Unit1Natureinthebalance写作之应用文课件高中英语译林版

Unit1Natureinthebalance译林版2020必修第三册应用文：写篇关于动物保护的倡议书读话题写作文高一下

LearningobjectivesAttheendofclass,youwillbeableto：1.Touseproperexpressionstotalkaboutwildlifeprotection;2.Towriteanarticlefortheschoolnewspapercallingforeveryonetoprotectanimals.123写作词汇

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跟着课文学词汇01（1）Thisobjectgivesoff________gases,whichmaydo________toourhealth.Soyoumustmaketheobject________beforeyouuseit.(harm)（2）Theenvironmental___________isactively________communityclean-upeventstoraiseawarenessabouttheimportanceofkeepingoursurroundingscleanandgreen.(organize)（3）Afterthedevastatingflood,theregion'swildlifefacedacriticaltestof________,withonlyafew________managingtoclingtolifeamidstintheruinsoftheirnaturalhabitat.(survive)（4）The________villagewasdestroyed.Itnowlooks________differentfromthepreviousone.(entire)用所给词的适当形式完成句子harmfulharmnharmlessorganizationorganizingsurvivalsurvivorsentireentirely（5）Fortheupcomingeco-friendlybuildingproject,numerous

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havesubmittedtheir

__________,eagerly________

forpositionsthatprioritizesustainabilityandenvironmentalconservation.(apply)（6）Thefamous________deniedinhis________reportthatitwasthewastewaterfromthe________factorythatpollutedtheundergroundwaterinthisarea.(chemistry)用所给词的适当形式完成句子applicantapplicationsapplyingchemistchemistrychemical（1）Byplantingmoretrees,wecanimproveairquality,which________helpspreservewildlifehabitats.（2）Becausehewasbeingsokindandconsideratetomydog,I_____________andcried.（3）Alectureaboutenvironmentalprotectionis________beorganizedthisSaturdayafternooninthecity’sstadium,whoseaimistoimproveourenvironmentalawareness.（4）Thesecrettooilpaintingisto________layeronlayeronacanvas.（5）Atthemeetinghe___________________asolutiontothesmoginthecity.（6）Thepublicare__________anendtoairpollution.（7）Ifnorecentevents________________,it’stimetowritesomefunintoyourcalendar.

（8）Onceformed,badhabitssuchaslitteringeverywherearenoteasyto________.（9）Litteringmay_______________________manysocialproblems.（10）ItwasTonwho____________________ourcommunitywithhiseffortseveralyearsago.用方框内所给短语完成句子inturn;giveriseto;breathelifeinto;dueto;breakdown;callfor;comeupwith;springtomind;getridof;buildup inturnbrokedownduetobuildupcomeupwithcallingforspringtomindgetridofgiverisetobreathedlifeinto课文佳句：

