwhenIthoughtthingscouldn’tgetworse,myflashlightdied,leavingmeintotaldarkness.（就在我以为情况不可能更糟时，我的手电筒却没电了，让我陷入完全的黑暗。）仿写句1：就在我以为情况不可能更糟时，我的手机也失去了信号。JustwhenIthoughtthingscouldn’tgetworse,myphonelostsignal,cuttingoffallcontact.仿写句2：就在我以为情况不可能更糟时，脚下的冰面突然裂开了。JustwhenIthoughtthingscouldn’tgetworse,theicebeneathmyfeetsuddenlycracked.仿写句3：就在我以为情况不可能更糟时，一只狼从树林中缓缓走出。JustwhenIthoughtthingscouldn’tgetworse,awolfslowlyemergedfromthewoods.万能句式3：峰回路转，希望初现句式：Inthedistance,Ispotted________,andasparkofhopelitupmyheart.（“sparkofhope”比喻希望之火，极具画面感和情感张力）例句：Inthedistance,Ispottedafaintlightthroughthetrees,andasparkofhopelitupmyheart.（远处，我看到树影间透出微弱的光，心中顿时燃起一丝希望。）仿写句1：我远远望见一架直升机在盘旋，心中顿时燃起一丝希望。Inthedistance,Ispottedahelicoptercirclingabove,andasparkofhopelitupmyheart.仿写句2：我看到山顶升起一缕青烟，心中顿时燃起一丝希望。Inthedistance,Ispottedathincolumnofsmokerisingfromthehill,andasparkofhopelitupmyheart.仿写句3：我听见远处传来搜救犬的吠叫声，心中顿时燃起一丝希望。Inthedistance,Ispottedthebarkingofsearchdogs,andasparkofhopelitupmyheart.万能句式4：成功脱险，重获新生句式：As________pulledmetosafety,Iburstintotears,knowingIhadmadeit.（突出“被救”瞬间的情感释放，增强感染力）例句：Astherescueteampulledmetosafety,Iburstintotears,knowingIhadmadeit.（当救援队将我拉到安全地带时，我泪如雨下，知道自己终于得救了。）仿写句1：当爸爸冲进山洞把我抱出来时，我忍不住哭了，知道自己终于安全了。AsDadrushedintothecaveandpulledmeout,Iburstintotears,knowingIhadmadeit.仿写句2：当绳索将我从悬崖边拉起时，我哭了出来，知道自己活下来了。Astheropeliftedmefromthecliffedge,Iburstintotears,knowingIhadmadeit.仿写句3：当消防员破门而入把我救出时，我泪流满面，知道自己逃过一劫。Asthefirefighterbrokeinandpulledmetosafety,Iburstintotears,knowingIhadmadeit.万能句式5：感悟升华，生命顿悟句式：Thatexperiencetaughtmethat________isn’taboutavoidingdanger—it’sabout________.（用于结尾段，升华主题，体现成长与顿悟）例句：Thatexperiencetaughtmethatsurvivalisn’taboutavoidingdanger—it’saboutstayingcalmandnevergivingup.（那次经历让我明白，求生不在于躲避危险，而在于保持冷静、永不放弃。）仿写句1：那次经历让我明白，勇气不在于无所畏惧，而在于恐惧中依然前行。Thatexperiencetaughtmethatcourageisn’tabouthavingnofear—it’saboutmovingforwarddespitefear.仿写句2：那次经历让我明白，生命的意义不在于安逸，而在于绝境中依然相信希望。Thatexperiencetaughtmethatthemeaningoflifeisn’taboutcomfort—it’saboutbelievinginhopeevenindespair.仿写句3：那次经历让我明白，真正的力量不在于身体强壮，而在于内心的坚韧。Thatexperiencetaughtmethattruestrengthisn’taboutphysicalpower—it’saboutinnerresilience.知识点2高频金句突遭意外场景1：暴雪1.Afiercesnowstormhadsweptthroughthearea.一场猛烈的暴风雪席卷了这个地区。2.Thecarsintheparkinglotwerehiddenunderthesnow.停车场里的汽车都被雪掩埋了。3.Thepathwasblockedbyatwo-meter-highwallofsnow.道路被一堵两米高的雪墙拦住了。4.Thatareawasheavilystrickenbyasnowstormlastnight.那片区域昨晚遭受了严重的暴风雪袭击。场景2：狂风暴雨1.Thewindwaspickingup.风越来越大。2.Theroaringwindpulledupmanytrees.呼啸的风将许多树根连根拔起。3.Ithadbeenrainingheavilyforalmosttwoweeks.大雨已经下了接近两周了。