2027届新高考英语热点精准复习 读后续写六大描写

2027届新高考英语热点精准复习读后续写六大描写01动作描写02细节描写03对话描写04环境描写0506情绪描写动物描写ContinuationWritingContent3.对话描写最为重要的描写有五类：环境、动作、心理、情绪、对话读后续写作为记叙文，其核心只有一个，那就是“人”。因此一切的笔墨，都是为了塑造人物形象，使人物更加饱满。Howtomakeyourwritingvividandattractive?

对话(dialogue)是故事角色在整个故事中对彼此或对自己说的话。对话可揭示人物的性格和个性，也可推动情节发展。3.对话描写对话描写原则对话③不宜过长，侧重口语化词汇，避开生僻词汇；②对话描写必须反映人物的心理与情感，刻画人物的性格；④尽可能结合动作描写，明确对谁说。①对话要为推动故事情节服务，每段出现一两句即可；3.对话描写避免重复使用"said",

根据说话内容选择合适的表示"说"不同"说”tell告诉ask问answer回答add补充说shout喊reply回答state陈述whisper小声说argue争论interrupt插嘴repeat重复claim声称complain抱怨explain解释insist坚持order/command命令request请求demand强烈要求suggest建议recommend推荐announce宣布beg恳求mock嘲笑apologize道歉murmur低语warn警告joke开玩笑continue继续说recall回忆conclude推断出smile微笑着说cry哭泣各种各样的“说”3.对话描写1.说_________________________2.小声说_____________________3.解释_______________________4.请求________________________5.大喊________________________6.建议________________________7.尖叫________________________8.补充说______________________9.宣布________________________10.同意__________________11.承认___________________12.重复说_________________13.继续说_________________14.叹息说_________________15.责备___________________16.认为___________________17.嘟囔____________________18.结巴地说________________say,utterwhisper,murmurexplainask,beg,request,demandyell,shout,cryadvise,suggest,proposescreamaddannounce,declareadmit,acknowledgeagreerepeatcontinuesighscold,blamethink,believe,arguemumblestammer各种各样的“说”3.对话描写各种各样的“说”1.“Shallweleavenow?”he_________

tousandwelefttheroomveryquietly.2.“Help!Help!Ican’tswim,”_________thefrightenedboy.3.“Iwillneverdothatagain,”I___________.4.“Ididn’tlikethatmealatall,”___________thecustomer.5.“Perhapsyouwouldliketogothisway?”___________themanshyly.6.“Areyoucomingwithus?”_________LiMingtohisfriendontheothersideoftheroom.whisperedscreamedscreamshoutwhisperpromisesuggestcomplainpromisedcomplainedsuggestedshouted3.对话描写各种各样的“说”(1)“Iwouldloveto,”

saidEmily.

(2)“Ididn’tmeantohurtyou,”shesaid.(3)“I...I..don’tthinkI’msuitableforthecharacter,”Isaid.(4)“Iwillneverdothatagain,”Isaid.(5)“AndIalsotakedelightinworkingtheland,”saidthefarmer.

(6)“Iwantthatone,”theboysaid.(7)Thelittlegirl

said,“Sorry.”answeredexplained.replied.promised.addedinsisted.sobbed请选用适当的动词替换said3.对话描写给各种“说”加点料1.“That’sokay!”saidMaryinapleasanttone.2.“Ididn’tmeanthat,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.3.Jackrantomeandcriedinexcitement,“Youmadeit!Iamsoproudofyou!”4“Howdareyou！”shesaidangrily.加语气加嗓音加情绪短语(介词短语)加情绪副词3.对话描写给各种“说”加点料注意①

对话为推动故事情节服务，起点缀作用，不宜过长。③

要有画面感，尽量结合动作/心理/情绪等描写②

避免生僻词，艰难词汇。“Hey，howareyou?”“I’mfine,howareyou?”“Howistheweather?”“Terrific!Nicedayforawalk,isn'tit?”点睛：这样的对话在现实生活中很真实，但是写作毕竟是艺术加工，

