中考英语书面表达第53讲 书面表达之话题作文（讲义）（解析版）

第53讲书面表达之话题作文（讲义）目录考情透视·目标导航 1知识导图·思维引航 2考点突破·考法探究 3探究一命题解读 4探究二应试技巧 4探究三常考话题必备句型 4一、写人叙事类 4二、事物介绍类 6三、建议做法类 7四、观点看法类 10五、活动计划类 11六、热点话题类 12题型考查频次命题预测书面表达之话题作文10年10考话题作文：作文只给出了作文的话题，写作时只能围绕所给的话题进行叙述，将考生的思路限制在一定的范围内进行写作。写好话题作文要注意以下几点：(1)话题作文只给了一个话题或简单的提示，不能直接获得很多的写作信息，必须先看清题目要求，思考后再确定写作内容。(2)准备好充足的材料，并选好适当的单词、词组、句型和恰当的时态，然后理清思路，确定写作顺序和表达的层次。(3)写作时要多用学过的熟悉和地道的句子，尽量多用简单句，少用长句。(4)写完后要认真进行检查，包括：句子有无遗漏，使用时态是否正确，大小写、标点符号是否规范，词数是否合理等。❤锦囊妙计1.审题：这里的审题包括审文体（记叙文、说明文、议论文）、要求（注意要点中的要求以及人称）、时态（中考书面表达往往有三种时态）、内容（需要写什么方面的内容）2.布局：中考最流行的结构就是总分总式。因为“观点——要点——总结”这种结构让人一目了然，但是要说明一点，“总分总”，不一定是三段，这里的“分”可以是两段、三段或者更多，根据写作需要来安排。3.略写：学生在阅读写作要求后，应该划出写作要点，并且要在空白处做简略地写出要点中单词、短语和句型，当然也要简略写出一些隐性的要点和省略号部分的内容。4.串联：通过句型、句子结构、时态等工具把略写的内容串联起来，构成文章内容。5.美化：经过上面的操作，只能得到基础的分数，所以要给文章进行美化。短文要有体现突出色彩的东西，比如：从句、固定句型和副词，同时文章应该蕴含一定量的连词，以此来体现文章的连贯性和行文的流畅性。6.检查：到这里，行文基本完整，但是为了文章完美，应该仔细检查。这里的检查包括：检查要点是否遗漏，检查人称、单词、短语、句型和时态是否有错或者不符合规范的地方。探究一命题解读理解题目：仔细阅读题目，确保完全理解要求。明确补全对象，以及所给信息或提示的内容。分析信息：仔细分析所给的信息或提示，包括关键词、主题、时态等。理解信息的含义和要求，确定如何补全文本。构思内容：根据所给信息或提示，构思文章、段落或故事的内容。确定主题和大意，并考虑如何展开和组织内容。确定结构：根据所给信息和构思的内容，确定文章、段落或故事的结构。包括引言、主体和结论，确保逻辑清晰、条理清楚。扩展细节：根据需要，添加细节或补充信息，以丰富内容，增加可读性和吸引力。语言表达：注意语言表达的准确性和流畅性。选择恰当的词汇和句式，确保表达清晰、连贯。探究二应试技巧紧扣主题：确保文章的每一部分都与题目紧密相关。合理布局：合理安排文章的结构，使文章条理清晰。词汇运用：使用恰当的词汇和短语，避免重复和单调。语法准确：注意语法的准确性，避免语法错误。个性化表达：在文章中加入个人的观点和感受，使文章更具个性。探究三常考话题必备句型一、写人叙事类❖好句积累【开头句】1.TodayIamgladtointroduceateenager.HisnameisChengXin.2.I'mLiHuaandI'mveryhappytostandheretotalkaboutmyself.3.Thereisalwayssomethingunforgettableinmylife,especiallythestorybetweenmyfriendandme.4.MyfriendDanielencouragesmealotinmanyways.Nowletmetellyousomethingabouthim.5.IvisitedHongKonglastsummerholiday.It'sabeautifulcityandIhadawonderfultimethere.6.LiangLing,a15-year-oldgirl,isastudentinClass1,Grade9.7.Howtimeflies!Threeyearshaspassed.Iwillgraduatefromjuniorhighschool.8.IstillrememberwhathappenedbetweenmybestfriendLinTaoandme.9.Thisisaphotothatisveryspecialtome.【中间句】1.Heisahelpfulboywhooftenhelpspeoplearoundhim.2.Heisverypopularinourschoolbecauseheispolitetoeveryone.3.Asformydream，Iwanttobeateacher，I'llmakefriendswithmykids.4.Likemanyotherboys，Ienjoydoingsports，butmathsandsciencearemyfavorite.5.Myfavoritememoryofmydadisthathealwayswantstokeepmefrommakingmistakesbuthetriestoletmefindmyownway,eventhoughhisheartbreaksinsilencewhenIgethurt.6.Thoughsheisbusy,shestudieshardandgetsgoodgrades.7.Iimaginethatshe/heisnotonlyyoungbutalsobeautiful/handsome.8.AlthoughIwasn'twillingtodoit,Istilllentittohimbecausehewasmybestfriend.9.Thenextmorning,Ifoundapieceofpaper.Itsaid,“Nevergiveup,dear.Iamproudofyou!”【结尾句】1.Iwouldbeverythankfulifyoucouldgivemethechance.2.IamsurethatIcanbeagoodvolunteerattheInternationalDragonCompetition.3.Afterreadingsomanybooks,Igetalotofknowledgeandalsofeelrelaxed.4.Asastudent,IthinkIshouldalwaystrymybesttoworkforourschool.5.Thisismybestdad.IlovehimandI'msoproudofhim.6.Ihadgreatfuninmylastsummervacation.7.AlthoughIamnotthebestnow，IwillmakeeveryefforttobecomeatopstudentandIbelieveyouwillbeproudofme.8.Sheisgreat.Let'swishherabetterfuture.9.