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2026届新高考英语考前冲刺复习读后续写方法指导----以“父亲的花园”为例-----亲情+人与自我成长CONTENTS01原文内容解读02写作思路点拨03情感表达句式回顾04动手练习之写作篇05参考范文01—原文内容解读Step1:Reading

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情感Theme主题Readforthreeaspects,payattentiontoplot,emotionandtheme,andunderlinethethreeaspectswhenReading.【Para1】Iliveinasmallbutlovelyneighborhood.Ourhouseisneitherlargenorluxurious,butithasafairlybiggarden.Myfatherloveshisgarden.Heplantedsomeseedsinit,andtookgoodcareoftheplants,wateringthem,applyingfertilizer,weedingandgettingridofbugs.Hewasnevertiredofdoingallthatstuff.Butatthattime,Ididn’tunderstandwhyworkinginthedirtexcitedhimsomuch.此处的情感基调出现了转折:我不理解父亲行为。【Para2】Unfortunately,inthesummervacationbeforemyseniorhighschool,myfatherwasseriouslyinjuredinanaccident.Hehadtostayinbedforawhile.Mymotherhadseveralbusinesstrips,soshecouldn’ttakecareofthegarden.Ididn’twantmyfathertoworry.IsaidthatIwouldtakecareofhisgardenuntilherecovered.Iassumed(v.认为;假定;假设)thatthelittleplantswouldcontinuetogrowaslongastheyhadwater,andluckilyitrainedfairlyoften,soIdidn’tthinkmuchaboutthegarden.【para2:父亲因事故重伤，母亲也很忙碌，所以打理花园的任务落到了我的头上，但是我觉得:只要有水，植物就能很好的生长，本段最后1句，为后文的“花园一团糟，蔬菜被虫吃埋下了伏笔”】原文赏析【Para1】垫定了全文的温馨基调:父亲很喜欢他的花园，播种种子、精心呵护植物、浇水、施肥、除草和捉虫。PS:“我”并不理解在泥土中工作为何那么令父亲开心。父亲重伤+母亲较忙:为后文的“我”接替父亲打理花园埋下了伏笔。【Para3】OneSaturdaymorning,myfathersaidtome,“Christine,thevegetablesshouldbeaboutreadytobepicked.Let’shaveasaladtoday!”Iwentouttothegardenandwasupsettoseethatthelettuce(生菜)leavesandcarrotshadbeenhalfeatenbybugs.Therewerehundredsofbugsalloverthem!【Para4】Ipanicked(adj.恐慌的)foramomentbutthenIquietlywenttothenearestsupermarkettobuysomevegetables.WhenIwasmakingthesalad,mymothercamehomeandsawthebagfromthesupermarketinthekitchen.Iwasembarrassedandadmitted,“Dadwouldlikeasalad,butthegardenisadisaster.Idon’twanttodisappointhim,soIwenttothesupermarketandboughtsomevegetables.”Mymothersmiled,saying,“Honey,youknowwhatistherightthingtodo.”【Para4:“我”去超市买了菜，结果被妈妈看到了，我很尴尬，但是承认了花园未得到我的精心打理这件事。妈妈并未责怪我，而是说，她知道我要怎么把事情做对。】Para3:父亲表示“可以采摘蔬菜了”，结果花园一片狼藉的状况，却又在情理之中(我没好好打理花园导致的)。【本段伏笔】菜园里的菜没法吃了，我只好去超市买菜。伏笔一:我是一个敢于承认错误的孩子，这为后文，向父亲认错埋下了伏笔。妈妈的微笑，说明妈妈根本不会向父亲揭发我，未打理好花园的事，而是在引导我自己发现错误，并改正错误。注意：(1)续写词数应为150个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。MyfatherseemedverypleasedwhenItookthesaladtohim.———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Feelingguilty,Idecidedtodotherightthing._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________续写Para1:MyfatherseemedverypleasedwhenItookthesaladtohim.1.StartPara1:父亲喜欢打理花园，我不理解

FatherLovePara2+3:父亲重伤卧床，母亲太忙。我承诺搭理好花园，结果因疏于搭理，导致虫灾严重，无法食用。Para4:我去超市买菜做沙拉，母亲发现，未责怪我，而是引导我去做正确之事。Embarrassed

Admitandfeelguilty;【铺垫:我诚实，会认错的】续写Para2:Feelingguilty,Idecidedtodotherightthing.2.

