Module14写作指导（课件）沪教牛津版（深圳用）（2015）英语五年级下册

Module1Changesanddifferences写作专项介绍新家和未来01写作思路02典型例题目录03小试身手同学们，本模块我们学习了整理房间、介绍新家和未来三个话题。主要时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。让我们用所学知识去表达自己对事物的观点、谈论喜欢的原因和未来的样子。

[写法]开头：简单介绍自己的信息。主体：介绍自己的新家和自己的未来。结尾：用问句表达期待对方用同样的方式介绍自己。[常用时态]一般现在时和一般将来时[参考词汇]

home；bedroom；bathroom；study；kitchen；living

room；because；teacher；pilot；doctor；nurse；cook；taxi

driver

...中间句：1.

This

is

my

new

home.

2.

I

like

my

home.

Because

...

3.

...

can

...in

...

4.

I

will

...结尾句：How

about

you？[参考句型]开头句：1.

I

am

...

2.

I

am

...years

old.

假设你是Mike，你喜欢你的新家。请告诉大家你喜欢它的原因，以及你对未来的生活有什么期待。不少于6句话。词汇提示：home；bedroom；living

room；dining

room；why；because；teacher；doctor；nurse；pilot；singer；dancer

...[范文]I

am

Mike.

I

am

eleven

years

old.

This

is

my

new

home.

I

like

my

new

home.

Because

it

faces

south.

It

is

near

the

park.

I

can

walk，fly

a

kite

and

ride

a

bike

in

the

park.

I

like

my

new

bedroom.

It

is

small

but

nice.

I

like

studying

in

the

study.

I

will

be

a

doctor

in

the

future.

I

will

do

exercise

every

morning.

How

about

you？

一、翻译句子。1.我喜欢周末在客厅看电视。I

like

watching

TV

in

the

living

room

at

the

weekend. 2.我将来想成为一名飞行员。I

want

to

be

a

pilot

in

the

future. I

like

watching

TV

in

the

living

room

at

the

weekend. I

want

to

be

a

pilot

in

the

future. 二、写作。你有新家吗？如果有，你的新家是什么样子的？你对未来好奇吗？未来的你会是什么样子的？请你发挥想象，写一篇小短文来描述你的新家和未来。不少于6句话。I

am

Jack.

I

am

ten

years

old.

This

is

my

new

home.

It

is

small

but

nice.

There

are

two

bedrooms，a

bathroom，a

kitchen

and

a

living

room.

I

like

it.

Look

at

the

picture

of

my

father

on

the

wall.

He

is

a

policeman.

In

the

future，I’ll

be

a

policeman

like

him.

I

will

be

tall

and

strong.

I

will

not

wear

glasses.

I

will

do

exercise

every

day.

I

will

work

hard

and

help

people.

I

will

be

happy

every

day. I

am

Jack.

I

am

ten

years

old.

This

is

my

new

home.

It

is

small

but

nice.

There

are

two

bedrooms，a

bathroom，a

kitchen

and

a

living

room.

I

like

it.

Look

at

the

picture

of

my

father

on

the

wall.

He

is

a

policeman.

In

the

future，I’ll

be

a

policeman

like

him.

I

will

be

tall

and

strong.

I

will

not

wear

glasses.

I

will

do

exercise

every

day.

I

will

work

hard

and

help

people.

I

will

be

happy

every

day. Module2Workandplay写作专项介绍假期计划01写作思路02典型例题目录03小试身手同学们，本模块我们通过学习，了解了如何表达喜欢阅读的书、周末计划和度假等，学习了一般将来时的be

going

to和will句型。让我们写一写自己的阅读兴趣和假期安排吧。

[写法]

开头：介绍自己关于某个假期的计划。主体：介绍自己假期将去哪里、怎么去、在那里准备待多久、准备做什么、吃什么以及玩什么。结尾：表达自己期待一个愉快的假期，并询问朋友们假期是怎样安排的。[常用时态]一般现在时和一般将来时[参考词汇]

plan；interesting；nice；beautiful；by

plane；swim；seafood；take

photos；collect

shells；hotel[参考句型]开头句：This

is

a

plan

for

my

...中间句：1.

I

am

going

to

...for

my

holiday.

2.

We

are

going

there

by

...

3.

We

are

going

to

stay

there

for

...days.4.

I

will

...in

the

sea.

5.

I

will

have

some

seafood

there.结尾句：1.

I

hope

we

will

have

a

good

time

there.

2.

How

about

your

holiday？

今年暑假你打算去哪儿呢？请根据自己的计划进行描述。不少于6句话。词汇提示：Hong

Kong；by

plane；for

five

days；Ocean

Park；have

seafood要求：条理清晰，语句连贯，语法正确。[范文]This

is

a

plan

for

my

summer

holiday.

I’m

going

to

Hong

Kong

with

my

parents

for

my

holiday.

We

are

going

there

by

plane.

We

are

going

to

stay

there

for

five

days.

I

will

swim

in

the

sea.

We

will

visit

Ocean

Park.

We’ll

have

seafood

there.

I

hope

we

will

have

a

good

time

there.

How

about

your

holiday？

一、翻译句子。1.我打算国庆假期去上海。I

am

going

to

Shanghai

for

my

National

Day

holiday. 2.你将在上海待多久？How

long

will

you

stay

in

Shanghai？ I

am

going

to

Shanghai

for

my

National

Day

holiday. How

long

will

you

stay

in

Shanghai？ 二、写作。假设你是Joe，你将去北京度假，请从出行方式、打算参观的地方及去这些地方的原因等方面描述你的旅游计划，不少于6句话。My

name

is

Joe.

