沪教版九年级上册英语Unit3家庭温情时刻写作课件（可编辑完整版）

Section3WritingWarm-upEnjoythevideo.Whatisthisvideoabout?FamilyFree-talkWhatdidyoudowithyourfamilyduringthesummerholiday?Howdidyoufeel?Ifelt....goouttoplaytakeatriptalkwithfamilycelebrateapartyPre-writingThink:Whatcanwewriteinthearticle?Pre-writingJimJim'sfamilymomentWho?wasfishing.Where?When?Whathappened?Howdidhefeel?Pre-writingAnUnforgettableMomentwithMyFamilyIhaveanunforgettablemomentwithmyfamily.Lastsummerafternoon,Iwentfishingwithmyfatherbythelake.Atfirst,Ifeltlittlehopeofcatchingfish.Iwaitedforalongtimewithoutanygain.Suddenlymyfishingrod(鱼竿)moved.Withmyfather’sencouragement,Ipulledabigbass(鲈鱼)outofthewater.Butthefishingseasonhadn’tstartedyet.Thoughnoonesawus,myfatheraskedmetosetthefishfree.Iwasupsetbutfollowedhisadvice.Iwassotouchedatthatmoment.Ifeltmyfather’squietanddeeplove.Thismomentisspecialbecauseitnotonlytaughtmetofollowrules,butalsoletsmeknowmyfamilywillalwaysguidemewhenImeetdifficulties.Iwillkeepthiswarmmemoryinmyheartforever.Groupwork:findoutthekeyinformation.When?Where?Who?What?Howfeel?Pre-writingwordsbankAnUnforgettableMomentwithMyfamilyTime/placepeopleactivitiesfeelingsWhen?/Where？Who?What?How?lastsummerafternoon、lastSundayevening、springholiday、rainyweekendbythelake/river、athome、onthemountain、onthestreetmyfather/mymother/mysister/mybrothergofishing,catchfish,havefamilydinner,sharestorieshope,happy,upset,warmclimbmountains,takephotosplayfamilygames、talkwithfamilytiredbutexcitedrelaxedandpleasedwriting1.审人称：人称以第______人称为主2.审时态：时态以_________________为主一一般过去时AnUnforgettableMomentwithMyFamily(家庭难忘时刻)Ihaveanunforgettablemomentwithmyfamily./Ihaveagooddaywithmyfamily.....who?when?where?what?Howdidyoufeel?ThemeaningofactivitieswritingAnUnforgettableMomentwithMyfamilyI

._____(时间),I

(活动)with_____(人物)_____(地点).Atfirst,Ifelt

(感受∶形容词）.I

（活动）.Withmy

(人物）’sencouragement,I

(做了....事情).Thoughnoonesawus,my

(人物)askedmeto________(活动).Iwas________(感受)butfollowed

(her/his)advice.Iwasso________(感受)atthatmoment.Ifeltmy

(人物)’s________(对我的关心).Thismomentisspecialbecauseitnotonlytaughtmetofollowrules,butalsoletmeknowmyfamilywillalwaysguidemewhenImeetdifficulties.Iwillkeepthiswarminmyheartforever.

3Post-writingSharewithus！AnUnforgettableMomentwithMyFamily____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iincludeddetailsaboutmymemorablefamilymoment.Iusedlinkingverbsandadjectives/nounstodescribehowIfeltIusedthewordsandexpressionsIlearntinthisunit.Iusedcorrectspelling,grammarandpunctuation.第四步检查和修改根据下面的清单检查并修改。4Self-assessmentHomeworkHavetodo必做:Finishyourp