读后续写：家庭亲情类-闹钟提前40分钟不爱做家务的女孩也提前长大了（讲义）-2026届高三英语二轮复习

福建省龙岩市三校2026届高三上学期12月联考英语试卷

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Mrs.Thompsonoftenremindedherdaughter,lAmj.thathelpingwithhousework

wasnotonlyaresponsibilitybutalsoawayofshowingcareforthefamily次岂愎

谩>.ButtoAmy,householdchoreswereatiresomeburdenandawasteofher

precioustime1*全冲突、Everytimehermotheraskedhertowashthedishesafterdimer,

Amywouldprotest,"'It'sunfair!WhyshouldIhavetodothedishes?”Usually,Mrs.

Thompsonwouldsighanddoitherself.

OneMondayevening,asAmygotUDfromthetabic.Mrs.Thompsonbegan

coughingviolentlyandherfacegrewverypale妈姆内生扁让我千种#史'."1'1。notfeelingwell,“

shesaidandwenttoherbedroomwithoulevenmentioning>hedishes.

Amywasabouttoleavethedirtyplatesinthesinkasusual,butsomething

stoppedher.Sherememberedhermother'stiredeyesandweakvoice,andit

struckherhowtiredhermotherhadlookedlately——ademandin史job

andtakingcareofthehouseholdallby〃6方〃，*^分词姐”做件者动作.姆姆的扑语•.

Quietly,Amywalkedhermothertoherroom,andthenreturnedtothekitchen.

Shestaredatthemountainofdishes,tookadeepbreath,androlledupher

sleeves.Justasshewasdryingthelastplate,sheheardagentlevoicefrombehind.

"Amy?"Mrs.Thompson,whowasstandinginthedoorwan,hereyeswidewith

surpriseandwarmth及工士格④•人物情林、saidverygently.

Amyturnedaroundand,feelingalittleembarrassed,观出分钩短语做伴,"件\shemumbled

（咕哝）/'Well...Sinceyou'renotfeelingwell,IthoughtI'dhelpouttonight.”

“Thankyou,sweetheart,Mrs.Thompsonsaidverygently."Thatmeansalotto

me.”Thatnight,asAmylayinbed,shecouldn'tstopthinkingaboutthegentleness

inhermother'svoice.

“Maybe,Momwasright,“Amythought."Doinghouseworkisn'tjustachore.It

isawaytoshowlove.”

注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Beforesleeping,Amysettheclock40minutesearlier.

Paragraph2:Astimewenton,Amy*sattitudetohouseholdworkbegantochange.

福建省龙岩市三校2026届高三上学期12月联考英语试卷

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Mrs.Thompsonoftenremindedherdaughter,Amy,thathelpingwithhousework

wasnotonlyaresponsibility,butalsoawayofshowingcareforthefamily.Butto

Amy,householdchoreswereatiresomeburdenandawasteofherprecious

time.Everytimehermotheraskedhertowashthedishesafterdinner,Amywould

protest,"It'sunfair!WhyshouldIhavetodothedishes?”Usually,Mrs.

Thompsonwouldsighanddoitherself.

OneMondayevening,asAmygotupfromthetable,Mrs.Thompsonbegan

coughingviolentlyandherfacegrewverypale.'Tmnotfeelingwell/shesaidand

wenttoherbedroomwithoutevenmentioningthedishes.

Amywasabouttoleavethedirtyplatesinthesinkasusual,butsomething

stoppedher.Sherememberedhermother'stiredeyesandweakvoice,anditstruck

herhowtiredhermotherhadlookedlately—doingademandingjobandtakingcare

ofthehouseholdallbyherself.

Quietly,Amywalkedhermothertoherroom,andthenreturnedtothekitchen.

Shestaredatthemountainofdishes,tookadeepbreath,androlledupher

sleeves.Justasshewasdryingthelastplate,sheheardagentlevoicefrombehind.

"Amy?"Mrs.Thompson,whowasstandinginthedoorway,hereyeswidewith

surpriseandwarmth,saidverygently.

Amyturnedaroundand,feelingalittleembarrassed,shemumbled(咕哝),

“Well...Sinceyou'renotfeelingwell,IthoughtTdhelpouttonight.^^

“Thankyou,sweetheartJMrs.Thompsonsaidverygently."Thatmeansalotto

me.”Thatnight,asAmylayinbed,shecouldn'tstopthinkingaboutthegentlenessin

hermother'svoice.