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingher/him!10.BecauseIthoughtnothingwasimportantthanfriendship.What'smore,IbecameveryhappyafterIforgavehim.11.HowluckyIamtobehisdaughter!二、事物介绍类❖好句积累【开头句】旅游篇1.I'mgladtohearthatyou'replanningtotravelaroundChinaduringthesummervacation.I'dliketoinviteyoutomyhometownFujianforavisit.2.YouaskedmeaboutfestivalsinChina.Letmeintroducesomeimportantonestoyou.3.I'dliketotellyousomethingabouttheChineseDragonBoatFestivalandhowIspentitthisyear.阅读1.Nowadays，readingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularamongus.2.Ofallthesuggestedbooks,IhavedecidedtochooseSecretsofEnglishWordsandTimeforKids.3.ThebookI'dliketosharewithyouisTheOldManandtheSea,writtenbyanAmericanwriterErnestHemingway.4.Mydreamshopwillbeabookstore.Ilovereadingverymuch，soIwanttohaveabigbookstore.5.Inschoolwestudymanysubjects,suchasChinese,English,maths,geographyandsoon.ButmyfavoritesubjectisEnglish.共享单车1.Recently,therearealotofsharedbikesappearingonthestreetofMeishan.Andtheybecomemoreandmorepopularwithpeople.2.Today,asagreenermeansoftransportation,bike'sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities.【中间句】旅游篇1.Ifyoucome,youcanenjoyfreshair,blueskyaswellasbeautifulmountainsandclearrivers.2.FujianliesinthesoutheastofChinawithFuzhouasitscapitalcity.Ithasapopulationofover38million.3.ManyfamousplacesofinterestlikeMountWuyiandGulangIslandarewellworthvisiting.节日1.TheDragonBoatFestivalfallsonMay5ththisyear.PeopleallacrossChinaeatzongzianddragonboatracesareheldinmanyplacestorememberagreatancientpersonQuYuan.2.Onthatday,weeatyuanxiao,gotowatchlanternshowsanddragondancestoprayforhealthandhappinessforthewholeyear.3.Towelcomethenewyear,wedosomecleaning,buynewclothes,setofffireworksandvisitourrelatives.阅读1.Ilikereadingnewspapersandmagazines,fromwhichIgetlotsoffunandlearnaboutwhat'sgoingonaroundtheworld.2.WhatIlikemostaboutthebookisthatthefishermannevergivesupwhenmeetingdifficulties.3.Therewillbeabigreadingroominitandpeoplecansitinthechairtoreadtheirfavoritebooksormagazines.4.KnowingEnglishmakesmytravelingmucheasier.Icanmakemanyforeignfriends,too.【结尾句】1.Thistellsusthatnothingseemsterribleaslongaswehaveastrongwillandabraveheart.2.IhopeyoucancometoChinanextyearandspendthefestivalwithme.3.Besides,readingcanhelpmeknowmoreabouttheoutsideworldandmakemeenrichmyknowledge.That'swhymydreamshopisabookstore.4.IwillcontinuetostudyhardinmyEnglishstudiesandimproveittoahigherstage.三、建议做法类❖好句积累【开头句】学习篇1.IamverygladtohearthatyouwillcomebacktoChinaandstudyinmyschoolnextterm.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.2.I'msorrytoknowthatyouarehavingsomeproblemsnow.I'dliketogiveyousomesuggestions.3.InordertohavemorechancestopracticeandimproveEnglish,weareinvolvedinmanykindsofgroupworkandpairworkactivitiesinEnglishclasses.4.Agreatnumberofstudentscan'tfinishtheirtasks,whichleadstobadresultsandmakesthemlessinterestedintheirstudy.Howcanwesolvetheproblem?Herearesomesuggestions.5.SoIwouldliketosuggestthateveryoneshouldborrowmorebooksandreadgoodbooks.6.Thereisnoendlesstimeforustospend.Sohowcanwemakegooduseoftimetomakeourstudyandlifebetter?