八年级英语写作公开课

1、ALessonofWriting,假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。,Howtowriteacomposition.,认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息。,写作第一步,审,假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班内汇报。请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。,主题,字数,人称,体裁,提示要

2、点,补充信息,一般现在时,时态,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,YiKeshobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditbringsherpleasureandsuccess.,LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.,WuFanshobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFwor

3、kertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.,Mydreamistoworkatschool.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.,加,加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,YiKeshobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Writingbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestrav

4、ellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFanshobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.,Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesandd

5、reams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.,Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.,anicehead,anicetail,anicebody,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,英语写作时常用的过渡语:,表并列或递进：and,besides,bothand，notonlybutalso，whatsmore,表转折：but,yet,however,though，although表因果关系：because,so,therefore,asaresult表先后顺序：First,Second

6、,Third,Next,Then,Finally表时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,表列举说明：forexample,forinstance,suchas发表观点：inmyopinion,tomyunderstanding,frommypointofview,表总结陈词：ingeneral,allinall,inaword,generallyspeaking,Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.YiKeshobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawri

7、ter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFanshobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Ican

8、begoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.,also,Inthisway,Because,美,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.YiKeshobbyiswriting.Soshethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditalsobringsherpleasurea

9、ndsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Inthiswayhecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFanshobbyislookingafteranimals.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.,Shewantstobea

10、writer.,Shewantstobeasuccessfulwriterinthefuture,justlikeMoYan.,Hewantstobeaguide.,Heislookingforwardtotravellingabroadsohewantstobeaguideinforeigncountries.,HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.,Whenshegrowsup,shewantstobeaWWFworkertosavetheanimalsindangerandhelpanimalsliveinpeace.,适当运用名言或

11、俗语,Timeismoney.一寸光阴一寸金Timewaitsfornoman.岁月不待人Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事竟成Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧Itsnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老,SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrect,Goodgoodstudy,daydayup.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.WatchTVtoomuchisbadforyoureyes.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingt

12、oday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.,onceaweek,Watching,be,achieve,SkillTwoExpressindifferentways,Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.,WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.ItsimportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.,他们在海滩上听音乐。,ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.,她还小

13、，搬不动这么重的箱子。,ASheisveryyoung.Shecantcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecantcarrytheDSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,中考作文评分标准,第五档（很好）（25-21分）完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。第四档（好）（20-16分）完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档（一般）（15-11分）基本完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。第二档（较差）（10-6分）未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。第一档（差）（5-0分）未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。,Romeisnotbuiltin