2010年英语高考任务型写作指导课件

1、高考考试专题 -之英语写作,任务型写作,英德中学 陈亚远,一、文章总结,二、段落衔接与拓展,三、常用作文模板与应用,英德中学 陈亚远,一、文章总结 1.议论文,A、广州一模参考范文:,The article compares the benefits of studying alone to those of studying in groups.,Studying alone allows students,to remain focuses and avoid interruption, while group study creates a more enjoyable learning

2、 environment (33字),Topic sentence,Two opinions of the text,英德中学 陈亚远,B、how to summarize:,1. Frame work,The topic sentence The supporting sentence1 (argument 1) The supporting sentence2 (argument 2),2. Form the summary in your own words:,Paraphrase the frame work Using some phrases Using simpleparatac

3、ticcomplex sentences,英德中学 陈亚远,C、practice 1,Students should think now about what extracurricular (课外的) activities theyd like to participate in. Participating in extracurricular activities may help you deepen your physical, creative, social, political, and career interests by bringing you into communi

4、cation with other like-minded people you didnt previously know. You can join groups as a way to get support from other students. A club or group can also be a great way to meet people who are different from you. Lots of youth programs bring people together with those who are different as a way to br

5、eak down the barriers between people.,英德中学 陈亚远,Participating in extracurricular activities helps you in other ways, too. It looks good on college and job applications and shows admissions officers and employers youre well-rounded and responsible. Specific activities help with specific goals. The mos

6、t basic reason for joining a club or team is that it gives you something better to do than staring at the wall, wandering the hall, or sleeping all afternoon. People who are participating are less likely to pick up bad habits, like smoking or drinking.,英德中学 陈亚远,1. The framework,the benefit of extrac

7、urricular activities,Para1: develop the physical, creative, social, political, and career interests,Para2: helps you in other ways,Para3: pick up less bad habits,英德中学 陈亚远,The author (The passage) discussed the benefit of extracurricular activities including being a way to improve students health, wi

8、den their social circle and introduce them to new ideas and people. (30 words),2. The summary,英德中学 陈亚远,广东省汕头市2007年高三年级普通高校招生模拟考试,C、practice 2,Everyone must receive education from teachers at school or at university. Think about all the teachers who have taught you. Can you find which one is your fav

9、orite? And the reason? Are the teachers you liked best also the ones who were the most excellent teachers with good qualities? Before you read the following paragraphs, think about what qualities make a teacher extraordinary.,英德中学 陈亚远,Most people will say that the several important qualities of a te

10、acher are that he should love his students, that he needs to have an expert knowledge of his subject, and that he should devote himself to his jobs whole heartedly. All of these can be the good qualities of a teacher but not all.,英德中学 陈亚远,As we all know, it is impossible for a teacher to love every

11、one of his students that he teaches in his life. Teachers must try their best to make most of their students interested in the subject so that they are able to teach themselves in the future. This requires teachers to master many teaching skills, which include how to control a class and so on. Teach

12、ers have to spend much time and energy on their work. However, students also imitate many things of the teacher, so it is also important for teachers to be well balanced people with interest outside their schoolwork family, friends, hobbies etc.,英德中学 陈亚远,写作内容 1）概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右； 2）就“我心目中的好老师”

13、这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右； a你认为好老师应该具有什么样的好品质； b结合自己的经历，介绍你喜欢的一位老师,英德中学 陈亚远,1. The framework,Paragraph 1. What qualities make a teacher extraordinary?,Paragraph 2. love, expert knowledge and devotion,Paragraph 3. well-balanced with family, friends hobbies etc.,The passage talks about wha

14、t the best qualities of a good teacher are. They are love of students, a good knowledge of his subject, devotion to the job, and skills in helping students learning.,英德中学 陈亚远,had. When he took the money, his face turned red. Before he left, he expressed his great thanks and also said he would give b

15、ack my money when he reached home.,When I came back to school and told my classmates about my story, they held different opinions. Some of them thought that I did a good deed to have given a hand to the person in trouble, while others said that I was cheated. Some even laughed at me and called me a

16、fool who could not judge things in the right way. Now, I am really confused!,英德中学 陈亚远,一、文章总结 2.叙事文,2007年深圳一模英语试题,I once met a middle-aged stranger who said his money had been stolen at the railway station, so he had no money to go home. He begged for help from passers-by, but they all pretended not

17、to have heard what he was saying and went by quickly. Then he stopped me and wanted me to give him the help. At first I could not accept that because I didnt think he was telling the truth. But when I saw tears in his eyes, I began to believe that he might be in the real trouble, so, just immediatel

18、y I gave him all the money I,英德中学 陈亚远,写作内容 1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点； 2. 然后以约120个词就“陌生人可不可信”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点： a. 叙述你或你的朋友给给予陌生人以帮助的一次真实或虚构的经历； b. 说明你的理由。 写作要求 1. 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2. 标题自定。,英德中学 陈亚远,1. The framework,Paragraph 1. the writer gave all his money to a stranger with tea

19、rs in his eyes who said he money was stolen,Paragraph 2. the writer felt confused for what his classmates commented on.,2. summary,The writer said that he once gave all his money to a stranger who said his money was stolen. His classmates held different opinions for what he had done, so he felt puzz

20、led.(33 words),英德中学 陈亚远,Practice:,I found out one time that doing a favor for someone could get you into trouble. I was in the eighth grade at the time and we were having a final test. During the test, the girl sitting next to me whispered something but I did not understand. So I leaned over and fou

