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主题词Self-discovery&Identity一、核心技法回顾模式核心逻辑一句话示例1.对比→觉醒看到他人→反思自己→重新认识“看着Sol喝完汤,我突然意识到——我一直以为的’尴尬’,其实是别人眼中的’温暖’。”WatchingSolemptyhisbowl,ithitme—whatIhadalwayscalled“embarrassment”wasactuallywhatotherssawas“warmth.”2.尝试→发现偶然尝试→找到热爱→成为自己“第一次举起相机,透过取景框,我看到了一个从未见过的世界——也看到了从未见过的自己。”ThefirsttimeIraisedthecamera,throughtheviewfinder,IsawaworldI’dneverseen—andaselfI’dnevermet.3.失去→珍惜差点失去→才懂珍贵→弥补行动“祖母病倒那天,我才想起那团乱线——原来爱需要行动,不能等待。”ThedayGrandmafellill,Ifinallyrememberedthattangledyarn—loveneedsaction,notwaiting.4.放手→成长过度保护→学会放手→彼此成长“浣熊没有回来那晚,我站在空笼子前,终于明白:爱不是抓住,是放手让它飞。”Thenighttheraccoondidn’tcomeback,Istoodbeforetheemptycageandfinallyunderstood:loveisn’tholdingon—it’slettinggo.5.困境→发现遭遇困境→发现潜力→重新认识“从山上坠落的那一刻,我以为结束了——却发现自己比想象中更勇敢。”ThemomentIfelloffthemountain,Ithoughtitwasover—onlytofindIwasbraverthanI’deverimagined.自我发现&身份认同主题语料库场景一:站在“旧我”的边缘画面感语料我一直活在她的阴影下,永远差那么一点。Ialwayslivedinhershadow,neverquitemeasuringup.无论多努力,我总是第二好的那个。NomatterhowhardItried,Iwasalwayssecondbest.我暗自祈祷他们不要注意到我有多不一样。Iprayedtheywouldn’tnoticehowdifferentIwas.我低着头,希望自己能融入背景里。Ikeptmyheaddown,hopingtoblendintothebackground.一半的我想逃,一半的我知道逃不掉。Partofmewantedtorun.PartofmeknewIcouldn’t.两个声音在我心里打架——一个尖叫着“躲起来”,一个低语着“留下来”。Twovoicesbattledinsideme—onescreaming“hide”,onewhispering“stay”.场景二:被一句话/一个画面击中画面感语料她的话像一拳打在我肚子上。Herwordshitmelikeapunchtothegut.那句话让我当场愣住。Thatsentencestoppedmecold.那个画面定格在我眼前。Thescenefrozeinfrontofmyeyes.我无法移开视线——就像第一次看见真相。Icouldn’tlookaway—itwaslikeseeingthetruthforthefirsttime.我以为埋好的回忆突然涌回来,撞得我喘不过气。MemoriesI’dburiedcamerushingback,knockingtheairoutofme.祖母的脸在我眼前闪过——比过去多少年都清晰。Grandma’sfaceflashedbeforemyeyes—clearerthanithadbeeninyears.场景三:顿悟的瞬间画面感语料然后,像黑暗中突然亮起一盏灯,我懂了。Andthen,likealightflippingoninthedark,Iunderstood.它不是慢慢来的,是一下子撞过来——像浪打在身上。Ithitme—notslowly,butallatonce,likeawavecrashingoverme.第一次,我看见了那个一直就在眼前的事实。Forthefirsttime,Isawwhathadbeenrightinfrontofmeallalong.雾散了。它就在那里——那个我一直看不见的真相。Thefoglifted.Andthereitwas—thetruthI’dbeentooblindtosee.心里某个地方裂开了。Somethinginsidemecrackedopen.眼泪一下子就流下来了——不是伤心的泪,只是……释然。TearscamebeforeIcouldstopthem—notsadtears,just...release.场景四:迈出那一步画面感语料我深吸一口气,深到胸口发疼。然后,我迈了出去。Itookabreathsodeepithurt.ThenImoved.趁恐惧还没把我再次锁住,我往前走了一步。Beforefearcouldchainmeagain,Isteppedforward.我的手在抖,但还是伸了出去。MyhandtrembledasIreachedout—butitreached.我抓住他的手,像抓住唯一能让我浮起来的东西。Igrabbedhishandlikeitwastheonlythingkeepingmeafloat.那些被我咽了多年的话,终于浮了上来。ThewordsI’dswallowedforyearsfinallyrosetothesurface.“对不起。”两个字。一辈子的重量。“I’msorry.”Twowords.Alifetimeofweight.场景五:站在“新我”的位置回望画面感语料那个背了那么久的重量?没了。就这么……没了。TheweightI’dbeencarrying?Gone.Just...gone.我呼吸了——真正地呼吸了——这么多年第一次。Ibreathed—reallybreathed—forthefirsttimeinyears.我回头看那个曾经的我。她像个陌生人。IlookedbackatwhoI’dbeen.Shefeltlikeastrangernow.那个那么怕“不一样”的女孩?我快认不出她了。