建设文明城市1.NowadayswearetryingourbesttomakeXiningbecomeacivilizedcity.Asstudents,wemustknowwhatweshoulddoandwhatweshouldn’tdo.2.AscitizensofGreenCity,weshouldnotonlyprotectourenvironmentbutalsofollowthetrafficrules.3.Asjuniorstudents,wehavealsomadesomecontributionstothecivilizedSuqian.4.BeingateenagerofLianyungang,whatshouldIdotohelpbuildacivilizedcity?5.Herearemyideasabouthowtocreateaharmoniouscommunity.6.HereI'dliketotellyousomethingthatwillmakeyourschoollifemorecomfortableandwonderful.7.Sohowcanwehelpprotectourcity'senvironmentandmakeitagreenerplacetolive?Herearesomesmallthingsweallcandoandshoulddo.8.Withthedevelopmentofthesociety,moreandmoree-productsareusedinourdailylife,makingusliveconvenientlyandcomfortably.保持健康1.Asweknow,keepinginagoodmoodisgoodforourhealthandstudy.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.2.Asteenagers,it'sveryimportantforustokeepsafe.Butsometimesaccidentsmayhappenaroundus.Sohowcanwekeepsafe?3.Summerholidayiscoming.Andswimmingsafetybecomesabigproblem.SoI'dliketogiveyousomeadvicetokeepoffthedanger.4.Everybody,menorwomen,youngorold,shouldhaveagoodhabitofdoingsports.SoshouldI,andsoIdo.【中间句】交流1.Ifyourparentsgetangry,youshouldtrytocommunicatewiththemaboutit.2.What'smore,youshouldbepolitetoeveryone,whichwillmakeyougetonwellwithothersanytime.3.Besides,ifsomeonedoesn'twanttoexchangehisorherideas,maybeheorshemaylosethechancestoknowmorenewmethodsaboutlearningEnglish.文明城市1.Doremembernomatterwherewego,besurenottothrowlittereverywhere.2.Tomakeitmoreandmorebeautiful,Ioftendon'tlittereverywheretomaketheschoolenvironmentcleaner.3.Firstly,whenweareonthewaytoschoolfromhome,weshouldfollowthetrafficlightsandrulestoavoidthetrafficaccidents.4.Inthisway,wecanbeavirtueteenagerandhelptobuildourcityintoacivilizedone.5.Ofcourse,weshouldsetuparecyclingsiteoreventherecyclingwebsitetheInternettomakeiteasier.保持健康1.Tokeepyourselfsafe，youmustn'tgosomewheredangerous.2.Lastbutnotleast,whenyouaresurfingtheInternetathome,youshouldbecarefultomakefriendsonlinetomakeyourselfsafe.3.Intheschool,ItakeanactivepartinP.E.lessons.Sometimesweplayfootballandvolleyball.Sometimesweplaybasketball,tabletennisorbadminton.Footballismyfavoritesport.【结尾句】1.Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou.2.It'sourdutytodowhatwecandotomakeourcitymorebeautiful.Ibelieveifeveryonemakesaneffort,Xiningwillbeoneofthemostbeautifulcitiesinourcountry.3.Allinall,wewilltryourbesttodowhatwecandotomakeourselvesandSuqiancitymorecivilized.4.Everyoneshouldmakeacontributiontothebuildingofaharmoniouscommunity.5.IfyoufollowtheadvicethatIhavementionedabove,youwillbesuccessful.6.Onlywhenwespenditproperly,canwemakeourlifemeaningfulandcolorful.7.Lastbutnotleast,thegovernmentcanmakesomerulesevenlawstomakepeoplerealizetheseriousnessofe-waste.