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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段、使之构成一篇完整的短文。

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wereignoredduringteammeetings^andJakealwaysseemedtofavoranother

teammember,Lisa,whowasoutgoingandhadbeenwiththepanyforay

ear.Duringcoffeebreaks,SarahwouldseeLisaleaningonJake'sdesk,laugh

ingathisjokes，观后分词憾*做停或动例whilelookingthroughdesigndrawings.Once,w

henSarahtriedtojointheirconversation,Lisaturnedawaymidsentencetoco

ntinucchattingwithJake.SarahbegantothinkthatLisawastryingtomake

herlookbadanddamageherwork.

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rahworkedhardonherpart,stayin。latet。researchconsumertrendsand

workingoutcampaignconceptsonblankpaper，<^分傅戕件&动作，.Sheeveninter

viewedherneighborslogalherfeedbackoniheproduct.Whenshepresented

herplan,Jakequicklydismissedit,savings观上分词败诉做件《动作,itwastoorisky.Lisa

agreedwithJake.Sarahfeltdefeated,staringatherslides，孔根分4娘语做人点*作”这个及关

«t>asherteammatesmovedont。thenexttopi。.

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itialplanthatJakeandLisahadfavoredwasn'tworkingaswellasexpected.

Theclienthadsentthreeemailsplaining曼在分阴小讦做后工更通,thattheadsfeltordin

ary,andthesocialmediaengagementrateswere40%lowerthanprojected.

Theteamgatheredinaconferenceroom,lookingatcharts现私分叫《语做人〃动作।wilh

woiriedlooks.Sarahdecidedtostepup.

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:SarahapproachedJakeandLisa,offeringadjustmentstotheprojec

t.

Paragraph2:Soon,thethreereceivedhighpraisefromtheclient.

广东省衡水金卷26届高三上学期八月份联考英语试卷+答案

阅读下面材料.根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

WhenSarahstartedhernewjobatthemarketingagency,shewasfullof

excitementbutalsoabitnervous.Shehadspentweeksresearchingthepany'

spastcampaignsandpracticingherpresentationdelivery,hopingtomakeast

rongfirstimpression.

Asshewalkedtoherdesk,shenoticedcolorfulpostitnotescoveringthe

walls,eachwrittenwithbrainstormingideasfrompreviousprojects.Shewas

assignedtoaprojectteamledbyJake,aconfidentandexperiencedemployee

whoseemedtohaveeverythingundercontrol.

Jakc.SarahSarahstruggledtofindherplace.Sheoftenfeltlikeherideas

wereignoredduringteammeetings,andJakealwaysseemedlofavoranother

teammember,Lisa,whowasoutgoingandhadbeenwiththepanytorayear.

Duringcoffeebreaks,SarahwouldseeLisaleaningonJake'sdesk,laughing

athisjokeswhilelookingthroughdesigndrawings.Once,whenSarahtriedto

jointheirconversation,Lisaturnedawaymidsentencetocontinuechattingwit

hJake.SarahbegantothinkthatLisawastryingtomakeherlookbadandd

amageherwork.

Jake.Sarahhethreeweregivenacrucialprojectwithatightdeadline.Sar

ahworkedhardonherpart,slayinglatetoresearchconsumertrendsandwor

kingoutcampaignconceptsonblankpaper.Sheeveninterviewedherneighbo

rstogatherfeedbackontheproduct.Whenshepresentedherplan,Jakequick

lydismissedit,sayingitwastoorisky.LisaagreedwithJake.Sarahfeltdefea

ted,staringatherslidesasherteammatesmovedontothenexttopic.

looks.Sarahtheprojectprogressed,problemsstartedtoarise.Theinitialpl

anthatJakeandLisahadfavoredwasn'tworkingaswellasexpected.Thecli

enthadsentthreeemailsplainingthattheadsfeltordinary,andthesocialme

diaengagementrateswere40%lowerthanprojected.Theteamgatheredina

conferenceroom,lookingatchartswithworriedlooks.Sarahdecidedtostepu

P-

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:SarahapproachedJakeandLisa,offeringadjuslmentstotheprojec

t.

Paragraph2:Soon,thethreereceivedhighpraisefromtheclient.