Thegirlwhowassoafraidofbeingdifferent?Ibarelyrecognizedher.这不是结束。这是某个新东西的第一页。Itwasn’tanending.Itwasthefirstpageofsomethingnew.从那天起,我不再试着变成别人,我开始做自己。Fromthatdayon,Istoppedtryingtobesomeoneelseandstartedbeingme.场景六:结尾定格画面画面感语料我们紧紧抱着,像再也不会松手。这次,真的不会了。Weheldonlikewe’dneverletgo.Thistime,wewouldn’t.我看着他的背影走远——没有害怕,只有平静。他准备好了。我也是。Iwatchedhimwalkaway—notwithfear,butwithpeace.Hewasready.AndsowasI.围巾织完了。但更重要的是——我心里有些东西也织圆满了。Thescarfwasfinished.Butmorethanthat—somethinginmewasfinishedtoo.我抬起头。天从来没有这么宽过。我的人生也是。Ilookedup.Theskyhadneverlookedsowide.Neitherhadmylife.万能结尾金句中文英文那一天,我不再逃避,开始做自己。Thatday,Istoppedrunningandstartedbeing.我终于看清了一直就在眼前的东西。Ifinallysawwhathadbeenrightinfrontofmeallalong.有时候,要先迷失自己,才能找到自己。Sometimesyouhavetoloseyourselftofindyourself.成长不是变成另一个人,而是发现你本来是谁。Growingupisn’taboutbecomingsomeonenew—it’saboutdiscoveringwhoyou’vealwaysbeen.重要的不是登顶,而是跌倒后还能站起来。It’snotaboutreachingthetop—it’saboutgettingbackupwhenyoufall.三、微情节训练微写作1背景你是一名交换生,寄宿在一个普通农庄。家里的房子老旧,饭菜简单,你来这儿三个月了,一直觉得这个家“拿不出手”,从不敢邀请朋友来玩。这天傍晚,你随手做了碗蔬菜汤。农庄家8岁的小儿子Sol喝完,抬头看着你,眼睛亮晶晶地说:“这是我最喜欢的一顿饭。”题目:Sol喝完汤,抬头看着我说:“这是我最喜欢的一顿饭。”那一刻,我突然意识到……AfterSolfinishedhissoup,helookedupandsaid,“Thisismyfavoritemealever.”Inthatmoment,Isuddenlyrealized...写作提示:之前我怎么看待自己的家庭?(尴尬/羞耻)Sol的话让我看到了什么?(温暖/爱)我的心理如何转变?你的写作:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

AfterSolfinishedhissoup,helookedupandsaid,“Thisismyfavoritemealever.”Inthatmoment,Isuddenlyrealized—whatIhadbeentryingsohardtohidewasexactlywhatothersenviedmost.Mama’ssouppotwasneversomethingtobeashamedof;itheldeverythingaboutmyfamily:steamingdinners,endlesslaughter,andMama’snaggingthatIneverateenough.ThroughSol’seyes,IfinallysawhowluckyItrulywas.微写作2背景:你的姐姐是“别人家的孩子”——成绩好、会弹琴、拍照还得过奖。爸妈给你买了台相机,希望你也学学。你一直讨厌活在姐姐的阴影下,连相机都不想碰。这天放学,你一个人坐在操场边,无聊地举起相机,透过取景框乱看。题目:第一次透过取景框看世界,我发现……ThefirsttimeIlookedthroughtheviewfinder,Idiscovered...写作提示:之前我活在谁的阴影下?透过镜头看到了什么不同的画面?这个瞬间对我意味着什么?你的写作:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

ThefirsttimeIlookedthroughtheviewfinder,Idiscovered—Ididn’thavetobeanyoneelse.Sunlightstreamingthroughleaves,anantclimbingapetal,mydeskmate’sdimpleswhenshesmiled.Theseordinarymomentssparkledthroughthelens.I’dspentsolongchasingmysister’sshadowthatI’dforgottentolookatthescenerybeneathmyownfeet.WhenIloweredthecamera,Ismiled.I’dbeenhereallalong—Ijustneversawmyself.微写作3背景:小时候祖母想教你织毛衣,你总坐不住五分钟就跑开。她说:“织毛衣不是求快,是把爱织进每一针。”你从没往心里去。去年冬天祖母走了。收拾遗物时,你翻出一团缠得乱七八糟的毛线——那是你十岁那年扯乱的,她一直留着没舍得扔。题目:手指碰到那团乱线时,祖母的话突然在耳边响起……Asmyfingerstouchedthetangledyarn,Grandma’swordssuddenlyechoedinmyears...写作提示:祖母说过什么?(“把爱织进每一针”)我当时为什么没听完?现在再听到这句话,感受有何不同?你的写作:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

