上海高三一模英语作文读后续写

静安区一模

当下，年轻人消费日益注重“情绪价值”，推动了以汉服、盲盒、剧场体验等为代表的“情

绪经济(emotioneconomy)”的兴起。学校英语报现举办以“我看情绪经济”为主题的征文活

动，请你以学生李华的身份投稿，分享你对这一现象的理解与思考。请确保你的稿件包含

以下内容：

1)简述对此现象的理解；

2)结合具体事例，谈谈你对此现象的看法。

(注：文中不得出现考生姓名、学校等真实个人信息。)

【答案】

Inrecentyears,the“emotioneconomy''hasgainedpopularityamongyoungconsumerswho

seekemotionalsatisfactionthroughpurchases,suchasHanfu,blindboxes,andtheaterexperiences.

Thistrendreflectsashiftfrommaterialneedstoemotionalandculturalfulfillment.

Forinstance,buyingHanfuisno(justaboutwearing(radilionalclothingbutalsoabout

connectingwithculturalheritageandexpressingidentity.Whilethisboostsculturalindustriesand

personalhappiness,itmayalsolead(oimpulsivespendingorover-commercialization.Therefore,it

isimportantforyoungpeopletobalanceemotionaldesireswithrationalconsumption,ensuringthat

theemotioneconomyenricheslifewithoutcausingfinancialstrainorwaste.

虹口区一•模

假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。你的外国笔友Alex正在准备一场以“IsAlahelpfulstudy

partnerorasourceofdistraction?n为主题的辩论赛。他需要收集世界各地同龄人的看法，并

向你征求意见。请给他写•封电子邮件，内容必须包拈：

(1)你认为AI是学习的好伙伴还是危险的干扰：

(2)结合自身经历阐述你的理由。

【答案】DearAlex,

I'mgladtosharemyviewsonwhetherAIisahelpfulstudypartnerorasourceofdistraction.

Inmyopinion,AIisavaluablestudycompanionwhenusedproperly.

Lastsemester,IstruggledwithEnglishwriting.Grammarmistakesandpoorlogicalflow

alwaysfruslraiedme.ThenIslarlcdusinganAItool.Ilnotonlypoiniedoutmygranmialiualerrors

butalsosuggestedmorepreciseexpressionsandcoherentstructures.Formathproblems,AI

explainedcomplexformulasstepbystep,helpingmegraspdifficultconceptsthatIcouldn't

understandfromtextbooksalone.

However,AIcanbedistractingifwerelyonitblindly.SomeclassmatesuseAItodo

homeworkdirectlyinsteadofthinkingindependently,whichhinderstheirlearning.Butaslongas

we(realAIasahelperratherthanareplacement,itcangreatlyboostourstudyefficiency.

Hopemyexperiencehelpswithyourdebate!

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Yourssincerely,

LiHua

崇明区一模

假设你是中华中学的高三学生张晶，你校英文报正在开展“AIandOurLife”的主题征文活动。

你有意参加，你的征文内容须包括：

1.具体描述一次你使用AI的经历和感受；

2.谈谈你对高中学生使用AI的看法和建议。

注：文中不得透露你的真实信息。

【答案】Asaseniorstudent,IonceusedanAllearningtoolforachallengingphysicsproblem.

Insteadofsimplyprovidinganswers,itguidedmethroughdetailedexplanationsandpractical

examples.Iwasimpressed?yitsround-the-clockavailabilityandpatience,whichtransformedmy

frustrationintoaproductivelearningexperience.

IbelieveAIofferssignificantbenefitstohighschoolstudentswhenusedappropriately.Itcan

actasapersonalizedtutor,makingcomplextopicseasiertograsp.However,excessivereliance

mayundermineourabilitytothinkindependently.Therefore,IsuggesttreatingAIasa

supplementarytoolratherthanashortcut.Alwaysattemptproblemsonyourownbeforeturningto

AIforverificationorfurtherinsight.Ultimately,trueunderstandingstemsfromourownefforts-

AIshouldonlyassist,notreplacethelearningprocess.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

黄浦区一模

假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你的英语老师Maggie正在向同学们征求春考后到寒假前

的英语课安排的意见。写一封邮件给她，邮件内容须包括（邮件内请不要出现真实的校名和

人名）：

（1）你对这段时间内英语课安排的2个具体建议（如课时数量、授课内容等）；

（2）你的理由。

DearMaggie.

I'mLiMing,aSenior3student.I'mwritingtosharemysuggestionsforourEnglishclasses

betweenthespringexamandthewinterholiday.