4.Outofthewindow,aviolentstormsweptacrossthetown.窗外猛烈的暴风雨席卷了整个小镇。5.Thebranchesofthetreeswereswingingandthegarbagebintippedover.树枝在摇摆，垃圾桶被掀翻了。6.Afteraflashoflightningandaburstofthunder,rainstartedtopourdown,beatingheavilyagainstthewindows.一阵电闪雷鸣之后，大雨倾盆而下，重重地打在窗户上。场景3：洪水海啸1.Theriverroaredthroughthecountrysidewithtremendousforce.河流以巨大的力量咆哮着，穿过乡村。2.Theycouldhearaterribleroarcomingfromthefarendoftheriver.他们能听到从河流的尽头传来的可怕吼声。3.Wavesabouttwelvemetershighcamerushingin,drowningeverything.大约12米高的海浪涌来，淹没了一切。4.Thewallofwaterwascomingfaster.Itseemedtobeswallowingeverythinginitsway.浪潮更为迅猛。它所到之处，似乎一切都要被它吞噬。场景4：地震1.Suddenly,thegroundshookasiftheearthweresplittingapart.忽然间，地面震动，大地仿佛要裂开了。2.Anearthquakewithamagnitudeof5.7hadstruckthemountain.一场5.7级的地震袭击了这座山。3.Icouldseetheroadbelowmebreakingandtreesshakingfromtheirrootsup.我可以看到我脚下的路在断裂，树木从根部向上全都在摇晃。4.Thewall-lengthwindowbrokeinfrontofme,withhugesharppiecesofglassrainingdownuponthesofa.大开窗在我面前碎掉了，巨大而又锋利的玻璃碎片如雨点般落在沙发上。场景5：火灾1.Everythingontheroadwasconsumedbyfire.路上的一切都化为灰烬。2.Fannedbyawesterlywind,thefirespreadrapidlythroughtheforest.在西风的助推下，火势在森林中迅速蔓延。3.Heavysmokefilledtheairasthewind-blownflamesskippedfromonetreetoanother.借着风势，火从一棵树烧到另一棵树，空气中弥漫着浓烟。场景6：迷路1.Itriedtotakeashortcutbutgotlost.我想走捷径，但迷路了。2.Theclimbershadlosttheirwayinthedark.登山者们在黑暗中迷失了方向。3.Weheadedoffinthewrongdirectionandgotlost.我们走错了方向，迷路了。4.Soontheirpathwascompletelycoveredwithsnowandtheyrealizedtheywerelost.很快，他们的路完全被雪覆盖，他们才意识到迷路了。5.Havingbeenwalkinganxiouslyforaboutanhouraroundtheforest,wefailedtofindourwayout.我们在森林里焦急地走了大约一个小时，也没能找到出路。场景7：猛兽1.Thecougarinchedtowardsitsprey.美洲狮向它的猎物逼近。2.Suddenly,acougarrushedintothetrees.突然间，一只美洲狮冲进了树林。3.Apiercinghowlechoedthroughthesandbank.一声刺耳的嚎叫在沙丘上回荡。4.Agiantcougarmadeitswaythroughthetallgrass.一只巨大的美洲狮在高高的草丛中穿行。雪上加霜场景1：环境恶化1.Theskyblackenedasthestormapproached.风暴将至，天空变得一片漆黑。2.Therewasasuddenfall/dropintemperature.温度骤降。3.Thedarknessofnightwasrapidlycomingon.夜幕迅速降临。4.Whenhecametohimself,hefoundhimselftrappedinthedark.他醒来时，发现自己眼前一片漆黑。5.Astheblackcloudsgathered,thedarknessincreasedaroundhim.乌云聚集，他周围越来越黑。6.Thetemperatureclimbedto40degreesasthesunbeatdown.太阳火辣辣地照着，温度攀升到40度。7.Thesunbegantosinkandhewasgettingcolderbytheminute.太阳开始落下，他感到越发寒冷。8.Hearingtheroarofthelion,thechildrenstoodrootedtothespot,unabletomove.听到狮子的吼叫声，孩子们站在原地不敢动弹。场景2：物资短缺1.Besides,foodandwaterwererunningout.此外，食物和水快用完了。2.Tomakemattersworse,themotorstoppedworking.更糟糕的是，发动机停止了运行。3.TheGPStheyhadbroughtwiththemhadstoppedworking,whichonlymadethesituationworse.他们带来的GPS停止了工作，这只会让情况变得更糟。