深圳一模雁鱼青铜灯写作课课件高三英语二轮复习专项

PracticalWritingWritinganEmailtoRecommendaCulturalRelic---HanDynastyBronzeWildGoose-and-FishLampMasteremailformatsandvocabularyforculturalrelicintroduction.掌握邮件格式与文物介绍类词汇Extractkeyinformationfromphysicalphotosandstructuralcross-sectionsandconvertitintoEnglish.具有实物照片和结构剖面图中提取关键信息，并转化为英文表达的能力Learntoclearlydescribetheappearance,functionandculturalsignificanceofculturalrelics.学会清晰描述文物外观、功能与文化意义TellstoriesofancientChinesescienceandtechnologyinEnglish.用英语讲好中国古代科技故事TeachingobjectivesTaskAnalysis&SampleReadingTaskAnalysis

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→Whoarewewritingto?→Whattowrite?→.假定你是李华。你的朋友Alex计划参观中国国家博物馆，他来信请你推荐一件你喜欢的展品。请你给他回复邮件，结合外观、功能等，推荐这盏汉代的雁鱼青铜灯（BronzeWildGoose-and-FishLamp）。1)写作词数应为80左右；(2)可以增加适当细节，以使行文连贯。DearAlex,Gladtohearyou'revisitingtheNationalMuseumofChina!________________________letter/emailAlex,afriend.Recommendthelamp:appearance,function,cultureSampleAnalysis----enjoyavideoSampleAnalysis

Whichpartdescribesitslook?Whichpartexplainshowitworks?Andwhichsentenceshowsouropinion?Thestructure:→→→Comment.RecommendationAppearanceFunctionCoreintroduction---appearanceKeydescriptionpointsShape造型Material材质ArtisticAesthetics艺术美感Exquisite

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Craftsmanship精湛工艺Keysentencepattern关键句型_______likeawildgooseholdingafishinitsbeak,this______lampfeaturesan__________andvividdesign,showcasing_____________________________.“这盏青铜灯造型为雁衔鱼状，设计雅致生动，尽显精湛工艺。它看起来像一只优雅的大雁，嘴里衔着一条鱼。它被设计成一只优雅回首的大雁造型。ShapedbronzeelegantexquisitecraftsmanshipItlookslikeanelegantwildgoose_______________________________Itisdesignedintheshapeofagracefulwildgoose_______________carryingafishinitsmouth.lookingback.Keywords

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CraftsmanshipCoreintroduction---functionKeyFeature:Eco-friendlyDesignWhat’samazingisits____________design:thesmokefromtheoillampflows_________thefishandthegoose’sneckintothewater-filledbelly,whereitisfiltered,keepingtheair________这盏灯最令人称奇的是它的环保功能。灯燃烧产生的烟雾会通过鱼身和雁的脖子，最终进入装满水的雁腹里被过滤掉，从而保持空气清洁。当灯燃烧时，烟雾通过颈部进入灯体内部。它的内部装有水，能有效净化烟雾。内部的水可以吸收有害烟雾，保护空气。eco-friendlythroughcleanWhenthelampburns,_______________________________________Itsbodyisfilledwithwater_____________________effectively.Thewaterinsidecan_____________________and__________________smokeflowsthroughitsneckintoitsbody.tocleanthesmoketakeinharmfulsmokeprotecttheair.Keywords：

超前的环保理念cutting-edgeenvironmentalconceptCoreintroduction---meaning“Itperfectlyreflects_______ancientChinesepeoplecombinedartisticbeauty_____practicalengineering.”它不仅仅是一件灯具，更完美地体现了中国古代人民如何将艺术美感与实用工程技术结合在一起。Itfullyshows___________________ofancientChinesepeople.它充分展现了中国古代人民的伟大智慧。_____________________thatcombinesart,scienceanddailylife.它是一件集艺术、科学与日常生活于一体的珍宝。Itisconsidered___________inancientChinesecraftsmanship.它被认为是中国古代工艺的一个奇迹。howwiththegreatwisdomItisatreasureamiracleKeywords：完美融合/完美结合perfectcombination

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profoundinsightParagraph段落Purpose写作目的KeyWritingPoints写作要点Introduction引入Replytotheletter+Clearlystatetherecommendeditem回应来信+点明推荐对象Expressenthusiasmanddirectlynametheexhibit表达热情，直接点出展品名称Body正文appearance+function外观描写+功能说明（重点）BrieflydescribetheappearanceandFocusonthefunctionindetail外观简要（2-3句），功能详细展开Conclusion结尾Elevatethetheme+Encouragethevisit升华主题+鼓励参观AdmirethewisdomofChinesecivilization感叹中华文明的智慧WritingPracticeFrameGuidance要求对应本题的具体含义切题内容必须围绕“雁鱼青铜灯”展开，不能跑题写成泛泛的博物馆介绍完整外观、功能两大要点必须覆盖，不能只写其中一个准确词汇和句式要符合“朋友间推荐邮件”的语体，不能写成学术论文连贯各段之间要有自然的过渡，不能像流水账一样把信息堆砌在一起Conent:Fourkeywords:.Expressions:keywords:accuracy,diversityWritingRequirementsRelevance,Completeness,Accuracy,andCoherence①clauses从句(attributiveclause;nounclause….)②non-finiteverb非谓语动词+with复合结构③”notonly…butalso/notjust…but“pattern

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expressions?Giveyourpartneronesuggestionforimprovement.Presentation&PeerEditingDearAlex,Gladtohearyou’revisitingtheNationalMuseumofChina!I’dliketorecommendaremarkableexhibittoyou,whichistheBronzeWildGoose-and-FishLampfromtheHanDynasty.Thislampisshapedlikeagracefulwildgooselookingbackwithafishinitsmouth.Whatmakesitincredibleisitsfunction.Whentheoilburns,smoketravelsthroughthegoose’sneckintoitswater-filledbody.Thenthewatercapturessomeofthelamp’spollutants,effectivelypurifyingtheair.Thislampisnotjustalightsource,butawindowintohowtheancientChinesecombinedart,science,andenvironmentalawarenesstocreatepracticalmasterpieces.You’llfindittrulyimpressive.Enjoyyourvisit！Bestregards,LiHuaPossibleSample

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