2027届新高考英语热点精准复习十句话搞定读后续写

2027届新高考英语热点精准复习十句话搞定读后续写第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2026八省T8联考)Onacold,dampeveninginmid-November,asharpwindcutthroughthestreets,butJackpaidlittleattentiontothechill.Asadeliveryrider,hehadjustfinishedafewsmoothorders,hishandswarmfromthehotmilkteacupshe'dbeencarrying,andhisspiritsfairlygood.Steppingoutofamilkteashop,hefoundthespotwherehissecond-handelectricbikehadbeenparkednowempty.Inaninstant,hisheartsank,andawaveofhopelessnesssweptoverhim,turninghiscalmeveningintoanightmare.Thatbikewasfarmorethanjustavehicle;itwashislifeline,theonlywayforhimtoearndailyincomeandcoverhislivingexpenses.Panicsetinasherememberedtheundeliveredorders—especiallyacupofhotmilkteaforMs.White,aregularcustomer.Hishandtrembledashepressedthevoicebutton,hiswordslacedwithsorrowandanxietyasheapologizedrepeatedly,offeringtopayfortheundelivereddrink.Tohisgreatsurprise,Ms.Whitedidnotrespondwithangerorcomplaint,butwithgentlekindness.Ms.Whitetoldhimnottoworryandtotakehistimefindinghisbike.Herunderstandingwordscalmedhimbutalsodeepenedhissenseofresponsibility."Sheissokind.Icannotletherdown,"hethought.Fornearlytwohours,hesearchedeverynearbystreet,buttherewasnosignofhisbike.Asnightgrewdarkerandthewindbitharder,Jackclenchedhisfistsandmadeafirmdecision.Hetookouthispoorsavings,boughtabagoffreshapplesandanewcupofhotmilktea,thensetoffonfoottoMs.White'sapartment,severalkilometersaway.

Thewindbitintohisthinjacket,andhisoldshoesgrewheavywithmud,butthethoughtofkeepinghispromiseandmaintaininghisintegrity（正直）kepthimmovingforwardthroughthedimlyliturbanlandscape.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。

Finally,breathless,JackreachedMs.White'sdoorstepandrangthebell.

DeeplymovedbyJack'saction,Ms.Whitedecidedtosharethestoryonlinethatnight.

[前文大意]

11月一个寒冷潮湿的傍晚，外卖骑手杰克送完几单后，发现自己的电动车被盗。这辆车是他唯一的谋生工具，失去它意味着无法继续工作。他顿时陷入恐慌，尤其想到还有一杯要送给老顾客白女士的热奶茶没送到。他颤抖着发语音道歉并主动提出赔偿。没想到白女士非但没有生气，反而温柔地安慰他，让他先别着急，慢慢找车。她的善良让杰克更加坚定了不能辜负她的决心。杰克握紧拳头做出决定：拿出仅有的积蓄，买了一袋新鲜苹果和一杯新奶茶，然后徒步几公里，踩着泥泞、顶着冷风，艰难地向白女士的公寓走去。[简要分析]

这篇读后续写延续了高考对“个人成长”与“道德坚守”类话题的关注，主题为“困境中不失诚信，善意终有回响”。故事核心在于外卖骑手Jack在电动车被盗、失去谋生工具的情况下，没有选择逃避或放弃，而是自掏腰包、徒步几公里为理解他的顾客白女士送上奶茶和苹果。续写需要展现两个层次：一是当面送达时双方的情感互动（第一段），二是事件被分享到网络后带来的积极影响或Jack命运的转机（第二段）。提供的两个续写段落开头明确指向了“送达致谢→感人故事传播→收获帮助或希望”这一叙事路径。读一、读什么：读材料（一般是记叙文）＋读提示句（读关键词）。

时间不够读首尾段二、怎么读：1.找信息——who/where/when/what/why/how2.思考——readforcharacters人物/plot情节/conflict冲突/emotionalchange情感变化/theme主题3.读的过程中圈画关键信息，重要细节内容（用以细节呼应），好的句式（用以仿写）三、读完之后要明白：文章主人公是谁，文章主要情节，待解决的问题，人物情绪变化与文章主题。情节阶段内容描述

开端

外卖员

Jack电动车被盗，失去谋生工具，心情崩溃

发展

担心未完成订单，向顾客

White女士道歉，对方十分宽容

转折Jack不愿辜负善意，步行数公里送奶茶与苹果赔礼

续写第一段Jack抵达门口，说明情况，送上礼物，真诚致歉

续写第二段White女士深受感动，分享故事，引发共鸣，温暖结局1.读情节2.读人物人物人物特点Jack

勤劳朴实、诚信负责、有担当、懂得感恩、坚韧不拔Ms.White

善良宽容、善解人意、温暖体贴、尊重底层劳动者3.读冲突冲突类型冲突内容外在冲突电动车被盗→无法送餐→生计受威胁内在冲突Jack的愧疚自责vs不想辜负顾客信任；绝望vs坚守诚信4.读情绪发展原文：轻松→崩溃→恐慌→愧疚→坚定