“Maybe,Momwasright,MAmythought.4tDoinghouseworkisn'tjustachore.It

isawaytoshowlove.^^

注意:1.续写词数应为15()左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Beforesleeping,Amysettheclock40minutesearlier.

Paragraph2:Astimewenton,Amy'sattitudetohouseholdworkbegantochange.

一、读后续写整体分类与写作分析

1.题型分类

本篇属于：

□家庭生活类+情感成长型+价值观转变类读后续写

核心特征：

场景：家庭（日常家务）

人物关系：母女

冲突：责任逃避VS爱与理解

主题：成长、体谅、爱的表达

结局走向：情感升华+行为改变（正向）

21续写任务的核心目标

续写不是“再讲一个故事”，而是完成人物的成长闭环：

原文已完成续写需完成

Amy的情感觉醒Amy的行为延续与习惯改变

理解母亲主动承担责任

一次性行为长期态度转变

关键词：从“顿悟”走向“行动”

3口构思思路与布局建议

（1）两段功能定位（极其重要）

段落功能定位写作重点

Paragraph2长期转变习惯形成一情感深化—*■主题升华

（2）写作框架提炼

Paragraph1:单次行动（40分钟提前）

起床原因（体谅母亲/内心决定）

具体家务动作（做早餐/打扫/洗碗）

母亲反应（惊讶+感动）

Amy内心变化(满足/温暖)

Paragraph2:长期变化(Astimewenton)

频率变化(often/gradually/nolonger)

态度变化(主动vs抗拒)

情感深化(理解母亲辛劳)

主题升华(love/responsibility/family)

承接原文的关键注意事项

r必须承接的点

Amy原本讨厌家务

母亲身体不适是转折

Amy已有价值观改变的内心独白

□不能出现的错误

Amy突然“完美”

母亲变成说教者

出现无关人物或戏剧化冲突

巧妙设计续写内容的技巧

以“小事,，见“大爱”(做早餐/收拾厨房)

用动作代替说教

让母亲的反应“轻而暖”

Amy的改变是渐进式，而非一次完成

二、故事山(StoryMountain)模式分析

1.故事山结构对应

故事阶段原文/续写内衣

Exposition起因Amy讨厌家务

RisingAction发展母亲生病

Climax高潮Amy主动洗碗

FallingAction回落母女对话

故事阶段原文/续写内容

Resolution结局续写：态度转变、成长完成

续写承担的是：Resolution（解决+升华）

2.可与原文衔接的重点内容

情感衔接：gentleness/warmth

动作衔接:rolleduphersleeves

心理衔接：MaybeMomwasright

3.原文中的伏笔、冲突与线索

类型内容

冲突点Amy抗拒家务

转折点母亲生病

伏笔“MaybeMomwasright”

隐含线索爱不是语言，是行动

解决方案Amy行为习惯改变

三、原文分析

分析角度内容原文反应句

人物刻画Amy:自我一体谅"h'sunfair!n

情感层次抗拒一愧疚一温暖“Itstruckhcr...^^

关键情节点母亲生病“begancoughingviolently^^

语言特色温柔、日常“saidverygcntly^^

关键词分析care/responsibility“awayofshewingcare”

心理描写内心顿悟“Maybe,Momwasright”

动作描写主动洗碗“rolleduphersleeves**

环境描写夜晚厨房“staredatthemountainofdishes”

隐含主题爱与责任“awaytoshowlove”

分析角度内容原文反应句

情感转折抗拒一主动“somethingstoppedher”

空间转换餐桌一卧室一厨房“returnedtothekitchcn^^

时间过渡夜晚一长期“Thatnight.../Astimewenton”

四、读后续写动作、环境、心理描写

动作描写

Shequietlyslippedoutofbedandtiptoedtothekitchen.

她悄悄起床，踮着脚走向厨房。

Sherolleduphersleevesandbegantotidyupthemessyroom.

她挽起袖子，开始收拾凌乱的房间。

Shemovedquicklybutcarefully,afraidofwakinghermother.

她动作迅速却小心，生怕吵醒母亲。

Shewashedthedishesonebyone,feelingthewarmwateronherhands.

她一只一只地洗着盘子，感受着温水的温度。

Shewipedthetablecleanandputeverythingbackinplace.

