月日公开课写出商务范儿

月日公开课写出商务范儿第1页，共19页。Youareamanagerinalargecompany.Youhavebeeninformedthatamemberofyourstaffoftenarriveslateforwork.Writehimamemoabouttheproblem:sayinghowoftenthememberofstaffarriveslatedescribingtheeffectonotherstaffsuggestingwhatthememberofstaffshoulddoaboutthesituationWrite40-50words.第2页，共19页。To:P.JonesFrom:ManagerDate:21November2002Subject:LatenessHi,JonesNowadaysyouarriveslateforworkveryoften.Ifeelyoumayhaveparticularreasonsforit.Butifyoukeepgoingyourlateness,otherstaffintheofficemaybelatelikeyou.I’mworryingaboutit.Howaboutconsideringofbeingmorepunctual?Thanks!第3页，共19页。第4页，共19页。Thanksforyourletter.Igotit14thOct.I’vesentacopytocompHQalongwithamemoaboutyourfinancialsituation.I’vesetameetingfor3rd第5页，共19页。Canyoutellthedifferences?Thankyouforyourletterreceived15thOctober2012.acopyhasbeensenttothecompanyheadquartersinadditiontoamemorandumconcerningyourfinancialsituation.Ameetinghasbeenscheduledfor3rdNovember2012at11:00amtodiscussyourrequestfor

afurtherbankloan.Therefore,pleaseinformusofyouravailabilityforthismeetingattheearliestopportunity.第6页，共19页。Youwillwriteanemailtoyourcustomertoapologizeforthelatedelivery.Thesentenceforyoutorevise:IamsosorrywhenIheardyourdeliverywaslate,butIknowitwillarriveonTuesday.Sorryagain.第7页，共19页。

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Mysincereapologiesforthedelayindelivery.Fortunately,IhavebeenreassuredthatthedeliverywillbearrivingnextTuesdaymorning.第8页，共19页。商务范儿？How？useappropriateopeningandclosingremarksformalorsemi-formal/neutralavoidrepetitiontryusemorepassivebedirectandon-point写什么像什么第9页，共19页。BEC写作题型分析由两个写作任务构成，答题时需考虑信息点，写作的目的和目标读者答题时间45分钟两部分组成，PART1和

PART2，均为必答题PART1要求写一篇用于公司内部交流的短文PART2要求写一封商务信函，或一份商务报告，或一份建议书PART1占写作总分的1/3，PART2占写作总分的2/3第10页，共19页。考纲支招

评分五个方面：ContentLanguageStructure&vocabularyOrganizationRegister第11页，共19页。InformalWeneedtofindoutwhycustomersaren’tsatisfied.FormalInformalWehaven’timprovedourservice,socustomersarebecomingfewerandfewer.FormalInformalWiththetechnologygoingon,peoplegetmoreandmoremethodstocommunicatewithothers.Formal第12页，共19页。InformalWeneedtofindoutwhycustomersaren’tsatisfied.FormalThereisanurgentneedtoascertainthereasonsforcustomers’dissatisfaction.InformalWehaven’timprovedourservice,socustomersarebecomingfewerandfewer.FormalThefailuretoimproveourservicehasledtoafallinthenumberofourcustomers.InformalWiththetechnologygoingon,peoplegetmoreandmoremethodstocommunicatewithothers.FormalDuetothedevelopmentoftechnologyagreatnumberofcommunicationmethodsarenowavailable.第13页，共19页。Thecharacteristicsofformalwriting

名词化趋势

无灵主语被动语态

Vocabulary第14页，共19页。NounPhrasesWeoncecried,laughedanddisappointed.Thereweremomentsoftears,momentsoflaughter,andmomentsofdisappointment.注意:名词化趋势的句子当然还有动词,目的是尽量把表达句子中心意思的那个词汇用名词表达.符合英文的习惯.Thestafffeeldeeplyunhappythatmanagementdonotrecognizetheirefforts.Akeystaffcomplaintisthelackofrecognition.Thequalityoftheserviceisofthegreatestimportanceforus.第15页，共19页。ImpersonalLanguage

中文写作中,习惯以人做主语,而英文则相反,习惯以物做主格.Moreandmoreyoungstudentsstudiedfurtherinthepasttwodecades.Thepasttwodecadeswitnessedagrowingnumberofyoungstudentsforfurtherstudy.

Itisimportantthat....Itisclearthat...Itwouldbeadvisable....Thereisnobasisfor...Itisessentialthatactionistakenimmediately第16页，共19页。Passives由于我公司和Mason&Co.合并，我公司的名字改为MasonGolding.Thenameofourcompanywillbechangedto…Youareremindedthat…Iwasaskedtoorganizeaforeignlanguage…Iamwritingtoinformyouthatth