2026届高考英语二轮复习：写作解析 课

综合二写作指导应用文写作指导

认真审题，把握要写的核心内容和人称、时态。假定你是李华，你的外国留学生朋友James想在中国进行社会实践，现有如下两种选择：博物馆讲解员或乡村中学志愿者。James来信向你寻求建议，请你给他回信，内容包括：1.建议其中一项活动；2.说明至少两点理由类型：回信时态：将来时时态为主人称：二人称核心内容：推荐的理由

写作知识储备--回信常用开头语1.自我介绍：IamLiHua,comingfromamiddleschool,whichisthebesteducationinstitutioninmybeautifulcity.2感谢信：Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourhelp.3.道歉信：Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyapologyforanyinconveniencecaused.4.询问信：Iamwritingthislettertoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithsomeinformationwhichisveryimportanttome.5.建议信：Iamwritingthislettertomakesomeconductivesuggestions.6.邀请信：Iamwritingthislettertoinviteyoutocomewithusinanimportantissue.7.请求信：Iamwritingtoaskyouwhetheryoucandomeafavor.DearJames,范文：Howiseverythinggoing?Basedonyourinterests,Iwouldrecommendyoutobecomeamuseumguide.（17words）你也可以这样写--老师作品DearJames,

开篇直奔主题（高分句1）I’mpleasedtoreceiveyoure-mail,whereyouaskedmehowtochooseapart-timejob.Iadviseyoutobearuralteacher.(24words)

范文：Firstly,workingasamuseumguidewillprovideyouwithauniqueopportunitytosoakyourselfinChinesehistoryandculture,offeringinsightsintothecountry’spastandpresent.What’smore,byengagingindailyconversationswithtouristsandexplainingtheculturalsignificanceoftheartifactsinChinese,you’llhaveamplechancetopracticeandenhanceyourlanguageproficiency（能力）.Hopefully,mysuggestionswillbeofhelptoyouandfeelfreetoreachoutifyouneedfurtherguidance.

（79+17）=96Bestregards,LiHua

老师作品Foronething,youcanbenefitalotfromyourruralteaching.高分句2：Foranother,childrenwhoreceiveyoureducationcanlearnmoreaboutthecultureofyourcountry.高分句3：Furthermore,volunteerteachingnotonlyprovidesachanceforthemtoreceivegoodeducationandincreasetheirdesireforknowledgebutalsosetsagoodexampleforthemincontributingtoourcountry.Iwishmysuggestiontobehelpfultoyou.(69+24=93words)续写写作指导文章主旨大意本文是记叙文，以人物为线索而展开，讲述了住在沿海城市的玛丽亚和彼得发现塑料袋被扔在海滩上，对此很苦恼，决定要做点什么来呼吁大家保护海洋。

1.（故事的背景介绍）玛丽亚和彼得发现海岸和水中发现了很多塑料袋：MariaandPeterlivedinacoastalcity.Thegreatestpleasureinsummerforthemwastoswimattheirlocalbeachafterschool.Butonedaytheystartedtolosetheirenthusiasmforswimminginthewaters.Moreoftenthannot（通常情况下）,theywouldfindplasticbagsthrownonthebeach.Worsesill,astheyswaminthewater,someplasticbagswouldfloataroundthemandevensticktotheirlegswhentheywalkedtotheshore.

2.（续写背景介绍：拯救措施无效）Theywereupsetanddecidedsomethingneededtobedonetostopthebeautifulseabecomingconsumedbywaste.Oneweekend,MariaandPeterbroughtabigbagtothebeachanddeterminedtocleanitup.Sweatstreameddownfromtheirforeheadwhiletheybentdownandpickeduptheplasticbags.Totheirdisappointment,afteraday’shardwork,therewerestillmanyplasticbagslyingonthebeachorfloatinginthewater.Goinghomewithachinglegsandarms,MariaandPeterwerealmostdefeatedbyastrongsenseoffailure.3.和妈妈交流了塑料袋的事情：Thatnightoverdinnerwiththeirparents,thepairatesilently.Noticingtheirlowspirits,Motheraskedgently,“Youtwolookedsodown.Whathappened?“ExchangingglanceswithPeter,Mariarepliedinalowvoice,“It’sthoseannoyingplasticbags.Wetriedtocleanupbutitwasjustimpossible.

4.末段是续写的重要信息段：在爸爸的提示下，玛丽和彼得要发动更多的人来保护海洋：Understandingthepair’sdisappointment,theirfatherpattedthemonthebackandcomforted,“Well,it’sreallyhardforjusttwoofyoutofixsuchabigproblem.”Justtwoofus.“complainedMariaandPeter,lookingateachother.Suddenly,anideaflashedthroughtheirminds,theireyesshiningwithexcitement.“yes,that’sthepoint!Weshouldmakemorepeopleawareoftheproblemandencouragethemtotakeaction!”thepairsaidinchorus.

Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.“两人很快吃完晚饭，上楼开始计划。”可知，第一段可描写MariaandPeter商量出了什么样的对策。根据第二短的提示，第一段要写决定在网上制作视频、写文章来呼吁大家一起爱护环境。（第一段写过程。）“他们既兴奋又紧张，在微信上发布了这段视频和文章。”可知，第二段可描写视频和文章在网上发布后得到的反应以及大家都行动起来才是本文的落脚点。（第二段写结果）

范文：Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.MariaandPeterdecidedtotakeadvantageoftheInternet.“Maybewecanwriteanarticletoarousepeople‘sawareness.”Mariaproposed.“Goodidea!Wecanalsomakeavideo!”Peteradded.Thenextfewhourswitnessedtheirheateddiscussionandgrowingconfidenceinacleanandbeautifulcoast.Thenextday,theywenttothebeachandfilmedashortvideoshowingplasticbagslyingonthebeachandfloatinginthesea.高分句1

Peter,whowasgoodatwriting,wroteanarticletalkingaboutthepresentsituationofthebeachandaskingpeopletotakepartintheclean-up.Excitedandnervous,theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat.Totheiramazement,theirpostwentviralonline（网上病毒式传播）immediately.高分句2

Countlesscommentsfloodedinsayinghowheartbrokentheywerewhenlookingatthepollutedbeachandocean.高分句3：WhatamazedMariaandPetermorewasthatnumerouspeopleintheircommunity,encouragedbytheirefforts,offeredtojoinintheirclean-up.Moreandmorepeoplecametothebeachtocollectplasticbagsandtheyalsoappealedtootherstoavoidthrowingorusingplasticbags.Ayearlater,withtheirjointandcontinuouseffort,thecoastregaineditsbeautyandMariaandPeterregainedtheirlong-awaitedpleasure.

你也可以这样写--老师作品

Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner,thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning.高分句1：Afterfurtherdiscussion,thedecisiontheymadewastomakeavideotoarousepeople’sawarenessofprotectingthesea.高分句2：Sothenextdaytheywenttothelocalbeachwheretheyhadswumthedaybefore.高分句3：Theyusedacameratorecordtheflyingplasticbagsoverthebeachandtheonesthatwasfloatingonthesea.高分句4：Peterwroteanarticledescribingthesituation