初中英语测试练习题10 写作（25年16区二模满分范文）（解析版）

试卷第=page2121页，共=sectionpages2222页试卷第=page2222页，共=sectionpages2222页学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________专题10写作（25年16区二模满分范文）1．（2025·上海崇明·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)社区计划下个周末开展一次“社区健康跑(CommunityHealthRun)”活动，招募学生志愿者参与策划与组织，以此倡导健康生活方式。假设你是初三学生陆遥，请写一封自荐信给社区负责人张先生，自荐信必须包含以下两点：1.介绍你具备的组织能力(如活动策划经验、沟通能力等)；2.谈谈你对这次活动流程的设想。(注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearMr.Zhang,

I’mLuYao,ajunior3student.IhopetogetanopportunitytobeavolunteerforCommunityHealthRun.

Iamahealthyandactiveboywholikesorganizinggroupactivities.Inourclass,Iaminchargeoforganizingthemorningreadingeveryday.Andthewholeclassspeakshighlyofmyjob.What’smore,Ieverplannedasingingcontestforourclasswhichturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.

IfIgotthischance,I’dliketomakesomepreparations.First,I’llcommunicatewithalltherunnerstogetmoredetailedinformationabouttheirneeds.Then,I’llthinkabouthowtohelpthembetterbasedontheirinformation.Next,I’llplanaspecificrouteforthecommunityhealthrun.Inordertomakesurethecommunityrunacompletesuccess,I’llaskmyfriendstohelpwiththerouteandIamsurewe’lldoitwell.

IbelieveIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LuYao【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，介绍自己具备的组织能力；第三步，介绍自己对这次活动流程的设想；第四步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①hopetodosth.希望做某事②beinchargeof负责③communicatewithsb.与某人交流④thinkabout考虑[高分句型]①Iamahealthyandactiveboywholikesorganizinggroupactivities.(定语从句)②IbelieveIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.(宾语从句)2．（2025·上海静安·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）你的学校计划举办名为“用英语讲中国故事”的校园文化节活动，现就活动方案征求意见。假设你是初三学生李华，请阅读以下活动方案，写一封邮件给大队部汪老师。邮件须包含以下内容：(1)你是否会参加此活动，并简述理由；(2)针对方案中的一项内容，提出修改建议。校园文化节活动方案ThePlanofCampusCultureFestival主题Theme“用英语讲中国故事”TellingChinesestoriesinEnglish时间Time4月21日—4月25日下午4:00—6:00地点Place学校图书馆前的草坪(lawn)对象Participant6—9年级学生形式Ways线上故事分享、线下知识讲座、英语故事戏剧表演(Onlinestorysharing,Offlineknowledgelecture,Englishstorydramaperformance)注意：(1)文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分；(2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearMr.Wang,

I’mLiHuafromGrade9.IamthrilledabouttheupcomingCampusCultureFestivalthemed“TellingChineseStoriesinEnglish.”Idefinitelyplantoparticipateasit’safantasticopportunitytoshowcasemyEnglishskillswhilesharingtherichcultureofourcountry.

Ihaveasuggestionforyourplan.IthinkthereshouldbeanotheractivitytohelpstudentsimprovetheirinterestinChinesestories.Youcanaddaguessingactivity.Youcanchoosesomeofthelesswell-knownstoriesforthestudentstoguess.Forthewinningstudent,youcangivehimasetofChinesestorybooks.