四、观点看法类❖好句积累【开头句】1.Asforit,differentstudentshavedifferentthoughts.Somestudentsstandbyit,othersareagainstit.AsfarasI'mconcerned,Ithinkstudytripisgoodforstudents,andherearemyreasons.2.Doyouagreethatyourparentshaveasecondchild?Differentstudentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit.3.Lastweek,wehadadiscussionaboutthehottopic“Tochangeornot”.Ithinkdifferentpeoplehavedifferentchoicestodealwithproblems.4.Ihaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowateenagercanhaveasuccessfullife.5.Whentheycomeacrossproblems,theydon'tknowwhattodo.Theproblemraisespeople'sattention.6.Wedidasurveyaboutmiddleschoolstudents'weekendactivities.Herearetheresults.7.Asstudents,whatshouldwedotobuildourcountry?Ithinkweshouldstudyhardtogetrichknowledgesoastomakecontributionstoourcountry.8.Idon'tthinkgradesareimportant.Studentshavedifferentabilitiesandsomeofthemcan'tbemeasuredbygrades,suchascreativity,abilitiestocommunicateandact.9.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhetherwecanusemobilephones.10.Ihaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowateenagercanhaveasuccessfullife.【中间句】1.Asforme,I'dlovetohaveabrotherorsisterascompany,sothatIcansharemyhappinessandsorrowwithhimorheranytime.2.Thereisnodoubtthatjunkfoodisdeliciousandattractive,butitsurelydoesharmtoourbody.3.What'smore,domoreoutdooractivities.Aslongasyouarebusywithsomethinginteresting,youwillmoreprobablygetawayfromjunkfood.4.Inmyopinion,thosekidswhoaregoodatlearningareabletomanagetheirtimeverywell.5.Frommyopinionofview,weneedtomakesomegoodfriendssothatwecanlearnfromeachother.6.Insteadofgivingup,Ichosetochange.Itriedmybesttolistentotapesandpracticespeakingeveryday.7.Ontheotherhand,childrenshouldn'tdependontheirparentstoomuch.8.Inordertoproduceenoughvegetablesandfruits,theyarebusygrowingplants.9.Tostartwith,Iwasn’tgoodatEnglishandseldomgothighscoresontheexams.10.Butsomeothersdon'tthinkso.Theythinkstudentsshouldn'tusemobilephones.11.What'smore,theysharetheideathatteenagersaresupposedtomakeagoodplanforfuture.【结尾句】1.Inaword,boththecockandthehenareuseful.Itiswrongforthemtoseetheirownuseinsteadofseeingothers'use.2.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontobuildingagreencity,Ezhouwillbecomeabetterplacetolivein.3.I'msureagoodbalancebetweenlearningandplayingcanmakeagreatcontributiontokids'growth.4.Allinall,it'sveryimportantforchildrentolearntobeindependent.5.Inaword,it'sourdutytomakereadingbecomeapartofourlife.6.Sharingbikesbringpeoplesomanyadvantages,solet'sprotectthemandfollowtherulesofusingthem.7.Allinall,gradescanbeawaytomeasurestudents'achievementsinschoolwork.However,differentinterestsandabilitiescanmakeastudentsafullman.8.Inmyopinion,Ithinkwe'dbetternotusemobilephones.Weshouldspendmoretimeonourstudyinsteadofusingmobilephones.Inmyopinion,weneedtomakesomegoodfriendssothatwecanlearnfromeachother.Also,wemustbeactiveandexercisemorebecausekeepinghealthyishelpfultoasuccessfullife.