Asmyfingerstouchedthetangledyarn,Grandma’swordssuddenlyechoedinmyears:“Knittingisn'taboutbeingperfect—it’sabouttyingloveintoeverystitch.”Backthen,I’donlyhalf-listenedbeforerunningoff.Butnow,holdingthattangledyarn,rememberingherlyinginthathospitalbed,Ifinallyunderstood.Shetaughtmetoknitnotbecauseshewantedperfectstitches—butbecauseshewantedmetolearnthatlovetakestime,onestitchatatime.Iloweredmyheadandbegantountanglethemess.Thistime,Ilistenedtotheend.微写作4背景:你救了一只受伤的小浣熊,伤好后却舍不得放它走,怕它在野外活不下来。儿子提醒你:“你这样养着它,它以后更活不了。”你不听。一周前你开始试着把笼门打开,让它自己出去找吃的。小浣熊每晚都会回来,直到这天晚上,它没有回来。题目:那天晚上,浣熊没有回来。我站在空笼子前,终于明白……Thatnight,theraccoondidn’tcomeback.Standingbeforetheemptycage,Ifinallyunderstood...写作提示:我之前怎么对待浣熊?(过度保护)儿子说过什么?空笼子让我明白了什么道理?你的写作:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

Thatnight,theraccoondidn’tcomeback.Standingbeforetheemptycage,Ifinallyunderstood—mysonwasleaving,theraccoonwasleaving,andeverythingI’dbeendesperatelyholdingontowasneverminetokeep.Irememberedmyson'swords:“Yourworrywillcosthimhissurvivalskills.”Loveisn’tchainingsomeonetoyourside—it’slettingthemfly.Thecagewasstillthere,butitnolongerheldraccoons.Itheldalessonafatherhadfinallylearned.微写作5背景:你是个登山爱好者,一直把登山当成“征服”。这次和搭档Mel挑战一座雪山。下撤途中,你一脚踩空,向冰崖下坠落。几秒后,冰镐卡进冰缝,你整个人挂在冰壁上,脚下是万丈深渊。题目:坠落停止的那一刻,我挂在冰镐上,脑子里只有一个念头……Themomentmyfallstopped,hangingfrommyiceaxe,onlyonethoughtcrossedmymind...写作提示:坠落的瞬间我在想什么?停下来之后的第一反应是什么?这次经历改变了我对“征服”的理解吗?你的写作:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

Themomentmyfallstopped,hangingfrommyiceaxe,onlyonethoughtcrossedmymind—I’malive.Thewindscreamedinmyears,mybodytrembled,butmyhandsgrippedtheaxewitheverythingIhad.Iusedtothinkconquering100peaksmeantsuccess.ButnowIunderstood:truestrengthisn’taboutneverfalling—it’saboutfindingsomethingtoholdontowhenyoudo.Thistime,Iheldontomyiceaxe—andMel’svoicecallingmynamefromabove.四、实战演练(一)基础级(3道)1.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Harryslammed(猛关)hisbedroomdoor.He’dbeenbeggingDadforanewtabletforweeks—onewithafastcameratotakephotosforhisartclass.ButDadjustshookhisheadeverytime.“Weneedtosaveforyouryoungersister’sschooltriptothesciencemuseum,”he’dsaid.Harrythoughttohimself,“It’snotfair.Allmyfriendshaveonefortheirprojects.”Thatevening,DadfoundHarrysittinginthebackyard,sad.Hepulledupachairandsatdown,askingHarry,“Rememberthatredbikeinthestorageroom?Thatthingusedtobemyprideandjoy.”Harrynodded,thinkingofthedustythingcoveredbyastrongcloth.“IwantedanewbikemorethananythingwhenIwasyourage,”Dadsaid.“Yourgrandpafoundthatredoneatajunkyard—withabentwheel.Hesaidwecouldn’taffordanewone.SoIspenteveryweekendouthere,fixingthatoldone—straighteningthewheel,patching(修补)thetires,evenrepaintingitredwithleftoverpaintfoundinthestorageroom.”Helaughedsoftly.“WhenIfinallyrodeit,Ifeltprouderthanifithadbeenbrand-new.Iearnedit.”“Whyareyoutellingmethis?Mytabletisn’tabike,”Harryresponded.“Becausewantingthingsiseasy,”Dadsaid.