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专题六读后续写写作提示:1.用衡水体认真书写;2.快速构思,每段80词左右;3.学会使用具体动作和心理描写;4.运用至少3种高级句式(倒装句、强调句、with复合结构、独立主格结构、现在分词作状语等)强化练(三十六)Writing1助人为乐阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2023·盐城高三第二次调研)WhenIlefttheofficeforanewsassignmentthatearlysummerevening,Ihadabsolutelynoideawhatlifeheldinstoreforme.Asayoungphotographer,Iwasonmywaybackfromaphotoshoot.Ihadshotrollsoffilmsfeaturingbeautifulsceneryandscenesofdailylifeinthecountryside.Whatafulfillingday!NowwhatIneededwasahotbathandagoodrest.Icouldn’twaittoreturnhome.Onthecountryroad,withmycamerabagcontainingmyequipmentandaphonebookonmyback,Irodemymotorbikesomerrilythatallthetirednessdisappearedinstantly.Suddenly,abigrockhitmefromnowhere.AllIknewwasIwasnolongeronmymotorbike.Iwasthrownawayfrommybikeandhittheroad.BeforeIlostconsciousness,Isawallmythingsscattered(分散的),myhelmet(头盔)lyingatadistance.Hours,maybedayslater,Iopenedmyeyes.IrealizedIwasonahospitalbedandlaterlearntthatIhadbeenshiftedtothewardafter7daysintheICU.Thecrashwassoseverethatmyheadhadbeeninjuredseriously,leadingtootherterribleconditions.AlthoughIsurvived,therewereaseriesofsurgeriesneededbeforeIcouldfullyrecover—areconstructionoftheknees,mybrokenrightwristtobefixedandanoperationonmynose.IhadnorelativesinDelhiasIlivedalone.Aftermyaccident,somewarm-heartedstrangersdonatedbloodandresourcestohelpmesurvive,whichmademereallytouched.ButeverytimeItriedtopiecetogetherthathorribleTuesday,Ifeltlikethereremainedsomemissingpuzzles.Whodiscoveredandsavedme?HowwasIsenttothehospital?WherecanIfindmyhero?SuchquestionsbotheredmeuntilonedayAmy,whowasthefirsttolearnofmyaccidentcametoseemewhenvisitswereallowed.注意:续写词数应为150左右。Intheward,shetoldmewhathappened.Idialedthecouple’snumberimmediately,hopingtothanktheminperson.【原文大意】本文以事件为线索展开,讲述了作者在德里拍摄完照片回家的路上遭遇意外,失去意识,醒来后发现自己正在医院接受治疗,作者因得到陌生人的帮助而深受感动。作者想知道出事那天是谁发现了他,把他送到医院。这个问题一直困扰着作者,直到艾米来看望他。【写作指导】1.续写第一段:由首句内容“在病房里,她告诉我发生的事情。”可知,第一段可描写作者从艾米口中得知自己被救助的经过。2.续写第二段:由首句内容“我立刻拨通了这对夫妇的电话,希望当面感谢他们。”可知,第二段可描写作者对救助他的夫妇进行感谢并意外找回丢失的胶片,作者为德里人民的善良而感动。【参考范文】In__the__ward,__she__told__me__what__happened.Acoupleweredrivingbywhenspottingmelyingonthecountryroadunconscious,coveredinblood(现在分词和过去分词短语作宾补).Withouthesitation,theycalledanambulanceatonceandaccompaniedmeallthewaytothehospital.TheyalsomanagedtogetintouchwithAmywhosenumberwasonthetopofmyphonebook(定语从句).SeeingAmyarrived(现在分词短语作状语),thecoupleleftbeforefurthercommunication.Thequestionsweighingonmymind(现在分词短语作定语)wereanswered.ThenAmyshowedmetheirnumber.I__dialed__the__couple’s__number__immediately,__hoping__to__thank__them__in__person.Theyarrivedsoon.BeforeIcouldutteranywordsofgratitude,theyhandedmesomephotos,“Wefoundarolloffilmatthesceneandhaditdevelopedforyou.”Intears,Ithankedthemforeverythingthey’ddone.Theypattedmyback,sayingitwastheleasttheycoulddo(现在分词作状语;省略关系词的定语从句)whenalifehadtobesaved.ThatTuesdaybecameadatelineofmylifeandIfullyfeltthekindnessofDelhi.Writing2家庭亲情阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2023·潍坊高三统考)Itwasanearlywintermorning.Joanwassleepingsoundlywhenthephoneranginthelivingroom.Sherolledoverandglancedattheclockonthewall—itwasalreadynineo’clock.Everyweekendmorning,hermotherhadtoworkpart-timeinthecafe.AlthoughJoanwasstillsleepy,sheknewshehadtogetup.Afterall,shedidn’texpectherbrotherMike,whowassleepinglikealog,tohearthephone.Shequietlywentovertothelivingroom.Whenshepickedupthereceiver,ontheotherendcamethewarmheartedgreetings,“Goodmorning,mydear!”Recognizingthevoicefromherfather,Joanwasimmediatelysurroundedbyasenseofjoyandthesleepinesssweptaway.Joan’sfatherwasaseaman,whorarelycameback.Workingontheseawasreallyhard.Borninanotrichfamily,JoanandMikefeltthestressoflifebuttheywerehappytoenjoythefamilyatmosphere.Atschool,theywerestraight-Astudentsthroughouttheacademiccareerandactivelyinvolvedinschoolactivities.Theybecametheprideoftheschoolandtheenvyofthestudents.“Goodmorning,Dad.What’sup?”Joansaidinaneasytone.“Ihavebeenverynicerecently,mybaby.Todayisyourmother’sbirthday,andIhaveorderedheracakeonlineanditshouldcometothehouseinanhourandahalf.Doremembertotakethecake.”Hearingherfather’swords,Joanfeltalittleashamed.HowshecouldforgetMum’sbirthday!Shetookaglanceatthedirtyclothespiledonthesofaandtheoilyfloorthathadn’tbeenmopped(用拖把擦)forafewdays—Therewastwohoursbeforehermothercameback.ShecalculatedtheyhadenoughtimetoprepareasurpriseforMum.Thinkingofthis,shefeltfullofexcitement.“Well,Dad,nowI’mgoingtowakeMikeup.WewillgiveMumasurprise!”JoanhungupthephonewithDad,andhurriedlywenttoMike’sroomtoshareherBigCleaningplanwithhim.AfterlisteningtoJoan,Mikereadilyacceptedheridea.注意:续写词数应为150左右。TheBigCleaningplanbegan.Withthecakeplacedonthetable,Mumcamein.【原文大意】Joan还在睡懒觉,一通电话吵醒了她。Joan的爸爸在电话里告诉Joan:今天是Joan妈妈的生日,Joan为忘记妈妈的生日而感到羞愧。她看着凌乱的房间,决定叫醒哥哥,在妈妈下班之前为妈妈准备一个惊喜。哥哥欣然答应了她……【写作指导】1.续写第一段:根据本段提示句可知,本段应就大扫除进行描写,而且还可以描写蛋糕如期送到,打扫任务按时完成,也可适当加入Joan和Mike对做家务的感悟。2.续写第二段:根据本段提示句可知,本段可以写妈妈进家后看到的景象,妈妈看到这些景象时的反应,孩子们对妈妈的祝福,体现其乐融融的氛围。可利用对话推动故事的发展,并利用一些形容词、副词来表达感受。【参考范文】The__Big__Cleaning__plan__began.Joancollectedtheclothesfromthesofaandthenputtheminthewaterofabasin.Afterpouringinsomewashingliquids,shebegantowashthembyhand.Realizingtheclotheswerecleanenough(现在分词短语作状语),Joangentlysqueezedwateroutandhungthemuptodry.Meanwhile,Mikewasbusymoppingthefloorbackandforthwithallhiss
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