高一英语作文训练Unit1 Festivals around the world Writing

1、评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式,提出要评论的事物或观点. 分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点) 归纳得出作者的结论. a. 有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对) b. 争议较大的或尚无定论的, 可不明确表态, 提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种期望和设想.,典型模板,1、Just as a coin has two sides, _ also has some side effects. 2、However, _ has also a lot of problems. For one thing, _; For another, _. Finally, _.,1、_ has brough

2、t a number of benefits to us.2、 is a beneficial activity, in which we can obtain many advantages. First of all, _. Also, _. Most importantly, _.,先阐述要讨论的东西We are all aware that everything has its two sides, _ is no exception.,开头:,优点：,缺点：,结尾:,1）In spite of these disadvantages, I think _ does more good

3、 than harm to people. And the disadvantages, since they have been pointed out clearly, will be dealt with effectively.,2）Weighing the two sides, there is no denying the fact that _ has produced great effects on society.,3）To conclude, I would say that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.,4）In

4、sum, _ does more good than harm to _. We must take a correct attitude towards _. We should take full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantages.,苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试,最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Should we give more attention to students health

5、or grades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。,注意：1词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。,1.A good beginning makes a good ending. 2.Your composition should be divided into paragraphs. 3.Youd better use some linking words. 4.Handwriting is of great importance.,Suggestions:,最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米

6、，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。,先阐述要讨论的东西We are all aware that everything has its two sides, _ is no exception.,国家教育部 the Ministry of Education of China 冬季长跑活动 Winter long-distance running activity 小学生 primary school student 初中生junior school student 高中中 high school student,Recently, the Minis

7、try of Education of China require students to take part in the winter long-distance running activity. It is suggested that primary school students run 1,000 meters a day, junior school students, 1,500 and senior school students, 2000.,running,优点：,1、_ has brought a number of benefits to us.2、_ is a b

8、eneficial activity, in which we can obtain many advantages. First of all, _. Also, _. Most importantly, _.,1. 促进对体育的重视 catch ones attention to physical education 2. 增强学生体魄 improve students health 3. 提高学习效率 help students study efficiently,Running,Running,people will pay more attention to physical edu

9、cation,running can improve students health.,it helps students study moreefficiently,Running has brought a number of benefits to us. First of all, people will pay more attention to physical education. Also, running can improve students health. And most importantly, it helps students study more effici

10、ently.,缺点：,1、Just as a coin has two sides, _ also has some side effects. 2、However, _ has also a lot of problems. For one thing, _; For another, _. Finally, _.,1.以学习为主,考试成绩决定个人前途 study is the most important task of students, their future depends on the grades in their subjects. 2.过高的要求学生难以达到 student

11、s cant meet the high requirement. 3.引起感冒或伤害 suffer cold or injuries,running,running,studying is the most important,task of students, their future depends on the grades in their subjects.,students cant meet the high requirement,students may suffer cold or injuries,However, running also has a lot of p

12、roblems. For one thing, studying is the most important task of students, their future depends on the grades in their subjects. For another, students cant meet the high requirement. Finally, students may suffer cold or injuries because of running.,结尾 In sum, _ does more good than harm to _. We must t

13、ake a correct attitude towards _. We should take full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantages.,running,students,this running activity,For example we can do some warm-up exercise to avoid being injured when running.,Recently, the Ministry of Education of China require students to take part in the

14、 winter long-distance running activity. It is suggested that primary school students run 1,000 meters a day, junior school students, 1,500 and senior school students, 2000. We are all aware that everything has its two sides, running is no exception. Running has brought a number of benefits to us. Fi

15、rst of all, people will pay more attention to physical education. Also, running can improve students health. And most importantly, it helps students study more efficiently. However, running also has a lot of problems. For one thing, studying is the most important task of students, their future depen

16、ds on the grades in their subjects. For another, students cant meet the high requirement. Finally, students may suffer cold or injuries because of running. In sum, runnig does more good than harm to students. We must take a correct attitude towards the running activity. We should take full advantage

17、 of it and avoid its disadvantages. For example we can do some warm-up exercise to avoid being injured when running.,面对中学生“出国热”,社会对此有不同的看法.请你以StudyingAbroad为题,根据以下提示信息,谈谈自己的看法. Advantages：良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习.拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术传播各民族间的不同文化 Disadvantages：年纪小,缺乏生活经验,自理能力差情感孤独,思乡生活,学习费用高 注意:1.第一句已为你写好,不计入总词数.

18、2.词数120左右 StudyingAbroad Inrecentyears,studyingabroadhasbeenpopular.,表达个人观点的用语,I think/ I firmly believe that in my opinion, / in my view,. personally speaking, As far as I am concerned, In my point of view, . I agree with somebody/ something. I agree that I agree to do,第一段： 1.Some people agree to N

19、O. One, because they usually think that .In the meantime , . In addition. 2.Some people think that A is right because . 3.Some people suggest / say that . At the same time they point out the fact that.Whats more. 4.Some people prefer NO. One. In their opinion A . In addition .,第二段： 1.On the other ha

20、nd, some people hold that B is right. They think . 2.But many more people dont agree with them. They prefer B. They say that.The reason is that. 3.On the contrary, some people hold that . 4.Some people think that B is better. It is clear that. Whats more, .Also. 在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列举等方式展开段落。,第三段：提出自己的见

21、解并且加以论证 1.In my opinion B is better than A. There is no doubt that . 2.I support A. The reason goes as follows. 3.As far as I am concerned, I agree to the latter. First.Second. Finally. 4.It is likely that people will go on arguing over these questions. I think that everything has both its positive

22、and negative sides. We should keep an open mind.,5.People will continue to argue over the questions, I think wed better keep an open mind because everything has two sides. It all relies on. 6.Of these two ways of .I prefer.First of all,. Second,.,Should we give more attention to students health or g

23、rades? The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity. It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day, junior school students, 1,500 and senior school students, 2,000.Different people always offer

24、various views. Some people say yes to this activity. They think, for one thing, it can make people pay more attention to physical education; for another, running can improve students health and help them study efficiently so they can have good grades. However, others hold opposite opinions about the activity. They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on their grades in the