高考短文改错

1、英语高考专题复习,短 文 改 错,Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?,1. 看不出句子有错。 2. 看出句子出错的地方, 但无法改正。 3. 知道改正句子错误的地方, 但答案不正确。,How to correct？,Any skills？,Any rules？,How to correct a composition,短文改错,Dear Ms, Donforth, Im writing to ask you come to our class for a visit. Ive 1. . heard that you hav

2、e been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. . have been learning about its rich culture and long history. 3. . Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. . know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We have 5. . learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you perso

3、nal 6. . experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. . help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. . us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. . think about my request and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .,06年浙江卷短文改错,.,Steps of corre

4、cting a composition:,1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意）,2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错）,3. Read the passage for the third time, check the answers and correct the difficult ones. （检查核对，攻克难点）,Dear Ms, Donforth, Im writing to as

5、k you come to our class for a visit. Ive 1. . heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. . have been learning about its rich culture and long history. 3. . Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. . know whether you have seen the old buildings here. We ha

6、ve 5. . learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. . experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. . help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. . us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. . think about my request and

7、 visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .,06年浙江卷短文改错,.,to,its,there,your,knowledge,with,hope,possible,right word,Missing word,Wrong word,Unnecessary word,改错命题统计,高考短文改错的短文通常只有120个词左右，分成10行，短文的难度也与考生的习作相当，10行中一般只有一行全部正确，其他9行都存在错误。各种错误所占比例为,命题特点,1：3：6,即: 1行正确； 3行缺词或多词； 6行需要找出错误并改正。,Dear Ms, Donforth, Im wri

8、ting to ask you come to our class for a visit. Ive 1. . heard that you have been to Greece. In our Greece unit, we 2. . have been learning about its rich culture and long history. 3. . Since you have visited Greece several times, so I would like to 4. . know whether you have seen the old buildings h

9、ere. We have 5. . learned a lot from the textbook, but I believe you personal 6. . experience will be a lot better. Your knowledges of Greece can 7. . help the whole class. Could you share your experiences for 8. . us ? It will be surely exciting and rewarding. I hoped that you 9. . think about my r

10、equest and visit us as soon as possibly. 10. .,06年浙江卷短文改错,.,to,its,there,your,knowledge,with,hope,possible,动词,代词,连词,副词,代词,名词,介词,动词,形容词,错误类型统计,测试点,动词形，名词数， 还要注意形和副； 非谓语，细辨别， 代词格，细领悟； 介词短语常常考， 习惯用法要记住； 句子成分多分析， 逻辑错误须关注， 冠词连词常光顾。,短文改错口诀：,一、动词形,主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。,2007四川卷： But, to my surpri

11、se, when he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door, still wearing his jacket with the wallet in the pocket. 2007天津卷： In Grand Eight I took physics. In one test I get only 36 percent of the answers correct.,got,got,2006安徽卷： Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish. 2006安徽卷： You can sit at

12、the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out 2006天津卷： Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college.,wishes,permitted,admitted,二、名词数,指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。,2007陕西卷：Personally, I found most lesson rather unin

13、teresting. 2006浙江卷：Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class,lessons,knowledge,2006福建卷： If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. 2006陕西卷： They have all sorts of course. Im sure you will find one you like it. 2006重庆卷： In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful.,inte

14、rest,courses,sky,三、还要注意形和副,注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。,2007浙江卷：I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. 2006福建卷：We can hear birds singing happy all around.,proud,happily,2006湖北卷： A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up. 2006辽宁卷： She w

15、as usual patient with her students and never made them disappointed.,strong,usually,四、非谓语，细辨别,这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。,2007浙江卷： I could not to run very fast and fell behind. 2007宁夏卷：Li Meng came see me every day.,to,2006天津卷： You always gave me special attention and inspired to me to joi

16、n in activities. 2006天津卷： I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person. NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English.,become,talking,人称代词，物主代词的使用 反身代词oneself 的使用 人称代词的主格和宾格 不定代词的使用 Both,all,either,neither,none的使

17、用. 6. Whose 和whos， its和 its的区别,五、 代词格，细领悟,（ 2007全国I） I was only about six that he held his hand out to me. I took it in me and we walked.,mine,when,2007全国II： While the others are jumping about in the air, I can run under my legs and get the ball. 2007陕西： Just at that time I woke up and found me stil