“Butworkingforthem?That’swhenyoustartcaringabouthowharditistoget.That’showyoulearnwhatthey’rereallyworth.Iknowyouwantatabletverymuch.Butyoursister’strip—she’sbeentalkingaboutitsincethesecondgrade.Maybethere’sawaytodoboth.”Harry’sthroatsuddenlyfelttight.“Whatif...whatifIsoldmyoldstuff?Toys,books—haveayardsale?”Dad’seyeslitup.“That’sagoodplan.Butyouhavetodothework—pricing,settingup,andselling.Whateveryoumake,everycentgoestowardsyourtablet.”注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thenextday,Harrydraggedboxesfullofoldtoysandbookstotheyard.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenthelastcustomerleft,Harrycountedtheday’searnings.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Thenextday,Harrydraggedboxesfullofoldtoysandbookstotheyard.Hecarefullyarrangedeachitem,hopingtoattractpotentialbuyers.Ashesetupthestall,neighborsandpassers-bybegantostopby,intriguedbythevarietyofgoodsondisplay.Harryenthusiasticallyexplainedthefeaturesofeachtoyandbook,sharingstoriesbehindsomeofhisfavorites.Thesunshonebrightlyoverhead,andwitheachsale,Harry’sexcitementgrew.Notonlywashemakingprogresstowardshisgoal,buthewasalsolearningvaluablelessonsaboutcommunicationandnegotiation.Whenthelastcustomerleft,Harrycountedtheday’searnings.Tohissurpriseanddelight,thetotaltookhisbreathaway—itwasmorethanenoughforthetablet’sbasicmodel!Awaveoffiercepridewashedoverhim,strongerthananyexcitementhe’dfeltjustwantingthedevice.HerealizedDadwasright:thehoursspentsorting,pricing,hauling,andsellinghadtransformedthetabletfromamereobjectofdesireintosomethingdeeplypersonalandvaluable.Througheffortandperseverance,hecouldnotonlyachievehisdreambutalsodevelopadeeperappreciationforthevalueofhardwork.Thistabletwouldn’tjustbenew;itwouldbeearned.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Harry想让爸爸买新平板电脑用于艺术课,爸爸因要为妹妹攒钱去科学博物馆而拒绝。爸爸以自己修复旧自行车为例,启发Harry通过努力获得想要的东西。Harry受鼓舞,决定卖旧物筹钱。他摆摊售卖,最后发现收入足够买基础款平板,意识到努力让物品变得更有价值。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“第二天,Harry把装满旧玩具和书籍的箱子拖到了院子里。”可知,第一段可描写Harry为了筹集买平板电脑的钱,在院子里摆摊售卖自己的旧物,并且热情地向过往的邻居和路人介绍商品,随着商品一件件售出,他不仅离目标越来越近,还学到了沟通和谈判的宝贵经验。②由第二段首句内容“当最后一位顾客离开时,Harry清点了当天的收入。”可知,第二段可描写Harry惊喜地发现收入足够购买平板电脑的基础款,他意识到通过努力和坚持,他不仅实现了梦想,还更加深刻地理解了努力工作的价值,这个平板电脑将不仅仅是一个新物品,更是他努力和坚持的见证。2.续写线索:摆摊售卖——热情介绍——商品售出——学到经验——清点收入——足够购买——意识到价值——努力见证3.词汇激活行为类①摆摊售卖:setupthestall/arrangetheyardsale②热情介绍:enthusiasticallyexplain/passionatelyintroduce③实现梦想:achieveone’sdream/makeone’sdreamcometrue情绪类①惊喜:tohissurpriseanddelight/withpleasantsurprise②骄傲:awaveoffiercepridewashedoverhim/hefeltastrongsenseofpride【点睛】【高分句型1】Ashesetupthestall,neighborsandpassersbybegantostopby,intriguedbythevarietyofgoodsondisplay.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句以及过去分词短语作状语)【高分句型2】HerealizedDadwasright:thehoursspentsorting,pricing,hauling,andsellinghadtransformedthetabletfromamereobjectofdesireintosomethingdeeplypersonalandvaluable.