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Continuationwriting
2026届新高考英语考前冲刺最后一课
新高考英语读后续写专项突破WritingproceduresStep1.reading
Step2.thinking
Step3.writing
Step1.reading
5W1H+conflict+theme阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thatday,Iwasattheairport,waitingtoboardaflight,whichhadbeendelayed.Topassthetime,Ipulledoutmysketchbook(素描本)andpencilfrommybagandstarteddrawing.Notfarfromme,ayoungmomwasstrugglingtokeephertwins,aboyandagirlaboutthreeorfouryearsold,undercontrol.Fullofenergy,theywereclimbingonchairs,pullingatherbackpack,andrunningaftereachother.Shewasclearlytired,tryingherbesttokeepthemcloseandcalm.Occasionally,thetwinswouldwanderovertome,lookingatmydrawingswithcuriouseyes.Itwasoneoftheraremomentswhentheystayedquiet.Eventually,weboarded.Iwassurprisedtofindthatthemomandherkidswereseatedjustacrosstheaisle(过道)fromme.Thetwinswereinthewindowandmiddleseats,andshesatontheaisle.Astheplanepreparedfortakeoff,thekidswerestillexcited,pointingatthesafetycardandaskingquestionslike"Arewereallygoingtofly?"Butthemomenttheplanethundereddowntherunwayandliftedofftheground,everythingchanged.Thegirlcriedfirst,followedquicklybyherbrothershouting,"Idon'twanttoflyanymore!Iwanttogetoff!"Theircriesgrewlouderandmorepanickedastheplaneclimbed.Themomtrieddesperatelytocalmthem,huggingthemacrosstheseats,whisperingcomfortsandhervoicestartingshakingtoo.Thecrycontinuedforquiteawhile.Inoticedsomepassengersinthecabin(机舱)begantolookoversympathetically.Someonegavethetwinssomesmalltoysandcookiestocalmthem.Buttheyjustcouldn'tstop.Icouldfeelthemom'sstressandhelplessness—shelookedasifshemightcrytoo.Whenmyfingerstouchedthebagwithmysketchbookandpencils,Igotanidea.MaybeIcoulddosomethingfortheyoungmom.注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。So,Iaskedifshewouldliketoswitchseatswithme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Withinminutes,thecabingrewquietagain._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
1Thatday,Iwasattheairport,waitingtoboardaflight,whichhadbeendelayed.Topassthetime,Ipulledoutmysketchbook(素描本)andpencilfrommybagandstarteddrawing.2Notfarfromme,ayoungmomwasstrugglingtokeephertwins,aboyandagirlaboutthreeorfouryearsold,undercontrol.Fullofenergy,theywereclimbingonchairs,pullingatherbackpack,andrunningaftereachother.Shewasclearlytired,tryingherbesttokeepthemcloseandcalm.Occasionally,thetwinswouldwanderovertome,lookingatmydrawingswithcuriouseyes.Itwasoneoftheraremomentswhentheystayedquiet.3Eventually,weboarded.Iwassurprisedtofindthatthemomandherkidswereseatedjustacrosstheaisle(过道)fromme.Thetwinswereinthewindowandmiddleseats,andshesatontheaisle.Astheplanepreparedfortakeoff,thekidswerestillexcited,pointingatthesafetycardandaskingquestionslike"Arewereallygoingtofly?"4Butthemomenttheplanethundereddowntherunwayandliftedofftheground,everythingchanged.Thegirlcriedfirst,followedquicklybyherbrothershouting,"Idon'twanttoflyanymore!Iwanttogetoff!"Theircriesgrewlouderandmorepanickedastheplaneclimbed.Themomtrieddesperatelytocalmthem,huggingthemacrosstheseats,whisperingcomfortsandhervoicestartingshakingtoo.5Thecrycontinuedforquiteawhile.Inoticedsomepassengersinthecabin(机舱)begantolookoversympathetically.Someonegavethetwinssomesmalltoysandcookiestocalmthem.Buttheyjustcouldn'tstop.Icouldfeelthemom'sstressandhelplessness—shelookedasifshemightcrytoo.Whenmyfingerstouchedthebagwithmysketchbookandpencils,Igotanidea.MaybeIcoulddosomethingfortheyoungmom.1.who(人物):核心人物:●“I”:Thenarrator(thepersonwithasketchbook),●
ayoungmother:●herthree-or-four-year-oldtwinchildren(aboyandagirl):次要人物:●someotherpassengersinthecabin①寻找文本要素Step1.reading利用要素串联法,梳理故事情节2.when(时间):
●Onthedaywhenthenarratorwaitsforandboardsadelayedflight(includingtheperiodofwaitingattheairportandtheinitialstageoftheplane’stakeoff).