无助情节推动的&不能刻画人物性格的日常寒暄，偏离文章主线的对话不要用。3.对话描写给各种“说”加点料①ina/an+形容词+tone,

表示“用……的语气”。

也可以用inatoneof

+名词的搭配。例:“Iwould

loveto,”saidEmilyinapleasanttone

“我很乐意这样做,”艾米丽用一种愉快的语气说inatoneofsurprise用惊讶的语气inatoneofcuriosity用好奇的语气inatoneofpatience用耐心的语气inatoneofimpatience用不耐烦的语气inasoft/gentle/mildtone用柔和的/温柔的/温和的语气ina(an)friendly/anxioustone用友好/焦虑的语气inatoneofcommand用命令的语气inaflattone用平淡的语气3.对话描写给各种“说”加点料在直播节目中，李发出一声惊人的喊叫，“天哪，答应我，买它！”Inalivestreaming,Lishoutedinasurprisingtone,“Oh,myGod!Promisemetobuyit”!3.对话描写给各种“说”加点料1.老人手上拿着烟，盯着夏洛看，疑惑地说,“马冬什么？”HoldingacigaretteinhisfingersandstaringatXiaLuo,theoldmanaskedinaconfusedtone,“Madongwhat?”3.对话描写给各种“说”加点料②

ina/an+形容词+voice,

表示“用……的声音”。例:“Ididn'tmeanto,”

shemormuredinalow

voice.“我不是故意的,”她低声说。inahigh/low/sweet/

loud

/

soft/weakvoice用高/低/甜美/响亮/柔和/虚弱的声音inanexcitedvoice用激动的声音inapleasantvoice用友善的声音inagentlevoice用温柔的声音inanangryvoice用生气的声音ina(n)cold/icyvoice用冰冷的声音inaboredvoice用厌烦的声音inanannoyedvoice用恼火的声音3.对话描写给各种“说”加点料“Ididn'tmeanto,”shewhispered/murmuredinalowvoice.“我不是故意的，”她低声说。3.对话描写给各种“说”加点料③

with+情感名词。例:“I...I...don'tthinkI'mrightforthepart,”Irepliedwithembarrassment.“我……我……认为我不适合这个角色，”我尴尬地回答。withexcitement激动地withdelight/satisfaction/asmile高兴/满意/面带笑容地withhorror/sadness/sorrow/grief恐惧/悲伤/悲哀/悲痛地withastonishment/surprise惊讶地withanger/relief生气/如释重负地withembarrassment/awkwardness尴尬地3.对话描写给各种“说”加点料1.Tomrantomeandcriedwithexcitement,“Youdidit!Iamsoproudofyou!”2.Atthesightofthemeal,thefatheraskedinsurprise,“Wheredidyougetthisbreakfast?”3.对话描写给各种“说”加点料④

加副词。常用的修饰不同“说”的副词有：loudly/guietly大声/低声地;

impatiently/angrily/bitterly.absently/rudely不耐烦/愤怒/痛苦/心不在焉/粗鲁地;sincerely/honestly/earestly/politely真诚/诚实/认真/礼貌地;cheerfully/happily/proudly高兴/快乐/自豪地;definitely/decidedly/firmly明确/坚决/坚定地。【例】“Iwillneverdothatagain,”Iansweredfirmly.“我再也不会那样做了,”我坚定地回答。3.对话描写给各种“说”加点料

特朗普是如此生气，以致于他在办公室大声吼道，“这下完蛋了！”SoannoyedwasJohnTrumpthatheroaredloudlyintheoffice,“It'sover”!3.对话描写对话搭配动作描写单纯说有动作3.对话描写对话搭配动作描写1.动作链+对话结构:

A,

Bandsaid。【典例1】对话情境:

Hesaid,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”

他说:“有志者事竟成。”动作链+对话:

思考他说这句话的时候有哪些动作,

拆解动作链。

生动对话:

Hesteppedforward,pattedmeontheshoulder,andsaidgently,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”andsaid

他走向前,

拍着我的肩膀,

温柔地说:“有志者事竟成。”ABandsaid3.对话描写对话搭配动作描写2.动作面+对话结构:

常用with复合结构+对话(With...doing,

sb.said

/

explained/...)或非谓语结构+对话(

Doing...,

sb.said

/

shouted/...)。【典例2】

对话情境:

Hesmiled,“Itisyoureffortsthatcountmost.”

他笑着说：“你的努力才是最重要的。”动作面+对话:

思考他说这句话的时候,

正在做什么动作。生动对话:

Pattingmyshoulder,hesmiled,“Itisyoureffortsthatcountmost.”

