Unit7SectionB1a-1dWriting课件人教版（2012）九年级英语全册

WritingUnit7Teenagersshouldbeallowedtochoosetheirownclothes.1.Beabletotalkaboutfamilyrules.2.Beabletoknowhowtowriteapassage.LearningObjectsLeadinIcan’t____________________./Iamnotallowedto_________.driveWhataretherules?watchTVplaycomputergamesusemymobilephoneIcan’t____________________./Iamnotallowedto_________.listentomusicreadbooksIcan____________________./Iamallowedto_________.Iamaskedto___________.dohomeworksweepthefloorfamilyruleswatchTVplaycomputergamesfinishhomeworkontimeeatjunkfoodstayuphangoutwithfriendusemobilephonesIcan.../Ican’t...Iamnotallowedto...Iamallowedto...Iamaskedto...Shareyourfamilyrules.Doyouagreewithyourfamilyrules?Why?talkbackmakeanagreementWhatifyoudisagreewithsomeoftherules?

DiscussionNorules,nogames.

无规矩，不成方圆。

Respecttherules,andtheywillrespectyou.

尊重规则，规则便会尊重你WhatrulesWhyyouagreeordisagreeHow

theruleshouldbechangedcan’tplaycomputergamesAgree·paylessattentiononstudy·bebadforeyesandhealth·maynotbeabletogotouniversitycan’twatchTVDisagreenotallTVprogramsarebadforstudentsneedtorelaxsometimes...IshouldbeallowedtowatchTVfor2hoursonweekendsdohouseworkAgreedevelopgoodhabitslookafterthemselvesunderstandparents.3aCommunicatewiththem,explainoueselvesreasonablyandclearly.3b

Writeadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.审（体裁、人称、时态）理（结构）扩（拓展要点）连（用过渡词、句连接句子和段落）查（单词拼写、时态、主谓一致）评（互评）Howshouldwestartthewritingtotellopinions?Writingsteps:QuestionReview审Thefirststep审题StyleTenseGrammarPersonKeypointsAdiaryentrySimplepresenttense,simplefuturetensePassivevoicewithmodalverbsThefirstperson(I),thethirdperson(they)Rule(s)athomeManage理opinionreasonsexplanationsOREOopinionTherulesyouagreewith.Iliketherulesthat…Somerulesaregoodforme…Theruleisgreatbecause…Therulesyoudisagreewith.

Idonotagreewiththerulethat…Idonotagreethat…Idonotthinkthat…Expand扩表因果so,for,because并列型and,also,firstly,secondly,thirdly比较型as...as,than归纳型inaword,intheend,atlast,finallyallinall举例型forexample,suchas,andsoon转折型however,but,though,althoughConnect连：TransitionalwordsCheck查语态、时态要准确无误。主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。注意人称代词的宾格形式。注意冠词用法，例如：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能写成a。

注意拼写、标点符号和大小写。标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。MyFamilyRules

Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.

Ilikesomerulesbecausetheyarehelpful.

Forexample,Ihavetocleanmybedroomeveryday.Iagreewithit.Becauseitiscomfortableandrelaxingforustosleepinacleanbedroom.Besides,helpingmotherdochoresmakesherhappy.However,thereisoneterriblerulewhichmakesmeunhappy.IamnotallowedtowatchTVbeforefinishingmyhomeworkonweekdays.Idisagreewithit.Inmyopinion,IthinkIshouldbeallowedtowatchTVforawhilewhenIgethome.ItcouldbeeasierformetopayattentiontomyhomeworkifIcanrelaxmyself.

Allinall,myparentsmaketheserulestohelpmebebetter,butsomeofmyfamilyrulesaretoostrict.Ithinktheyshouldbechanged!SampleWriting

tips

Payattentiontothestructure.

Beginning—FamilyrulesyoudisagreeBody—Whyyoudisagree

Ending--HowitshouldbechangedTrytomakesentencesdifferently.IthinkIshouldbeallowedto…Iwouldliketo…Icould…if…Idonotagreewiththeideathat…TrytousesomelinkingwordsFirst;next;however;what’smore;inaword;allinall…SummaryEvaluate评EvaluationchartAssessmentCriteria(评价维度)Rating(1-5,5=Best)评分（1-5分，5分为最佳）Content&Theme(内容与主题)Cleartheme,sufficientdetails（主题明确，细节充分）Structure&Coherence(结构与连贯性)Logicalorganization,smoothtransition（结构清晰，过度自然）LanguageUse(语言运用)Accuratevocabulary,correctgrammar)（词汇准确