(运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句以及过去分词作后置定语)2.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Ibeggedmymothertoletmegocamping.Formonths,I’dtalkednon-stopabouttheforestadventuresandwatchingstarsatnightshowninthecampbrochure.“It’sachancetobeonmyown.AndIwilllearnsomething,”I’dsay.Finally,mymotheragreed,andIspentweekspackingsomethingnecessary—surethiswouldbethebestsummerever.ThefirstdayatCampRedwoodwasamazing.AssoonasIsteppedoffthebus,thefreshpinesmellandthesoundofbirdssingingmademefeelalive.ImetSarah,mycamproommate,andwequicklybecamefriends.Thatevening,weroastedsomefoodoverthecampfireandthengatheredinthetenttotellstories,eachofwhichmadeusjumpandlaugh.Overthefollowingdays,thecampleader,Mr.Carter,patientlytaughtustoidentifydifferentbirdcallsbytheirsoundsanddealwithaccidents.Wealsolearnedtomakesomespecialandbeautifulitemswithwhatcouldbefoundinnature.Isecretlymadeahatwithsomeleavesformymother.Everythingwasperfect—untilthelastnight.Athunderstormhitsuddenly.Rainbeatdownonthetentandwindhowledlikeapackofwolves.SarahandIstucktogether,scared.Ourtentstartedleaking,andoursleepingbagsbecamecompletelywet.“Iwanttogohome,now!”Sarahcried.ThinkingofwhatIhadsaidtomymother,Igrabbedtheextraplasticsheetfrommybackpackandshouted,“Let’sfixthis!”Westruggledinthedark,ourhandsshakingfromthecoldandfearaswetriedtotietheplasticsheetoverthetent.Thewindpushedagainstus,makingithardtoholdtheslipperyfabric.Justaswetiedthelastknot(结),Mr.Carterarrivedwithaflashlight.Hiseyesopenedwidewhenhesawthefixedtent.“Youtwodidthat?”heasked,surprised.Wenoddedproudly.Mr.CarterofferedtotakeaphotoofSarahandmeachievingsomethingamazing.Atthatmoment,Ifelteagertogohometosharesomethingwithmymother.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thenextday,whenIgothome,mymothersawmymuddyshoesandasked,“Howwasit?”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mymotherhadagoodlookatthephotoandthegiftandsaid,“You’reabsolutelyright!”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Thenextday,whenIgothome,mymothersawmymuddyshoesandasked,“Howwasit?”Sensinghervoicetremblingslightlyassheknelttobrushdirtoffmyshoes,Isharedthehighlightsofmycampingtrip,especiallywhathappenedthenightbefore.ThenIcarefullypulledoutaphotofrommypocket—SarahandIsmiledwidelythroughrain-soakedhair,plasticsheetstringstwistedaroundourfingersaswetiedtheknot—andsaid,“Ilearnedsomething.”Diggingintothedepthsofmybag,Igentlyplacedthehatintomymother’shandandsaid,“Thisisforyou.”Mymotherhadagoodlookatthephotoandthegiftandsaid,“You’reabsolutelyright!”Isawprideinhereyesandaddedexcitedly,“Ilearnedthatbeingonmyownisn’taboutdoingeverythingalone.It’saboutfacingchallengeswithcourageandcleverness—andsometimeswithafriend.”Mymother’seyessoftenedassheputonthehatcarefully.