4.What'sworse,hedidn'thaveanyfoodorwaterwithhim,letalonehiscellphoneorothersupplies.更糟糕的是，他没有带任何食物和水，更不用说手机或其他用品了。场景3：疲惫受伤1.Lyingontheground,Ifeltdizzy.我躺在地上，头晕目眩。2.Hisleftleghadbeentwistedandhecouldn'tmoveitatall.他的左腿已经扭伤了，根本不能动。3.Duringthosedays,hesufferedfrombothcoldandhunger.在那些日子里，他饥寒交迫。4.Withhisrightlegtrappedunderastone,helookedhelplessanddesperate.他的右腿被一块石头压住了，他看起来无助又绝望。5.Wefelttiredandhungry.What'sworse,twoofuswereinjuredontheway.我们感到又累又饿。更糟糕的是，我们有两个人在途中受了伤。6.Withherhead,arms,andlegsallbleeding,shesufferedgreatpain,makingmiserablesounds.她的头、胳膊和腿都在流血，她遭受巨痛，发出痛苦的声音。场景4：孤立无援1.Theykeptshoutingforhelp,butnoonecame.他们一直在喊救命，但没有人来。2.Theyhadn'tseenasinglepersoninthepastthreedays.在过去的三天里，他们没有看到一个人。3.Hecalledouthiswife'sname,buttherewasnoresponse.他喊着妻子的名字，但没有收到任何回应。4.Heyelled,butthesoundoftherushingwaterdrownedhimout.他大喊大叫，但湍急的水声淹没了他的声音。峰回路转场景1：一线希望1.Hehadonelasthopetoholdonto.他还抱着最后一线希望。2.Icoulddonothingbuthopeforthebest.我别无选择，只能往好处想。3.Shepinnedallherhopesonsomeonenoticingthesmoke.她把所有的希望都寄托在有人能注意到烟雾上。4.Therewasstillaremotechancethattheywouldfindheralive.他们仍然有一线希望能把她活着找到。5.Shehadnotyetgivenuphopethatshewouldbefoundbytherescuers.她还没有放弃，期待被救援人员发现。6.Shespedup,hopingagainsthopethatherfriendwouldbewaitingforher.她加快了速度，心中抱着一线希望：她的朋友会在等她。7.Thoughourfoodwouldn'tlastlong,westucktothehopethatwewouldberescuedsoon.虽然我们的食物维持不了多久，但我们坚信我们很快就会获救。场景2：成功脱险1.Thecougarfledimmediately.这只美洲狮立即逃走了。2.Thethreechildrenweresafeandsound.这三个孩子安然无恙。3.Newsoftheheroicdeedspreadthroughherlittlevillagelikewildfire.这个英雄事迹的消息在她的小村子里不胫而走。4.Thecougardisappeared,butthestoryofLarrane'swisdomandbraverywasstillspreadingaroundthevillageandbeyond.美洲狮走了，但Larrane充满智慧和勇气的故事依然在村子内外流传。5.Totheirsurprise,thefurrygiantsuddenlystoppedchasingthem,asifithadrealizedtheymeantnoharm.令他们惊讶的是，这个毛茸茸的“巨人”突然不再追逐他们，好像意识到了他们没有恶意。练习一、结合以上所学表达，翻译句子。1.这时候，我们开始感到疲乏，雨也下大了。Bynowwewerebeginningtogettiredand__________.2.Grady绝望地冲到他们的营地，大喊救命。Gradydashedtotheircampdesperately,__________.3.它突然出现，把孩子们吓得站在原地不敢动弹。Asitsuddenlyappeared,thechildrenweresoscaredthatthey__________,unabletomove.4.我们抱有一线希望，希望我们的儿子是幸存者之一。Wewere__________thatoursonwasamongthesurvivors.5.我们大声呼救，但不出所料，没有收到任何回应。Weyelledforhelp,butunsurprisingly,__________.6.他在地上翻来覆去睡不着，时不时地发出痛苦的声音。Hetossedandturnedontheground,__________.7.几分钟内狂风升级成猛烈的暴风雨，像是要把我和帐篷一起吹走。Withinafewminutes,thewindsincreasedto__________thatthreatenedtoblowmytentawayandmealongwithit.8.我们往快熄灭的火里加了些木柴，把所有希望都寄托在有人能注意到火光上。Wefedsomewoodintothedyingfire,__________.9.我们迷路了，又累又饿。更糟的是，天又下起雨来了。We__________,__________.Totopitalloff,itstartedtorain.10.