高中英语书面表达五步法解析

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3、08年奥运会落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设你叫张华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由,哈哈， 不是李华了！,1.单词拼写或用错：,Give you some advise. They can attact visitors.,advice,attract,学生常犯错误：,We may given it to the PE company. The sport stadiums is very great and is highly spoken of by the foreigners.,3. 主谓一致问题：,give,2.

4、 时态语态问题：,are,are,Many people can use them to strong our body. I am writing to make some advice for how to make full use of the sports stadiums.,5. 介词短语运用问题：,4. 词性混淆问题：,strengthen,on,信息2 信息3 信息4,开头 正文 结尾,体裁 人称 时态 要求 结构,字数 内容,一般现在时,Para.1 Para.2 Para.3,抓要点, 120个左右,信息1,信息5,08年奥运会刚刚落幕. 征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的

5、建议. 你想写一些建议.,向公众开放，用于健身,总结，意愿,书信格式,租给体育公司，创造经济效益,开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客,第一,三人称,Step1：审题,Step2：列提纲,Para1. 开头,08年奥运会刚刚落幕. 征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议. 你想写一些建议.,08年奥运会刚刚落幕. the 2008 Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing. 征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议. after the Olypmic Games collect some advice how to make best use of the stadiums

6、. 你想写一些建议 contribute some suggestions to you,Para2. 正文,向公众开放，用于健身,租给体育公司，创造经济效益,开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客,向公众开放，用于健身. be opened to the people/public be used for strengthen their bodies 租给体育公司，创造经济效益. be rented to Sport companies which organize matches Make money/ profits 开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客 be used as tourist attractio

7、ns Attract tourists,Step2：列提纲,Para3：总结，意愿 结尾, In my opinion/ as far as I am concerned./from my point of view. I would appreciate it if you take into consideration,Step2：列提纲,Step3：连词成句,Para.1: The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. I hear you are collecting some advice on

8、 how to make the best of the stadiums. I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.,Para.2: The stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can strengthen their bodies. The stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can make more profits. They can be used

9、 as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.,Step3：连词成句,Para.3: From my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use the stadium. I would appreciate it if you would take my advice into deep consideration,Step3：连词成句,Step4：连句成篇,I heard you are collecting some advice on how to make

10、 the best of the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success. Here I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you. First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public. The public can strengthen their bodies. Secondly, The stadiums can be rented t

11、o sport company which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits. last but not least, they can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors. From my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use the stadiums. I would appreciate it if you would take my advice into d

12、eep consideration,二. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,三. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力,四.尝试多样化表达方式,一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力,强调句,With短语复合结构,定语从句,名词性从句,各种状语从句,被动语态,Step5：润色修正,润色修正,I heard you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums after the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with a great success.,1. With复合结构,

13、With the 29th Olympic Games hosted successfully, I heard you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums,2.定语从句,First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public. People can strengthen their bodies there.,润色修正,First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public, where

14、they can strengthen their bodies conveniently.,（适当增加修饰性的副词）,润色修正,3.非谓语动词,Secondly, the stadiums can be rented to sport company which organize matches. It can bring in much more profits.,Secondly, the stadiums can be rented to sport companies which organize matches, bringing in much more profits.,（现在

15、分词作结果状语）,润色修正,4.状语从句,last but not least, they can be used as tourist attraction. It can attract many visitors.,last but not least, they can be used as tourist attraction. Because many of them are so well designed with strong Chinese features that they will surely attract visitors from all over the w

16、orld.,润色修正,5.倒装句,只有当我们充分利用这些体育馆时，才能让它们的存在有意义。,Only when we make full use of the stadium can we let stadium make sense.,With the 29th Olympic Games ended successfully, What we should do now is how to make full use of the stadiums. I heard you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of them

17、. Here I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you. First of all, the stadiums can be opened to the public, where they can strengthen their bodies conveniently. Secondly,the stadiums can be rented to sport companies which organize matches, bringing in much more profits. last but not

18、least, they can be used as tourist attraction. Because many of them are so well designed with strong Chinese features that they will surely be attractions for visitors from all over the world. From my point of view, we should do what we can to make full use of the stadiums. Only when we make full use of