云南昆明市第八中学高一下学期月考应用文写作课件

高一下学期月考一作文讲解应用文写作壹写作思路题目要求范文对应内容写作要点活动目的Toenrichourcampuslifeandshowcasestudents'artistictalents用不定式开头，点明活动初衷，符合通知文体活动内容variousperformances(singing,instrumentalplaying,bandshows)+interactiveactivities(musicquizzes,karaoke)分两类列举，内容具体，符合校园活动场景活动意义notonlyoffersastageformusicloversbutalsohelpsusrelaxandstrengthenourbond用notonly...butalso...结构升华，贴合校园活动价值格式要求Notice+称呼+学生会落款严格遵循通知格式，符合应用文评分标准范文学习贰NoticeDearstudents,Inordertoenrichourcampuslife,we’llholdtheFirstCampusMusicFestivalontheschoolsportsfieldthisweekends.（简要介绍活动名称、活动目的和活动时间）Ourprogramincludessinging,dancing,playingmusicalinstrumentsandsingingtogetherasagroup.SomeoftheprogramsarerelatedtotraditionalChinesemusic,sothatstudentscanhaveabetterunderstandingoftraditionalChineseculture.Aftertheperformance,thejudgeswillselectthebestthreeprogramsandawardprizes.Comeand

participateinthis

wonderfulfestival,and

yourtalentwillbegreatlyappreciated.Pleasejoinusandshareyourmusicalpassion!TheStudents’Union活动内容活动意义呼吁参与读后续写叁MyparentsandIwouldspendourfirstEaster(复活节)awayfromhome,andwefeltreallyexcited.Asaworriedlittleboy,IaskedmymommanytimesifwecouldgetanEasteregg.Onthatday,myparentsandIfoundtheEasterBunny(兔子)hadcomeandleftmanyeggsonthehotelgrassforallthekids.Whenwewalkedtothegroupofadultsandkidswaitingfortheegg-huntinggametostart,Inoticedallthekidsweremuchbiggerthanme.

OnlyalittleboyinaredT-shirtwasassmallasme.Ifeltalittleworriedaboutthegamethen.“Icangetanegg,right?”Iaskedmymomnervously.“Sureyoucan,”sheansweredwithaconfidentsmile.IheldmyEasterbaskettightlyandmyheartbeatfast,whenahotelworkershoutedloudly,“Let’sstartin3…2...1...Go!”Allthekidsranacrossthegrassatonce,lookingbehindtreesforplasticEastereggsfullofcandies.Irantothenearesttreebutfoundnothing.ThenIrantoanearbysandpit(沙坑),hopingtofindahiddenegg,buttherewasnone.Ilookedaroundandsawotherkidsshowingtheireggshappily.IknewIhadlittlechancetofindevenone.Ontheothersideofthegrass,thelittleboyinredhadnothingtoo.Justthen,mymompointedtoabigtreefarawayandsaid,“Look!Thereisaneggthere!”【知识点】生活故事【导语】本文以复活节找彩蛋为线索展开，讲述作者一家在外过复活节，作者参加酒店找彩蛋游戏，和一个穿红T恤的小男孩都没找到彩蛋时，妈妈指向远处大树上的最后一枚彩蛋。Para1:ThelittleboyandIheardthisatthesametime.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2:Holdingtheeggcarefullyinmyhand,Iwalkedslowlytothelittleboy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“小男孩和我同时听到了这句话。”可知，第一段可描写两人同时冲向大树，最终作者抢到了最后一枚彩蛋，同时注意到小男孩失落的神情。②由第二段首句内容“我小心翼翼地握着彩蛋，慢慢地走向小男孩。”可知，第二段可描写作者看到小男孩难过，决定和他分享彩蛋，两人一起享受糖果，也让作者领悟到分享的意义。2.续写线索：共同冲向大树——作者抢到彩蛋——小男孩失落——作者分享彩蛋——两人共尝糖果词汇激活：行为类①冲向：runtoward/dashto/rushto②抓住：grab/seize/catchholdof③欢呼：cheer/hail情绪类①快乐地：happily/joyously/gayly②喜悦：joy/delight范文学习肆ThelittleboyandIheardthisatthesametime.