First,!suggestwchavetwoclassesaweekinsteadofmore.Afterthespringexam,weneed

timetorelaxandprepareforthecollegeentranceexam,sofewerclassescanreduceour

stress.Second,Ihopetheclassescanfocusonpracticalskillslikespeakingandwriting.Wcusually

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spendmuchtimeonexamssoit'sagoodchancetoimproveskillsthatareusefulforourfuture

study

1thinkthesesuggestionsarcreasonablebecausetheycanhelpusbalancerestandstudy,

believewewillbenefitalotfromsucharrangements.Thankyouforconsideringmyideas.I'm

lookingforwardtoyourreply.

松江区

假设你是明启中学高三学生，你校英文报正在举办主题为FulurcLifc的征文活动，请大家想

象10年后社会生活某方面(如交通出行、教有教学、家居生活等)的变化，你对此很感兴

趣，请撰写征文，你需要在文中：

(1)选择一个方面，简述其变化；

(2)谈谈你如何看待这种变化。

FutureLife:SmartHomesin2034

Intenyears,Ibelieveourhomeswillbecomemuchsmarter,transformingdailylife.Smart

devices,whicharcnowlimitedtophonesandspeakers,willcontroleverythingfromlightingto

cooking.Forexample,afridgethatcanremindustobuymilkoranAIassistantthatadjustsroom

temperaturebasedontheweatherwillmakelifemoreconvenient.What'smore,virtualreality(VR)

willallowusto“visit“friendsorattendmeetingsasifwewerephysicallypresent,eveniftheylive

faraway.

Ithinkthischangewillgreatlyimproveourqualityoflife.Smarthomeswillsavetimeand

energy,whichisimportantforbusypeople.However,Ialsoworrythatover-relianceontechnology

mightreduceface-to-facecommunication,whichisessentialforbuildingrelationships.

Overall,whilesmarthomesoffermanybenefits,weshouldusethemwiselytobalance

convenienceandhumanconnection.

徐汇区

有位著名心理学家曾说：定义我们的不是想法，而是行动。(Whatdefinesusisnotourthoughts,

butouractions.)请回顾你面临某个艰难抉择的时刻，写一篇个人叙事短文，阐述你在那一

刻的行动(而非意图)如何深化了你对自我的认知，内容须包括：

(1)谈谈你对这句话的理解：

(2)描述你曾经面临的某个艰难抉择的时刻；

(3)阐述那一刻的行动如何深化你对自我的认知。

【答案】

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ActionsDefineWhoWeAre

Asthepsychologistputit.Whatdefinesusisnotourthoughts,butouractions.1usedto

thinkgoodintentionswereenough,butatoughchoicechangedmymindcompletely.

Lastterm,Ifoundawalletwith50()yuanandanIDcardonmywayhome.Temptedtokeep

themoneyformynewbook.Ihesitatedforanhour.Finally,Ichosetocontacttheownerand

returnit.

ThisacttaughtmethatI'mnotjustsomeonewithkindthoughts,butapersonwhodaresto

(urnintegrityintoaction.Itdeepenedmyself-awareness:(ruecharacterliesinactingonprinciples,

notjusthavingthem.MyactionprovedIcouldresisttemptationandstayhonest.

宝山区一模

作为一名高中生，你打算参加学校新一届学生会主席的竞聘，在面试现场你抽到的英语面试

题目是：Opportunitiesfavorthepreparedmind.请即兴准备一篇演讲稿，你的文章必须包括：

I.简单解释•下你是如何理解这句话的：

2.结合应聘的岗位和面试题目，谈谈应聘该岗位你有哪些优势，并给出理由。

(文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称)

【答案】Dearjudges,

^Opportunitiesfavorthepreparedmind."meanschancesonlycometothosewho'vc

equippedthemselveswell.It'snotaboutwaitingpassively,butpolishingabilitiestograbthe

momentwhenitarrives.

Asacandidatefbrpresident,IbelieveIfitthisideaperfectly.Foronething,I'veledclass

eventplanningfortwoyears.Organizingcharitysalesandsportsmeetingstaughtmeto

coordinateteamsandsolveproblemsquickly.Foranother,I'vepracticedpublicspeakingand

communicationskillsbyhostingschoolbroadcasts,whichhelpsmelistentotheneedsofmypeers

andconveyideasclearly.Thesepreparationsarenotonlyexperiences,butalsotoolstoservethe

studentbodybetter.

Ifgiventhechance,Illturnthispreparednessintoactionstomakeourcampuslifemore

vibrant.Thankyou!