“I’msoproudofyou,”shewhispered,pullingmeintoawarmhug.Atthatmoment,Iknewthiswastrulythebestsummerever—notdespitethestorm,butbecauseofit.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者央求妈妈同意去露营,到红杉营地后,首日体验美妙,还和室友萨拉成为朋友,之后学了不少技能。最后一晚遇雷雨,帐篷漏水,作者和萨拉合力修好,得到卡特先生称赞,并盼着回家分享经历。【详解】1.段落续写①根据第一段首句“第二天,当我回到家时,妈妈看到我沾满泥巴的鞋子,问道:“怎么样?”可知,本段可描写作者兴奋地给妈妈分享露营经历,拿出和萨拉拍的照片,告诉妈妈自己学到了一些东西,并送给她一份礼物。②根据第二段首句“妈妈看了照片和礼物后说:“你说得对极了!””可知,本段可描写通过这次露营作者明白了有时要和朋友一起用勇气和智慧去面对困难。2.续写线索:回到家后妈妈询问——和妈妈分享露营的经历——拿出照片并送给妈妈一份礼物——得到妈妈的肯定——作者的感悟3.词类激活行为类①发生:happen/takeplace②意识到:know/beawareof③低语:whisper/murmur情绪类①颤抖:tremble/shake②兴奋地:excitedly/eagerly③温暖的:warm/cozy/tender【点睛】【高分句型1】Sensinghervoicetremblingslightlyassheknelttobrushdirtoffmyshoes,Isharedthehighlightsofmycampingtrip,especiallywhathappenedthenightbefore.(运用了现在分词作状语,as引导的状语从句以及what引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Diggingintothedepthsofmybag,Igentlyplacedthehatintomymother’shandandsaid,“Thisisforyou.”(运用了现在分词作状语)3.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。In2005NewYork,wesatonabenchintheoutdoorholdingareawithotherstudioaudiencemembers,waitingtoenterTheGuyTalkprogram—thiswasanearlymorningshowfeaturingmalesubjects,correspondingtothefemale-focusedshowTheCoffeeChat.Itshostsincludedmyfavorite,JakeMiller.Showinterns(实习生)handedoutboardswithquestionnaires,alltiedtotheday’stopic:datingdisasters.IsatbetweenmynieceEmmaandbestfriendSophia,coachingthemonhowtoanswer.“Theywantpeoplewho’llmakegoodTV,”Iexplained.“Thinkofyourfunniestdatingdisaster.”Myown“disaster”involvedaguywho’dpulledupoutsidemyhouse,honking(发出响声)insteadofcomingtothedoortowalkwithme.“Hecompletelyruinedthemoment,”Iwrote.“Mymomwassupposedtoopenthedoor,invitehimin,andsayI’dberightdown—he’dtakenawaythebigwelcomingceremonythatwassupposedtobeheld.”Isawtheinternsmileasshecollectedmyboardandlookedthroughmywords.AllIknewwasI’dsoonseeJakeMillerinperson,maybeeventalktohimoncamera.Iturnedupmyenthusiasm,likeIwasatanaudition(试镜).Otherwomenwereinterviewed,too,hopingJakewouldtalktothem,butIwassureit’dhappenforme.Iimaginedit:Jakeapproachingwithamicrophone,andItalkedabouttherudedate,laughingalongwiththeaudience.Perhapsmystorymightbeincludedinthehighlightscollectionoftheprogram.Whenwefiledintothestudio,Isweatedeventhoughitwasfreezing—IrealizedIhadstagefright.Aswetookourseats,Icaughttheeyeoftheinternwho’dsmiledearlier;shesmiledagain.IturnedtoSophiaandsaid“They’regoingtointerviewusontheshow.”“Howdoyouknowthat?”Sophiaasked.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Ijustknow,”Iwhispered,lookingattheinternwho’dsmiledtwicebefore.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertheshowended,theinternwalkedstraighttomewithmyboard.