她擦干净桌子，把一切归位。

Sheplacedthebreakfastonthetablewithashysmile.

她带着羞涩的笑容把早餐放在桌上。

Shecheckedtheclockandhurriedtofinishbeforehermotherwokeup.

她看了看钟表，加快动作想在母亲醒来前完成。

Shepausedforamoment,lookingatthequietkitchenwithsatisfaction.

她停下脚步，满意地看着安静的厨房。

Shenolongerwaitedtobetoldwhattodo.

她不再等别人提醒才行动。

Shetooktheinitiativetohelpwhenevershenoticedsomethingneededdoing.

她一发现有需要做的事，就主动帮忙。

心理描写

Awarmsenseofsatisfactionroseinherheart.

一种温暖的满足感在她心中升起。

Shesuddenlyunderstoodhowmuchhermotherhaddoneforthefamily.

她突然明白了母亲为这个家付出了多少。

Forthefirsttime,houseworkdidn't的ellikeaburden.

第一次，家务不再像负担。

Shefeltproudofherselffordoingsomethingmeaningful.

她为自己做了有意义的事而感到自豪。

Guiltslowlygavewaytodetermination.

内疚渐渐被决心取代。

Helpinghermotherbroughtherasenseofpeace.

帮助母亲让她感到内心安宁。

Sherealizedlovecouldbeshownthroughsimpleactions.

她意识到爱可以通过简单的行动表达。

Thethoughtofhermother'stiredfacestayedwithher.

母亲疲惫的神情一直萦绕在她脑海中。

Shefeltclosertohermotherthaneverbefore.

她感到与母亲前所未有地亲近。

Aquietchangev/astakingplaceinsideher.

一种悄然的改变正在她心中发生。

环境描写

Thehousewasstillwrappedinsilence.

房子仍笼罩在一片安静之中。

Softmorninglightfilteredthroughthewindow.

柔和的晨光透过窗户洒进来。

Thekitchensmelledfaintlyoffreshlymadebreakfast.

厨房里弥漫着淡淡的早餐香味。

Thetickingclocksoundedlouderinthequietroom.

安静的房间里，钟表的滴答声格外清晰。

Everythinglookedcleanerandwarmerthanbefore.

一切看起来比之前更整洁、更温馨。

Thepalelightmadetheroomfeelpeaceful.

微弱的光线让房间显得宁静。

Theearlymorningairfeltcoolandfresh.

清晨的空气清即而凉爽。

Agentlewarmthfilledthesmallhouse.

一种温柔的暖意充满了这个小家。

Thequiethouseseemedtosmilebackather.

安静的房子仿佛也在向她微笑。

Thefamiliarsurroundingssuddenlyfeltdifferent.

熟悉的环境忽然变得不一样了。

四口常见词的高级替换（分类整理）

“帮助”类

helptassist/lendahand/giveahelpinghand/support/takethe

initiative

“改变”类

change—>transform/shift/undergoachange/takeanewturn/evolve

“责任”类

duty—>responsibility/obligation/commitment/role/task

“疲惫”类

tired—exhausted/wornout/drained/overworked/fatigued

“意识到”类

realize一cometounderstand/becomeawareof/recognize/grasp/

perceive

常见地道

takeresponsibilityfor承担....责任

helpoutaroundthehouse帮忙做家务

makeahabitofdoingsth.养成做某事的习惯

nolongercomplainabout不再抱怨

showlovethroughactions用行动表达爱

bewillingtodosth.愿意做某事

withoutbeingasked在没有被要求的情况下

1.burden

词性：n.词义：负担

近义词:load/pressure/responsibility

反义词：relief

例句:HouseworkoncefeltlikeaheavyburdentoAmy.

Sherealizedhelpinghermothereasedherburden.

2.responsibility词性：n.

词义：责任

近义词：duty/obligation/commitment

反义词：irresponsibility

例句:Helpingathomeisasharedresponsibility.

Amylearnedtolakeresponsibilityforherfamily.

3.gentle词性：adj.词义：温柔的

近义词：soft/kind/mild/tender

反义词：harsh

例句:Hermotherspokeinagentlevoice.

Agentlesmileappearedonherface.

4.initiative

词性：n.词义：主动性

近义词：enthusiasm/willingness

反义词：passivity

例句:Amytooktheinitiativetohelpwithoutbeingasked.

