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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。KevinhasalwaysadoredHalloween.Thisyear,asalways,he’dcollectedeverythingheneededforhis“Halloweenmasterpiece.”Oneevening,hetookastrolldowntheblock,noticinghoweveryonehaddecoratedtheirhouseswithglowingpumpkinsandghosts.Hewaspracticallyglowingwithexcitement.Butashewalked,somethingthatcaughthiseyedimmedhissmile.Onehousestooddarkandempty.Nopumpkins.Nocobwebs.Justabare,lonelyporch(门廊).ItwasMrs.Kimbly’shouse.Hetoldmeaboutitwhenhegothome.“Mom,Mrs.Kimbly’shousedoesn’thaveanydecorations.Ithinksheneedshelp.”Itoldhimmaybeshedidn’twanttodecoratethisyear,butKevinwascertain.“Halloweenissupposedtobefun.Sheshouldn’thavetospenditfeelingbad.”ThatwasmyKevin.Hisheartwasasbigastheworld.AfterIsaiditwasokaytocheckonher,hegatheredhisdecorations,evenhisfavoritecarvedpumpkin,andwenttoherhouse.Hedecoratedherfrontporchandwassuperexciteduntilheheardheryellbehindhim.“Whatareyoudoinghere?”sheasked.“I…Ijustwantedtodecorateyourhouse,”hestammered.“Idon’tneedanydecorations!”sheshoutedandremovedthedecorations.“Nowgoaway!”WhenKevinreturnedhomethatnight,helookedcompletelydefeated.HetoldmehowunhappyMrs.Kimblylooked.“Maybeshe’sreallylonely,honey,”Isaidgently.“Noteveryonefeelshappyduringtheholidays.”OnHalloweennight,hedressedupasavampirebutlookedlessexcitedthanusual.Aswemadeourwaydownthestreet,hecouldn’tstopglancingtowardMrs.Kimbly’shouse.Itwasstilldarkandempty,andIknewhewasworriedtheotherkidswouldseeitasatargetfortricks.“Mom,I’mgoingtostaythere,”hesaidsuddenly.“Idon’twantanyonetomesswithherhouse.”Andthat’sjustwhathedid.Hetookhiscandybagandsatdownonherporchsteps.Wheneverkidscameupexpectingcandy,he’dgiveoutsomeofhisown.Hiscandiesdwindledquickly,buthestayedput,determinedtoprotectherhome.注意：(1)续写词数应为150左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Alittlewhilelater,thedoorcreakedopen,andMrs.Kimblysteppedout.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Thankyou,Kevin,”shewhispered.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意凯文一直热爱万圣节，今年他像往常一样准备好一切要打造“万圣节杰作”。他看到街区大家都精心装饰房屋，却发现金布利夫人的房子漆黑空荡，没有任何装饰。凯文回家后向妈妈表示想帮助金布利夫人装饰房子，妈妈同意后，他带着自己的装饰品，包括最爱的雕刻南瓜去了她家。然而，金布利夫人却冲他大喊，让他离开并拆掉了装饰，凯文十分沮丧。万圣节当晚，凯文扮成吸血鬼出门，却一直担心金布利夫人的房子被其他孩子恶作剧，于是决定留在她家门口守护，还把自己的糖果分给前来要糖的孩子。故事山分析开端：凯文热爱万圣节，看到街区的装饰后发现金布利夫人的房子没有装饰，决定帮助她。发展：凯文去给金布利夫人装饰房子，却遭到她的拒绝和驱赶，凯文心情低落。高潮：万圣节当晚，凯文守护在金布利夫人的房子前，防止房子被破坏，此时金布利夫人的反应以及事情如何发展成为故事高潮。结局（待续写）：金布利夫人与凯文之间的互动有新的变化，可能会化解之前的矛盾，两人关系变得融洽，让故事有一个温暖的结局。伏笔以及在续写中的回应凯文热爱万圣节并精心准备：在后续情节中，凯文对万圣节的热情会影响他守护金布利夫人房子的行为，也可能在与金布利夫人的交流中体现，比如向她介绍万圣节的乐趣。金布利夫人拒绝凯文的装饰并赶走他：续写中，金布利夫人会对自己之前的行为有所解释或道歉，与凯文的关系发生转变。妈妈说金布利夫人可能很孤独：这为金布利夫人的行为和后续两人的和解埋下伏笔，金布利夫人可能因为孤独才拒绝装饰，而凯文的守护让她感受到温暖，从而打开心扉。凯文担心金布利夫人的房子被恶作剧，决定守护：这是故事的关键情节，金布利夫人看到凯文的守护后，会被他的善良打动，做出积极的回应。凯文把自己的糖果分给要糖的孩子：体现了凯文的善良，金布利夫人可能会因为这一行为对凯文有新的认识，改变对他的态度。续写要点（两段）第一段：着重描写金布利夫人开门后的场景，她看到凯文后的表情、动作和反应，如惊讶、疑惑；凯文看到她后的表现，是紧张还是坦然；两人之间的对话，金布利夫人询问凯文为什么在这里，凯文真诚地表达自己的想法。第二段：围绕金布利夫人感谢凯文展开，描述她感谢时的神态、语气；她可能会解释自己之前的行为，比如说明自己孤独的处境，以及凯文的行为如何打动了她；最后两人可能会一起做些什么，如简单装饰房子，或者一起分享剩下的糖果，让故事有一个温馨的收尾。情感线起初，凯文对万圣节充满期待，看到金布利夫人房子的状况后，满心热忱想要帮忙。被金布利夫人拒绝驱赶后，他感到沮丧和失落。在万圣节当晚守护房子时，他的心情是担忧和坚定的。当金布利夫人开门出现，他会紧张又期待。