Wewerefilledwith

excitementandranasfastaspossibletowardthefarawaybigtree,ourbreathgettingfasterandheartsbeatingwildly.Allthepeoplearoundstoppedtowatchusandcheeredloudlyforusasweracedsidebyside（环境描写）.Neitherofuswantedtolosetherace.Atthelastmoment,Ireachedoutmyhandandgrabbed(动作链)theshinyplasticeggjustbeforehim.Itwasthelastoneleftonthegrass.（点明小男孩失落的原因）Inoticedthedisappointmentinhiseyesashestoppedbesideme.（为后文把蛋给男孩做铺垫）befilledwith

excitement:短语含义抢彩蛋场景例句befullof充满…MypocketwasfullofcolorfuleggsIfound.bebrimmingwith洋溢着…（满到溢出）Thekidswerebrimmingwithexcitementasthegamestarted.beburstingwith满怀…（情绪强烈）IwasburstingwithjoywhenIfoundthehiddengoldenegg.bealivewith充满（活力/声响）Thegardenwasalivewithlaughterandcheersduringtheegghunt.短语/结构含义抢彩蛋场景例句overwhelmsb.（情绪）淹没、席卷某人ExcitementoverwhelmedmethesecondIspottedtheshinyeggbehindthetree.takeholdofsb.（情绪）攫住、支配某人Asuddenurgetowintookholdofme,andIranfasterthanever.sweepoversb.（情绪）传遍全身、席卷AwaveofreliefsweptovermewhenIfinallygrabbedtheegg.creepoversb.（情绪）渐渐袭来AslightdoubtcreptovermewhenIcouldn’tfindanyeggsintheusualspots.envelopsb.（情绪）包围、笼罩WarmjoyenvelopedmeasIsharedmyeggswithmylittlesister.1.开跑瞬间：兴奋与紧张(Excitement&Nerves)对应情节：工作人员喊倒计时，所有孩子冲刺，主角心里怦怦跳。兴奋（替代Iwasexcited）：Awaveofexcitement

sweptovermethemomentthestartinggunsounded.Asurgeofexcitement

surgedthroughmybodyasIsprintedacrossthegrass.紧张/忐忑（替代Iwasnervous）：Asenseofunease

creptovermeasIsawhowmuchbiggertheotherkidswere.Myanxiety

struckmethesecondIrealizedIwaslaggingbehindthecrowd.一阵情绪席卷某人awaveof情绪名词sweepover(swept)Sbasurgeofsurgethrough(surged)asenseofcreepover(crept)strike(struck)2.寻找失败：挫败与绝望(Frustration&Desperation)对应情节：主角跑到树边、沙坑都没找到，看到别人收获满满，心理落差巨大。挫败感（替代Iwasdisappointed）：Awaveoffrustration

washedovermewhenIfoundthetreeempty.Astrongfeelingofdespair

overwhelmedmeasIcheckedthesandpitandfoundnothing.绝望/无助（替代Ihadnochance）：Doubt

struckmedeeplywhenIsawothersshowingofftheireggsproudly.Asenseofpowerlessness

seizedme;IknewIhadlittlechancetowin.3.发现彩蛋：震惊与狂喜(Shock&Delight)对应情节：妈妈指向大树，发现唯一的金蛋/目标蛋。震惊（替代Iwasshocked）：Astonishment

struckmewhenIspottedtheuniqueeggperchedhighonthebigtree.Asurgeofsurprise

hitmeasIrealizedthiswasthelastremainingegg.狂喜（替代Iwashappy）：Delight

overwhelmedmethesecondmyeyeslockedonthecolorfulegg.Afloodofjoy

surgedthroughmywholebodyasIstretchedtograbit.4.结尾互动：感动与愧疚(Gratitude&Guilt)对应情节：主角拿到蛋，走向穿红衣服的小男孩，分享或安慰。愧疚（替代Ifeltsorry）：AwaveofguiltcreptovermewhenIsawhehadnothingtoshow.感动/感激（替代Iwasgrateful）：Asenseofwarmth

surroundedmewhenhesmiledandacceptedtheegg.Hisgratitude

struckmeandmademeforgetallaboutwinning.Holdingtheeggcarefullyinmyhand,Iwalkedslowlytothelittleboy.Isawhelookedupsetforfailingtofindanyeggs,soIsmiledanddecidedtosharetheeggwithhim.Hiseyeslitupatonceandhethankedmehappily.Weopenedtheeggandenjoyedthesweetcandiestogether.Thepeoplenearbycheeredwarmlyforus.ThatEasterwasn’tjustaboutfindinganegg—ittaughtmeavaluablelessonthatsharingjoywithothersmakesourlivesmoremeaningful.（升华主题——分享）升华主题（背）ItwasatthisverymomentthatIrealized...（强调句，比普通句更有力量）ItwasatthisverymomentthatIrealizedEasterw