2026-2027学年外研版英语九上 Unit 4 Heroes 4.写作指导

如何写与英雄/榜样人物相关的文章

本单元的主题是“英雄”，围绕英雄们的英勇事迹和高尚品质展开。与此相关的写作维度有：①介绍自己敬佩的英雄/榜样人物；②介绍身边的平凡英雄；③想象你与英雄对话或共处的经历。

描写最钦佩的人或伟人时，通常先介绍其基本情况（如出生时间、地点、人物经历等），然后介绍其做出的贡献或给我们带来的启迪，最后表达自身感悟或钦佩之情。典例

每个人心中都有自己的英雄，假如你是李华，你校英文报正在开展以“The

Hero

in

My

Heart”为题的征文活动，请你结合下面的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文进行投稿，介绍一位你心中的英雄。

内容提示：1.Who

is

your

hero?

2.What

did

he/she

do?

3.What

can

you

learn

from

him/her?

写作要求：1.须包含以上内容提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；

2.要点齐全，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.词数100左右。The

Hero

in

My

Heart__________________________________________________________________________________________________审主题：介绍英雄人物审体裁：记叙文审人称：以第三人称为主审时态：以一般过去时和一般现在时为主审要点：英雄的基本情况、英雄的事迹、英雄的影响写作框架词句积累词汇基本情况scientist

科学家

astronaut

航天员educator

教育工作者aerospace

航空航天工业be

born

in

出生于graduate

from

毕业于be

called

the

“father

of

China’s

aerospace”

被称为“中国航天之父”词汇优秀品质inspiring

鼓舞人心的

admirable

令人钦佩的creative

有创造力的brave

勇敢的wise

明智的

hard-working

勤奋的patriotic

爱国的

keep

trying

不断尝试face

difficulties

bravely

勇敢地面对困难词汇主要事迹be

influenced

by

受……影响

take/show

great

interest

in

对……有浓厚的兴趣spend

time（in）doing

sth.

花时间做某事decide

to

do

sth.

决定做某事 devote

oneself

to

献身于……

make

contributions

做出贡献 playakeyroleinthefieldof

在……领域发挥关键作用句子开头句①Role

models

make

us

become

better

people.

And

the

person

I

admire

most

is...

榜样让我们成为更好的人。我最钦佩的人是……②When

it

comes

to

heroes,

the

first

person

I

think

of

is...

说到英雄，我首先想到的是……③Theheroinmyheartis...,

ascientistwhomade/makesgreatcontributionstoourcountry.

我心中的英雄是……，一位为我们的国家做出巨大贡献的科学家。句子中间句①He

was

eager

to

bring

his

knowledge

and

skills

to

his

homeland.他渴望将自己的知识和技术带回祖国。②He

spent

his

whole

life

researching

and

developing...

他花费毕生精力研究与开发……③He

played

a

key

role

in

developing

China’s

first

rocket.

他在中国第一枚火箭的研制中发挥了关键作用。句子④He

devoted

himself

to

his

country,

and

his

great

workbrought

honour

and

success

to

China.他把自己奉献给了祖国，他的杰出工作给中国带来了荣誉和成功。⑤Thanks

to

his

research,

China

became

one

of

the

fewcountries

in

the

world

to

explore

space.由于他的研究，中国成为世界上少数几个探索太空的国家之一。句子结尾句①I

will

learn

from

him/her

and

try

my

best

to

makecontributions

to

our

country.

我要向他/她学习，尽我所能为我们的国家做出贡献。②I’ll

remember

his/her

spirit.

It

will

encourage

me

to

work

hard

and

guide

me

in

my

future

life.

我会铭记他/她的精神。它将鼓舞我努力奋斗，指引我未来的生活。佳作展示The

Hero

in

My

Heart

①When

it

comes

to

heroes,

the

first

person

I

think

of

is

Qian

Xuesen，a

scientist

who

made

great

contributions

to

China’s

aerospace.教材原句According

to

my

great-aunt，she

was

a

kind

personwho

always

thought

of

others

first.（教材P52）

Qian

Xuesen

was

born

in

1911.

He

went

to

the

USA

for

further

education

after

graduating

from

ShanghaiJiaoTong

University.

②However,

hedecidedtoreturn

to

China

when

he

heard

of

the

founding

of

the

People’s

Republic

of

China.

③Back

in

China,

he

spent

years

researching.

He

played

a

key

role

in

developing

教材原句

Afterheleftcollegein1953,hespentnearly70yearsworkinghardtosolvethisproblem.（教材P60）China’s

first

rocket.

④Thanks

to

his

research,

China

became

one

of

the

few

countries

in

the

world

to

explore

space.

His

story

inspires

me

a

lot.

⑤I

will

learn

from

him

and

try

my

best

to

make

contributions

to

our

country.名师点评

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