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1、Application forms 蒲县高级中学 柴栓丽,Learning aims: 1.Master the structure and main sentence patterns of a letter of application. 2.Master how to polish a composition. 3.Correct the mistakes in the composition a student wrote.,Read the following four passages and find the structure of a letter of applicatio

2、n.,Beginning,Body,Application letters,Ending,Passage1 Dear Sir/Madam， Im Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3. Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer. I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organisationa

3、l ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public. As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in se

4、veral English activities of my class, which has been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates. I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration. Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly， Li Hua,Passage2 Dear Sir/Madam，

5、I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. Im dying for the job and I think I am quite fit for it. Im a 20-year-old boy with excellent performance at school and I will graduate from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July. I have a good knowledge of spoken and writt

6、en English, which will meet your demands. My fluent oral English allows me to talk with people from home and abroad freely. Besides, making friends, collecting stamps and playing the guitar are my favourites. Whats more, Im easygoing and warmhearted. Getting along with me, you will feel my optimism

7、and enthusiasm. If given the chance, I will make every effort to do it well.Im looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours， Li Hua,Passage3 Dear sir or Madam, Im Li Hua, a senior middle school student from China. I happened to read the advertisement that you have posted on the Internet, employing

8、 Chinese students as part-time tutor of the Chinese language. I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from China and Id like to get this job. For me, Chinese is my native tongue and Im excellent at it. Besides, Ive been learning English for 9 years with a good command of spoken and w

9、ritten English. Im willing to help foreigners learn Chinese well and introduce Chinese culture to the world as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours. Looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely, Li Hua,Passage4 Dear Sir/Madam , I learned from the newspaper that your company needs a

10、n English secretary.Im really interested in this position and hope I can work for you. Im 18 years old and will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Languages School this July. Im anexcellent student ,among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. Im good at English , especially spokenEnglish .I often us

11、e the computer and I type very fast . In my spare time ,I read a lot . Poems are my favorite . I enjoy music very much too. Being an active young person , I like sports and outdoor activities . Besides , I m easy to get along well with and I like to make friends . Im looking forward to your reply .

12、Sincerely yours, Li Hua,Beginning_,Body_,Application letters,Ending_,说明目的，自我简介，指出信源,写明申请理由，讲述个人优势,表达感谢，简述被接纳后的打算，期待回复,the structure of a letter of application.,Fill in the blanks and find the sentence patterns of each part by reading the four letters again. 篇首句 ： 1.我是，来自的一位学生 _ 2.我从报纸或网上了解到, 我对它很感兴趣

13、 _ 3.我写信是要申请职位 _ 4.我渴望得到这份工作,我认为我适合它 _,Im , a student from,I learned from the nespaper or the Internet that and Im interested in it.,Im writing to apply for the position as a/an,Im dying for the job and I think I am quite fit for it.,篇中句 1.我将从学校毕业_ 2.我真的想要获得这次宝贵的机会，因为_ 3.作为一个外向的女孩，我和我的同学相处得很好。_ 4.我精

14、通英语，可以满足你们的需求。_ 5.我学了9年英语了，并且口语和写作都很好。_ 6.我是一名优秀的学生，班里前五名。_ 7.我很好相处并且喜欢交朋友。 _,I will graduate from,I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates.,I have a good knowledge of English, which will meet your demands.,Ive been learning E

15、nglish for 9 years with a good command of spoken and written English.,Im anexcellent student ,among the top 5 in my class.,I m easy to get along well with and I like to make friends .,篇尾句 1.我肯定不会辜负你的期望_ 2.如果你能好心考虑我，我将十分感激。_ 3.如果给我这个机会的话，我将竭尽全力把它做好。_ 4. 我希望我将成为你们中的一员。_ 5.期盼早日收到你的回信。_,I am sure that I

16、 can perfectly live up to your expectations.,I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.,If given the chance, I will make every effort to do it well.,I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours.,Looking forward to your early reply.,全省同题第十一期 要求： 假定你是李华，最近你在网上看到牛津大学的暑期交换生项目，你很感兴趣。

17、请给该项目负责人Mr.Smith写封电子邮件。 要点如下： 1. 表达意愿； 2. 个人情况； 3. 申请原因,申请信,第一人称,一般现在时和一般将来时为主,写信目的，表达意愿，信息来源,个人情况，申请原因,表达感谢，期待回复,Polish the following composition a student wrote. Dear Sir/Madam, Im Li Hua.Im a high school student of Xinhua Middle School. Im writing to apply for the summer program of Oxford Univers

18、ity. Undoubtedly , Im eager to apply for the chance to study abroad. To begin with, my parents are in support of me. Studying abroad can broaden my view. Besides, they can afford all the expenses there.I learn English well and it enables me to have no difficulty communicating with sudents from other

19、 countries. I am outgoing and able to get on well with others. I would be grateful if can considermy application. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,Dear Mr. Smith, _(合并升级句为名词短语作同位语) Im writing to apply for the summer program of Oxford University._ ( 升级词汇为同位语从句）Im eager to

20、apply for the chance to study abroad. To begin with, my parents are in support of me._(前加过渡词汇)， studying abroad can broaden my view. Besides, they can afford all the expenses there. _(前加过渡词汇)， I_( 词汇升级)，_（升级句为非谓语动词作状语）._(前加过渡词汇)，I am outgoing and able to get on well with others.,Im Li Hua, a high sc

21、hool student of Xinhua Middle School,There is no doubt that,As far as they are concerned,For one thing,have a good command of English,enabling me to have no difficulty communicating with students from other countries,For another,I would be grateful if you can_my application_(词汇升级). Looking forward t

22、o your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,take,into account/consideration,How to polish a composition?,1.使用一些从句，如：定语从句、名词性从句等 2.使用非谓语动词 3.使用名词短语作同位语 4.使用过渡词或衔接词 5.使用高级词汇（用短语代替单词）,Proof-reading There are ten mistakes in the following passage. Please correct them. Dear Mr. Smith, I am more than deli

23、ght to learn that some of us students will have an opportunity to study in Oxford as exchange student. I am desperate for it, but Im writing to apply for the chance to study abroad. In the first place, have a good command of English enables me to communicate with others freely. Im outgoing and helpf

24、ul, which makes easy for me to adjust for the new surroundings as well as fit in well with foreigners.,delighted,students,so,having,to,it,_,_,_,_,_,Secondly, I am very interest in English culture. My parents and I once go to Europe for a trip and Britain left me a very good impression and I fall in love with everything of this country. Id appreciate it that if you could give consideration to my application. Looking forward to you approval. Sincerely yours, Li Hua,interested,went,your,_,_,_,Appreciation of the model essay Dear Mr. Smith, I am a high school student he