续写：疲惫窘迫→温暖感动→善意传递→治愈圆满5.读主题核心主题：诚信与担当最可贵，善意会被温柔回应延伸主题：底层劳动者的坚守、人与人之间的理解与温暖、

平凡中的善良光芒十句五定法paragraph11衔接para1提示句（接着para1首句往下写）2345衔接para2提示句（根据para2首句倒推写）paragraph26衔接para2提示句（接着para2首句往下写）789

结尾（正能量）10

升华主题写剩余五句补齐细节情绪动作心理语言环境描写[续写思路]1．段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“终于，气喘吁吁的杰克来到白女士家门口，按响了门铃。”可知，第一段可描写____________________________

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②由第二段首句内容“被杰克的行为深深打动，白女士决定当晚把这件事分享到网上。”可知，第二段可描写___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

杰克向白女士道歉并说明事情经过，白女士由惊讶转为感动，安慰并感谢杰克，拒绝接受赔偿。

白女士发帖后引发网友关注，很多人被杰克的诚信正直打动，杰克最终得到社会的温暖回报，并从中获得成长与信念。2．续写线索：杰克抵达门口——敲门见面——道歉并讲述经过——白女士感动并安慰——拒绝赔偿——发帖分享——帖子引发热议——网友筹款帮助杰克——杰克感到温暖——主题升华：诚信与善良终有回报。3.原文伏笔与回扣

原文伏笔回扣伏笔bikewashislifeline

突出被盗后的绝望，反衬步行送餐的不易Ms.Whitewaskind

续写中她继续温柔体谅，不责备、反心疼Jackkepthispromise

步行数公里、自掏腰包买礼物，兑现诚信coldwind/thinjacket

续写中描写冻得发抖，强化人物品质第一句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________承接段首句“来到白女士家门口”，杰克递上奶茶和苹果。基础版：Shivering

withcoldandtirednessafterwalkingfornearlytwohours,Jackhandedherthemilkteaandthefreshapples.进阶版：Hisjacketwassoakedwithsweatanddrizzle,andhismud-cakedshoesleftfaintmarksonthedoormat.WhenMs.Whiteopenedthedoor,heloweredhisheadandhandedhertheslightlycooledmilkteaandthebagoffreshapples.十句五定法：第二句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________杰克讲述事情经过。基础版：Withtearsinhiseyes,hetoldherwhathadhappenedinatremblingvoice.进阶版：”I’msosorryIcouldn’tdeliveritontime.Mybikewasstolen.ButIhadtokeepmypromise.”Hisvoicetrembled,yethiseyesheldaquietfirmness.第三句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________杰克反复道歉。基础版：He

apologizedagainandagainforfailingtodelivertheorderontime.进阶版：He

apologizedrepeatedly,hiswordshumbleandsincere,neveroncemakinganexcuseforhimself.第四句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________白女士同情、感动。基础版：SeeingJack’smuddyshoesandfrozenface,Ms.Whitefeltgreatsympathyinsteadofanger,hereyesglistening.进阶版：Ms.Whitestaredatthehumblegifts,thenathisexhaustedface,andherowneyesglistening.Somethingwarmandpainfulroseinherchest---shehadneverseensuchhonesty.第五句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________白女士轻声询问。基础版：“You

walkedallthisway?”shewhispered,indisbelief.进阶版：“You

walkedallthisway?”shewhispered,hervoicecrackingwithemotion.Foramoment,shecouldnotsayanotherword.第六句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________发帖内容。基础版：She

wroteaboutJack’shonestyandstrongsenseofresponsibility,withphotosofthemilkteaandthebagofapples.进阶版：Shewrotenotaboutadelayedcupofmilktea,butaboutayoungmanwhowalkedkilometersinthebitingwind,carryingnothingbutapromise.第七句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________帖子的反响。基础版：Thepostsoonreceivedthousandsoflikesandwarmcommentsfromstrangers.进阶版：Withinhours,thepostexplodedwithcommentsandshares.第八句话：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________网友感动并帮助。基础版：Many

peopleweredeeplytouchedbyhisspiritofkeepinghisworddespitehardship.进阶版：Strangers

praisedJack’sintegrity,andsomeoneevenstartedafundraisertohelphimbuyanewbike.第九句话：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________杰克看到消息之后的反应。基础版：Jackreadthecommentsandhiseyesweref