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Climax层层铺垫、高潮迭起4.Resolutions

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EndingIconfusedpromisebreakpromiseupset父亲的喜从何来？父亲又做了、说了什么？我如何弥补自己的过失，来填补这份父亲的信任和愧疚？Step2:UnderstandtheplotofthestoryP1：P2：P3：P4：父亲很喜欢他的花园，播种种子、精心呵护植物、浇水、施肥、除草和捉虫。PS:“我”并不理解在泥土中工作为何那么令父亲开心。父亲因事故重伤，母亲也很忙碌，所以打理花园的任务落到了我的头上，但是我觉得:只要有水，植物就能很好的生长，本段最后1句，为后文的“花园一团糟，蔬菜被虫吃埋下了伏笔”父亲表示“可以采摘蔬菜了”，结果花园一片狼藉的状况，却又在情理之中(我没好好打理花园导致的)Author:confused

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guiltyMother:

caring,considerateandpatient;isgoodateducatingherkid.Father:Passionatecontentinclusiveness包容LovelifeandpositiveStep3：understandtheemotionofthetext“我”去超市买了菜，结果被妈妈看到了，我很尴尬，但是承认了花园未得到我的精心打理这件事。妈妈并未责怪我，而是说，她知道我要怎么把事情做对。02—写作思路点拨情感铺垫先描写父亲品尝沙拉时的喜悦，与“我”内心的愧疚形成对比，突出谎言带来的心理负担。转折与成长在母亲的暗示和自我的反省后，我选择向父亲坦白真相，体现诚实的可贵。主旨与升华父亲没有指责，反而和“我”一起搭理花园，让“我”真正理解了父亲对花园的热爱---源于责任心和耐心，呼应开头“我”对父亲行为的不理解。主旨落向人世间的真善美，亲情的可贵和主人公在关爱中的自我成长。Step1:Praparations

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WritingStep2:ConcludetheTheme1.责任与耐心【我未用心打理花园，导致虫灾，未采摘到蔬菜】Patienceandresponsibility2.诚实、敢于承认错误、知错就改【“我”未好好打理花园，并讲真相告诉了母亲】Honesty；Admitone’sfaultandcorrectittimely.1.确定故事发展脉络:结合para1首句和para2开头可知该段应写:父亲喜悦的的原因和表现。Step3:PredictthePlots第一段首句MyfatherseemedverypleasedwhenItookthesaladtohim.故事发展推测如下：2.如何展现父亲的喜悦:对沙拉很满意；觉得我将花园打理地很好，特别开心。【添加语言描写、吃沙拉的动作描写和情绪描写】3.细节扩展:父亲大夸偷懒、撒谎的我，我有何反应呢?根据Para2的第1句可知，父亲夸“我”后，我的心情由复杂，转为难堪/尴尬，最后变成了愧疚。1.

主要内容确定：作者感到愧疚，从而在母亲的目光引导下，承认自己的错误并加以改正。【可添加情绪、动作描写、心理描写：鼓起勇气、声音颤抖、哭着认错】。Step3:PredictthePlots第二段首句Feelingguilty,Idecidedtodotherightthing。故事发展推测如下：2.父亲对于“我”承认错误后有何反应？父亲并未责怪我，而是安慰我。【可添加父亲安慰我的动作描写，间接引语进行语言描写】3.我如何做正确的事，来弥补过失？又如何升华主旨？在父亲的帮助下，我将花园打理地越来越好。我意识到:正是责任和耐心，才让父亲在打理花园时，获得很大的快乐。/花园打理的好坏并不重要，重要的是:拥有承认错误的勇气，并及时改正。03—情感表达句式回顾“哭”的表达1.【眼泪在眼睛里打转】Withtearswellingupinmyeyes,IgatheredmycourageandtoldmyfatherinatremblingvoiceIdidn’tliveupto(没达到)hisexpectationsandthatthegardenwasamess(杂乱).2.【眼泪从脸颊滚落】Tearsofsadness/happiness/pride/surpriserolleddownone’scheeks/welledupinmyeyes,whoutteredinlowspiritsthat...3.【漂浮在悲伤海洋】Ifeltlikehewasfloatinginanoceanofsadness

andwordscouldnotexpresshissorrow.4.【难过，心碎】Ifeltblue,whoseheartseemedtobetorn.家人们，谁懂？不是一般地难过+愧疚，撒谎、欺骗，我爹还夸我乖，花园打理地不赖。“羞愧、内疚、心虚”的表达1.【内疚地耳根发烧】Myfatherkeptpraisingme,makingmyearsburning.2.【强颜欢笑、喉咙内疚地发紧】Iforcedasmile,mythroattightwithguilt.3.【心在胸膛里猛跳】Myheartwaspounding(n.重击;重击声)