①寻找文本要素Step1.reading利用要素串联法,梳理故事情节3.where(地点):
Attheairport(waitingarea)andinsidethecabinoftheflight.4.What(事件):
Thenarratorwaitsforadelayedflightattheairportanddrawstopassthetime.Later,thenarratorboardstheplaneandfindsayoungmotherstrugglingtocalmhertwins,whocryfranticallyduetofearwhentheplanetakesoff.Afterotherpassengers’helpfails,thenarratorcomesupwithanideatohelpthemotherwithasketchbook.①寻找文本要素Step1.reading利用要素串联法,梳理故事情节5.Why(原因/动机):1.Thenarratordrawstopassthetimebecausetheflightisdelayed.2.Thetwinscryfranticallybecausetheyfeelscaredwhentheplanetakesoff.3.Thenarratordecidestohelptheyoungmotherbecausehe/shenoticesherhelplessnessandthetwins’panic,andremembersthetwinsarecuriousabouthis/hersketches.①寻找文本要素Step1.reading利用要素串联法,梳理故事情节6.How(过程/方式)):1.Thenarratorpassesthetimebydrawingwithasketchbookandpencil.2.Theyoungmothertriestocalmthetwinsbyhuggingthemandwhisperingcomforts.3.Otherpassengerstrytohelpbygivingthetwinssmalltoysandcookies.4.Thenarratorplanstohelpthemotherbyusinghis/hersketchbook(impliedattheendoftheoriginaltext).①寻找文本要素Step1.reading利用要素串联法,梳理故事情节●我携带素描本(Ipulledoutmysketchbookandpencil),为后续用绘画安抚孩子埋下核心伏笔,是解决冲突的关键道具;●双胞胎对「我」的素描充满好奇(lookingatmydrawingswithcuriouseyes),且只有看素描时会安静,暗示绘画能吸引他们的注意力;●乘客们对母子三人抱有同情(somepassengers...gavethetwinstoysandcookies),为后续「我」伸出援手提供合理语境。原文的伏笔(为续写做的铺垫)
conflict冲突:年轻妈妈无法安抚因飞机起飞而感到恐惧、哭
闹不止的双胞胎。具体表现:●双胞胎因飞机起飞产生恐惧,哭闹不止,拒绝飞行(Idon'twanttoflyanymore!);●妈妈尽力安抚(huggingthem,whisperingcomforts),但无济于事,自身也陷入无助(hervoiceshaking,lookinglikeshemightcry);●其他乘客的帮助(送玩具、饼干)也未能缓解孩子的情绪,矛盾进一步凸显。theme主题:人与社会1.核心主题:微小善意的力量与人与人之间的温暖互助:(Kindness&helpeachother)●通过机场及航班上的场景,展现年轻妈妈的困境与无助,铺垫“我”用素描本安抚孩子的行为,传递出看似微小的善意与举手之劳,能有效缓解他人的困境,化解尴尬与焦虑,传递温暖与力量,同时也体现了人与人之间相互理解、彼此帮助的美好品质。
Step2.thinking
分析首句,构思情节
So,Iaskedifshewouldliketoswitchseatswithme.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Withinminutes,thecabingrewquietagain.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
首句Questionsforcontinuationwriting:Para1:1.Whatwastheyoungmother'sreaction(do/say)whensheheardtheproposaltoswitchseats(agreement,hesitation,orgratitude)?2.WhatdidIdofirsttocomfortthepanickedtwinsafterIswitchedseats?3.Afterthetwinssawme,didtheirmoodeaseinitially,andwhatattitudedidtheyshowtowardsmyactions(curiosity,resistance,orcalmness)?Para2:1.Whythetwinsfinallycalmeddown,andwhatweretheyfocusingondoing(relatedtomysketching)?2.Whatwasthereactionoftheyoungmotherwhenshesawherchildrencalmdown(expression,actions,orwords)?3.HowdidIfeelinmyheartwhenIsawthisscene,andwhatsimpleinsightdidthisincidentbringme?
Step3.writing
工整书写范文So,Iaskedifshewould
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