21、nd out that she was trying to ask me if I had an extra pen. She showed me that hers was out of ink. I happened to have an extra one, so I took it out of my pocket and put it on her desk.,英德中学 陈亚远,Later, after the test papers had been turned in, the teacher asked me to stay in the room when all the o

22、ther students were dismissed. As soon as we were alone she began to talk to me about what it meant to grow up; she mentioned how important it was to stand on your own two feet and be responsible for your own acts. For a long time, she talked about honesty and emphasized the fact that when people do

23、something dishonest, they are really cheating themselves. She made me promise that I would think seriously about all the thing she had said,英德中学 陈亚远,And then she told me I could leave. I walked out of the room wondering why she had chosen to talk to me about all those thin,.以约个词概括教师对作者的误解. 2. 然后以约12

24、0个词写一篇记事文,描写你或你的朋友被误解的一次经历,并包括以下要点: 叙述你或你朋友被误解的一次真实或虚构的经历 你或你的朋友是如何处理误解的 误解导致的最终结果.,可以参照阅读材料的篇章结构,组织故事,但不得直接引用原文中的句子.,英德中学 陈亚远,1. The framework,The writer said he was once misunderstood to have cheated in a test by his teacher for he lent his pen to a girl whose pen happened to out of ink. (29 words

25、),英德中学 陈亚远,B、how to summarize a narrating story:,1. Get to know who, where, when, why, how or what in the story (clue).,2. Get to know the hidden meaning of the story.,英德中学 陈亚远,二、段落衔接与拓展,A、广州一模参考范文:,英德中学 陈亚远,Personally, I prefer to study alone. I find studying alone more challenging and exciting. Ea

26、ch time ! come up with an idea after a long time thinking, I feel a great sense of achievement. Studying alone also allows me to develop independent thinking which is a very important skill I need as I grow older and must solve the problems myself without the help of parents and teachers. Our teache

27、rs often encourage us to study in groups. I enjoy my friends company, but in group study, I find we spend far less time studying and more time playing games and having fun. It is for these reasons that I believe the most effective way to learn new knowledge is by studying alone.,英德中学 陈亚远,Our school

28、offers many different kinds of after-school activities. These include sports, music and drama. Im one of the members of drama club. I think it is very important for students to participate in extracurricular activities. Extracurricular activities can improve our social life, introducing us to new pe

29、ople outside our class or school. In addition, they can reduce the stress and pressure we experience as the result of our studies. Also, they can bring us a lot of enjoyment. If we feel fresh and relaxed we can study better, so they will also be good for our grades. Thus, in my view, if we focus too

30、 much on any one thing, either study or after-school activities will be negatively affected. But with the right balance both can improve.,英德中学 陈亚远,小结:,A、通过列举词汇来进行句子与段落的衔接与拓展,1. first，second，third 2. firstly，secondly，thirdly 3. first，furthermore，finally 4. in the first place，in the second place，final

31、ly 5. last but not least 6. first and most important 7. to begin with，next，then，finally 8. the formerthe latter the first step，the second step，the next step,英德中学 陈亚远,B、通过说明词汇来进行句子与段落的衔接与拓展,for example including for instancemainly namely such as,C、通过强调词汇来进行句子与段落的衔接与拓展,obviously certainly undoubtedly

32、especially surely above all indeedmost important ofall In fact mostimportantly very,英德中学 陈亚远,D、通过并列词汇来进行句子与段落的衔接与拓展,and or that is， thats to say not onlybut（also） in other words bothand as well as neithernor eitheror,英德中学 陈亚远,E、通过补充词汇来进行句子与段落的衔接与拓展,also（too）furthermore further moreover what is moret

33、hen in additionbesides as well（as）,but however （al）though yet except for nevertheless,F、通过转折词汇来进行句子与段落的衔接与拓展,G、通过因果结论词汇分词复合结构等来进行句子与段落的衔接与拓展,英德中学 陈亚远,Practice A:,Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? Nowadays, some people think that “Lucky numbers” can bring them good luck. _, they pay quite a

34、lot for car license plates or telephone numbers with “eight”, _this number in Chinese is pronounced “ba” which is similar to the pronunciation of the Chinese character “fa”, meaning making a fortune,As a result,because,英德中学 陈亚远,_, other people believe that numbers have nothing to do with luck. They

35、can give many examples to show that some of the people who have a car license plate or a telephone number with the so-called lucky number have not had good fortune at all,_, numbers can not determine whether we will have good luck or we will make a lot of money. _ working hard and being honest can b

36、ring us good luck.,However,In my opinion,Only,英德中学 陈亚远,The Value of Time A proverb says: “Time is money”. _ in my opinion, time is _ _ precious than money. When money is spent, we can earn it back._, when time is gone, it will never return. This is the reason why we must save time.,It goes without s

37、aying that the time at our disposal is unusually limited._, even an hour is extremely precious. We should make full use of our time to do useful things. As students we must not relax our efforts to engage in our studies so as to serve society and our nation in the future.,Practice B:,But,even more,H

38、owever,Hence,英德中学 陈亚远,It is a pity that there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time. They spend their precious time smoking, drinking and gambling. They do not realize that wasting time is equal to wasting part of their valuable life.,_, we should get into the good habit of savi

39、ng time. Do not put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Laziness will _bring us failure _lead us to the road of poverty.,In a word,not only,but also,英德中学 陈亚远,启、承、转、合,启:启动观点，开篇点题,承:涉及文章第二段（拓展段），原因一、二、三，方面一、二、三要有层次感,转：表示转折,合:表示合并总结,英德中学 陈亚远,三、综合训练:,It is necessary to develop some skills to increase ones chances of succes