意识到这个动物没有恶意，他们就收拾好所有的东西，以最快的速度离开了露营地。__________,theygatheredalltheirstuffandleftthecampingsiteasquicklyastheycould.二、结合以上所学，补全段落内容。Thebearquicklyrosetoitsfeet,lookingfiercerthanbefore.Colinthrewsomesausagesatit,hopingthefoodwoulddistractitsattention.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________翻译句子详解1.itwasrainingheavily/therainwaspouringdown翻译：雨下得很大；雨倾盆而下解析：“rainheavily”是常用表达，描述雨下得大；“pourdown”形象体现雨如倾倒般落下，二者都用于描绘雨势。2.shoutingforhelp翻译：呼喊求救解析：“shoutfor...”表示“为……呼喊；大声要求”，“help”是“帮助”，整体就是因需要援助而呼喊。3.stoodrootedtothespot翻译：站在原地一动不动（像扎根在那里一样）解析：固定短语，“rooted”有“扎根”含义，形象表现人因惊讶、恐惧等，双脚像扎根在spot（地点、spot（地点、场所）场所），无法挪动。4.hopingagainsthope翻译：抱一线希望；绝望地希望（明知希望渺茫仍怀抱期待）解析：习惯表达，强调在几乎没希望的情况下，仍怀揣期待，试图出现转机。5.therewasnoresponse翻译：没有回应；没有反应解析：“response”是“回应、反应”，该句简洁说明不存在回应的情况，比如呼喊、询问后没得到反馈。6.makingmiserablesoundsnowandthen翻译：不时发出凄惨的声音解析：“miserable”是“凄惨的、痛苦的”，“nowandthen”表示“不时、偶尔”，即时不时传出那种让人觉得难受的声响。7.aviolentstorm翻译：一场猛烈的暴风雨解析：“violent”有“猛烈的、强烈的”意思，用于形容storm（暴风雨），体现其强度大、破坏力可能强。8.pinningallourhopesonsomeonenoticingthelight翻译：把我们所有的希望都寄托在有人注意到这束光上解析：“pinone’shopeson...”是固定搭配，意为“把希望寄托在……上”，就是寄希望于他人发现光线，盼能带来转机。9.gotlost;feelingtiredandhungry翻译：迷路了；感觉又累又饿解析：“getlost”是“迷路”常用表达；“tired”（疲惫的）和“hungry”（饥饿的）用“and”连接，描述身体感受。10.Realizingtheanimalmeantnoharm翻译：意识到这只动物没有恶意解析：“realize”是“意识到、认识到”，“meannoharm”是“没有恶意；不伤人”，整体是说察觉到动物不会带来伤害。二、结合以上所学，补全段落内容。Unfortunately,itdidn’twork.Thebeastchargedathim,bitinghisleftleg.TheacutepainmadeColinscreamoutwithfright.Suddenly,Colinrememberedthebearsprayinhispocket.Hardlyhadhetakenitoutwhenhesprayeditontothebear’sfacewithfullstrength.Thesuddenattackdrovethebearaway.解析：这段讲Colin遭遇野兽（熊）攻击，被咬伤左腿后，想起口袋里的防熊喷雾，刚拿出来就全力喷向熊脸，把熊赶走的过程。“Hardlyhadhetakenitoutwhen...”是“一……就……”结构，体现动作接连发生，符合紧急情境下迅速采取行动的逻辑，和前面学的表达（如描述危险场景、行动反应等）可关联，用于练习在叙事段落里运用相关短语、句式。高考真题演练2020年7月浙江卷（拍照北极熊遇险）Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本文主要讲述了人与熊对抗，之后成功脱险的故事。主人公的感情线变化为：兴奋渴望→惊恐→放松。剧情线以主人公如何与北极熊周旋并成功摆脱它展开。由第一段的段首提示句可知：几分钟后，熊又回到营地。接下来可通过场景渲染，描写当时令人颤栗惊恐的画面，例如“Roarsandscreamspiercedthesilencewithneedle-likeshrillness.”这不仅合理地描写了熊的反应，也描绘出让人战栗的场景。由第二段的段首提示句可知：此时，直升机到了。如果想要进行续写两段的合理衔接，第一段的结尾可描写成“Afterthoroughlyscrutinizingthearea,thebeartrottedforwardafewsteps.”这样可以营造出危急的场景。“我们”看到直升机的到来，感到绝处逢生的喜悦，可以以人物心理描写作为第二段的开头，重点描写喜极而泣的状态，例如“MyheartleapedwithjoyasIknewwewerelikelytobesaved.”最后，结尾部分需要迅速收束，并说明成功逃脱的结局。参考范文1Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Thenwerealizedthatthesprayhadonlyangeredhimevenmore,forheseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefencelikemad.Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Elligrabbedseveralpiecesofgarlicbreadandthrewthemoverthefence.Itworked!Thebearstoppedtheattackandrantothebread.Butitwasn’tlongbeforeheateupallthebreadandcamebackagain.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!”Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.Iquicklytookoutthecameraandphotographedtherarescene—wewererobbedbyapolarbear!参考范文2Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Roarsandscreamspiercedthesilencewithneedle-likeshrillness.ThenoisesturnedElliandIpalewithhorror.Ifearedthatthegiantwoulddestroyourwholefence.Heroaredrepeatedly,shatteringwhatwasleftofthesilence.Elliseizedthisopportunitytotakesomepicturesofthebear.Theanimal’snoisesechoedallaroundus.Webetrayedourfeelingsbyhuddlingtogether,shiveringwithfear.Afterthoroughlyscrutinizingthearea,hetrottedforwardafewsteps.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.MyheartleapedwithjoyasIknewwewerelikelytobesaved.Elliusedpeppersprayagaintobuyusenoughtime.Butthistimethebearbecamemorealert.Heregardeduswiththemercilessnecessityofhunger,sowethrowallthefoodwehave.Hethenturnedawayandstarteddevouring.Aswewereclimbingtheropeladder,Elliprayedlikethousandtimestoshowthankfulnessofbeingsafeandsound.2018年6月浙江卷（森林骑马遇险）Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。根据第一段所给首句Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.这一句呼应前文UnclePaul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。参考范文1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.DadandIfounditwassocutethatwedecidedtochaseit.Afterawhile,wewerecompletelylostintheforest.Therewasnothingleftinoursightbutthetrees.“Wemaynotbeabletomakeitbacktothefarmhouseintimeforsupper.”Ithoughttomyself.Afteraseriesoffruitlessattemptstofindawayout,wefelthungryandtired.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wegotstuckintheforest.Andanunexpectedshoweraddedtothedifficultyofusinfindingawayhome,forallthetrackswehadmadedisappearedbecauseoftherain.Iwasalmostontheedgeofbreakingdownwhenmyfathersaid,“Don’tworry,myson.Irememberthereisarivernearthefarmhouse.Findtheriverandwewillbebackhome.”Finally,wefoundtheriverandgotbacktothehousealongit.Needlesstosay,weatealatedinner.参考范文2Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.MyhorseturnedtothelefttoavoidthelittlerabbitasIheldontightlyandtriednottofall.Thenmydadturnedaroundandshouted,“Holdon!”Allofasuddenthehorsebegantorun.Mydadtriedtokeepupbehindus.Forafewminutesmyhorsesloweddowntoatrotandthenstoppedbesideariver.Ilookedaroundandrealizedthatwewerewayoffthetrack.