Unit4JourneyAcrossAVastLand话题七选五课件-高中英语人教版选择性

选修二U4练习解析七选五WhenIfirststartedtraveling,mydadaskedmewhatIwasrunningawayfrom.Anothertime,afriendtoldmetostoprunningawayfrommyproblemsandtostartlivinglife.I’mnotsurewhy.

1Wearerunningawayfromresponsibilities,challenges,andultimately,maturityitself.PeoplethinkwearealljustPeterPansrefusingtobe“adults”.Andtoallthosepeople,Isay:youareright.2

I’mrunningawayfromofficelife,commutes(通勤),weekendduties,andthestrictpathsocietyhaslaidoutas“normal”.I’mrunningawaybecauseIwanttoexperienceeveryculture,seeeverymountain,eatdifferentfood,attendcrazyfestivals,meetnewpeople,andenjoydifferentholidaysaroundtheworld.Iwanttoconstructalifethatmakesmehappy.Inoursociety,theacceptedpathislongandnarrow:yougotocollege,getajob,getmarried,buyahouse,havetwoorthreechildren,raisethem,andthenretire.Onlythen,afteryou’veputinyourtime,canyouenjoythefruitsofyourlabor.

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Andanydeviation(偏差)isconsideredabnormalandstrange.Forme,thosewhotraveltheworldaren’trunningawayfromlife.

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Theyareexploringtheworldandlivingontheirownterms.Theyhaveadegreeoffreedomalotofpeoplewillneverexperience.Theygettobethecaptainsoftheirownships.Peoplemaytellyoutheyenvywhatyoudo,andsaytheywishtheycouldtravellikeyou.Buttheyneverdo.Fewpeoplehavethecouragetotaketherisk.Butlifeiswhatyoumakeitouttobe.Lifeisyourstocreate.

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SoI’mnotrunningaway.Iamjustgoingaftermyownlife.AndIneverplantolookback.A.Travelingissomethingeveryoneshoulddo.B.Responsiblepeopledon’tjusttravelforever.C.Onthecontrary,theyarerunningtowardtrueliving.D.Ifyoureallywantsomething,youhavetogoafterit.E.I’mrunningawayfrompeople’sfixedideaofthe“real”world.F.Butthereisthisperceptionthattravelersmustbeescapingsomething.G.Societyboxesyouinandrestrictsyourmovementstotheirexpectations.WhenIfirststartedtraveling,mydadaskedmewhatIwasrunningawayfrom.Anothertime,afriendtoldmetostoprunningawayfrommyproblemsandtostartlivinglife.I’mnotsurewhy.

1Wearerunningawayfromresponsibilities,challenges,andultimately,maturityitself.PeoplethinkwearealljustPeterPansrefusingtobe“adults”.Andtoallthosepeople,Isay:youareright.2

I’mrunningawayfromofficelife,commutes(通勤),weekendduties,andthestrictpathsocietyhaslaidoutas“normal”.I’mrunningawaybecauseIwanttoexperienceeveryculture,seeeverymountain,eatdifferentfood,attendcrazyfestivals,meetnewpeople,andenjoydifferentholidaysaroundtheworld.Iwanttoconstructalifethatmakesmehappy.Inoursociety,theacceptedpathislongandnarrow:yougotocollege,getajob,getmarried,buyahouse,havetwoorthreechildren,raisethem,andthenretire.Onlythen,afteryou’veputinyourtime,canyouenjoythefruitsofyourlabor.

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Andanydeviation(偏差)isconsideredabnormalandstrange.Forme,thosewhotraveltheworldaren’trunningawayfromlife.

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Theyareexploringtheworldandlivingontheirownterms.Theyhaveadegreeoffreedomalotofpeoplewillneverexperience.Theygettobethecaptainsoftheirownships.Peoplemaytellyoutheyenvywhatyoudo,andsaytheywishtheycouldtravellikeyou.Buttheyneverdo.Fewpeoplehavethecouragetotaketherisk.Butlifeiswhatyoumakeitouttobe.Lifeisyourstocreate.

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SoI’mnotrunningaway.Iamjustgoingaftermyownlife.AndIneverplantolookback.A.Travelingissomethingeveryoneshoulddo.B.Responsiblepeopledon’tjusttravelforever.C.Onthecontrary,theyarerunningtowardtrueliving.D.Ifyoureallywantsomething,youhavetogoafterit.E.I’mrunningawayfrompeople’sfixedideaofthe“real”world.F.Butthereisthisperceptionthattravelersmustbeescapingsomething.G.Societyboxesyouinandrestrictsyourmovementstotheirexpectations.限制你以...太绝对呼吁WhenIfirststartedtraveling,mydadaskedmewhatIwasrunningawayfrom.Anothertime,afriendtoldmetostoprunningawayfrommyproblemsandtostartlivinglife.I’mnotsurewhy.

1Wearerunningawayfromresponsibilities,challenges,andultimately,maturityitself.PeoplethinkwearealljustPeterPansrefusingtobe“adults”.Andtoallthosepeople,Isay:youareright.主语一致WhenIfirststartedtraveling,mydadaskedmewhatIwasrunningawayfrom.Anothertime,afriendtoldmetostoprunningawayfrommyproblemsandtostartlivinglife.I’mnotsurewhy.