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杨浦区一模

请根据所给图片，完成一篇结构完整的英语短文。内容需包括:

1.描述图片中的主要内容；

2.阐称它给你带来的启示与思考。

哎，我失败了！怎

么还差那么多

哇1

我已经完成这么多啦〜

【答案】Theimagepresentstwocontrastingself-perceptionsofprogress.Ontheleft,aperson

staresdejectedlyataglass,lamenting,“Ifailed!There'sstillsomuchtogo,“seeingonlythe

emptyupperhalf.Ontheright,anotherpersonlooksatthesameglasscheerfully,exclaiming,

44Wow!Tvealreadycomethisfar/'focusingonthefilledlowerportion.

Thispowerfulvisualmetaphorhighlightsthatourperspectiveshapesourreality.Theexact

samesituation—ahalf-filledglass—canbeasourceofdiscouragementormotivation,

dependingsolelyonwherewechoosetofocus.Itteachesmethatinthefaceofanychallenge,

nurturingamindsetofgratitudeforprogressmade,ratherthanfixationontheremainingdistance,

iscrucialforresilienceandsustainedeffort.IJltimately,successisnotjustabouttheobjective

amountachieved,butaboutthehopefullensthroughwhichweviewourjourney.

奉贤区一模

今年，部分学校将试行中小学“春秋假”，即缩减原本的寒暑假期，并在每年春季和秋季两

个学期为学生增设相应的短假期。假设你是明启中学的李明，你校正针对这一方案向全体师

生征集意见与建议，请你给学生会写一封邮件表达你的看法和建议。内容须包括：

1.你是否支持设立春秋假：

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2.你的理由。

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearStudents'Union,

I'mLiMingfromGrade10,andIfullysupporttheintroductionofspringandautumnholidays

inourschoolcalendar.

Whilesummerandwinterbreaksarelong,theyoftenleadtolearninglossandirregular

routines.Shorter,morefrequentbreaks—likeaweekinAprilandOctober—couldhelpstudents

rechargewithoutfallingbehind.These''seasonalholidays“alsooffergreatchancestoconnectwith

natureduringmildweather,reducingstressandimprovingmentalhealth.Plus,familiescouldplan

meaningfulshorttripsthataremoreaffordableandlesscrowded(hanpeak-season(ravel.

Thatsaid,Isuggesttheseholidaysnotfallrightbeforeexamsandthatteachersavoidassigning

heavyhomeworkduringthem,sostudentscantrulyrest.

Thankyouforconsideringmyopinion!

Bestregards,

LiMing

浦东新区一模

假设你是明启中学的学生王华，你的英国好友Thomas将作为交换生到你校学习，他对“生

涯规划”系列活动颇有兴趣，想参加其中一个论坛(forum)。请你给他写一封邮件，从下面

海报中推荐一个论坛并谈谈推荐理由。

Planningyourfuture

时间论坛主题主讲人

Jan.10探索职业兴趣生涯导师

13:00-15:00DiscovercareerinterestsCareertutor

Jan.l1高效管理时间学生代表

9:00-11:00ManagetimeeffectivelyStudentrepresentative

Jan.l1建立友好关系心理老师

13:()0-15:00BuildgoodrelationshipsPsychologyteacher

（文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称）

【答案】DearThomas,

Iwasthrilledtohearaboutyourinterestinour“PlanningYourFuture“series!Giventhat

you'llsoonbeadjustingtolifeandstudiesatMingqiHighSchool,I'despeciallyrecommendthe

fonimon“BuildGoodRelationships”.

Whileallthetopicsarevaluable,buildingconnectionsistrulythefoundationforasuccessful

andenjoyableexchangeexperience.Thisforum,ledbyourapproachablepsychologyteacher,will

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providepracticalstrategiesformakingfriends,understandingculturalnuancesincommunication,

andseekingsupportwhenneeded.Startingyourjoumeywithstronginterpersonalskillswillnot

onlycaseyourtransitionhutalsoenrichyourlearninginallotherareas,includingtime

managementandcareerexplorationlateron.

Itwouldbeagreatfirststeptofeelathomehere.Letmeknowifyou'dlikemetojoinyou!I

lookforwardtoyourarrival.

Bestregards,

WangHua

金山区一模

近年来，上海农村在发展中出现了新变化一一比如新建了乡村图书馆、引入了特色农业旅游

项目。有人觉得这些变化让生活更便利，也有人担心会淡化本土乡村特色。请结合你的观察

和生活实际，谈谈你的看法。

L简述家乡的1一2个具体变化；

2.谈谈你对此的观点并阐明理由。

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

Inrecentyears,Shanghai'sruralregionshaveundergonestrikingmetamoiphoses.Acasein

pointisthereplacementofdilapidatedvillagereadingnookswithwell-equippedlibrariesstocked

withdigitalarchivesandhostingregularlileraryworkshopsalongsidethelaunchofdistinctive

agritourisminitiatives,suchasricc-paddyhoincstaysandhands-onfarmingexperiences.