18、l in bed! 2006辽宁卷： She always made sure that our homework was finished on time, and she marked strictly on students actual performance.,students/our,their,myself,主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。,catch a sight of lose my heart in hurry in Sunday afternoon express us such many people,a,on,ours

19、elves,so,六、习惯用法要记住,2007陕西卷： They were used to write on the blackboard and asked us difficult questions. 2007浙江卷：So I didnt lose my heart and kept running. 2007浙江卷：I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. 2006天津卷：Because the help you gave me that summer,

20、My life changed. 2006福建卷：I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. 2006福建卷： It is so a beautiful place!,faster,with,of,for,such,七、句子成分多分析,不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。,NMET 2004 : I dont know that they dont like to talk with me

21、. 2007天津卷：I was lucky enough to have a teacher which didnt take my bad grades as a judgement of my abilities, but ,why,who / that,八、逻辑错误须关注,与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。,2006四川卷：That night，we sat down to what they thought would be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals. NMET 2005: Some students may

22、also save up for our college or future use.,we,their,常考的错误形式有：连词but， and， or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。,2oo7全国II：I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things Im doing at the school 2007四川卷：An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farms.,a,a,九、冠词、连词常光顾,2007浙江卷：Today

23、 I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. 2006辽宁卷：She always made sure that our homework was finished on time, but she marked strictly on our actual performance. 2007四川卷： He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal.,when,a

24、nd,and,短篇练习,At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment.

25、There was a fire burning in the fire place, but theChristmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily.,1.,2.,3.,4.,5.,6.,7.,8.,9.,10.,This passage is about_,A. Jims family. B. Christmas lights. C. How Jims family decorated the Christmas tree on Christmas Ev

26、e.,C,At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his 1._ father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._ a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! 3._ They put them in the corner of the sitting 4._,_,on,_,chose,_,tall,_,it,动词形,介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住,还要注意形和副,代词格，细领悟,room. Kate was covered it with a lot of 5._

27、Christmas light. The sitting room looked 6. _ really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. _ a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas 8. _ tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his 9. _ parents singing and dancing happily. 10._,_,lights,_,beautiful,_,and,were,动词形,还要注意形和副,动词形,名词数,冠

28、词连词须关注,短文改错应注意的问题,四不改: 标点符号不改。 大小写不改。 词序错误不改。 在纲外生词不改。 文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错。,Dont forget!,【解题步骤】,1 浏览全文，掌握大意,2 分句阅读，逐行找错,3 检查核对，攻克难点,4 规范答题 不留空白,短文改错口诀：,动词形，名词数， 还要注意形和副； 非谓语，细辨别， 代词格，细领悟； 介词短语常常考， 习惯用法要记住； 句子成分多分析， 逻辑错误须关注， 冠词连词常光顾。,Practice makes perfect. 谚 熟能生巧,Homework: Finish Exercise paper,Now

29、 here are the weather report for our city. Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature 3 in the daytime. In the evenings, the temperature will fell down below zero. The temperature will be 8 . The day before tomorrow, there will be the strong wind and the temperature will be low. It will fall do

30、wn to 10 . You had better to wear your warm clothes. If you are a driver, youd better be more carefully when you are driving because the strong wind.,1.,2.,3.,4.,5.,6.,7.,8.,9.,10.,Now here are the weather report for our city. 1. _ Tomorrow will be fine with the high temperature 2. _ 3 in the daytim

31、e. In the evenings, the temperature 3. _ will fell down below zero. The temperature 4. _ will be 8 . The day before tomorrow, there 5. _,is,a,evening,fall,after,will be the strong wind and the temperature will 6. _ be low. It will fall down to 10 . You had 7. _ better to wear your warm clothes. If y

32、ou are a 8. _ driver, youd better be more carefully when 9. _ you are driving because the strong wind. 10. _,a,careful,of,An American and a Frenchman decided to cross the sea between France and England in the balloon in 1784.High 1. _ over the water, they discover a hole in the balloon. The 2._ hole became bigger and bigger. The air keeps the 3._ balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was 4._ coming up. The two men threw all their equipment into 5._ the water to make the balloon light. It started to rise 6._ higher again. So it was still too close to t