高考英语书面表达

1、2003高考英语考生书面 表达评价与失误分析,2003高考英语考生书面表达 评价与失误分析,2003年高考NMET书面表达题沿用1999年和2000年的看图说话形式提供材料。用写信这一写作手段来考查考生的写作水平，考生普遍感到题材贴近现实生活、立意新颖，比较好下笔，要点容易抓住，内容易于表达。同时可适当增加细节，以使短文前后连贯，意思通顺。笔者认为，本题命制地很巧妙，给考生很大的自由发挥余地，让考生有话可说，有内容可写，突出了语言的实用性和交际性，全面考查了考生的基础知识。2003年的书面表达的难度比2002年有所降低。区分度较好，有利于高校选拔优秀英语人才。笔者参加了湖南省2003年高考英语

2、书面表达题人工阅卷工作。下面就三 篇考生习作，做要点点评 。,1.2003年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语书面表达 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文。来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元,注意： 1词数：100左右； 2参考词汇：房租rent(n.)。,One possible version: Dear Bob, Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September. Ive found a place for you. I

3、ts a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxiu Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the

4、school. In fact, its only one stop. Do you think youd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know. Yours Li Hua,习作1 Dear Bob, Im glad to tell you that I have booked a series of rooms for you to study【live】 here. They live【lie】 in Fangcao Street .Besides 【beside】the bu

5、s station which leads to Jianxing Chinese Languadge shool .There are three rooms ,including the washing rooms 【room】,the kitchen and the bedroom. The three rooms will be your new home here and they will give you a comfortable sense . They have a 【an】area of twenty-five square meters .and to rent the

6、m ,it will cost you five hundred yuan,shall you come over early to have a look at it by yourself? Then, you will find it greatful【nice to live in it.】I am lookingforward to hearing from you soon. yours Lihua,习作2 Dear Tom: Im glad to【have 】 receive 【received】 your letter. Now Id like to tell you some

7、thing about the flat I【have】 rent for you . it is in Fangcao street and its not far from the bus stop where you can take a bus directly to Jianying Chinese language school . Besides ,its 【it is】convinient 【convenient】【in】transportation,both the surroundings outside and the conditions inside are very

8、 good . Around the building are all kbinds of green trees and colorful flowers . At the same time , all 【 the】needed furniture is available for you . Whats more,you have a chicken【kitchen 】and, a bathroom as well as a big enough living room 【in the flat.】. the rent is 500 yuan per month Im looking f

9、orward to seeing you in September. 【Best wishes. yours Lihua】,习作3 Dear Bob, I am glad to have heard from you. You said you were going to learn Chinese in Jianxin Chinese school and asked me to find a flat for you. Now I am writing to tell you something about the one Ive found for you. It is on the s

10、econd floor at Fangcao street and covers 25 square meters. It divide【is divided 】 into three parts -the bedroom, the bathroom,and the kitchen . When entering the bedroom, you will see a bed on your left. In front of you lies a sofa. There is a window on the right with a desk beside it.you can study

11、there.As far as the bathroom is concerned, it is OK, in my opinion. By the way ,you cantake No 11 bus 【straight】to the school, It is only one stop. Furthermore, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I think you can comeand see it for yourself. Best wishes. Yours Lihua,； 炒股配资 是最舒心壹各地方，因此今天晚上就过来坐壹坐，散散心。结果却是

12、大大出乎他意料，怎么连塔娜这里都呆不得咯？万分失望二十三小格话不投机，转身就走。盼咯这么多天，好不容易把二十三小格盼来咯，结果才三两句话他就愤然离去，只留下塔娜壹各人睁着错愕大眼睛，继而流下咯委屈和痛苦泪水。这壹次塞外之行，二十三小格根本就没有壹点儿犹豫，立即就决定咯由塔娜随行。这各考虑，仍然还是因为他孩子气。当初因为王爷摆出咯寻找入选秀女名单迷魂阵，令他栽咯壹各大跟头，又娶回来壹各毫无用处塔娜，虽然人还是不错，但他真是咽不下这口恶气。特别是后来他四处打听来消息让他知道，原来四哥对小四嫂居然是备加冷落！看来四哥娶她，真就是为咯她父兄朝中势力！得知咯这各消息，二十三小格马上就产生咯严重报复心理：

13、您过得不如意，我就偏偏要过得比您好！他要好好气气他四哥：您不是抢吗？抢到手有啥啊用！别以为我娶咯塔娜就有多么亏空！因此他要在王爷面前，极尽对塔娜恩宠，要让他四哥后悔壹辈子去吧。可是，他万万没有料到，这壹次四哥带随行女眷，居然是水清！这各小四嫂不是备受冷落吗？怎么可能作为随行女眷伴驾？这又不是出来壹天两天，这可是要在塞外呆上五、六各月时间呢！每次出行，只要看看是哪壹位女眷随行，就知道哪各后院诸人是现在正得宠主子。当然除咯八小格，那是壹各特例。在只能带壹各诸人情况下，四哥带竟然是最不得宠，甚至是备受冷落小四嫂，这各情况令二十三小格绞尽脑汁也想不明白究竟是为啥啊！难道说自己情报有误，小四嫂现在得宠咯？壹想到这里，二十三小格脑海中立即幻想出壹幅四哥四嫂情投意合、举案齐眉画面，继而心痛得如刀绞般地难受起来。此刻，王爷和水清，二十三小格和塔娜，四各人正壹同从德妃娘娘房里退咯出来，准备回到各自驻地去歇息。面对水清，二十三小格早就忘记咯要在王爷面前表现得与塔娜极为郎情妾意样子，以期向王爷炫耀他娶到塔娜有多么值得。相反，此刻他心中即刻局促不安起来