2013高考英语写作练习学会分享

1、C 36“记”（话题/基础/技巧）,36“记”之学会分享,核,心,单,词,1. share vt.分享 2_ vi.参加 3donate vt._ 4_adj.金融的 5 _ n& vi.志愿者 6 _ adj.重要的 7happiness n幸福；快乐 8sorrow n伤心 9unfortunately adv.不幸地 10cooperate vi.合作,participate,financial,volunteer,significant,捐赠,11_ n品德 12skill n技巧 13 _ n机会 14experience n& vt._ 15double adj.& vi.两倍的；

2、翻倍 16 _ vt.缓解 17 _ n责任 18friendship n友谊 19enrich vt._ 20 _ vi. & vt.交流,virtue,opportunity,经验；经历,relieve,responsibility,丰富,communicate,核,心,短,语,1. do a good deed 做好事 2share with 与分享 3take an active part in 积极参加 4fulfill this task _ 5in need of 需要 6be proud of 以为豪 7take action _ 8come to ones rescue _

3、9volunteer to do sth自愿做某事 10 _实践技能,完成任务,采取行动,来帮助某人,Practical skills,11_对负责 12social ability 社交能力 13 _对有益 14without doubt 毫无疑问 15working experience 工作经验 16develop the habit of 养成的习惯 17contribute to _ 18set an example to 为树立榜样 19make a difference to 对有影响 20 _认为是理所当然的,Be responsible for,Be beneficial t

4、o,对做贡献,Take it for granted,特别关注 doubt(3年3考) (1) There is no doubt about/thatclause 毫无疑问 I doubt whether(if).我怀疑 (3) beyond/without/no doubt毫无疑问，无疑 in doubt 怀疑地，未确定,There can be little doubt that special classes can help the gifted children to graduate earlier and take their place in life sooner. 毫无疑

5、问，特殊班级可以帮助有天赋的孩子早些毕业，早点在社会上立足。 I dont doubt that Jane will continue to work here. 简会继续在这儿工作这事儿确定无疑。,核,心,语,句,他下定决心要为人民做件好事。 作为一个中国人他感到骄傲。 你是自愿做这个工作的吗？,1. He made up his mind to do a good deed for the people.,2He is proud of being a Chinese.,3Do you volunteer to do this job?,4Many retired people can s

6、till contribute to the society with their rich experience.许多退休的老人还能利用他们丰富的 经验为社会作贡献。,5If you want to develop the habit of running，run every day. 如果你想养成跑步的习惯，那就每天都去跑步。,6I take it for granted that they will support this idea. 我视为理所当然他们将会支持这个主意的。 7Tom worked hard and set an example to his classmates. 汤

7、姆学习很努力，为全班同学树立了一个榜样。 8Another committee might be responsible for rescue efforts and medical assistance. 另一个委员会可能负责救援工作和医疗援助。 9I think a joint venture would be beneficial to both of us. 我认为合资经营对你我双方都是有利的。 10We must take action before it is too late. 我们必须趁早采取行动，否则就来不及了。,美,文,连,线,团队合作(3年3考) (2012江苏卷)生活中

8、冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执，导致关系紧张。请你结合此事，并根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。,注意： 1对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译； 2词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数；,3作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。,Conflicts with others are common in everyday life._ _ _,【参考范文】 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketbal

9、l game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel. To be honest, it was Sus fault but Li was also to blamethey were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. The

10、y cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.,To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoy a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a compe

11、titive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place. Dont be selfcentred and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.,【名师点拨】 拿到一篇书面表达后，我们首先要审好题。本文审题应明确以下几点： (1)这是一篇就身边发生的事情发表评论并提出建议的作文； (2)你是以学生的

12、名义向学校英文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿，评论和建议内容使用第一人称； (3)时态：文章的基调是一般现在时，但描述事情的经过和分析发生冲突的原因时，用过去时； (4)注意事项：试题中给出的三个注意事项一定要加以注意。,审好题之后，就是构思如何布局谋篇了。本篇作文，题目给出的提示信息非常明确，文章包括如下要点和层次： (1)第一段：简述事情经过； (2)第二段：分析原因； (3)第三段：提出建议、解决措施； (4)第四段：结论(总结)。 【范文亮点】 (1)文章层次分明，脉络清晰； (2)第一段并不是直接没头没脑地描述事情的经过，而是先提出自己的观点：Conflicts with ot

13、hers are common in everyday life.，然后再引到你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执这件事情上来；,(3)使用了一定量的高级词汇和高级结构：高级词汇，如：essential，harmonious，considerate等；高级结构，如：it turned into a horrible quarrel；To be honest；As a matter of fact；which is essential to enjoy a harmonious life(非限制性定语从句)等； (4)使用了过渡性词语：then，and，but等。,名,师,招,招,鲜,怎样破解长短

14、句 一、长难句考情播报 纵观近几年高考试题，长句难句增多是一个明显的特点。考生最头疼的就是这些句子了，这些句子中有倒装、定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句、省略等现象，可谓“句中套句”，结构极为复杂，严重影响考生的正确理解与阅读速度。没有扎实的语言基本功底很难在短时间内理出头绪，甚至影响考生情绪。因此打破常规读与讲的传统方法，冲刺复习中把快速阅读与突破长难句有机结合起来，考前有针对性地进行强化训练显得十分必要。,二、长难句的特点 特点一 含多个从句，句中套句,【例1】 However，those of us who are parents of children in this age group

15、 know that such offers are relatively rare and thatmany liberalarts students(文科生)graduate with the belief thatthe prospective(预期的)workplace may not have a place for them.,解析这个句子虽然不是很长，但属于那种“句中有句”的类型。本句的主、谓语是：those of us know。know后面有两个由that引导的宾语从句(that such offers are relatively rare)和(that many libe

16、ralarts students(文科生)graduate)，,其中第二个省略了know。在主句中还有一个定语从句(who are parents of children in this age group)修饰those of us，在第二个宾语从句中还有一个同位语从句(that the prospective(预期的)workplace may not have a place for them)修饰belief。 译文：然而，我们这些有这个年龄段孩子的家长们都知道，这样的机会少得可怜；我们也知道，许多文科毕业生认为未来的就业市场没有他们的一席之地。,【例2】 He found out t

17、hat Kit Williams had spent his childhood near Ampthill，in Bedfordshire，and thought that he must have buried the hare in a place he knew well，but he still could not see that connection with Katherine of Aragon，until one day he came across two stone crosses in Ampthill park and learnt that they had be

18、en built in her honor in 1973.,特点二 含多个并列结构,解析实际上全句就由一个主句He found that.和两个并列句and.，but.组成，只是每个句中都有一个宾语从句，最后的but并列句中还包含了一个由until引导的状语从句。 译文：他发现Kit Williams在Bedfordshire的阿帕斯尔公园附近度过了他的童年。所以他认为Kit Williams一定在一个他非常熟悉的地方把兔子给埋了，但是他还是看不出兔子和Aragon的Katherine之间有什么联系，直到有一天他在阿帕斯尔公园碰巧看见两个石制的十字架，他才懂得在1973年，修建这两个十字架是为了向她表示敬意。,解析in a hurry to get home before dark.是插入语作状语用，句末又用破折号引出另一个零散结构