Thankyouforconsideringmyfeedback.Bestregards,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封邮件；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意不要有遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明活动方案的主题；第二步；对其中一项内容提出修改建议；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①plantodosth计划做某事②well-known知名的③asetof一套[高分句型]Idefinitelyplantoparticipateasit’safantasticopportunitytoshowcasemyEnglishskillswhilesharingtherichcultureofourcountry.（as引导原因状语从句）3．（2025·上海青浦·二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthegivensituation.(根据以下情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)假如你是吴磊，你的学校为丰富学生校园生活，推出了校园电影放映活动，具体方案如下。现学校向全校征询电影选片及方案改进意见，请根据方案内容，向教导处王老师写一封邮件，需包含以下要点：1.推荐一部电影，并说明理由；2.对方案提出一点改进建议，并解释原因。校园电影放映活动方案电影□NeZha2(哪吒之魔童闹海)144mins□TheBattleofLakeChangjin(长津湖)176mins□KungFuPanda(功夫熊猫)92mins□(Yourchoice)时间3:30Mondayafternoon地点Schoolgym观众Ninthgraders注意：●文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。●照抄试卷中内容不得分。●邮件格式不计入总词数。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearSchoolAuthority,I’mwritingtorecommendNeZha2.Thismovieisreallygreat.Thepicturesinitareverybeautifulandinteresting.Thestoryisexciting,too.IttellsushowNeZhagrowsupandfightsagainsthisbadluck.Wecanlearnalotfromhim,likebeingbraveandnevergivingup.Asfortheimprovementoftheplan,Isuggestchangingthetime.3:30onMondayafternoonisearlyassomestudentsmaystillhaveafter-classactivities.Maybewecanchooseatimeonweekendssothatmorestudentscanenjoythefilmwithoutrush.Hopemysuggestionscanbeconsidered.Bestregards,WuLei【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，先写一下自己推荐的电影及其理由。第二步，再对方案提出一点改进建议，并解释原因。[亮点词汇]①giveup放弃②fightagainst斗争③after-classactivities课后活动[高分句型]①Wecanlearnalotfromhim,likebeingbraveandnevergivingup.（and连接并列成分）②Isuggestchangingthetime.（动名词作宾语）4．（2025·上海浦东新·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)你的初中生活即将结束。回首过去四年，除了悉心教导的老师，还有站岗巡逻的保安叔叔，用心烹饪的食堂员工，辛勤清扫的保洁阿姨，细心诊疗的校园医生……这些校园里的无名英雄用日复一日的付出，为你创造了安心学习的环境。校学生会在校园论坛上发起了“致谢校园平凡英雄”的主题帖。假设你是初三学生李枫，请在此主题帖下跟帖，选择一名/类你最想感谢的校园工作人员(教师除外)，表明选择的理由，并说说自己将以哪些方式向他(们)/她(们)致谢。Securityofficers安保人员Canteenstaff食堂员工Schoolnurses校园医生Schoolcleaners保洁人员Librarians图书管理员Gardeners绿植养护员………(注意：1.短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)Topic:ThanktheEverydayHeroesatSchool5answers