Theseinnovationsyieldsubstantialmerits:thelibrarieshaveenrichedlocals*spirituallivesby

expandingaccesstoknowledge,whileagritourismhasinvigoratedruraleconomies,generating

employmentandelevatingincomes.Nonetheless,concernslingerthatthismodernizationmay

erodeindigenousruralidentities:theonce-tranquilpastoralambiance,forinstance,risksbeing

overshadowedbythehustleoftouristcrowds.

Frommyperspective,progressandpreservationarenotmutuallyexclusive.Byinfusing

agritourismwithlocalculturalessencessuchasshowcasingtraditionalfanningtechniquesand

constructinglibrariesinharmonywithruralarchitecturalaesthetics,wecanembracethe

conveniencesofmodernizationwhilesafeguardingtheuniqueallureofShanghai'scountryside.

长宁区一模

假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，你校学生会的''高中印记”短视频评选活动正在征集作品,

要求每位同学提交•个记录自己高中校园生活中“最有意义片段”的短视频，并为其撰写英

文介绍。请你完成这篇介绍，内容必须包括：

(1)具体描述短视频中的片段；

(2)简要说明你认为这一片段“最有意义”的理由。

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【答案】

ThevideocapturesamemorablemomentfromourschooKsannualsportsmeet.Intheclip,

ourclass,whichwasn'tknownfbrbeingathletic,istakingpartintherelayrace.Whenitwasmy

turntoreceivethebatonandrun,Istumbledbadlyandalmostfellover.However.Iquickly

regainedmybalanceandsprintedforwardasfastasIcould.Whatreallystandsoutinthissceneis

thatmyclassmates,whowerewatchingeagerly,didn'tblamemeforthenear-falLInstead,they

chccrcdevenlouder,shoutingwordsofencouragementlike“Comeon,youcandoit!”

ThereasonIfindthismomentthemostmeaningfulisthatittrulydemonstrateswhatteam

spiritisallabout.Whatwelearnfromthisexperienceisthatteamworkisn'tjustaboutwinning

racesorachievingfirstplace;it'saboutsupportingeachotherthroughthickandthin,nomatter

whathappens.

普陀区一模

假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，学校英文杂志社正在当办“NewYear,NewMe”主题征文

活动，邀请同学们分享自己的新年愿望与成长规划。你发现自己近半年存在一些健康方面的

问题，希望改变生活习惯做出调整。请你投稿一篇短文，内容必须包括：

(1)描述你目前面临的健康问题(如睡眠不足、缺乏运动、用眼过度等)；

(2)分析该问题产生的主要原因；

(3)你的新年决心及期待的效果。

【答案】AsaSeniorThreestudentatMingqiHighSchool,I'mwritingtosharemyNewYear's

resolutions,whichareallaboutfixingmyhealthissues.

Lately,I,vebeensufferingfromsleepdeprivationandeyestrain.Everyday,pilesofhomework

andendlessreviewtaskskeepmeuptillmidnight,leavingmetiredinclass.Also,Ispendhours

staringatmyphoneandlaptopwithoutbreaks,makingmyeyessoreallthetime.Worsestill,Ihave

notimeforexerciseduetomytightstudyschedule.

Forabetternewyear,Iresolvetomanagemytimewisely,finishinghomeworkefficientlyto

sleepatleasteighthoursdaily.I'llalsotakea1O-minutebreakeveryhourwhenstudyinganddo20

minutesofjoggingeveiyevening.

Ihopethesechangeswillmakemehealthierandmoreenergeticioface(hecollegeentrance

exam.

闽行区一模

假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，你即将参加学校组织的十八岁成人仪式。请给父母写一封

信，表达你的感恩之情，内容需包括：

1.在你成长过程中，父母对你影响最深的一件事；

2.对未来的展望或承诺。

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【？孑案】DearMomandDad,

AsIstandonthethresholdofadulthood,I'mwritingtoexpressmydeepestgratitudefor

everythingyouhavegivenme.Lookingback,it'syourquiet,consistentsupportthathasshaped

memost.Istillrememberhow,beforeeveryimportantexam,Momwouldpreparemyfavorite

mealsandDadwouldsimplypatmyshoulder—neverpr