高中英语应用文写作-建议信（运动相关）

SuggestionLetter

建议信训练Lead-in【学习目标】

1.Toreviewandconsolidatesomewordsandexpressionsrelatedtosuggestionletter.2.Toenhancethewritingaboutthetopic.【学习难点】1.Cultivatestudents’interestandconfidenceinwriting.2.Learntoimitategoodsentences.假如你是LiHua，你的朋友Tom正要减肥，现在向你询问如何能成功减肥。请根据以下要点给他回封信，并表达你希望他早日减肥成功。1）积极的心态；

2）均衡的饮食；3）定期体育运动；

4）最关键的在于坚持。注意：1)词数100左右；开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；参考词汇：塑造身材:shapeafigure

定期的:regularDearTom,Hownicetohearfromyou.______________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua5suggestionletterbeginningbodyendingthreestructure（结构）problemsandpurposesofwritingsuggestionshopesandwishes______parts

【Expressions】1.积极的心态_____________________2.当提到...时____________________3.在某方面起着重要作用___________________4.均衡的饮食_____________________5.应该做某事________________________6.定期/经常锻炼__________________7.锻炼身体/强身健体__________________8.增强免疫系统___________________whenitcomesto(doing)sth.apositiveattitude/apositivestateofmindplayanimportantrole/partin...abalanceddietbesupposedtododosports/exerciseregularly或workoutregularlybuildupone’sbodystrengthenimmunesystemTask1短语积累Task2.Translatethesentences.句式：Para.1(第一段，对应材料，表明写作意图)

1.听说你正要减肥。我很关心并写信来表达我对这件事的一些建议。[简易版]

Iknow___________________________.Iamconcernedand________________________________.[升级版]Learningthat_____________________________________[回顾版]关于如何减肥，我的建议如下。_______________________________________________.youaregoingtoloseweightwritingtoexpressmyadvice/ideasconcerningthismatter.youaregoingtoloseweight,Iamconcernedandwritingto...Astohowtoloseweight,herecome/aremytips.

或

mytipsareasfollows.1.当提到减肥，有个积极的心态非常重要。

[It作形式主语]__________________losingweight,

___________________________________________.[动名词作主语]:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________.WhenitcomestoWhenitcomestolosingweight,havingapositiveattitudeisofgreatimportance.itisveryimportanttohaveapositiveattitude.Para.2(第二段，灵活运用，要点要齐全)

2.

在减肥中起重要作用的是均衡的饮食。[简单版]A_________dietplays__________________________in

losingweight.[升级版](what引导的主语从句)

What______________________inlosingweight_________________.balancedplaysanimportantrole/partplaysanimportantroleisabalanceddiet3.

你应该既吃肉又吃蔬菜，它们含有健康身体所必需的东西。[简单版]You__________________eatbothmeatandvegetables.Theycontainthenecessarythingsforahealthybody.

[升级版](用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写]______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________aresupposedtoYouaresupposedtoeatbothmeatandvegetables,whichcontainthenecessarythingsforahealthybody.4.

除此之外，经常运动也是一个好的选择。

_____________________________________,_________________________________________________________________________.Besides/Plus/What’smore/Furthermoreitisalsoagoodchoicetoworkoutregularly.5.

经常运动不仅能锻炼身体，还能增强我们的免疫系统。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Notonlycan

doingsportsregularlybuildupourbodies,butitalsostrengthensourimmunesystem.6.

据说，游泳可以帮助塑造好身材。___________________swimmingcanhelpshapeanicefigure.

Itissaidthat7.

最重要的是，你必须要坚持。正如一句名言所说:“有志者，事竟

成。”[简单版]Themostimportantis_______youmustkeepit/bepersistent.

Justasafamoussayinggoes,

“_______________________________________[升级版](用what引导主语从句改写):____________________________________________________________thatWherethereisawill,thereisaway.Whatmattersmostisthatyoumustkeepit/bepersistent.....1.希望这些建议对你有帮助，期待收到你的好消息。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Idohopeyouwillfindthissuggestionshelpful.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.=Idohopethesesuggestionscanbeofgreatbenefit/helptoyou.Para.3(第三段，希望采纳，给予鼓励)

2.

我坚信情况会向好的方面发展。（同位语从句）

______________________________thesituationwillbecomebetter

andbetter.Iholdthefirmbeliefthat避免草率（或一句话）结尾

(para3)

Hopethesesuggestionswillbeusefulforyouandlookforwardtoyourearlyreply.版本1：Hopethesesuggestionsabovecanbeofgreathelptoyou.Withpersistenteffortsandanoptimisticstateofmind,youare

toboundtowin

thissummer.版本2：Pleasetakemysuggestionsintoaccount.Iholdthefirmbeliefthateverythingwillchangeforthebetterandmayyousucceedthissummer.Summary3Paragraph3Sentence1(希望所提建议对对方有帮助）:Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Ihopeyouwillmakeitifyoufollowtheadviceabove.Ihopethatthesesuggestionswillhelpyouout.Ihopethatyoucanmakeprogresswiththehelpofmysuggestions.Sentence2(祝愿对方处境得到改善）:Iwouldbemorethandelightedtoseeimprovementsinthisregard.IsincerelyhopeyoucantakemyadviceintoconsiderationandIdolookforwardtoseeingyoursituationimproved.Idohopeyoucantakemyadviceintoconsiderationandnothingwillexcitememorethanseeingyoursituationimproved.DearTom, Hownicetohearfromyou!Learning/Spottingthatyouaregoingtoloseweight,

IamsoconcernedthatIamwritingtoexpressmyadvice/ideasconcerningthismatter.（或Iamconcernedandwritingtosharewithyoumysuggestions.）

1

Firstofall,havingapositiveattitudeisofgreatimportancewhenitcomestolosingweight.Asweallknow,onewithapositiveattitudeinlifecanreallyleadahappylife.Secondly,whatplaysanimportantroleinlosingweightisabalanceddiet.Youaresupposedtoeatbothmeatandvegetables,whichcontainthenecessarythingsforahealthybody.Furthermore/Plus/Besides,itisalsoagoodchoiceto

workoutregularly