考研英语（写作）模拟试卷7

考研英语（写作）模拟试卷7

一、小作文（本题共2题，每题7.0分，共2分。）

1、Yourdormitoryatthecollegeisneighboringaverybusysnackstreet.Youare

alwayswokenupintheearlyhoursbyallkindsofloudnoisesoutsideanditsmellsbad

wheneverthewindowsareopen.Yousufferalotfromlackingsleepanduncomfortable

breathing.WritealettertotheAccommodationOfficeratthecollege.1.Youshould

writeabout100words.2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use"Zhang

Wei"instead.3.Donotwritetheaddress.

标准答案：DearSirorMadam,Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionconcerning

thepresentaccommodation.Theroom1liveinisoverwhelminglynoisyandunpleasantly

smelly.Allmydissatisfactionisattributedtothesnackstreetdirectlyoutsidemy

dormitory.Foronething,variousnoisesinthestreetarealwaysextremelypiercingfrom

earlymorningtillmidnight.Foranother,unspeakablesmellsoftailgases,fuelsandrotten

foodsmakemesickfrequendy.Tohandlethistoughsituation,Ihopeourschoolcan

negotiatewiththesnackstreetforanidealsolution.Moreover,Iwouldbethankfulifable

tomovetoanotherdormitoryimmediately,preferablyfarawayfromthesnackstreet.

Yourssincerely,ZhangWei

知识点解析：投诉信主要用于利益受损或者生活受扰时，旨在表达作者的不满和

抗议；但投诉和抱怨只是途径，最终目的是解决问题或补偿损失。因此考生在写投

诉信的时候，除了说明发诉对象、投诉原因以及所受影响外，还需要提出建议或者

督促对方采取措施，以便解决问题。如此一来，投诉信才能真正发挥效用。本文中

的投诉对象、原因及影响在指令要求中均已说明，考生应结合这些信息提出自己的

建议和解决方案。虽然是投诉信，但也要做到叙述客观，语气礼貌。第一段：表

明目的，提出投诉。首句点明写信目的——投诉住宿问题，并详述问题表现在哪些

方面。第二段：充分延展，阐明缘由。先揭示问题的根源一紧邻的餐饮街；再

根据指令要求，从噪音和气味两方面论述自己受其困扰。第三段：提出建议，表

明愿望。针对当前问题，提出个人建议；同时表明自己希望更换宿舍的愿望。

2、Writeanoticeinabout100wordsfbrthelibrarytoinformthereadersthatifllclose

duringtheSpringFestival.I.Youshouldwriteabout100words.2.Donotsignyourown

nameattheendoftheletter.3.Donotwritetheaddress.

标准答案：NoticeToprovidereaderswithbetterserviceandgivefullplaytothesocial

servicefunctionofthelibrary,weplantocloseitandupgradeitsbibliographicsearch

andmanagementsystemduringtheSpringFestival.Becauseofthis,alltheservices一

cardhandling,reading,lendingandthelike—willbesuspendedwithinthisperiodand

book-returndeadlinewillbepostponedaccordingly.Butreaderscanstillvisittheofficial

websiteforinquiryonaccountthattheelectronicdatabasewillnotbeaffectedbythe

upgradeprogram.ThelibrarywillopenatregularhoursrightaftertheSpringFestival.

Wcapologizefortheinconveniencethismaycause.XXXLibraryDee.25,2015

知识点解析：本篇为通知类应用文，考生需明白，通知本质上也是信函，属于一

封公开信，考生可以按照信函的行文结构去写，但是要注意通知类应用文的特殊格

式（即标题和落款）。就本篇闭馆通知而言，考生应给出闭馆原因、开馆时间及相关

服务调整或变动情况的详细说明。建议采用一段式结构，语气要正式，语言应简洁

得体，避免使用太过华丽的词藻。写作中可依如下思路行文：首先，开门见山，

点出通知的主题——图书馆闭馆，并说明闭馆的原因。其次，详细介绍图书馆闭

馆期间各项业务调整情况。最后，告知开馆时间并表示歉意。

二、大作文（本题共3题，每题分，共3分。）

3、Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,you

should1.describethedrawingbriefly,2.interpretitsintendedmeaning,and3.giveyour

comments.YoushouldwriteneatlyontheANSWERSHEET.(20points)

过不去就成了植!