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Luckilythestarscameoutandgaveusalittlelightwhenwewerelookingforthewaytothefarmhouse.Afterwhatmusthavebeenseveralhours,wesuddenlyheardthesoundofsheepinthedistance.MydadandIbothrodeourhorsestowardsthesoundofthesheep.AswegotcloserwesawUnclePaulwithaflashlightwavingusover.Whatanight!2017年6月浙江卷（骑行遇狼）Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that’sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac’srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac’sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追赶).Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【解析】本文主要讲述了Mac在骑自行车前往阿拉斯加的途中，被一只狼追赶的故事。时态要考虑以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。同时要兼顾字数的要求，不要过多，关键词列出5个以上，需要均匀分布在两段中。考生要注意几个关键信息和情节变化并结合给出的内容提示进行合理构思。参考范文1Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycleandrushedtothedoorofthecar.ButbeforeMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoattack.Luckily,themagicspraysavedMacathirdtime.Seeingthewolfbackoff,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmanclimbedintothecarinnotime,shuttingthedoorbehindhimheavily.BeckylookedoutofthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbicycleasifitwereakill.Soonafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macgotoutofthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“ItwasreallyanightmareandIthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”saidMacinashakyvoice,tearsgatheringinhiseyes.Forhim,lifecouldneverbemorebeautiful.AftersayinggoodbyetoPaulandBeckywithgratitude,thethreemencontinuedtheirtrip,agreeingnevertoseparateagain.参考范文2Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Maccrashedintothecarwithaloudbang.Asaresult,hefelloffthebicycleandhadhisleftankletwisted.HardlyhadMacstoodupwhenthewolfarrivedandwasabouttolaunchanotherattack.Macwasgoingtodiewhensuddenlythewolfwashitrightontheheadbyapieceofrock.Thewolffellback,howlingwithpain.ItwasPaulwhodidthis.BeckyhelpedMacclimbintothecar,whilePaulkeptshoutingandthrowingstonesatthewolf.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.TheywereshockedatwhattheysawandjoinedPaul.OneofMac’sfriendspickedoutsomerawmeatandthrewittothewolf.Satisfiedwithwhathegot,thewolfranintothewoods.MacthankedPaulandBecky,“HowgratefulIamthatyoustoppedtosavemeandIoweittoyouthatI’mstillalive.”AsMacgotinjured,thethreemenhadtogiveuptherestoftheirjourneyandreturnedhome.2016.10浙江卷（森林迷路）OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"andwalkedaway.Withnopathtofollow,