跟着课文学佳句02细节描写原：Withanareaofaround6millionsquarekilometres,theAmazonrainforestismorethanhalfthesizeofChina.亚马孙雨林面积约600万平方千米，是中国国土面积的一半以上。1.我们的操场是他们的两倍大。Ourplaygroundis___________________________theirs.原：Abovethatisthemassofleaflitteronthedarkforestfloor.在那之上则是大量的落叶,它们散落在黑暗的森林地面上。2.在我们的教学楼前矗立着几棵高大的白杨。________________________________sometoweringaspens.原：Whatdoyouthinkthisscriptisaboutjudgingfromthetitleandpictures?根据标题和图片，你认为这个节选讲了什么?3.根据外貌判断，这种树可能更能吸收二氧化碳。________________________________,suchtreesmaybebetteratabsorbingcarbondioxide.twicethesizeof/twiceasbigasInfrontofourteachingbuildingstandJudingfromtheirappearance细节描写原：We’vebeentakingvariousmeasures,includingtheuseofnewtechnologies,toreducepollutionintheproductionprocess,eventhoughthesemeasuresraiseourproductioncosts.4.即使没有被邀请，我也会去参加环保志愿活动。Iwillgotovolunteerforenvironmentalprotection_______________Iamnotinvited.原：Withpollutionlevelsontherise,theNorgateEnvironmentalProtectionCommitteeissearchingforwaystofighttheproblem.5.随着时间的推移，他的环境保护理论被证明是正确的。______________,histheoryofprotectingtheenvironmentprovedtobecorrect..原：TheAmazonRiver,fromwhichtherainforestgetsitsname,iscloseto6,400kilometresinlength—roughly100kilometreslongerthantheYangtzeRiver.6.这片森林正在受到严格保护，许多珍稀动物在其中找到了它们的家园。Theforest,_______________,manyrareanimalsfindtheirhomes,isunderstrictprotectionevenif/thoughWithtimegoesbyinwhich细节描写原：Asthehumanpopulationcontinuestogrow,sodoestheeffectwehaveonanimals.随着人口的持续增长，我们对动物的影响也在不断增加。7.随着栖息地的改变，动物和植被也发生了变化。Ashabitatschanged,_________________________andvegetation.原：Overthepast50years,17percentoftherainforesthasdisappearedduetohumanactivitiessuchasagricultureandcattlefarming.8.因为气候恶劣，很多物种从地球上消失了。Manyspeciesdisappearedfromtheearth______________________.原：Astheimpactofhumanactivitiescontinuestogrowandthelistofspeciesindangerofextinctionbecomeslonger,weareleftwithaquestion:canweaffordtodamagethe“lungsoftheplanet”？9.有些种类的鸟现在处于灭绝的危险中。Somespeciesofbirdsare____________________________now.sodidtheanimalsduetothebadclimateindangerofextinction细节描写原：Ofthe390,000plantspeciesknowntoman,morethan40,000canbefoundintheAmazon.在人类知道的39万植物物种中，超过四万种可以在亚马孙雨林中找到。10.我兄弟们五年前栽的树已经长高了。Thetree___________________________fiveyearsagohasgrowntall.plantedbymybrother课文结构:

跟着课文练布局03Jimisreadinganewsreportabouthowhumanactivitiesareharminganimals.Readthenewsreportandfinishthefollowingtasks.Task1.Matchthemainideaofeachparagraph.Whatisthenewsreportabout?2.Whatarethethreemainreasonswhypeoplehuntanimals?3.Howdohumanactivitiesindirectlyhaveaneffectonanimals?Humanactivitiescauseincreasingharmtoanimals.Somepeoplehuntanimalsforfood;somepeoplehuntanimalsforfashion;animalskinisusedtomakecoatsandbags.stillothershuntanimalsjustforfun.Wedestroyanimalhabitatswhenwebuildfarmsorfactories;Wecause,water,noiseandlightpollution.Task2:Answerthefollowingquestions.Thesisstatement:_____________.Deduction:Impactsonanimalsduetohumanactivities

Direct_________________Forfashion_________Duetobuildingfarmsorfactories,animals’habitatsaredestroyed.Air,water,noiseandlightpollutioncanallhaveanimpact.HumanactivitieshavebroughtmanyanimalsclosetoextinctionForfoodForfunIndirectTask3:Figureoutthestructure.BeginningBodyEndingCallingfortheprotectionofanimalsSpecificsolutions+examplesCallonpeopletotakeactionTheimportanceofendangeredanimals+thepurposeofwritingDevelopinganoutline04技法点拨：