一、文章分类与续写思路分析

1.文章类型

该读后续写属于个人成长改变+职场成长型故事聚焦于新人Sarah在团队中

遭遇排斥、通过专业能力赢得认可的过程。故事核心是人物关系转变和个人价值

实现，符合高考读后续写中“冲突转折成长”的典型结构。

2.续写构思与布局

阶段内容要点

需延续Sarah主动提出方案的动作，描写Jake和Lisa的初始反应

承接原文

（怀疑/抵触）

客户压力增大，团队陷入僵局，Sarah需用数据/细节证明方案的

冲突升级

可行性

转折点Jake/Lisa中有一人先被说服，另一人仍犹豫，形成内部张力

Sarah用前期铺垫（邻居访谈、趋势研究）佐证观点，团队合作实

解决方案

施新方案

高潮呈现方案快速见效（如社交媒体数据回升），客户反馈好转

团队关系修复，Sarah获得认可，隐含“专业能力战胜人际偏见”

结局升华

的主题

3.续写注意事项

承接原文：

必须出现Jake的“自信掌控感”和Lisa的“排斥态度”的细节延续

需弓I用Sarah的“researchconsumertrends"和“interviewedneighbors”作为伏笔回收

语言风格：

保持原文的细节描写(如postitnotessdesigndrawings等职场元素)

心理描写需细腻(如Sarah的紧张一坚定，Jake的怀疑一认可)

关键转折：

第一段结尾应停留在团队决定尝试Sarah方案的瞬间，保留悬念

第二段需体现时间推移(第'withindays,,uaweeklater")和数据变化(如

engagementrates上升)

4.巧妙设计技巧

动作隐喻：用“Sarah推开白板”象征主动打破隔该，与原文“staringatslides”形成

对比

环境烘托：用“会议室玻璃窗外的夜幕”暗示团队加班压力，后期改为“晨光透进

会议室''预示转机

对话穿插：Lisa的质疑(“Thisistoounconventional)与Jake的妥协(“Wehave

nochoice^^)体现性格差异

二、故事山模式与原文分析

1.故事山模型

开端：Sarah入职兴奋但紧张

发展：遭遇Lisa排斥和Jake忽视一

高潮：项目危机，Sarah主动提出改进方案一

回落：团队合作实施新方案一

结局：客户高度认可，团队关系修复

2.原文关键元素分析

分析角度内容原文反应句

Sarah：勤奋细致；Jake：

“JakealwaysseemedtofavorLisa"，“Lisa

人物刻画结果导向；Lisa：排外维

turnedawaymidscntcncc,,

护地位

兴奋T失落T挫败T决

“fUllofexcitementbutalsonervous”,“fblt

情感层次

心de他ated",“decidedtostepup”

项目危机（客户投诉、

“Theclienthadsentthreeemails

关键情节点

数据低于预期）plaining","engagementrates40%lower”

职场语境+心理描写融

“staringatherslides","leaningonJake's

语言特色

合desklaughing”

心理描写多次通过动作反射心理“Sarahfeltdefeated,staringatherslides”

分析角度内容原文反应句

（如staring暗示沮丧）

用细节动作体现人物关

动作描写“Lisaturnedawaymidsentence,,

系（如Lisa转身回避）

办公室环境体现团队文

环境描写“colorflilpostitnotescoveringthewalls”

化（便签墙）

隐含主题专业价值战胜人际偏见Sarah虽被排斥但用调研证据逆袭

情感转折从个人挫败到主动担当<4feltdefeated"—>“decidedtostepup”

Sarah的邻居访谈和趋

""interviewedherneighbors,\"research

伏笔处

势研究consumertrends”

①人际冲突：Lisa排挤；

“Lisatriedtomakeherlookbad"，“Jake

冲突点②专业冲突：J否定S方

quicklydismissedit”

案

Sarah的准备工作（调研

隐含线索/访谈）是后期解决方案续写需明确调用这些细节

的基础

Sarah基于前期调研提需在续写中具体展示方案内容（如定位

解决方案

出数据支撑的优化方案新受众、修改广告语等）

三、续写段落示范（含衔接标注）

Paragraph1:

SarahapproachedJakeandLisa,offeringadjustmentstotheproject.Shepointed

atthecharts,hervoicesteadydespiteherracingheart.<vThedatashowsourtarget

audienceisactuallyparents,notmillennials,“shesaid,handingJakeher

neighborhoodsurveynotes.►（衔接：客户投诉+数据问题）Lisafrowned,"But

we'vealwaystargetedyoungpeople.^^Jakeremainedsilent,scanningSarah'sresearch

untilhenoticedatrendshehadhighlighted:►（伏笔回收：consumertrends）“80%

ofrespondentsvaluepracticalityoverstyle.”HeglancedatSarah,hisearlier

dismissivenesswavering."What'syourconcreteplan?"Sarahquicklysketchedan

ideaonapostitnote►（环境呼应：postitwalls）一afaniilyfocusedstoryline.After

atensesilence,Jakesighed,"We'lltryit.Butonlybecausewe'reoutofoptions.”

Paragraph2:

Soon,thethreereceivedhighpraisefromtheclient.Withindays,therevisedads

generateda50%increaseinengagement►（数据对比：原文40%下降）.Theclient's

emailsubjectread,<uBrilliantturnaroundLisabroughtSarahacoffeeonemoming,

hertoneapologetic.misjudgedyou.Yourfieldworksavedus.”a（人物关系修复）

JakepubliclycreditedSarahinthenextmeeting,announcing,''Thissuccesscame

fromlisteningtodiverseperspectives."►（主题升华）AsSarahlookedatthe

renewedpostitwallsfilledwithcollaborativeideas,shefeltshehadfinallyfoundher

place—notbyfightingforattention,butbycontributingvalue.►（首尾呼应：

desk—>placc）

三、动作、心理、环境描写与高级替换词

1.动作描写

Sheextendedthereporttowardshim,herhandsteady.

（她把报告递给他，手很稳。）

Heleanedforward,steeplinghisfingersasheconsideredherproposal.

（他身体前倾，手指尖相对，思考着她的建议。）

Agenuinesmilefinallybrokeacrosshissternface.

（一个真诚的微笑终于在他严肃的脸上绽放。）

Shescrolledthroughthedataanalytics,hereyesscanningthenumbersrapidly.

（她滚动着浏览数据分析，眼睛快速地扫过数字。）

Hegaveacurtnodofapprovalbeforeturningbacktohisscreen.

（他简短地点了下头表示同意，然后转回他的屏幕。）

Shegatheredhercourageandsteppedintothebustlingconferenceroom.

（她鼓起勇气，步入了喧闹的会议室。）

Lisa'spenclatteredontothedeskasshelistenedinsurprise.

（丽莎的笔啪嗒一声掉在桌上，她惊讶地听着。）

Hepushedhischairbackandstoodup,pacingslowlybehindtheteam.

（他把椅子向后推，站起来，在团队身后缓慢地踱步。）

Shehighlightedthekeymetriconthesharedscreenforeveryonetosee.

（她在共享屏幕上高亮标出了关键指标让大家看。）

Theyhuddledaroundthelaptop,reviewingthefinaldesigntogether.

（他们围在笔记本电脑旁，一起审核最终设计。）

2.心理描写

Awaveofreliefwashedoverher,meltingawaythetensioninhershoulders.

（一阵宽慰之感涌上心头，化解了她肩头的紧张。）

Doubtgnawedattheedgesofherconfidence,butshepressedon.

（怀疑侵蚀着她信心的边缘，但她坚持了下去。）

Hecouldn'tshakethefeelingthathehadmisjudgedhercapabilities.

（他无法摆脱那种错判了她能力的感觉。）

Asparkofhopeignitedwithinherasshesawthemlisteningintently.

（看到他们认真倾听，她心中燃起了一丝希望之火。）

Shebattledamixofanxietyandexcitementbeforepresenting.

（在展示前，她内心充满了焦虑与兴奋的交织。）

Asenseofvindicationfilledheraftertheclienfspraise.

（得到客户的表扬后，一种被证明是正确的感觉充满了她。）

Hefeltapangofguiltforhisearlierdismissiveness.

（他为先前轻蔑的态度感到一阵内疚。）

Hermindraced,searchingfortherightwordstoconvincethem.