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Iwouldliketosay“thankyou”toourschoolcleaners.Everymorningwhenwewakeup,theyhavecleanedalltheclassrooms.Everyafternoonwhenwefinishtheday’sstudy,theyarestillsweepingthecampus.Itistheschoolcleanerswhocreateacleancampusforus.Inreturn,let’spromisetodothese:Don’tlitteranywhereoratanytime.Don’tjustwalkawayafteryouhavefinishedeating.Takeyourlitterandsortitforrecycling.Don’tdraworwriteonthewall.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：根据情景进行写作，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。[写作步骤]第一步、介绍自己最想感谢的校园工作人员以及原因；第二步、介绍自己将以哪些方式来致谢。[亮点词汇]①wouldliketo想要②wakeup醒来③promisetododossth.答应做某事[高分句型]①Itistheschoolcleanerswhocreateacleancampusforus.(强调句)5．（2025·上海长宁·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)时代的进步改变我们阅读经典的方式，除了纸质阅读(readpaperbooks)经典以外，还有在线阅读(readbooksonline)、视频阅读(readbookswithvideos)等等。请你谈谈你喜欢用哪个方式阅读，并说明理由(至少两个)。(注意：1、不得抄阅读文本。2、短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ipreferreadingbookswithvideos.Firstly,videosmakeclassicstoriesmorelivelyandinteresting.Forexample,whenIreadJourneytotheWest,thevideoshowedtheMonkeyKing’sactionsclearly,whichhelpedmeunderstandthestorybetter.Secondly,videosoftenexplaindifficultpartsinsimpleways.SometimesIfeelconfusedwhilereadingalone,butthevideo’sexplanationssolvemyproblemsquickly.Althoughpaperbooksaregood,videoreadingbringsclassicsclosertomodernlife.【详解】[总体分析]题材：本文是一篇话题作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：需围绕“阅读经典的方式”展开，说明个人偏好及至少两个理由，避免抄袭或泄露个人信息。[写作步骤]第一步：明确表达偏好的阅读方式（如在线阅读、纸质阅读等）；第二步：分点阐述理由（至少两点）；第三步：总结观点，强调偏好方式的优势或对阅读体验的提升。[亮点词汇]①confused困惑的②lively生动的[高分句型]①Forexample,whenIreadJourneytotheWest,thevideoshowedtheMonkeyKing’sactionsclearly,whichhelpedmeunderstandthestorybetter.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）②Althoughpaperbooksaregood,videoreadingbringsclassicsclosertomodernlife.（although引导的让步状语从句）6．（2025·上海闵行·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）假设你是学校AI俱乐部的负责学生李枫，你们俱乐部将面向本校九年级学生举办一场主题为“生活中的人工智能”（“AIinourLife”）的讲座。请为此拟一份通知。通知需包含以下内容：（1）讲座的时间和地点；（2）选择该主题的理由及会场注意事项。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文NoticeTheAIClubwillholdalecturetitled“AIinOurLife”forallGrade9studentsintheschoolauditoriumonOctober20that3:00p.m.ThistopicwaschosentohelpstudentsunderstandhowAItechnologieslikesmartassistantsandfacialrecognitionarebeingusedindailylife.Pleasearrive10minutesearlyandkeepyourmobilephonessilentduringthelecture.Wehopethiseventwilldeepenyourunderstandingofmoderntechnology.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文为一篇通知；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，完善表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍讲座的主题、时间及地点；第二步，解释主办该讲座的原因及会场的注意事项。[亮点词汇]①intheschoolauditorium在学校礼堂②facialrecognition面部识别[高分句型]ThistopicwaschosentohelpstudentsunderstandhowAItechnologieslikesmartassistantsandfacialrecognitionarebeingusedindailylife.（how引导的宾语从句）7．（2025·上海宝山·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothesituationgiven.（请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）近年来、全球掀起了汉语学习的热潮，越来越多的人渴望了解中国文化和掌握汉语。英国留学生John是一名汉语爱好者，他在《跨文化对话》杂志上发布了招募启事，寻求一名汉语学习小顾问（adviser）、帮助他解决汉语学习中的困惑：如记忆汉字（Chinesecharacters）、理解成语（Chineseidioms）及辨别文化差异（culturaldifferences）等。假如你是初三学生李华，请你给John写一封应征信，阐述你能胜任汉语学习小顾问的理由，并针对John汉语学习中的1~2个困惑提供合理的学习建议。（注意：1.信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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I’mLiHua,aninth-gradestudentpassionateaboutsharingChineseculture.HavingmasteredeffectivemethodstolearnChinese,IbelieveIcanassistyou.Firstly,memorizingcharactersbecomeseasierbybreakingthemintocomponents.Forexample,“休”(rest)combines“人”(person)and“木”(tree),symbolizingsomeonerestingunderatree.Secondly,understandingidiomsrequiresknowingtheirorigins.“画蛇添足”(drawlegsonasnake)warnsagainstunnecessaryactions,originatingfromanancientstory.Practicingthroughdailysentencesandculturalcontextswilldeepenyourcomprehension.I’dlovetohelpyouexploremore.Feelfreetocontactme!Sincerely,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。[写作步骤]第一步、自我介绍，表达应征意愿；第二步、给出胜任理由，针对John的困惑给出建议；第三步、书写结语。[亮点词汇]①passionateabout…对……充满热情②warnagainst告诫③feelfreetodosth.随意做某事[高分句型]①HavingmasteredeffectivemethodstolearnChinese,IbelieveIcanassistyou.(宾语从句)8．（2025·上海金山·二模）Writealetteraccordingtothegivesituationwithatleast60words(根据所给情境，写一封至少60个单词的回信。标点符号不占格。)花园中学最近成立了一个“青少年建议专栏”，为学生提供在生活中遇到问题的解决建议。学生陆遥在上周给专栏的求助信中描述了她遇到的问题，如：因为她弄丢了朋友的书而失去朋友的信任、因学习成绩下降而失去信心、因同学的误解而感到伤心。假如你是专栏的负责人李明，请你选择其中一个方面给陆遥写封回信，说说你的建议并结合自己的经历进行说明。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearLuYao,I’msorrytohearaboutthemisunderstandingbetweenyouandyourfriend.Iunderstandhowupsettingthismustbe.Here’smyadvice:First,sincerelyapologizeandoffertoreplacethebook.Asmallgesture,likewritinganoteorhelpingthemwithsomething,canalsoshowyourcare.Ionceaccidentallybrokeafriend’sfavoritemug.Afterreplacingitandspendingtimetogether,ourbondgrewstronger.Second,givethemtime.Trusttakesefforttorebuild.Meanwhile,focusonbeingreliableinsmallthings—likereturningborroweditemspromptly.Don’tlosehope!Friendshipscanhealwithpatienceandhonesty.Bestwishes,LiMing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封书信作文。②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。③提示：根据所给题干进行写作。注意书信格式，注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步：对陆遥的遭遇表示遗憾；第二步：给出自己解决问题的建议；第三步：鼓励陆遥不要放弃希望。[亮点词汇]①betweenyouandyourfriend你和你朋友之间②offertoreplacethebook主动提出把书换掉③focuson专注于……[高分句型]①Iunderstandhowupsettingthismustbe.(how引导的宾语从句)②Don’tlosehope!(祈使句)9．（2025·上海徐汇·二模）Afterfouryearsofjuniorhighschoolstudy,youmusthavegrownupalot.Let’sgettoknowyouagainfromnewperspectives,forexample,yourstrengths,yourpursuits,yourattitudesandviewpointstowardsthings,thewaysyouhandlematters,andsoon.Pleasewriteaself-introductioninnolessthan60words.经过了四年的初中学习生活，你一定成长了不少吧。让我们从新的视角重新认识一下你，比如你的优势、你的追求、你对事物的态度和观点或是你处理事情的方式等等。请完成一份自我介绍，不少于60个词。(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格)Hi,Iam________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：