他拍着我的肩膀,

笑着说：“你的努力才是最重要的”。非谓语对话3.对话描写场景：Jim所在的足球队在比赛中不幸落败，他非常沮丧。在好友的劝说下，他决定继续观看比赛Withacar'shornbeeping,Jim'sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.“Howdidyou

do?”Tara_____________(急切地问).“Terrible!”Jim______________________(用低落的语气回答),

stilltryingtofigureouthowtheopposingteamscoredthewinninggoaljustsecondsbeforetheendofthegame.Bryan_____________________________(拍着Jim的肩膀问)“__________________________________________________(赢得比赛是你踢足球的唯一原因吗)andwhatreallymatterswhen

playingagame?”______________(听到这),Jimdidn'twanttogohomebutdecidedtofollowhisfriendsandwatchthegame.askedeagerlyrepliedinadowntonepattedJim’sshoulderaskingIswinningthegametheonlyreasonwhyyouplaysoccerHearingthis4.环境描写写景乃为主旨服务首先要明确的是，把主旨想清楚，时刻不忘“写景乃为主旨服务”这句话。如果景物与主旨无关，就是为写景而写景，就是无效的写景。4.环境描写Whatcanyouseethroughthewindow?4.环境描写Whatelementscanwedescribe?Throughthelargewindow,wecouldseethebaretreesinthestreetclothedwithsilverfromthesnowfall.事物地点天气修饰语4.环境描写词汇短语sun动词短语词块必记castthrough沐浴在

照亮照耀投射bebathedinlightupshinethrough在清晨的阳光中微弱的黄色光芒一束琥珀色的光落日红色的光芒inthemorningsunafaintyellowshineabeamofamberlightTheredraysofthesettingsun4.环境描写词汇短语动词短语词块必记倾泻

上升pouroverrise一轮巨大的月亮苍白的月光满月的光agiantmoon

palelightofthemoon

Thelightofthefullmoonmoon4.环境描写词汇短语moontranslation满月的光洒在大地上，我们拖着疲惫的脚步继续走向山下。___________________________________theearth,wedraggedourfeetwithexhaustionandcontinedtoheadtothebottomofthemountain.Thelightofthefullmoonpouredover4.环境描写词汇短语动词短语词块必记闪耀

闪烁点缀着sparkletwinkle/winkbedottedwith繁星满天的夜晚繁星闪耀微弱的光astarrynight

sparklingstarsthepalelightstar4.环境描写词汇短语startranslation不论何地，当他举头望去，星星都在苍穹中闪烁。___________________________intheheavenswhereverhelookedup.夜空点缀着银色的月亮和闪闪繁星。Thenightsky

_________________

aslivermoonand_______________.Thestars

sparkledwasdottedwithsparklingstars4.环境描写词汇短语riverthe_________riveratinystream涓涓细流themightyriver浩荡的大河swiftrivers湍急的河流therunningriver奔流的河水windingrivers

蜿蜒曲折的河流greenbanks绿茵茵的河岸4.环境描写词汇短语rivertranslation这条浩荡的大河平静地流淌着，映出沿岸茂密的树木。_________________laycalmandstill,mirroringthethicktreesalongthebanks.涓涓细流从山上蜿蜒流下。_______________wounditswaydownthehill.ThemightyriverAtiny

stream4.环境描写词汇短语mountain________________________巍峨的/壮丽的群山________________________高耸的山峰________________________在山的两边_________________________高耸陡峭_________________________深深的山谷lofty/grandmountainsthetoweringpeakonbothsidesofthemountainstandhighandsteepdeepvalleys4.环境描写词汇短语mountain那座山高耸陡峭，俯瞰着四周的村庄。

Themountain____________________,overlookingthesurroundingvillages.山两边的树木茂盛，如同绿色的海洋，一望无际。

Thetrees,whichwereabundant______________________________,resembled

agreenseastretchingbeyondoursight.stoodhighandsteeponbothsidesofthemountain4.环境描写blazing炽热的glaring耀眼的shimmering闪烁的weak虚弱的lingering逗留不去的sunsunlightsunshineshine发光/照耀burn燃烧brightly明亮地likeanoven像烤箱lively充满活力地dazzlingly灿烂/耀眼地gentle/mild温柔/温和的soft柔和的weak微弱的white/silvery白的/银白的moonmoonlightshine发光glow发光lightly轻轻地gently温柔地softly轻柔地glittering闪闪发光的

starstwinkle闪烁sparkle闪耀/烁glimmer发微光vividly生动地/活泼地quietly安静地peacefully平静地形容词+意象+固定动词+副词4.环境描写翻译练习天空中乌云密布，一场暴风雨即将来临。（使用“Therebe”结构）Therewerethickcloudsgatheringinthesk