wildly(adv.极其;狂暴地)inmychest(n.胸膛)asmyfatherkeptpraisingme.4.【内疚地几乎说不出话来，还道歉】Feelingguilty,Icouldbarelyspeak,myvoicechokedwithemotion

asIutteredaheartfelt“sorry”tomyfather.内疚地想躲进我的鼠鼠洞“安慰”的表达【万能安慰:连续动作三件套】拍肩膀/摸头紧紧拥抱温和地安慰说..;pattedsb.ontheshoulder/headgentlyhugged/embracedmetightlycomforted（v.安慰）meinagentlevoice【例句】Tomysurprise,insteadofscoldingme,myfatherpattedmeontheshoulder/headgentlyandhugged/embracedmetightly,whocomforted（v.安慰）meinagentlevoicethatifIneededanyhelp,Icouldturntohim.宝儿，知错就改、善莫大焉主旨升华句【万能模板钉子句】1.强调句。Itis+被强调部分+that/who...2.虚拟语气。Ifithadnotbeenfortheexperience.sb.wouldn’thavedone....【例句】1.ItwasthroughtheexperiencethatIrealizedadmittingmyfaultandcorrectingittimelymademeunderstandthepleasureofworkinginthedirt.2.Ifithadnotbeenfortheexperience,Icouldn’thaverealizedthatadmittingmyfaultandcorrectingittimelymademeunderstandthepleasureofworkinginthedirt.3.【并列句】Ibegantoenjoytakingcareofvegetablesandfinallyunderstoodmyfather’spleasureofworkinginthedirt.

皆大欢喜的结局，让雄鹰般的女人落泪了。俺是土狗，喜欢这结局。04—动手练习之写作篇搭建框架、小试牛刀P1:

MyfatherseemedverypleasedwhenItookthesaladtohim.P2:Feelingguilty,Idecidedtodotherightthing.第二句:定P1尾句与P2首句的衔接句第四句:定结尾句第五句:定升华句第一句:定接P1首句的衔接句(接语言/动作/神态)第三句:定接P2首句的衔接句(接语言/动作)(作者面对父亲的夸赞时的所感所思。)(作者付诸行动把花园打理好，而且转变了对花园劳作的态度)(认识错误、改正错误)Whichfivesentencescanbefixedbasedonthegivensentences?(父亲如何表现出自己的满意的）(作者承认了自己的错误)Step1:Writing写添加细节、遣词造句续写第一段：（父亲喜悦的表现以及我的反应）动作描写：神态描写：语言描写：父亲品尝沙拉动词：fork/taste/chew句型：一般过去时下连续的动作。Dadcouldn’twaittotryit.Heforkedapieceintohismouthandchewedslowly.父亲满意的微笑浮上脸颊Asatisfiedsmilespreadingacrosshisface.父亲夸赞的话语LittledidIknowyouaresogoodatgardening.Youareawomanofyourword作者面红耳赤Myfather’swordsmademyearsburning.续写第二段：（作者如何改正错误+主题升华）情绪描写：语言描写：对比倒数第二段Iwasembarrassed.作者向父亲承认错误时的心情Withtearswellingupineyes…根据续写第二段首句Idecidedtodotherightthing.作者承认错误时说的话Ididn’tliveuptoyourexpectationsandthegardenwasamess.动作描写：父亲听到我坦白时的反应Myfatherpatteredmeontheshoulder…

我如何做去改正

Ilearnedtoapplyfertilizer,weedandremovebugs.升华：及时承认错误，并付诸行动改正05—参考范文

【Para1】MyfatherseemdedverypleasedwhenItookthesaladtohim.“Thesaladlooksamazing,whichmakesmymouthwater.You’vedoneagreatjobwiththegarden!”Hesaidinanexcitedvoice,whocouldn’twaittotasteit.Heforkedapieceintohismouthandchewedslowly,asatisfiedsmilespreadingacrosshisface

(独立主格结构).Givingmeathumbs-up(现在分词做状语),hesaid,“littledidIknowyouaresogoodatgardening(部分倒装).Youareawomanofyourword.”Myheartwaspounding(n.重击;重击声)wildly(adv.极其;狂暴地)inmychest(n.胸膛)andmyearsbu