Hi,IamLiHua.Afterfouryearsofjuniorhighschoollife,Ihavegrownupalot.Oneofmybiggeststrengthsisbeingkindandhelpful.Ialwaysoffertohelpmyclassmateswiththeirschoolwork.

Ilovereadingbooksandplayingbasketball.Mydreamistobeateacherinthefuture.Ithinkeducationcanchangepeople’slives.WhenIencounterdifficultiesorfacechallengingproblems,Iturntomyparentsorteachersforguidanceandsupport.Ialsotrytosolveproblemsonmyowninsteadofgivingupquickly.Thismakesmestrongerandmoreconfident.

I’mproudofwhoI’vebecome!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，点明主题，要从新视角自我介绍；第二步，具体介绍自己的优势、追求、处事态度等；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①growup长大②offertodosth主动提出做某事③onone’sown独自④beproudof为……感到骄傲[高分句型]①Ithinkeducationcanchangepeople’slives.(宾语从句)②WhenIencounterdifficultiesorfacechallengingproblems,Iturntomyparentsorteachersforguidanceandsupport.(when引导的时间状语从句)10．（2025·上海虹口·二模）Writeanemailofatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的邮件，标点符号不占格)。学校校报收到了一封来自学生Paul的邮件，他建议校报增设“文化角”(Culturecorner)和“旅游角”(Travelcorner)两个板块。假如你是校报主编Joyce，请给Paul回复一封邮件，说明你的决定并阐述理由。注意：1.文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearPaul,

Thankyouforyoursuggestionsaboutadding“CultureCorner”and“TravelCorner”toourschoolnewspaper.Aftercarefuldiscussion,we’vedecidedtoadoptbothideas.TheCultureCornerwillhelpstudentslearnaboutdifferentcountries’traditions,whichpromotescross-culturalunderstanding.TheTravelCornercanshareinterestingtravelstoriesandtipstoinspireexploration.Yourcreativethinkingisexactlywhatweneed!We’llstartpreparingthefirsteditionnextmonth.Pleaseletusknowifyouhavemoreideas.

Bestregards,Joyce【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是邮件；②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”，适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步：表明写作意图。感谢对方提出的建议。第二步：具体阐述写作内容，阐述自己的决定、分述理由。第三步：书写结语。[亮点词汇]①learnabout学习有关②decidetodosth.决定做某事③helpsb.dosth.帮助做某事[高分句型]①Pleaseletusknowifyouhavemoreideas.(If引导的条件状语从句）②TheCultureCornerwillhelpstudentslearnaboutdifferentcountries’traditions,whichpromotescross-culturalunderstanding.(定语从句)11．（2025·上海普陀·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.【根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。】假设你是李华，将于今年7月4日—7月10日去英国伦敦旅行。你在浏览TrustedHousesitters网站时，发现以下两个家庭在寻找此时间段能帮助他们照看房子和宠物的人(housesitter)。请任选一个家庭，撰写一封申请邮件，说明你的情况、申请目的和理由，并简要谈谈你的照看计划。Catsittingforacutecat,inalovelyhouse,Mr.andMrs.ColinsExperiencedsitterneededforourdog,Mr.andMrs.Walsh11职责：●照顾猫咪Mimi●保持房子整洁职责：●照顾小狗Bell●照顾花园里的植物友情提示：●Mimi很粘人，需要陪伴和玩耍友情提示：●Bell精力旺盛，但害怕淘气的小孩子注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearMr.andMrs.Colins,IamwritingtoapplyforthehousesittingpositionfromJuly4thtoJuly10th.IwillbevisitingLondonduringthisperiodandwouldlovetotakecareofyourcat,Mimi.Ihaveexperiencewithcatsandunderstandtheirneeds.IwillensureMimiisfed,playedwith,andgivenplentyofattention.Additionally,Iwillkeepyourhousecleanandtidy.IlookforwardtotheopportunitytohelpyouandspendtimewithMimi.Bestregards,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。③提示：注意邮件格式。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步：点明自己想申请照看房屋的工作，介绍自己的情况；第二步：介绍自己类似的经验及工作计划；第三步：希望能得到这次和猫咪一起度过时光的机会。[亮点词汇]①applyfor申请②takecareof照顾③keepyourhousecleanandtidy保持你的房子干净整洁[高分句型]①IwillbevisitingLondonduringthisperiodandwouldlovetotakecareofyourcat,Mimi.(将来进行时)12．（2025·上海松江·二模）Writeatleast60wordsonthegiventopic.(根据以下提示写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)作为未成年人，我们往往和父母、祖父母住在一起。生活中，你与长辈是如何相处的?请以“Howtogetalongwithelders”为题，分享你与长辈的相处之道，并用一个事例来说明。(注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.