（她脑子飞快地转着，搜寻能说服他们的恰当词句。）

Aquietprideswelledinherchestastheteamcelebrated.

（团队庆祝时，一种默默的骄傲在她心中涌动。）

Theweightofexpeclalionfeltheavyonher,butalsoniotivating.

（期待的重量让她感到沉重，但也充满了动力。）

3.环境描写

Thelowhumofputersanddistantphonesformedtheoffice'ssoundtrack.

（电脑低沉的嗡鸣和远处的电话声构成了办公室的背景音。）

Sunlightstreamedthroughthefloortoceilingwindows,illuminatingthe

whiteboards.

（阳光从落地窗照射进来，照亮了白板。）

Theairintheconferenceroomgrewthickwithtensionbeforethemeeting.

（会议开始前，会议室里的空气因紧张而变得凝重。）

Colorfulstickynotesdottedtheglasswallslikeamosaicofideas.

（彩色的便利贴点缀着玻璃墙，像一幅思想的马赛克。）

Thefranticclickingofkeyboardssignaledtheapproachingdeadline.

（键盘疯狂的敲击声预示着截止日期的临近。）

Thewarm,bitteraroniaoffreshlybrewedcoffeefilledthebreakroom.

（休息室里弥漫着刚煮好的咖啡温暖而苦涩的香气。）

Thesleek,modernfurnitureoftheofficecontrastedwiththeteam'schaotic

mood.

（办公室时尚现代的家具与团队混乱的情绪形成了对比。）

Thesilentglowofmultiplemonitorscastabhieishlightontheirfocusedfaces.

（多个显示器无声的光亮在他们专注的脸上投下蓝色的光。）

Astackofreportssatneatlyontheedgeofthedesk,awaitingreview.

（一叠报告整齐地放在桌边，等待审核。）

Thecelebratorycheersfromtheirteambrieflydrownedouttheofficenoise.

（他们团队的庆祝欢呼声短暂地盖过了办公室的嘈杂。）

常见单词高级替换词

表达“说”（Saying）常见词:said,told

高级替换：

State（v.陈述，说明）：强调清晰、正式地表达事实。Jakestatedhisobjections

clearly.

Propose（v.提议）：正式提出想法供考虑。Sarahproposedanewstrategy.

Urge（v.敦促，力劝）：强烈建议或请求。Sheurgedthemtoconsiderthedata.

Remarkv./n.v./n.评论，议论）：通常指发表意见或评论。Lisaremarkedthatthe

ideawasrisky.

Concede（v.承认）：不情愿地承认某事属实。Heconcededthatherplanhad

merit.

表达“好/成功”（Good/Success）常见词:good,great,successful

高级替换：

Promising（adj.有希望的前景好的）：显示出未来成功的迹象°Theinitialresults

lookedpromising.

Effective（adj.有效的）：产生预期效果。Thecampaignprovedhighlyeffective.

Triumphant（adj.成功的，胜利的）：取得重大成功或胜利0Theyfelttriumphant

afterthewin.

Favorable（adj.积极的，有利的）：表示赞同或有利于发展。Theyreceived

favorablefeedback.

Resounding（adj.巨大的,响亮的）：用于强调彻底的成功。aresoundingsuccess

表达“重要"（Important）

常见词：important,key

高级替换：

Crucial（adj.至关重要的，决定性的）：极其重要：不可或缺。Timingwascrucial

forthelaunch.

Pivotal（adj.关键的，枢轴的）：对某事的发展或成功起到中心作用。Her

contributionwaspivotal.

Vital（adj.极其重要的，必不可少的）：对生命或成功绝对必要。Trustisvitalina

team.

Paramount（adj.至高无上的，最重要的）：最高级别的重要性。Clientsatisfaction

isparamount.

Imperative（adj.必要的，紧急的）：必须做的，紧急的。Itisimperativethatwe

meetthedeadline.

表达“努力做"（Tryinghard）

常见词：tryhard,workhard

高级替换:

Strive（v.努力，奋斗）:为达到目标付出巨大努力：,Theystrovetodeliverthebest

quality.

Endeavor（v./n.努力，尽力）：正式用语，表示认真尝试。Sheendeavoredtoplete

herpartontime.