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Onepossibleversion:“Ijustknow,”Iwhispered,lookingattheinternwho’dsmiledtwicebefore.Myheartbeathardasthestudiolightsgotdark.Soon,JakeMillersteppedontothestage,andtheaudienceburstintocheers.Suddenly,theinterngavemeathumbs-up,andastaffmembermotionedformetostand.Mylegsfeltweakatfirst—stagefrightgoingback.ButwhenJakeheldoutthemicrophoneandsaid,“Tellusaboutthatguywhohonkedinsteadofknocking,”Ilaughedandbegan.Theaudienceshoutedatthe“grandentrance”part,andJakejoked,“Hereallyruinedyourmom’splan!”Thatmomentmadeallmynervousnessgoaway.Aftertheshowended,theinternwalkedstraighttomewithmyboard.Shesmiledwarmly.“Jakelovedyourstory,”shesaid.“Wemightuseapartinourhighlightscollection.Wouldyousignthis?”Igladlysigned,myhandsstillshakingwithexcitement.Aswewereleaving,IsawJakehimselfgivingmeathumbs-upfromacrosstheroom.EmmaandSophiacouldn’tstoptalkingabouthowI’dbeenonTV.Itwasn’tjustaboutseeingJakeanymore;itwasaboutbeingpartofhisshow,evenforamoment.(二)进阶级(4道)4.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Mama’sSoupPotTherearetoomanytreasuresinlifewetakeforgranted,theworthofwhichwedon’tfullyrealizeuntilthey’repointedouttousinsomeunexpectedway.SoitwaswithMama’ssouppot.Mama’ssoupwasspecialbecausetherewasnorecipeforit.IthadbeensosincehergirlhoodinItaly,whereshelearneditssecretfromhergrandma,whohadinherited(继承)itfromgenerationtogeneration.Also,itwasasymbolofsecurity.Forourlargeimmigrantfamily,Mama’ssoupguaranteedwewouldnevergohungry.Andwecouldjudgeoureconomicconditionsbyitscontents.Atonetime,however,Mama’ssouppotbecameasourceofembarrassmenttome,forIfeareditwouldcostmeanewfriendIhadmadeatschool.Solwasanunusualpalformebecausehisfatherwasadoctorandtheylivedinthebestpartofourtown.OftenSolinvitedmetohishomefordinner,whereIfoundthefoodwasgoodbuttasteless,lackingtheheartinessoftheoneservedfrommymom’sflame-blackenedpots.Moreover,theatmospherematchedthefoodandeverythingwassoformal.Sol’smotherandfatherwerepolite,buttheconversationaroundthetablewasnotnatural,whichmademealittledepressed.Andnoonehugged!Inmyfamily,warmhugswereaconstant-men,women,boysandgirls-andifyoudidn’tkissyourmother,shedemanded:“What’sthematter?Yousick?”Butatthattimeinmylife,allthiswasanembarrassment.IhadknownSolwouldliketoeatdinneratmyhouse,butthatwasthelastthingIwanted.Myfamilywassodifferent.Nootherkidshadsuchpotsontheirstoves,nordidtheyhaveamamawhosefirstactionuponseeingyouenterthehousewastosityoudownwithaspoonandbowl.Oneday,Solpointedlyaskedifhecouldcometomyhouse.Ihadtosayyes.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。ThedaySolcameoverIwasnervous.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ButSolquicklyfinishedhisbowlandaskedforonemore._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】ThedaySolcameoverIwasverynervous.Mamaandtheotherfamilymemberswelcomedhimwit

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