跟着课文写技巧1.定语从句丰富句子的表达内容，提升文章的整体质量⑴Recentresearchbyenvironmentalscientists,however,showsthatinfact,humansarethemostfearsomehunterswhohavethegreatestimpactonanimalpopulations.然而，环境科学家最近的研究表明，事实上，人类是最可怕的猎人，对动物种群的影响最大。（定语从句）使用高级句型可使文章活灵活现2.转折并列句增加句子的复杂性，凸显重点，引导读者深入思考⑵Someactivities,suchashuntingandfishing,directlyharmanimals,whileotheractivities,suchasdevelopmentintownsandcities,impactindirectlyonanimalpopulations.一些活动，如狩猎和捕鱼，直接伤害动物，而其他活动，如城镇的发展，间接影响动物种群。（表转折的并列句）使用高级句型可使文章活灵活现3.倒装句丰富了句式、强调重点信息、承上启下，连接上下文⑶Asthehumanpopulationcontinuestogrow,sodoestheeffectwehaveonanimals.随着人口的不断增长，我们对动物的影响也在不断增加。（倒装句）使用高级句型可使文章活灵活现4.活用省略句使文章简洁、清晰，提升文章的可读性，增强语言的表现力(1)Youcanwatchitonlineifyouwantto(watchit).如果你想看，你可以在网上看。(2)Ifeltworriedwhen(Iwas)watchingthedocumentary.我看纪录片的时候感到很担心。(3)Somecallfortheapplicationofmoderntechnology,andothers(callfor)achangeoflifestyle.一些人要求应用现代技术，另一些人要求改变生活方式。(4)TheAmazonrainforestissmallernowthan(itwas)50yearsago.(5)Hehadplannedtoborrowabookonenvironmentalprotection,buthedidn't(have).他本打算借一本关于环境保护的书,但是他没借成。(6)When(weare)takingphotosofwildlife,weshouldmakeeveryefforttoensurethatwekeepawayfromtheanimals.在拍摄野生动物照片时，我们应该尽一切努力确保远离动物。使用高级句型可使文章活灵活现根据提示使用本单元所学的省略结构，翻译下面句子。Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,1.______________________________（环境比以前更糟了）.Manypeoplecometorealizethatwehavegotthedevelopmentatthecostofourenvironment.Ifwehumanbeingsarecleverenough,weshouldtakemeasurestoprotecttheenvironmentrightnow.Wildanimalsshouldbewellprotected.Weshouldpasslawstoforbidcuttingdowntrees.2.___________________________________________（尽可能减少污染也很重要）.Thosewhopolluteriversandseashouldbepunished.Itisnecessaryforeveryonetoknowtheimportanceofprotectingenvironment.Asisknowntoall,ifweactsoonenough,wecanstillhaveabrightfuture.3._______________________________________________(如果我们不这样做,我们会受到自然的惩罚).举一反三theenvironmentisworsethanbefore

ItisalsocrucialtoreducepollutionwhereverpossibleIfwedon’t,wewillbepunishedbynature05写作实践：Task1：写一篇动物保护的倡议书本模块主题为“人与自然”，涉及保护环境、保护濒危野生动植物等高考常考话题，以此为话题的多为新闻报道，倡议书。写作内容一般为环境或野生动植物的现状、出现这种现状的原因，以及提出改进的措施。。文体特点(1)现状①变得越来越严重②处于濒临灭绝的危险③被残忍杀害话题词汇getmoreandmoreseriousbeindangerofextinctionbekilledwithoutmercy(2)原因①给……造成损害

②把……兑换成……③获利

话题词汇do/causedamageto...exchange...for...makeprofits(3)(3)措施①提高……的意识

②意识到

③呼吁某人做某事

④采取行动/措施

话题词汇raisetheawarenessof...be/becomeawareofcallon/callfor/appealtosbtodosthtakeaction/measures①It’safactthatmanyrareanimalsarefacingthedangerofextinction.许多稀有动物正面临灭绝的危险，这是个事实。②Manywildanimalsarebecomingfewerandfewerduetohumans’killing.由于人类的捕杀，许多野生动物正变得越来越少。③Asisshowninthechart,wecanseethenumberofanimalspeciesdecreasesfasterandfasterandthistrendwillcontinue.如图表所示，我们可以看到动物物种的数量下降得越来越快，而且这一趋势将继续下去。④Moreandmoreanimalsareindangernow.现在，越来越多的动物处于危险之中。⑤It’sapitythatmoreandmorewildlifespeciesaredyingoutatan

alarmingrate.越来越多的野生动物物种正以惊人的速度灭绝。1.