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Wearerunningawayfromresponsibilities,challenges,andultimately,maturityitself.PeoplethinkwearealljustPeterPansrefusingtobe“adults”.Andtoallthosepeople,Isay:youareright.F.Butthereisthisperception/thattravelersmustbeescapingsomething.同义替换perception（看法）peoplethinkescapingsomethingrunningawayfrom;refusingto;词汇复现WhenIfirststartedtraveling,mydadaskedmewhatIwasrunningawayfrom.Anothertime,afriendtoldmetostoprunningawayfrommyproblemsandtostartlivinglife.I’mnotsurewhy.

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Wearerunningawayfromresponsibilities,challenges,andultimately,maturityitself.PeoplethinkwearealljustPeterPansrefusingtobe“adults”.Andtoallthosepeople,Isay:youareright.F.Butthereisthisperception/thattravelersmustbeescapingsomething.逻辑关系原文前两句：父亲和朋友都认为作者在逃避→引出普遍看法。我不确定是为什么，但是普遍这样认为...2

I’mrunningawayfromofficelife,commutes(通勤),weekendduties,andthestrictpathsocietyhaslaidoutas“normal”.I’mrunningawaybecauseIwanttoexperienceeveryculture,seeeverymountain,eatdifferentfood,attendcrazyfestivals,meetnewpeople,andenjoydifferentholidaysaroundtheworld.Iwanttoconstructalifethatmakesmehappy.主语一致2

I’mrunningawayfromofficelife,commutes(通勤),weekendduties,andthestrictpathsocietyhaslaidoutas“normal”.I’mrunningawaybecauseIwanttoexperienceeveryculture,seeeverymountain,eatdifferentfood,attendcrazyfestivals,meetnewpeople,andenjoydifferentholidaysaroundtheworld.Iwanttoconstructalifethatmakesmehappy.E.

I’mrunningawayfrompeople’sfixedideaofthe“real”world.句首，总结句同义替换fixedideasociety’sstrictpath“real”worldnormallifedescribedinpara3词汇复现Inoursociety,theacceptedpathislongandnarrow:yougotocollege,getajob,getmarried,buyahouse,havetwoorthreechildren,raisethem,andthenretire.Onlythen,afteryou’veputinyourtime,canyouenjoythefruitsofyourlabor.

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Andanydeviation(偏差)isconsideredabnormalandstrange.主语一致Inoursociety,theacceptedpathislongandnarrow:yougotocollege,getajob,getmarried,buyahouse,havetwoorthreechildren,raisethem,andthenretire.Onlythen,afteryou’veputinyourtime,canyouenjoythefruitsofyourlabor.

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Andanydeviation(偏差)isconsideredabnormalandstrange.

G.Societyboxesyouinandrestrictsyourmovementstotheirexpectations.词汇复现话题一致boxesyouin=restrictsyourmovements=deviationisabnormal；expectations=社会对“正常”的定义and前后态度一致Forme,thosewhotraveltheworldaren’trunningawayfromlife.

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Theyareexploringtheworldandlivingontheirownterms.Theyhaveadegreeoffreedomalotofpeoplewillneverexperience.Theygettobethecaptainsoftheirownships.主语一致Forme,thosewhotraveltheworldaren’trunningawayfromlife.

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Theyareexploringtheworldandlivingontheirownterms.Theyhaveadegreeoffreedomalotofpeoplewillneverexperience.Theygettobethecaptainsoftheirownships.C.Onthecontrary,theyarerunningtowardtrueliving.逻辑关系同义替换aren’trunningawayrunningtowardtruelivinglivingontheirownterms词汇复现Peoplemaytellyoutheyenvywhatyoudo,andsaytheywishtheycouldtravellikeyou.Buttheyneverdo.Fewpeoplehavethecouragetotaketherisk.Butlifeiswhatyoumakeitouttobe.Lifeisyourstocreate.

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SoI’mnotrunningaway.Iamjustgoingaftermyownlife.AndIneverplantolookback.主语一致Peoplemaytellyoutheyenvywhatyoudo,andsaytheywishtheycouldtravellikeyou.Buttheyneverdo.Fewpeoplehavethecouragetotaketherisk.Butlifeiswhatyoumakeitouttobe.Lifeisyourstocreate.

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SoI’mnotrunningaway.Iamjustgoingaftermyownlife.AndIneverplantolookback.D.Ifyoureallywantsomething,youhavetogoafterit.逻辑关系同义替换aren’trunningawayrunningtoward词汇复现文章大意作者在旅行之初，父亲和朋友都认为他是在逃避现实、逃避责任。作者承认，从某种程度上说，他们说得没错——他的确是在逃避，但逃避的是社会定义的“正常生活”：朝九晚五、通勤、买房、结婚生子、退休。作者认为，社会给人画好了一条窄路，走偏了就被视为异类。但他不觉得自己是在逃避生活，而是在主动去体验世界、掌控自己的人生。旅行者不是逃避，而是在追求真正的生活。语篇结构宏观分析1.体裁这是一篇论说文（argumentativeessay），带有自传色彩，通过个人经历引出对社会常规的反驳，最终确立自己的价值观。2.主线文章围绕