Persevere（v.坚持不懈）：尽管困难仍持续努力。Sarahpersevereddespitethe

setbacks.

Dedicateoneselfto（v.致力于）：全身心投入°Hededicatedhimselftotheproject.

Gotheextramile（v.付出额外努力）：做得比要求或期望的更多。Theteamwent

theextramiletoimpresstheclient.

表达“改变”（Change）

常见词：change,fix

高级替换：

Adjust（v.调整，适应）：轻微改变以适应新情况。Theyneededtoadjusttheir

approach.

Modify（v.修改，更改）：对某物进行改变，通常是为了改进。Theymodifiedthe

designbasedonfeedback.

Revise（v.修订，修改）：仔细检查并进行更改（尤指文本或计划）。Sarahrevised

herproposalovernight.

Overhaul（v./n.彻底检查，大修）：大规模或彻底的改变。Thecampaignneededa

pleteoverhaul.

Transform（v.转变，变形）：彻底改变外观或性质0Thenewideatransformedthe

project'sprospects.

四、搭配、词法与语料解析

常见地道搭配（Collocations）

Makeastrongfirstimpression:留下强烈的第一印象。（make+impression是固

定搭配）

Haveeverythingundercontrol:掌控一切。（have+something+undercontrol）

Struggletofindone*splace:艰难地找到自己的位置/‘融入。（struggleto+verb）

Workoutconcepts:制定/构思出概念。（workout这里意为制定、解决）

Presentaplan:展示/陈述计划。（present+具体提案/计划）

Dismissanidea:驳回/否定一^Is*想法。（dismiss+想法/建议，显得很轻蔑）

Moveontothenexttopic:继续下一个话题。（moveonto+新事物）

Problemsarise:问题出现。（problems+arise,比happen更正式）

Socialmediaengagementrates:社交媒体参与率。（行业特定搭配）

Stepup:站出来，挺身而出。（非常地道的动词短语，表示承担更多责任或主动

行动）

Gatherfeedback:收集反馈。（gather+feedback/data/information）

Atightdeadline:紧迫的截止日期。（tight+deadline,固定用法）

词法解析与可积累语料（LexicalItems）

Brainstorming（n./adj.）

词意：头脑风暴，集思广益

词性：名词或形容词（如brainstormingsession）

近义词：ideation,thinkingupideas

反义词：（无直接反义）

例句：

Theteamheldabrainstormingmeetingtogeneratenewideas.（团队举行了一次头脑

风暴会议来产生新想法。）

Thewallswerecoveredwithbrainstormingnoles.（墙上贴满了头脑风暴的便签。）

Assign（sbto）sth（v.）

词意：分配，指派

词性:动词

近义词：appoint,designate,allocate

反义词:dismiss,remove

例句：

Shewasassignedtothenewmarketingproject.（她被派到了新的市场营销项目。）

Themanagerassignedtaskstoeachteammember.（经理给每个团队成员分配了任

务。）

Dismiss（v.）

词意：驳回；解雇；不予考虑

词性：动词

近义词：reject,disregard,discard

反义词:accept,approve,consider

例句：

Hedismissedhersuggestionwithoutevenlookingatthedala.（他看都没看数据就驳

回了她的建议。）

Theideawasquicklydismissedasimpractical.（这个想法很快被认为不切实际而遭

到否决。）

Defeated（adj.）

词意：挫败的，沮丧的

词性：形容词（由动词defeat的过去分词转化而来，表状态）

近义词:discouraged,crushed,demoralized

反义词:victorious,triumphant,encouraged

例句：

Shefeltdefeatedafterherproposalwasrejected.（提案被拒后,她感到很挫败。）

A加featedlook叩pearedonhisface.（他脸上露出了沮丧的表情。）

Crucial（adj.）

词意：至关重要的，决定性的

词性：形容词

近义词:critical,vital,essential,pivotal

反义词:unimportant,trivial,insignificant

例句：

Thisisacrucialprojectforthepany.（这对公司来说是一个至关重要的项目。）

Timemanagementiscrucialtomeetingthedeadline.（时间管理对于赶上截止日期

至关重要。）

Engagement（n.）

词意：参与度；约定；订婚

词性：名词

近义词：involvement,participation,interaction（在社交媒体语境下）

反义词：disengagement,nonparticipation

例句:

Thepostreceivedahighlevelofuserengagement.（这条帖子获得了很高的用户参

与度。）

Theirengagementwasannouncedlastweek.（他们的婚讯上周公布了。）

Projected（adj.）

词意：预测的，预计的

词性：形容词（由动词project的过去分词转化而来）

近义词:estimated,forecasted,anticipated,expected

反义词：actual,real

例句：

Theprojectedsalesfiguresweretoooptimistic.（预测的销售数字过于乐观了。）

Theprojectedcostofthecampaignis$50,000.（该活动的预计成本是五万美元。）

Stepup（PhrasalV.）

词意：站出来，挺身而出；加强，增加

词性：动词短语

近义词：takeinitiative,volunteer,intensify,increase

反义词：stepback,holdback,decrease

例句：

Whentheteamwasintrouble,Sarahdecidedtostepup.（当团队陷入困境时，莎拉决

定挺身而出。）

Weneedtostepupoureffortsifwewanttosucceed.（如果我们想成功，就需要加强

努力。）

五、PossibleVersions(4)

Version1

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SarahauDroachedJakeandLisa,offerhiRadjustmentstotheproiect.Though

heivoicelieniblcdslighlly,shespreadoutdienotesshehudcollectedfrurnher

neighborsandpointedtothechartsshehaddrawn.Atfirst,Jakeraisedaneyebrow,

clear】、doubtfuL.dj做主语外m,whileLisacrossedheraimsinsilence.YetSarahrefusedto

backdown;sheexplainedthattheconsumerfeedbackrevealedyoc〃毛buyers

wanledcreqfiy"、andemotionalresonanceratherthanulaindiscounts.“Iknowmy

earlierplanseemedrisky,“sheadmitted、”butitcouldconnectbetterwithour

audience."Themoreshespoke,thesteadierhertonebecame.Sueinqher

determinationandtheevidencebeforethem，侬分网芯”做停据型作Q(lakeandLisa

exchangedhesitantglances.Finally,Jakesiqhed,admittin^g分诩》语做件.动例thattheir

currentstrategywasfailing.Sarah'sheartpounded,butshemanagedasmallsmile,

realizing，现女分x赃诺做体点动作)thatthiswasthefirsttimeherideashadtrulybeenheard，也族忌

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Soon,thethreereceivedhi史hpraisefromtheclient.Therevisedmarketing

campaign,infusedwithSarah'sconceptofstorytellingandcustomer

involvement过去分询短语做后JLZ语sgeneratedaremarkableresponseonline.Theengagement

ratesdoubledwithinaweek,andtheclientsentanappreciativemessage,callingIhe

campaign“refreshinglyoriginaL”uta分网挺w停宿动作Inthemeetingroom.Jakegave

Sarahararethumbsup,whileLisawhisperedanembarrassed“welldone."Sarah|,

flushedwithbothreliefandDride^做上语科诩.realizedthatpersistenceandbravery

hadturnedthetide.Theteamnowworkedsidebyside,theirlaughterechoin女

againsttheoneestiffoffice必。〃$，.土史上雄£人物，.Asshewalkedpasl「hecolorfulpostil

nolesagain,Sarahfelttheynolongerbelongedtothepastalone,theymirroredher

newjourney.Whatmatteredmosh主从，wasnotwhoseideahadbeenfavoredbutthat

theproject'ssuccesswasbuiltoneveryonefseffort,andshehadfinallybeeavital

partoftheteam.

though引导让步状语从句：Thoughhervoicetrembledslightly,she

spreadoutthenotes...

with复合结构：withbothreliefandpride

非谓语结构:infusedwithSarah'sconceptofstorytelling

地道搭配

raiseaneyebrow—►表示怀疑

refusetobackdown—►坚持立场

turnthetide—>扭转局势

情绪描写亮点词汇

trembledvoice,hesitantglance,flushedwithpride,reliefwashedover

her

积累语料（同义替换）

hesitant=uncertain,doubtful

remarkable=striking,impressive

original=innovative,creative

例句

Sherefusedtobackdowndespitethecriticism.