听到金布利夫人的感谢，他会感到欣慰和开心，两人关系的转变让他体会到善良的力量，也让他更加珍惜这份人与人之间的温暖。故事线凯文热爱万圣节，准备打造“万圣节杰作”，发现金布利夫人的房子没有装饰，决定帮忙。凯文去给金布利夫人装饰房子，却被拒绝和驱赶，心情低落。万圣节当晚，凯文扮成吸血鬼出门，一直担心金布利夫人的房子被恶作剧。凯文决定留在金布利夫人的房子前守护，还把自己的糖果分给要糖的孩子。金布利夫人开门出现，与凯文交流，了解他守护的原因。金布利夫人感谢凯文，解释自己之前的行为，两人关系转变，一起度过一个特别的万圣节。主旨升华句ThroughKevin'sactofkindness,weseethatasimplegestureofcarecanbreakdownthewallsoflonelinessandtransformanunhappysituationintoaheartwarmingmomentofconnection.（通过凯文的善举，我们看到一个简单的关怀举动可以打破孤独的壁垒，将不愉快的局面转变为温暖人心的连接时刻。）Thisstoryteachesusthatevenwhenfacedwithrejection,perseveranceindoinggoodcanleadtounexpectedrewards,asKevin'sdeterminationtoprotectMrs.Kimbly'shouseultimatelymeltedherheart.（这个故事告诉我们，即使面临拒绝，坚持行善也能带来意想不到的回报，就像凯文守护金布利夫人房子的决心最终融化了她的心。）Kevin'sselflessactonHalloweennightnotonlyprotectedMrs.Kimbly'shousebutalsobecameabridgethatlinkedtwohearts,remindingusofthepowerofkindnesstobringpeopletogether.（凯文在万圣节当晚的无私行为不仅保护了金布利夫人的房子，还成为连接两颗心的桥梁，提醒我们善良将人们凝聚在一起的力量。）Intheend,theencounterbetweenKevinandMrs.Kimblyshowsthatunderstandingandempathycanovercomemisunderstandings,andthatalittlelovecangoalongwayinbrighteningsomeone'slife.（最后，凯文和金布利夫人的相遇表明理解和同理心可以克服误解，一点爱就能在照亮他人生活的道路上走得很远。）Thisheartwarmingtaleservesasareminderthatthetruespiritoftheholidaysliesnotinelaboratedecorationsortreats,butinthekindnessandcompassionweshowtoothers,justasKevindidforMrs.Kimbly.（这个温馨的故事提醒我们，节日的真正精神不在于精心的装饰或美食，而在于我们向他人展示的善良和同情，就像凯文对金布利夫人所做的那样。）写作示范一Alittlewhilelater,thedoorcreakedopen,andMrs.Kimblysteppedout.ShestaredatKevin,hereyeswidewithsurprise.“Whatareyoustilldoinghere,boy?”sheasked,hervoiceabitsofterthistime.Kevinstoodup,abitnervousbutdetermined.“Ididn'twantanyonetoplaytricksonyourhouse,Mrs.Kimbly.Halloweenshouldbefunforeveryone.”Mrs.Kimblywassilentforamoment,lookingatthefewcandiesleftinKevin'sbag.

“Thankyou,Kevin,”shewhispered.Hereyeswereglistening,andsheseemedtobeholdingbacktears.“I'vebeenfeelingsoalonethesedays.Ididn'tmeantoberudetoyoubefore.Yourkindnessreallytouchedme.”Then,shewentbackinsideandbroughtoutsomeolddecorations.“Let'sdecoratethehousetogether,shallwe?”shesuggestedwithafaintsmile.Kevin'sfacelitup,andtogethertheyworkedtomaketheporchcomealive.Asthenightwenton,theirlaughterfilledtheair,makingthisHalloweenatrulyspecialoneforbothofthem.写作示范二Alittlewhilelater,thedoorcreakedopen,andMrs.Kimblysteppedout.ShelookedatKevinsittingonthesteps,hisfaceamixtureofdeterminationandkindness.“You'vebeenhereallthistime?”sheasked,hertonefilledwithdisbelief.Kevinnodded,hiseyesmeetinghers.“Yes,ma'am.Ijustwantedtomakesureyourhousewasokay.”Mrs.Kimblyletoutasighandsatdownbesidehim.

“Thankyou,Kevin,”shewhispered.“Ilostmyhusbandlastyear,andIjustcouldn'tbringmyselftocelebrateHalloween.YourthoughtfulnessmademerealizeI'mnotalone.”Shethenpulledoutaboxofcookiesfrominside.“Imadetheseearlier.Wouldyoulikesome?”Kevingrinnedandtookone.Theysatthere,sharingcookiesandstories.Beforelong,otherneighborsjoinedthem,andtheonce-darkporchwasfilledwithlightandlaughter,turningalonelyHalloweenintoanightofcommunityandwarmth.【答案】Alittlewhilelater,thedoorcreakedopen,andMrs.Kimblysteppedout.“Kevin,whatareyoudoinghere?”sheasked,surprised.Kevingazedupather,thendownathisalmostemptycandybag.“Ijustdidn’twantanyonetomesswithyourhouse,Mrs.Kimbly