I’m

going

to

Beijing

for

my

holiday.

I’ll

go

there

by

plane.

I’ll

visit

the

Palace

Museum

and

the

Great

Wall.

There

are

a

lot

of

old

and

interesting

things.

I’m

going

to

Wangfujing

Street

too.

I

want

to

go

shopping

there.

I’ll

eat

Beijing

Roast

Duck.

It

tastes

great.

I

hope

I’ll

have

a

good

time

in

Beijing. My

name

is

Joe.

I’m

going

to

Beijing

for

my

holiday.

I’ll

go

there

by

plane.

I’ll

visit

the

Palace

Museum

and

the

Great

Wall.

There

are

a

lot

of

old

and

interesting

things.

I’m

going

to

Wangfujing

Street

too.

I

want

to

go

shopping

there.

I’ll

eat

Beijing

Roast

Duck.

It

tastes

great.

I

hope

I’ll

have

a

good

time

in

Beijing. Module3Thingswedo写作专项按先后顺序描述事件01写作思路02典型例题目录03小试身手同学们，本模块我们学习了学校开放日、服装和看病这三个话题。主要时态有一般现在时和一般将来时。让我们用所学知识去交流吧。

[写法]开头：介绍人物和地点。主体：按时间顺序介绍他们将进行的活动。结尾：用一句话进行概括，起到总结全文的作用。[常用时态]一般现在时和一般将来时[参考词汇]

first；next；then；after

that；finally；classroom；library；hall；school

gate；art

room；meeting

room

...[参考句型]开头句：1.

It’s

...today.

2.

The

...will

have

a

good

time

at

school.中间句：1.

First，they

will

...

2.

Next，they

will

...

3.

Then

they

will

...

4.

After

that，they

will

...

5.

Finally，they

will

...结尾句：They

will

have

a

lot

of

fun.

今天是儿童节，孩子们可以做自己喜欢的事情。请你根据图片及提示描述孩子们的活动情况，不少于6句话。提示：buy

food；have

a

party；have

snacks；see

a

play

[范文]It’s

Children’s

Day

today.

The

children

will

have

a

good

time

at

school.

First，they

will

buy

some

food

and

bring

it

to

school.

Next，they

will

have

a

party

in

the

classroom.

Then

they

will

have

snacks.

Finally，they

will

see

a

play

in

the

hall.What

a

nice

day！

一、翻译句子。1.首先我们将开会。First，we

will

have

a

meeting. 2.我将试穿这条裤子。I’ll

try

on

this

pair

of

trousers. First，we

will

have

a

meeting. I’ll

try

on

this

pair

of

trousers. 二、写作。请你用first、next、then、after

that和finally来描述你今天将要做的事。要求：语句通顺，语法正确，不少于6句话。It

is

Sunday

today.

I

will

go

shopping.

I

want

to

buy

a

lot

of

things.

First，I

will

make

a

list

of

the

things.

Next，I

will

go

out

and

take

a

bus

to

the

supermarket.

Then

I

will

go

in

the

supermarket

and

take

a

shopping

basket.

After

that，I

will

get

everything

on

my

list

in

the

supermarket.

Finally，I

will

go

home

by

taxi.

My

mum

will

be

happy

because

I

can

help

her. It

is

Sunday

today.

I

will

go

shopping.

I

want

to

buy

a

lot

of

things.

First，I

will

make

a

list

of

the

things.

Next，I

will

go

out

and

take

a

bus

to

the

supermarket.

Then

I

will

go

in

the

supermarket

and

take

a

shopping

basket.

After

that，I

will

get

everything

on

my

list

in

the

supermarket.

Finally，I

will

go

home

by

taxi.

My

mum

will

be

happy

because

I

can

help

her. Module4Thingsweenjoy写作专项介绍节日01写作思路02典型例题目录03小试身手同学们，本模块我们学习了有关科技发明、中国的节日和故事类话题，涉及的时态有一般现在时和一般将来时。让我们用所学知识来写一写这些话题吧。

[写法]

开头：简单介绍自己和自己最喜欢的节日。主体：介绍节日有哪些活动。结尾：用一句话进行概括，起到总结全文的作用。[常用时态]一般现在时和一般将来时[参考词汇]

important；visit

relatives；eat

mooncakes；watch

fireworks；get

red

packets[参考句型]开头句：1.

My

name

is

...

2.

My

favourite

festival

is

...中间句：1.

It

is

in/on

...

2.

I/We

usually

eat

...

3.

I/We

usually

...结尾句：We

always

have

great

fun

...

请你根据图片提示，以“My

favourite

festival”为题，挑选一个你最喜欢的节日，向同学们介绍一下，不少于6句话。

My

name

is

Rose.

My

favourite

festival

is

the

Spring

Festival.

It’s

in

January

or

February.

I

usually

have

a

big

dinner

with

my

family

at

this

festival.

We

usually

eat

fish

and

dumplings

at

this

festival.I

can

get

red

packets

from

my

parents.

I

usually

visit

my

relatives

and

friends

at

the

festival.

We

always

have

great

fun

at

the

Spring

Festival.[范文]My

favourite

festival

一、翻译句子。1.端午节是中国的一个重要节日。The

Dragon

Boat

Festival

is

an

important

festival

in

China. 2.我认为电脑是一项伟大的发明。I

think

the

computer

is

a

great

invention. The

Dragon

Boat

Festival

is

an

important

festival

in

China. I

think

the

computer

is

a

great

invention. 二、写作。你一般怎么过中秋节？做哪些事情？吃哪些美味的食物？请你以“The

Mid-Autumn

Festival”为题，写一篇短文介绍一下吧。不少于6句话。The

Mid-