高级灵活句式在写作中的运用-高三-英语-课件

FlexibleSentencePatternsinWriting1appreciatehigh-markwritingcontents(目录)

updatethesentencesconsolidationexercise

reviewthetitleofwriting21.2.3.4.Part1reviewthetitle3thetitle4（2022年全国乙卷）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势和不足2.提出学习建议注意：1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯（雁南中学第14次练考）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartforshortvideos为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势和不足2.提出观看建议注意：1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯5SCORE：17criteriaofthescore6contentslinkingwords

要点齐全

过渡自然basicgrammar

语法准确flexible&advancedsentencepattern

句式高级,灵活

spelling，advancedvocabulary

拼写准确，词汇高级7volcabulaylinkingwordsadverbialclause状语从句)objectclause（宾语从句）analysisofthewriting8contentslinkingwords

要点齐全

过渡自然basicgrammar

语法准确flexible&advancedsentencepattern

句式高级,灵活

spelling，advancedvocabulary

拼写准确，词汇高级Part2appreciatehigh-markwriting9Besmartforshortvideos

Withthepopularityofthedifferentapps,watchingshortvideosisbeingacceptedbymoreandmorepeople.

Thereasonsarelistedasfollows.Firstandforemost,itisofgreatconvenience

sincewecanenjoywhateverweneedwhenevernecessaryandwhereverweare,aslongaswehaveaccesstotheInternet.Secondly,comparedwith

watchingfilmsandTVprograms,watchingshortvideostakesalittletime,whichisgoodnewsforthosewhohavelimitedtime.Besides,

itcanmakeyourelaxedandevenlearndifferentkindsofinformationtowatchshortvideos.However,wemustbeawarethatwatchingtheshortvideosdoesharmtobothourphysicalandmentalhealthandthereexistsapossibilitythatsometeenagersmaygetaddictedtothem。

Frommyperspective,

itiswithparentsorteacherssupervising

teenagerseffectivelyandprovidingthemtimelyassistancethat

theycandevelopagoodhabitofusingtheapps.10名词性从句(宾从)原因状语从句非谓语动词作状语非谓语动词作主语定语从句it作形式主语名词性从句（同谓从）with复合结构强调句式条件状语从句Part3updatethesentences11121.Ourschoolwillholdaheateddiscussion.Itstopicisabout“besmartforshortvideos”答卷原句再现：定语从句升级：Ourschoolwillholdaheateddiscussion，whosetopicisabout“besmartforshortvideos”答卷原句再现：2.Ithinkthattheshortvideosisconvenienttopeople’sdailylife.

同位语从句升级：

Iholdthebeliefthattheshortvideosisconvenienttopeople’sdailylife.

133.Whenwewatchtheshortvideos,weshouldcontrolthetimereasonably.答卷原句再现：非谓语动词升级：

答卷原句再现：4.Shortvideoscanbroadenourhorizonsandrelaxourmind.notonly...butalso倒装升级：Notonlycanshortvideosbroadenourhorizonsbuttheyalsorelaxourmind.Whenwatchingtheshortvideos,weshouldcontrolthetimereasonably.145.Nowadays,shortvideosgetmoreandmorepopularandanincreasingnumberofpeopebenefitalotfromthem.答卷原句再现：with复合结构升级：

答卷原句再现：6.Ithinkweshouldconsidertheseappsobjectivelyandbrowsethemwiththeinstructionofparentsandteachers.suggest虚拟语气+it作形式主语升级：Itissuggestedthatwe(should)considertheseappsobjectivelyandbrowse(浏览)themwiththeinstructionofparentsandteachers.Nowadays,withshortvideosgettingmoreandmorepopular，anincreasingnumberofpeopebenefitalotfromthem.Part4consolidation(巩固)exercise15consolidationexercise

16假定你是李华，你校英语报正在进行征文活动，主题为“Advantagesanddisadvantagesofcivildrones”。你打算写一篇短文投稿，内容包括Advantages1.给生活带来更多便利,例如送快递;航拍...2.为有危险的人提供帮助;3.用于农业、天气预报和森林防火...Disadvantages1.可能侵犯个人隐私;2.影响公共安全...youropinion注意:1.词数100左右2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;usefulphrases

17航拍:aerialphotography送快递：deliverpackages天气预报：weatherforecast森林防火：forestfireprevention侵犯个人隐私：invadepersonalprivacy

公共安全：publicsafety/publicsecuritysummarize状语从句advancedsentencestructure定语从句倒装句with复合结构18名词性从句非谓语动词强调句虚拟语气simpleandsinglesentence

diverseandflexiblesentence1