标准答案：Intheabovepicture,amanencountersadoorsymbolizingabarrierwhile

movingforward.Hereisoneeye-catchingsentencereading:theso-calledbarrierwill

becomeanopeneddoorincaseyoucouldconquerit;otherwiseitstillisabarrier.This

sentencegivesafreshdefinitionofbarriersinlife,adefinitionsubtlyemphasizingthe

decisiveroleanindividualplaysinovercomingbarriers.It'sanormalthingthatvarious

difficultiesorbarrierswillariseinourdailylife.Becausenothingcouldgosmoothly

forever,thebarrierexistsobjectivelynomatterwhoweareandwhatwedo.However,it

isactuallya"double-edgedsword"—eithertheresistanceortheimpetus.Thekeyishow

tocomprehendandutilizeit.Ontheonehand,ifwe'renotconfidentandbraveenough

whenrunningintoanybarriers,wewouldquestionourselves,evenprobablygivingup

ourdreamswithvariousexcuses.Inconsequence,we'reinhibitedfrommovingon.On

theotherhand,onconditionthatwetaketheinitiativeinconqueringit,andthen

switchingittothedrivingforce,thebarrierisnotfearful,evengrowingapowerful

impetus.Thornsnecessarilyexistonthewaytosuccess.Onlythosewhocouldchange

thebarrierintoeffectiveimpetushaveopportunitiestosucceed.Therefore,whenwcarc

indifficulties,weshouldceaseconcentratingupondifficultiesthemselvesbutfocusupon

solutionsinstead.

知识点解析：暂无解析

4、Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,you

should1.describethedrawingbriefly,2.intei-pretitsintendedmeaning,and3.giveyour

ontheANSWERSHEET.(20points)

标准答案：Thispicturelivelydepictsascene:amanstandshelplesslyinacomerwitha

paintbrushinhisrighthandandapaintbucketbesidehisleftfoot.Sadly,hefound

himselfunabletoretreatoutwhencompletingthepaintworksoon.Thisisjustbecause

hehaschosenawrongdirectionattheverybeginning.Howobtuseheis!Asisimpliedin

thispicture,acorrectdirectionisproventobethepreconditionfbrsuccess.Lifeisabout

choosing;thereforeit'sreallyvitaltochooseacorrectdirectionbeforeactions.Ifheading

inthewrongdirectionandnotbeingawareofit,wemayfindthatwhatwehavedoneis

ofnoavailandtotallywrong.Takethemaninthepictureasanexample;thelargerarea

hepaints,thefartherhedepartsfromsuccess.Conversely,hadhetakenawisedirection

beforepainting,iheoutcomewouldbecompletelydifferentnow.Withnecessary

investigationsandcorrespondingknowledgepriortoactions,we'llchoosetheright

directionandmakeunremittingeffortstowardsourgoals-thus,successbecomesonlya

matteroftime.Inconclusion,weshoulddeeplyrealizethathowvitalthecorrect

directionis,especiallywhenwcarcabouttotakeactions.

知识点解析：暂无解析

5、Studythefollowingpictureandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould:1.describethe

picture,interpretitsmeaning;2.presentspecifiedexample;3.concludetheessaywith

yourpersonalopinion.Youshouldwrite160-200wordsneatlyontheANSWERSHEET.

信仰就像一良灯势,4

黑It中的鸟只指明方向。

标准答案：Asissymbolicallyshowninthepicture,itisalighthousethatguidesaship

outofdarkness,inwhich,obviously,thelighthouseisasymboloffaithwhiletheship

representslife.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatfaithistolifewhatalighthouseistoaship.

Lifeisalongbutone-directionalroad.Onlywhenthefaithisdefined,willpeopleacquire

thedrivingforce,haveaclearobjectiveandbuildabetterfuture.Herearctwotypical

examples.