Unit 6 Survival Period 4 同步课后练习 2022-2023学年高中英语外研版2019选择性必修第二册

Unit6SurvivalPeriod4历险类记叙文文体感知记叙文通常包括时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、事件的经过和事件的结果六大要素。历险类记叙文要求学生能够根据命题的要求，记叙发生在自己或他人身上的一次历险。历险类记叙文写作应注意的问题：1．注意重点。历险类记叙文的重点应放在“历险”上，所发生的事情必须体现“险”，即具有危险性。2．体现意义。所记叙的这次历险，应具有一定的教育意义，能使读者受到一定的教育或启发。3．用对时态。历险类记叙文描述的通常是发生在过去的事情。因此，这类文章的时态大多采用与过去相关的时态：一般过去时、过去进行时、过去完成时等。基本框架第一段：在什么地方发生的危险；第二段：这些危险是什么，你是如何设法摆脱危险的；第三段：你的感受是什么。增分佳句1．sb.wasdoing...insomeplacewhen...2．sb.wasabouttodo...when...3．Atthatmoment,sb.didsth.4．Personally,Ithinkthat...5．Whatsurprised/attracted/delightedusmostwasthat...6．Tiredaswewere,welearnedwhatwecouldn'tlearnin/atschool.7．Throughthisemergency,welearnedsomethingthatcouldn'tbelearnedinclass.8．Iwasdeeplyimpressed/moved/touchedby...9．Ilearnedalotfrom...10．Whatanunforgettableexperience!典型例题写作要求假定你现在和队友失联，独自一人被困在丛林中，请从以下几个方面讲述你自己在丛林中克服困难、艰难求生的故事。1．在丛林中失联；2．面临的危险和困难；3．你的解决方法；4．你的感想。参考词汇：驱虫剂(repellent)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审题谋篇第一步：审题构思很关键第二步：核心词汇想周全1．leave...alone把……单独留下2．be_lost_in迷路3．lose_contact_with失去和……的联系4．shut_off关机5．keep...away_from使……远离6．make_a_fire生火7．protect...against_保护……免于8．with_the_help_of在……的帮助下第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．其他队友离开丛林回家已经三天了。It'sbeenthreedays．2．他们不小心把我一个人留下了。They．3．我在丛林里迷了路，由于手机关机，与他们失去了联系。Iwaslostinthejungleand．4．我在丛林里走了一整天，听到了动物的叫声。为了保暖并让动物们远离我，我生起了火。Alldayinthejungle,,_Ihadheardnoisesofanimals.Inordertokeepwarmandkeeptheanimalsawayfromme,Imadeafire.5．众所周知，丛林里有些昆虫是很危险的。someinsectsinthejunglecanbeverydangerous.6．我用驱虫剂来保护自己免受蚊虫叮咬。Ihadtheinsectrepellentto．7．起初我最担心的是水，但在一些昆虫的巢穴的帮助下，我发现了一条河。毫无疑问，我不再担心找不到水了。Waterwasmybiggestworry,_butIdiscoveredariverwiththehelpofnestsofsomeinsects.Inolonger．8．现在我担心的是食物。它只够一个人吃一周的。NowIamworriedaboutfood.Itisonly．9．如果我不能走出丛林，或者在一周内被营教，我将不得不在丛林中寻找东西吃，比如一些昆虫。,_Iwillhavetofindthingstoeatinthejungle,suchassomeinsects.10．人们通常不愿意吃昆虫。People．11．我相信我可以在一周内回家，因为太阳和星星可以帮助我找到路。Ibelieve,_because．第四步：句式升级造亮点1．用现在分词短语作状语合并第三步中的句1和句2.2．把第三步中的句5改写成定语从句.3．用非限制性定语从句合并第三步中的句9和句10.第五步：过渡衔接连成篇__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________实战演练你在生活中有什么历险经历吗？请结合自己的生活实际，写一篇历险短文。写作要点如下：1．事件发生的时间和地点；2．事件发生的过程；3．你的感想。要求：80词左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

参考答案与解析第二步：核心词汇想周全1．leave...alone2．be_lost_in3．lose_contact_with4．shut_off5．keep...away_from6．make_a_fire7．protect...against_8．with_the_help_of第三步：由词扩句雏形现since_the_other_teammates_left_the_jungle_and_went_back_homeleft_me_alone_accidentlylost_contact_with_them_with_my_cellphone_shut_offwhile_I_had_been_walkingIt's_known_to_us_all_thatprotect_myself_against_bitesat_firstThere_was_no_doubt_thatworried_about_looking_for_waterenough_for_one_person_to_eat_for_a_weekIf_I_can't_walk_out_of_the_jungle_or_be_rescued_within_one_weekwouldn't_normally_want_to_eat_the_insectsthat_I_can_get_home_again_in_one_week, the_sun_and_stars_can_help_me_find_the_way第四步：句式升级造亮点It's_been_three_days_since_the_other_teammates_left_the_jungle_and_went_back_home,_accidently_leaving_me_aloneAs_is_known_to_us_all,_some_insects_in_the_jungle_can_be_very_dangerousIf_I_can't_walk_out_of_the_jungle_or_be_rescued_within_one_week,_I_will_have_to_find_things_to_eat_in_the_jungle,_such_as_some_insects,_which_people_wouldn't_normally_want_to_eat第五步：过渡衔接连成篇Onepossibleversion：It'sbeenthreedayssincetheotherteammatesleftthejungleandwentbackhome,accidentlyleavingmealone.Iwaslostinthejungleandlostcontactwiththemwithmycellphoneshutoff.Alldayinthejungle,whileIhadbeenwalking,Ihadheardnoisesofanimals.Inordertokeepwarmandkeeptheanimalsawayfromme,Imadeafire.Asisknowntousall,someinsectsinthejunglecanbeverydangerous.Fortunately,Ihadtheinsectrepellenttoprotectmyselfagainstbites.Waterwasmybiggestworryatfirst,butIdiscoveredariverwiththehelpofnestsofsomeinsects.TherewasnodoubtthatInolongerworriedaboutlookingforwater.NowIamworriedaboutfood.Itisonlyenoughforonepersontoeatforaweek.IfIcan'twalkoutofthejungleorberescuedwithinoneweek,Iwillhavetofindthingstoeatinthejungle,suchassomeinsects,whichpeoplewouldn'tnormallywanttoeat.IbelievethatIcangethomeagaininoneweek,becausethesunandstarscanhelpmefindtheway.实战演练Onepossibleversion：Onedaylastmonth,IwastrappedintheliftofourflatasI