“旅行者是在逃避生活还是在追求生活”

这一对立观点展开。作者先摆出他人的看法（逃避论），再承认表面上的合理性，最后反转并阐明自己的立场：这不是逃避，而是主动构建属于自己的生活。语篇结构宏观分析3.段落逻辑逻辑作用P1开头，引出他人观点：旅行者是在逃避责任、挑战、成熟。作者以调侃语气承认对方说得对，为下文反转铺垫。提出问题+表面让步P2具体说明“我在逃避什么”：办公室生活、通勤、社会定义的“正常”路径。解释“逃避”的真实内容P3描述社会对“正常人生”的定义（上学→工作→结婚→买房→生子→退休→享受），并指出偏离此路径被视为异常。进一步展开社会规范的压力P4提出反转观点：旅行者不是在逃避生活，而是在“奔向真正的生活”（对应选项C）。转折+提出作者立场P5结尾升华：别人羡慕但不敢尝试，生活是自己创造的，作者是在追求自己的生活，不是逃避。总结+强化主旨语篇结构宏观分析4.逻辑关系他人眼中的“逃避”vs作者眼中的“奔向生活”因为社会定义太窄，所以作者要逃离开头提出对立观点

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最后总结立场开头看似承认对方对，实际是为后续反驳铺垫对比因果总-分-总反转语篇结构宏观分析5.逻辑连接词标注WhenIfirststartedtraveling（时间引入）,mydadaskedmewhatIwasrunningawayfrom.Anothertime,（并列引入）afriendtoldmetostoprunningawayfrommyproblemsandtostartlivinglife.I’mnotsurewhy.（引出疑惑）

1Wearerunningawayfromresponsibilities,challenges,andultimately,maturityitself.PeoplethinkwearealljustPeterPansrefusingtobe“adults”.Andtoallthosepeople,Isay:youareright.（表面让步，实际为反转铺垫）2

I’mrunningawayfrom（列举）

officelife,commutes(通勤),weekendduties,andthestrictpathsocietyhaslaidoutas“normal”.I’mrunningawaybecauseIwanttoexperienceeveryculture,seeeverymountain,eatdifferentfood,attendcrazyfestivals,meetnewpeople,andenjoydifferentholidaysaroundtheworld.Iwanttoconstructalifethatmakesmehappy.语篇结构宏观分析5.逻辑连接词标注Inoursociety,theacceptedpathislongandnarrow:yougotocollege,getajob,getmarried,buyahouse,havetwoorthreechildren,raisethem,andthenretire.Onlythen,afteryou’veputinyourtime,canyou（强调社会路径的漫长）enjoythefruitsofyourlabor.

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Andanydeviation(偏差)isconsideredabnormalandstrange.（递进说明社会压力）Forme,（转折引出个人观点）thosewhotraveltheworldaren’trunningawayfromlife.

Onthecontrary（明确转折，对应选项C）4

Theyareexploringtheworldandlivingontheirownterms.Theyhaveadegreeoffreedomalotofpeoplewillneverexperience.Theygettobethecaptainsoftheirownships.语篇结构宏观分析5.逻辑连接词标注Peoplemaytellyoutheyenvywhatyoudo,andsaytheywishtheycouldtravellikeyou.Buttheyneverdo.（转折：别人只羡慕不行动）Fewpeoplehavethecouragetotaketherisk.Butlifeiswhatyoumakeitouttobe.（转折：强调主动性）Lifeisyourstocreate.

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SoI’mnotrunningaway.（总结）

Iamjustgoingaftermyownlife.AndIneverplantolookback.WhenIfirststartedtraveling,mydadaskedmewhatIwasrunningawayfrom.Anothertime,afriendtoldmetostoprunningawayfrom

myproblemsandtostartlivinglife.I’mnotsurewhy.1Wearerunningawayfrom

responsibilities,challenges,andultimately,maturity

itself.PeoplethinkwearealljustPeterPansrefusingtobe“adults”.Andtoallthosepeople,Isay:youareright.2

I’mrunningawayfrom

officelife,commutes

(通勤),weekendduties,andthestrictpathsocietyhaslaidoutas“normal”.I’mrunningawaybecauseIwanttoexperienceeveryculture,seeeverymountain,eatdifferentfood,attendcrazyfestivals,meetnewpeople,andenjoydifferentholidaysaroundtheworld.Iwanttoconstruct

alifethatmakesmehappy.Inoursociety,theacceptedpathislongandnarrow:yougotocollege,getajob,getmarried,buyahouse,havetwoorthreechildren,raisethem,andthenretire.Onlythen,afteryou’ve

putinyourtime,canyouenjoythefruitsofyourlabor.

3

Andanydeviation(偏差)isconsideredabnormal

andstrange.Forme,thosewhotraveltheworldaren’trunningawayfrom

life.

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Onthecontrary,theyarerunningtoward

trueliving.Theyareexploringtheworldandlivingontheirownterms.Theyhaveadegreeoffreedom

alotofpeoplewillneverex