照抄阅读语篇不得分。)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtogetalongwitheldersInlife,weoftenlivewithourparentsandgrandparents.Livingwitheldersteachesmepatienceandrespect.Ialwayslistencarefullytotheirstoriesandsharemyschoollifewiththem.Forexample,mygrandmotherlovestraditionalcrafts,soIlearnedpaper-cuttingfromherlastweekend.Thoughmyfirstattemptwasmessy,shepraisedmyeffortwarmly.Thisexperiencemadeuscloser.

Ibelieveshowinggenuineinterestintheirwisdomandspendingqualitytimetogetherarekeystoharmoniousrelationships.【详解】①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步：点明主题；第二步：用具体事例体现与长辈的相处之道；第三步：总结升华，强调“真诚关注”和“陪伴”的重要性。[亮点词汇]①harmonious和谐的②genuineinterest真正的兴趣[高分句型]①Forexample,mygrandmotherlovestraditionalcrafts,soIlearnedpaper-cuttingfromherlastweekend.(so引导结果状语从句)②Thoughmyfirstattemptwasmessy,shepraisedmyeffortwarmly.（though引导让步状语从句）13．（2025·上海杨浦·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)假设你是TammyLuo，在新西兰交流学习期间，你需要向同学们做一次关于上海文化(如建筑、食物、节日活动、生活方式等)的演讲，请写一篇演讲稿，其中要体现你使用照片或明信片来辅助演讲。(注意：1.短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Helloeveryone:MynameisTammyLuo.NowletmeintroduceShanghaitoyou.IfyougotovisitShanghai,youcan’tmisstheOrientalPearlTVTower.Lookatthispicture.Ithasaheightof468metersanditisthehighestTVtowerinAsia.Ifyouhaveachance,trythemaglevtrain.It’sveryfastandexcitingtotake.YoucanalsoenjoyfoodinYuGarden.Youcanfindalotoflocalsnacksthere.Besides,IthinkShanghaiDisneylandisagoodplacetohavefun.It’sthefirstdisneylandinmainlandChina.It’sveryinteresting.IhopeyouwillenjoyyourtripinShanghai.Thankyouforlistening.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作提示已给出，可适当增加细节，不要遗漏，注意上下文的逻辑关系。[写作步骤]第一步，自我介绍并引出主题；第二步，介绍上海的特色；第三步，书写结尾表达祝愿。[亮点词汇]①introducesth.tosb.向某人介绍某物②haveachance有机会③havefun玩得开心[高分句型]Ifyouhaveachance,trythemaglevtrain.(if引导条件状语从句)14．（2025·上海黄浦·二模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）假设你是李华，收到英国笔友Tom的求助邮件。他因借助AI完成作业与爸爸产生矛盾。Tom想缓和关系却不知如何表达。请以李华的身份给Tom回复邮件，提出建议，助其改善与爸爸的关系。邮件需包含对使用AI完成作业的看法及解决矛盾的建议。注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DearTom,

I’msorrytohearthatyouhadaconflictwithyourdadbecauseofusingAItodohomework.Iunderstandyoursituation,butrelyingonAIforhomeworkisn’tagoodidea.Homeworkhelpsuslearnandpractice,andAIcan’treplaceourefforts.Itdeprivesusofthechancetothinkindependentlyandsolveproblemsonourown,whichareessentialskillsforlearning.

Toimproveyourrelationshipwithyourdad,first,haveanhonesttalkwithhim.ApologizeforusingAIandexplainyounowunderstandwhyit’swrong.Promisehimyouwon’tdoitagainandwillworkhardonyourown.Besides,youcanmakeastudyplantogethertoshowyourdetermination.Ibelieveifyoutakethesesteps,therelationshipbetweenyouandyourdadwillsurelytakea