五、活动计划类❖好句积累【开头句】1.ThereisanactivityaboutChinesetraditionaloperasat2:00p.m.onJuly.Itwillbeheldontheplaygroundinourschoolandallthestudentsandteacherswillatend.2.Beforeenteringthepark,therearesomespecificdetailswemustknowfirst.3.Howisgoing？It'stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool.HerearemyplansthatIwouldliketosharewithyou.4.Summervacationiscoming.Iplantodomorereading.IamgoingtoreadmoreclassicsandmoreEnglishbookstoimprovemylanguagesskills.5.Wuhanisabeautifulcityfullofcultureandhistory.6.TheInternationalDayofCharityiscoming.Manypeoplewilldosomethingforit.WhatshouldIdo?Herearemyideas.【中间句】1.Wearegoingtohavesomemeaningfulactivities.Toexpressthankstoourteachers,weeachshouldsaythankfulwordstoourdearteachers.2.Beforeyouarrive,wewillprepareacleanandbrightroomforyou.3.Tobeginwith,weneedtobeclearaboutthelocationofthefacilities.4.Firstofall，Iwillvolunteertodosomecleaningwithmyclassmates,suchascleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor.Tokeepourschoolclean，wewillaskourschoolmatesnottolitteratschool.5.Then,we'llinviteyoutoourclassandtalkaboutschoollife.6.Once,ourcommunityheldanoldthingsfairtoraisemoneyforthehomelesspeople.【结尾句】1.Inaword,I'msureyouwillenjoyyourselfhere.2.It'sachanceforyoutolearnmoreaboutChinesetraditionalculture.Comeandjoinus!Ithinkwe'llhaveagreattime.3.It'sreallyhardformetosaygoodbye.Iwishmyschooltohaveabetterfuture.4.Ihopeallofouryoungerschoolmatescanliveandstudyhappilyinourschool.5.Ifpossible,youmaywatchHanShow.Hopeyou'llhavefunhere.6.Inaword,it'shelpfulforoursocietytodosomecharity.Manyhandsmakelightwork.Takeactionsnowtomakeoursocietymorebeautiful!六、热点话题类❖好句积累【开头句】1.Today,asagreenermeansoftransportation,bike-sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities.2.IamveryhappytoknowthatDatangSchoolwillstartthesummercamp.ThemiddleschoolstudentsfromtheBeltandRoadcountrieswilljoinit.3.Doyouagreethatyourparentshaveasecondchild?Differentstudentshavedifferentopinionsaboutit.【中间句】1.Therewillbelesspollutionbecauseofbike-sharing.Besides,bike-sharinghelpspeopletakemoreexercise.Inthisway,it'shelpfultopeople'shealth.2.Iwanttobeacook，becauseIwanttocookdeliciousfoodforstudentsandmakethemknowmoreaboutourfoodculture.【结尾句】1.Aslongaswetakegoodcareofbikes,itwillmakeourlifebetterandbetter,andourenvironmentwillbemorebeautiful.2.Iwilltrymybesttoletstudentshaveawonderfultimeinourcountry.3.Asforme,I'dlovetohaveabrotherorsisterascompany,sothatwecanshareourhappinessandsorrowanytime.典例引领典例引领1．（2024·山东青岛·一模）请你写一篇短文向校英文报“SportsandHealth”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。内容包括：1.介绍这项运动；2.说明推荐理由。要求：1.词数80-100(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息。StandUpandExercise,Everybody!__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文StandUpandExercise,Everybody!Everybody!Areyoutiredofsittinginclassallday?Howaboutincorporatingsomephysicalactivityintoyourdailyroutine?Onegreatoptionisthe“StandUpandStretch”exercise.Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.It’saquickandeasywaytogetyourbloodflowingandre-energizeyourbodyandmind.Thisexerciseisrecommendedforseveralreasons.First,ithelpstocombatthenegativeeffectsofprolongedsitting,suchasbackpainandstiffness.Second,itcanimproveyourfocusandconcentration,makingiteasiertostayengagedinclass.Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.So,nexttimeyoufeelabitsluggishduringclass,remembertostandupandstretch!It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，介绍一项适合课间开展的运动；第二步，具体这项运动的好处；第三步，书写结语，总结全文。[亮点词汇]①betiredof厌倦②remembertodosth.记得要做某事③makeabigdifference产生重大影响[高分句型]Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)2．（2024·贵州贵阳·模拟预测）“读书破万卷,下笔如有神。”阅读不仅能让我们获得知识,而且能开阔我们的眼界。请结合下图内容及提示以“MyFavoriteWayofReading”为题写一篇英文短文。参考词汇：ebook,environment,convenient,download,searchforinformation写作要求：1.紧扣主题,语言连贯,语法正确,书写规范；2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名,不少于80词。MyFavoriteWayofReading________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Today,readinghasbecomeanimportantpartofeverydaylife.Themorebooksweread,thewiserwe’llbecome.Therearemanykindsofreadingways,suchasnewspapers,magazines,ebooks,etc.Comparedwithreadingebooks,readingpaperbooksismyfavorite.Firstly,readinginthelibrariesandtakingawaybooksbackhomearesimpleandeveryonecandoit.Secondly,paperbooksdolessharmtooureyes.Ifeelrelaxedafterlookingthroughsomeinterestingcomicbooksandstorybooks.Thirdly,wecantakedownsomeusefulnotesandmakelearningmarkswhilereadingeasily.Asthesayinggoesthat“readingistheeducationinaclassroomthathasnowalls”.Let’sstarttoreadameaningfulbook.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：本文时态为一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍读书的重要性；第二步，介绍你最喜欢的阅读方式；第三步，介绍为什么选择这种方式。[亮点词汇]①takeaway拿走②doharmto对……有害[高分句型]①Therearemanykindsofreadingways,suchasnewspapers,magazines,e-books,etc.(Therebe句型)②Let’sstarttoreadameaningfulbook.(祈使句)3．（2024·黑龙江大庆·一模）每个人都有自己喜欢的体育运动。你最喜欢的运动是什么？为什么喜欢它呢？请“MyFavouriteSport”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的体育运动，并说明原因。写作要点：1.最喜欢的运动；2.喜欢此项运动的原因。写作要求1.不得出现真实姓名；2.字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，有条理；3.字数至少70字。MyFavouriteSport________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyFavoriteSportIlikesportsverymuch,suchasrunning,skating,playingbasketballandsoon.Myfavoritesportisswimmingbecauseitmakesmestrongandhealthy.Itisalsoagoodwaytoloseweight.Ifyouwanttokeepfit,youcanhaveatry.IbegantolearntoswimwhenIwassixyearsold.NowIcanswimverywell.IusuallyspendanhourswimmingintheswimmingpooleverySunday.Swimmingisreallyveryinteresting.Ifyouswiminthewater,youwilllooklikealovelyfish.AndI’msureyouwillfeelveryhappy.MyfavoriteswimmingplayerisSunYang.IhopeIwillbecomeaswimmingplayerwhenIgrowup.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，点出最喜欢的运动；第二步，介绍喜欢此项运动的原因；第三步，谈谈未来的打算。[亮点词汇]①strongandhealthy身强体壮②looklike看起来像③growup长大[高分句型]①Myfavoritesportisswimmingbecauseitmakesmestrongandhealthy.（原因状语从句）②AndI’msureyouwillfeelveryhappy.（宾语从句）4．