段首句：环境保护现状/重要性话题句式①Thereasonwhythenumberofanimalspeciesisdecreasingisthatanimalshavebecomevictimsoffashionindustry.动物物种数量减少的原因是动物成为时尚产业的受害者。②Itisbecauseofhumanactivitiesthatanimalsareindangerofdyingout.正是由于人类的活动，动物才处于灭绝的危险之中。③It’swrongtokillanimalstomakeclothesorforsome“fun”.为了做衣服或找点“乐子”而杀死动物是错误的。2.主体段落句：动物保护的原因及措施话题句式④Asforthereasons,ontheonehand,peoplekillanimalsinordertousetheirbonestomakemedicineandfurtomakeclothes.Ontheotherhand,peoplecutdownalotoftreesintheforests.至于原因，一方面，人们杀死动物，为了用他们的骨头做药，用皮毛做衣服。另一方面，人们砍伐了森林里的许多树木。⑤Asforthereason,that’sbecausepeoplenotonlykillanimalsforbonesandfurbutalsocutdownmanytreesintheforests.至于原因，那是因为人们不仅为了骨头和皮毛而杀死动物，而且还砍伐了森林里的许多树木。⑥Thereasonwhymoreandmoreanimalsareindangeristhatpeoplenotonlykillanimalsforbonesandfurbutalsocutdownmanytreesintheforests.越来越多的动物处于危险之中，是因为人们不仅为了骨头和皮毛而杀死动物，而且还砍伐了森林里的许多树木。2.主体段落句：动物保护的原因及措施话题句式①Onlyifwetakesomedrasticmeasurescanwildanimalsbeprotected.我们只有采取一些有力措施，才能保护野生动物。②Everybodyshouldraisetheawarenessthatit’sourdutytoprotectwildanimals.每个人都应该提高意识：保护野生动物是我们的责任。③Imakeanurgentappealthatmeasuresshouldbetakentocopewiththesituation.我迫切呼吁应该采取措施来改变现状。3.段尾句：呼吁动物保护话题句式④Thegovernmentaresupposedtomakesomelawstostoppeoplefromkillinganimals.政府应该制定一些法律来阻止人们杀害动物。（政府角度）⑤Weshouldbuildmorenaturalreservestoofferanimalsmorelivingspace.我们应该建立更多的自然保护区，为动物提供更多的生活空间。（自然保护区角度）⑥Raisingtheawarenessofanimalsprotectionisthemostsignificant.Wehadbetternotbuysomeclothesmadeofanimals’furinourdailylife.提高保护动物的意识是最重要的。我们最好不要在日常生活中买一些动物皮毛做的衣服。(自身角度)3.段尾句：呼吁动物保护话题句式

假定你是李华。英语课上，老师要求分组讨论“保护野生动物”的话题。请你写一篇小组发言稿，向全班汇报，内容包括：

1.保护动物的重要性；

2.保护动物的措施；

3.呼吁。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________典例赏析1、审题定调本写作为倡议书，主题为如何保护野生动物，其核心内容包括“野生动物的现状、保护必要性和措施以及呼吁大家保护野生动物“等。此类写作一般用第一人称，时态为一般现在时，但有时要根据实际情况有所变化。2、谋篇布局

针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲：第一部分：引入话题；第二部分：陈述原因/现状以及措施；第三部分：发出倡议。第一步：明确要求、布局谋篇1.毫无疑问

2.属于

3.对……很重要

4.生态平衡

5.灭绝

6.阻止某人做某事

7.是……的时候了

8.采取有效措施

第二部：搜索话题词汇There’snodoubtthat...belongtobeofgreatimportanceto...ecologicalbalancedieoutstopsbfromdoingsthIt’shightimethat...takeeffectivemeasures（一）完成句子1.毫无疑问，野生动物应该受到严格的保护。_____________________wildanimalsshouldbeprotectedstrictly.2.野生动物属于自然的一部分，对生态平衡非常重要。Wildanimalsbelongtopartofnatureandare_________________________ecologicalbalance.

3.必须通过一些法律来阻止人们杀害和出售它们。Somelawsmustbepassedto__________________________________them.

4.(一句多译)该是我们采取有效措施保护野生动物的时候了。_______________________________________________________protectwildanimals.(It’shightimethat...)________________________________________________protectwildanimals.(It’stimeforsbtodo)第三步：巧用话题词汇句式There’snodoubtthatofgreatimportance/veryimportanttoStoppeoplefromkillingandsellingIt’shightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestoIt’stomeforustotakeeffectivemeasuresto（二）斟酌词句，靓化表达5.用从属连词合并句1、2。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________.第三步：巧用话题词汇句式

There’snodoubtthatwildanimalsshouldbeprotectedstrictlybecausetheybelongtopartofnatureandareofgreatimportance/veryimportanttoecologicalbalanceDearclassmates,I’mgladtoreportourgroup’sopinionsaboutthetopic“WildAnimalProtection”.Firstly,there’snodoubtthatwildanimalsshouldbeprotectedstrictlybecausetheybelongtopartofnatureandareofgreatimportancetoecologicalbalance(therebe句型+because引导的原因状语从句).However,atthepresenttime,someofthemarefacingthedangerofdyingout.Then,howcanweprotectthem?Somelawsmustbepassedtostoppeoplefromkillingandsellingthem.Besides,weshouldraisetheawarenessthatit’sourdutytoprotectwildanimals(定语从句).It’shightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestoprotectwildanimals(it’sh