Takinginitiativemarkedhertruechange.

五、PossibleVersion(4)

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everythinglookpeaceful坏埴注耳＞.Rememberinghermother'spalefaceandgentle

voicefromthenichtbefore它分例短次停M.件、shequietlywalkedintothekitchen.

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withhouseworkdidnotfeellikeaburdenbutsomethingmeaningfulshechoseto

do.

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Shenolongercomplainedwhenevertherewasworktodo,nordidshewaittobe

reminded.Instead,shetooktheinitiativetohelpwhenevershenoticedhermother

wastired.Gradually,washingdishes,cleaningtheroomandpreparingsimple

meals，动名”短译做主遥）becamepariofherdailyroutioe.Moreimportantly,Amybeganto

understandthatthesesmallactionscarriedloveandcare.Seeinghermother's

relievedsmile®叁分德维语做件螳动作）,shefeltclosertoherthaneverbefore.Whatstarted

asasingleearlymorningsoonturnedintoalastinghabit,remindingAmy犯在分仞短港双伊

处动用thatlovewasbestshownthroughquietactionsratherthanwords.

地道搭配

taketheinitiativetodo

feellikeaburden

becomepartofone'sroutine

remindsb.that...

情绪&动作亮点

hesitatedforasecond（心理波动）

awarmsenseofsatisfactionrose（情绪升温）

quietactionsratherthanwords（主题升华）

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Beforesleepin史、Amysettheclock40〃”/earlier.

Lyinginbedsit在步力0*做件M动作）,shereplayedthesceneinthekitchenagainandagain,

especiallythegentlenessinhermother'svoice.Whenmorningcame（无昊立语句、Amy

wokeupbeforethealarmandquietlygotdressed.Shewalkedintothe1dtehen,

breathinginthecoolmorningair，<■&分”也用做件.动作）,andbegantocleantheroomand

preparebreakfast.Assheworked,sherealizedhowmuchefforthermotherput

intothehouseholdeveryday.Bythetimeeverythingwasready,Amyfelttiredbut

strangelyhappy.Lookiepattheneatkitchenandthepreparedbreakfast,she

smiledtoherself,knowing（理充分到做语做停改动作।shehaddonesomethingworthwhile.

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-stimeon,QttitHdetohoutieholdworkbegantochange.

Theearlymorningeffortwasnolongeraone-timedecision.Daybyday,Amy

stoppedseeinghouseworkasunfairandstartedviewingitasherresponsibility

人物文化，.Shelearnedtohelpwithoutbeingaskedandtocarewithoutbeing

reminded.Heractionsbroughtnotonlyrelieftohermotherbutalsoasenseof

pridetoherself.Throughihesesimpleroulines,Amyfinallyunderstoodwhather

motherhadmeantallalong-lovedidnotalwaysneedtobespoken;sometimes,it

simplyneededtobedone.

高级替换

worthwhile—meaningful/rewarding

tiredtwornout/exhausted

情绪&动作亮点

replayedthescene（心理回放）

smiledtoherself（内敛情感）

helpwithoutbeingasked（高考高频表达）

Version3

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Beforesleeping,Amysettheclock40minutesearlier.

Thedecisionsurprisedevenherself,butitfeltright.Earl、thenextmorning,刈

做主语科*、shequietlygotupandwentstraighttothekitchen.Rememberin口l观石分M<l语做

件随动优Jzowtiredhermotherhadlooked,Amybegancleaningtheroomand

preparingbreakfastwithgreatcare.WhenMrs.Thompsonfinallycameoutofher

bedroom,shestoppedinsurpriseatthesightofthecleankitchen.Amylowered

herheadshyly,feelinghesfacegrowwarm，观&分方线诃做体》动作“|?uiherheartfeltlight.In.

thatmoment,sherealizedthathelpinghermotherbroughtherakindofhappiness

shehadneverfeltbefore.

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Whatstartedwithasingleearlymorninggraduallybecameahabit.Amyno

longerprotestedwhenitwastimetodochores.Instead,sheofferedhelpwillingly

andevenremindedherselftonoticewhatneededtobedone.Thesmallactsof

responsibilitydeepenedthebondbetweenmotheranddaughter.Lookin仪back观&

分司做衣件随动倘,A