（2024·山东淄博·三模）最近雾霾天气较多，这是人类破坏环境造成的结果。保护环境，保卫家园是每个人的责任和义务。请你以“TheGreenPlanet”为题写一篇不少于100词的英语短文，分析一下周围存在的环境问题，谈一下保护环境的主张和做法。注意：1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名；短文的开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheGreenPlanetNowourenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.Moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.It’sourdutytoprotectourearth.Inmydailylife,IalwaysturnoffthelightswhenIleavearoom.WhileIamwashingmyhair,Iusuallyturnofftheshower.Besides,ifIwanttogoshopping,Ialwaystakereusablebagsinsteadofusingplasticbags.Ihavedecidedtodomorethingstoprotectourearth,suchasrecyclingbooksandpaper.It’sgoodforustoridebikesorwalktoschool.Wecanalsoplantmoretreestoimprovetheairaroundus.Inaword,Ithinkonethingweshouldkeepinmindisthatnomatterwhatasmalleffortwemake,itdoesmakeadifference.Let’stakeactionnow!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主。③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“如何保护地球的环境”并适当补充，使文章内容充实，行文应使用第一人称。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，点明环境越来越糟糕，以及环境的重要性。第二步，具体阐述内容，介绍自己生活中是如何用具体行动保护环境的。第三步，书写结语，号召大家行动起来。[亮点词汇]①dailylife日常生活②makeaneffort做出努力③decidetodo决定做某事[高分句型]①IalwaysturnoffthelightswhenIleavearoom.（when引导的时间状语从句）②Ithinkonethingweshouldkeepinmindisthatnomatterwhatasmalleffortwemake,itdoesmakeadifference.（省略that的宾语从句，nomatterwhat引导的让步状语从句）5．（2024·云南昆明·三模）A（An）______MomentinMyMiddleSchool提示：凡是过往，皆为序章。你的初中生涯已接近尾声，回望这三年，有过欢喜，有过挑战，有过辉煌，也有过跌撞，无论经历过什么，三年的初中生涯，一定给你留下了许多值得回忆的瞬间。请你以“A（An）______MomentinMyMiddleSchool”为题，写一篇英语短文，与我们一起分享你在初中经历的美好或难忘瞬间和由此得到的启示。要求：1．请补全题目后再作答；2．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；3．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4．请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableMomentinMyMiddleSchool

OneofthemostunforgettablemomentsduringmymiddleschooliswhenIwonanEnglishspeechcontest.

WhenIwasinGradeSeven,myspokenEnglishisratherpoor.Becauseofthat,IwasafraidofspeakingEnglishinfrontofothers.Oneday,myEnglishteachercametomeandaskedmetotakepartinanEnglishspeechcontest.AlthoughIrefusedimmediately,shekepttellingmethatIshouldhaveatry.SofinallyIagreed.Inthefollowingmonths,IspentmuchtimepracticespeakingEnglishwiththehelpofmyteacher.EverytimeIwasabouttogiveup,myteacherencouragedmekeepon.Tomygreatsurprise,Iwonthecontestintheend.

ItwasthroughthisexperiencethatIrealizedtheimportanceofnevergivingup.Aslongaswedon’tgiveup,wewillfinallyachieveourdream.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作话题已给出，考生要注意根据题目要求来写作。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己初中最难忘的时刻；第二步，介绍这个难忘的时刻；第三步，介绍由这个难忘时刻得到的启示。[亮点词汇]①becauseof...因为……②beafraidofdoingsth.害怕做某事③takepartin参加④spendtimedoingsth.花费时间做某事[高分句型]①OneofthemostunforgettablemomentsduringmymiddleschooliswhenIwonanEnglishspeechcontest.（when引导的表语从句）②EverytimeIwasabouttogiveup,myteacherencouragedmekeepon.（Everytime引导的时间状语从句）6．（2024·河北石家庄·三模）在成长的过程中，你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人，比如对你