2026-2027学年外研版英语九上 Unit 6 Live green 4.写作指导

如何写与环境保护相关的文章写作维度分析

本单元以“保护环境”为话题，谈论了塑料污染、伦敦大雾等环境问题以及应对这些问题的措施，与此相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面：①描述当前的环境污染问题；②阐述保护环境、节约资源的必要性；③提出保护环境的相关措施；④呼吁大家从小事做起，共同努力来保护环境。写作典例指导

假如你是学校环保俱乐部的一名成员，为迎接世界环境日的到来，俱乐部准备举办一个以“保护环境，绿色生活”为主题的分享活动，请根据下面的提示和要求，写一篇英文发言稿。提示：1.What

environmental

problems

are

there

in

your

city?

2.What

are

the

causes

and

effects

of

these

environmental

problems?

3.What

can

you

do

to

protect

the

environment

and

live

a

green

life?要求：1.词数100左右；2.短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。审主题：保护环境审体裁：应用文审人称：以第一人称为主审时态：以一般现在时为主审要点：环境问题、引起环境问题的原因及影响、保护环境的措施写作框架词句积累词汇环境问题plastic

pollution

塑料污染

global

warming

全球变暖air

pollution

空气污染

water

pollution

水污染产生原因cut

down

trees

砍树burn

things

燃烧东西plastic

products

塑料制品

human

activities

人类活动tons

of

waste

大量废弃物

create

waste

产生废弃物词汇危害be

harmful

to...

对……有害

get

worse

变得更糟糕be

killed

by...

被……杀死

have

a

big

influence

on

对……有很大影响解决措施reusable

可再次使用的

reuse

再次使用reduce

减少

recycle

回收利用take

action

采取行动

turn

off

关闭句子开头句①Plastic

pollution

is

a

global

problem.

塑料污染是一个全球性问题。②In

today’s

world,

we

are

facing

serious

environmental

problems,

such

as

plastic

pollution

and

air

pollution.

在当今世界，我们正面临着严重的环境问题，如塑料污染和空气污染。句子中间句1.引起环境问题的原因及影响①These

problems

are

closely

related

to

humanactivities.

这些问题与人类活动密切相关。②We

use

too

many

plastic

products.

Plastic

will

stay

in

the

ground

for

years

and

pollute

the

soil

and

water.

我们使用太多的塑料制品。塑料会在地下留存多年，污染土壤和水源。句子③Factories

and

cars

burn

oil

and

coal,

which

can

make

the

air

dirty

and

be

harmful

to

our

health.

工厂和汽车燃烧石油和煤炭，这会使空气变得污浊，危害我们的健康。2.具体的环保措施①To

reduce

plastic

waste,

we

can

bring

our

cloth

bags

when

we

go

to

the

supermarket.

为了减少塑料垃圾，我们可以在去超市时自带布袋。句子②Try

to

walk

or

ride

a

bike

to

school.

It’s

good

for

our

environment.

尽量步行或骑自行车上学。这对我们的环境有好处。③We

should

let

people

around

us

know

the

importance

of

protecting

the

environment.

我们应该让周围的人知道保护环境的重要性。句子结尾句Small

changes

in

our

daily

habits

will

have

a

big

influence

on

reducing

pollution.

Let’s

take

action

now！日常生活习惯的小改变将对减少污染产生重大影响。让我们现在就行动起来吧！佳作展示

Hello,

everyone!

In

today’s

world,

we

are

facing

serious

environmental

problems,

such

as

plastic

pollution

and

air

pollution.

①These

problems

are

closely

related

to

human

activities.

The

plastic

we

use

will

stay

in

the

ground

for

years

and

pollute

the

soil

and

water.

②The

burning

of

oil

and

coal

is

one

of

the

main

causes

of

air

pollution.教材原句

The

burning

of

oil

for

energy

is

one

of

the

main

causes

of

greenhouse

gases.（教材P87）

③However,

we

can

make

some

small

changes

to

make

a

difference!

④First,

we

can

bring

cloth

bags

when

we

go

to

the

supermarket.

Second,

it

is

friendly

to

the

environment

if

教材原句Whenplasticwasinventedaroundthe1860s,itwasconsideredanamazingmaterial.（教材P84）we

walk

or

ride

a

bike

to

school.

Third,

we

should

let

people

around

us

know

the

importance

of

protecting

the

environment.⑤Small

changes

in

our

daily

habits

will

have

a

big

influence

on

reducing

pollution.

Let’s

take

action

now!名师点评

本文要点全面、结构清晰，语言表达流畅自然。①运用be

related

to短语，点明环