Hisinnovativeideaturnedthetideof（hedebate.

Ahesitantsmilespreadacrossherface.

Theprojectreceivedstrikingresultsinashorttime.

Version!

Paragraph1

SarahauproachedJakeandofferingadjustmentatotheproiect.

Gatheringhercourace打i分询/如HI应动作、shelaidherresearchreportsonthetable,

hiRhlightiiiEtheconsumerments现或分词”诲做件陵动作，shehadcollected.Atfirst,Jake

frowned,clearlyreluctanttoadmitfailure^傲土语朴加、whileLisatappedherpan

imDalienlly.ButSarahcalmlydemonstratedhowafreshsloganandinteractive

onlinechallengecouldboostattention.urvetestedthiswithseveralpeople^she

added,uandtheyrespondedwithenthusiasm.vHerlogicalreasoningandcareful

preparationsilencedtheroom3立士格Foramoment,onlythehumoftheprojector

couldbeheard.Jakefinallyleanedforward,hiseyesnarrowinginthought出入〉格用1人物、

f

andLisabitherlip,realizing（现&分词口誓软存也动作，Sarahsproposaladdressedtheexact

weaknesse^heclienthadpointedout.Encouraged，夫分口败语做土语扑语）,Sarahconcluded

firmly,uWestillhavetimetomakethisright.”

Paragraph2

Soon,thethreereceivedhiehpraisefromtheclickThenewversionofthe

campaigngainedpopularityalmostovernight,withuserssharingitacrossplarfonnswth

复合雄构）.Whenthecli.sawthedata,heemailedandcongratulatedtheteamfor（heir

flexibilityandinnovation.JakeshookSarah'shandsincerely,agesturethatreplaced

hisearlierindifference.Lis]too,admitted,4tYouwererightallalong."Sarah's

chestsweHedwithquietpride,notbecauseshehadbeenprovencorrect,but

becauseshehadlearnedtostandupforherideas.Theprojectendednotonlywith

mercialsuccessbutalsowithrestoredtrustamongtheteammembers.AsSarah

walkedoutoftheconferenceroom,thenervousnewerofthepastweeksseemedfar

away;shenowcarriedtheconfidenceofsomeonewhohadfoundhervoiceinthe

workplace.

高级语法点

notbecause...butbecause...对上匕结构:notbecauseshehadbeen

provencorrect,butbecause...

with独立主格：withuserssharingitacrossplatforms

地道搭配

layresearchreportsonthetable

narrowone'seyesinthought

carrytheconfidenceof...

情绪与动作亮点

frown,tapherpenimpatiently,biteherlip,chestswelledwithpride

积累语料

reluctant=unwilling,hesitant

flexibility=adaptability,adjustability

restoretrust=rebuildconfidence,regaincredibility

例句

Hefrowned,unwillingtoacceptthetiuth.

Shecarriedtheconfidenceofaleader.

Theprojectrestoredtrustamongthepartners.

Hischestswelledwithprideatthepliment.

Version3

Paragraph1

SarahaiwroachedJakeandLisa,offeringadjustme〃istotheuroiect.Her

palmsweresweaty,yetsheunfoldedhersketcheswithdetermination."Ifweredesign

thecampaignandshiftthefocustowardusers'needs,“sheexplained,uwcmight

createstrongerengagement.^Jakelookedskeplical,bulSarahshowedhimgraphs

Daringthedeclininqdatawithherpredictedoiites，^分评做停*动作，.Lisaleanedcloser,

curiosityreplacingherearlierindifference^立土格期雄人枷.Sarah'stonegrewmore

confidentasshelinkedeachsuggeslionlokpscificcliemplainlsiniheemails]Forthe

firsttime,bothJakeandLisanoddedinsteadofinterrupting."Let'stestyourplan,“

Jakefinallysaid,hisvoicetingedwithreluctantadmiration检立土格，.Sarahteltasurge

ofrelief-thiswasthebreakthroughshehadbeenwaitingfor.

Paragraph2

Soon,thethreereceivedhighpraisefromtheclient.Theimprovedcampaign

capturedattention,sparkinqlivelymentsandshares电在分口妙语做弊和动