改错与作文.ppt

1、第一节：短文改错 （共10小题; 每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）。并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。,As the high school student, I like to talk with foreigners to practise my oral E

2、nglish but learn more about other cultures. There were two foreign teachers in our school in this term. They often go to the English corner so that we can have a chance talk with them. However, I sometime find they are not so interesting in what I say, and its hard for I to choose a suitable topic.

3、I would like some advices about how to communicate proper with foreigners, and what topics to pick.,and,a,advice,are,sometimes,interested,me,to,properly,Here is some advices on how you can make your speech successfully. First, find out as much information as possibly about the subject that you are g

4、oing to give it. Second, find out as much as you can about the audience which are going to listen to your speech. Not speak something either too difficult nor too easy for them. Third, pay attention to the way by which you are giving your speech. Be natural and spoke clearly and slowly so that the a

5、udience may understand you are saying.,successful,advice,possible,who,Dont,what,speak,or,in,假设你是Maria,升入高中后给你的好朋友李华写信介 你的新学校和新生活： 我很长时间没见到你了，我非常想念你。现在让我来告 诉你我的学校生活。 首先，我将向你介绍我的新学校。它比我们的初中大。 虽然它不是很漂亮也不新，但是这里有许多绿树。它看起 来就像是一个小森林而且我非常喜欢它。其次，我们现在 的课程比初中时多很多。其中有些还很难，但是我不会放 弃的。我相信：你越努力，你就会取得越大的进步。而 且，我交了许多

6、朋友并且和他们相处得很好。每当我有困 难，他们都很乐意来帮助我。 现在我们在不同的学校，但是我认为我们的友谊永远都 不会改变。你觉得呢？期待收到你的来信。,Dear LiHua, I havent seen you for a long time, and I miss you very much. Now, let me tell you something about my school life. First, I will introduce my new school to you. Its bigger than our middle school. Although it is

7、not very beautiful and new, there are many green trees. It looks like a small forest and I like it very much. Then, the subjects are much more than those we had in the middle school. Some of the subjects are difficult, but I will never give up. I believe that the harder you work, the more progress y

8、ou will get. Furthermore, I make some friends and get on well with them. Whenever I have some trouble, they will all help me with pleasure.,Now we are in different schools, but I think our friendship will never be changed. So how about you? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, Yours,

9、 Maria,I started learning English at the ages of 7. My teacher was patiently and experienced, and she always made learn English a fun and enjoyable thing to do. Once, she is teaching us about the third person singular, and when we should put on an extra “s” behind the verb. She told us a way that I

10、will never forget, “She is only one person, so she is strong enough; shell need a superman to protect herself.” All the children laughed with delight, so we also understood with our little brains. Thank to her creative method, we were able to learn English in an amused way.,patient,age,learning,was,

11、her,not,amusing,but,Thanks,Dear Li Hua, Im sorry to know you are at a loss. Im writing to offer you some advice. Since you are facing the most important exam of your life, it is natural that you feel great pressure. But you should face it bravely and find effective ways to relieve it. Firstly, have

12、confidence in yourself, believing you can achieve your goal. Secondly, make a schedule for your studies so that you can make full use of your time. Thirdly, you can set aside some time for physical exercise every day to relax. Listening to light music can also help you to relieve stress. More import

13、antly, if you put your heart into your studies and work hard, you will make greater progress, which will help you pass the college entrance examination.,At first, I was not quite willing to sit down and watched the 90-minute football match. Usually I just checked the results because I thought that w

14、as dull to watch a game in that players kicked a ball to each other. Therefore, my father loves football. During the World Cup in 2006, my dad stays up late just to watch his favourite sport. Seeing him strongly interest in this game of 22 men run after a ball, I decided to sit down to watch the gam

15、e. I found game exciting, and my dad explained for the rules. We shared our joy. Football is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad!,it,watch,which,However,stayed,the,bad,interested,running,Sunday Oct. 2nd, 2011 Sunny Yesterday I joined a classmate party. I was very happy to see my old frie

16、nds, whom I hadnt met for years. And I drank a lot. After the party, I drove home though my classmates had tried to persuade me not to, because I always believe that as a skilled driver, drinking a little does no harm to driving. As the night got darker, the wine began to take effect. All of a sudde

17、n, I cracked my car against a sign on the road. Unluckily, a policeman was around and came towards me. He fined me and said “I hope that you would learn that drunk driving is a terrible thing. You can end up hurting yourself, and other innocent people.” I realized that the effects of drunk driving c

18、an be serious. Many people who drink and drive do not think of the serious consequences of their action until it is too late. So I appeal to everybody never to drink and drive! Cherish your life!,A flood disaster took place in south of China. It has been raining for several days, that led to the flo

19、od. PLA troops were being sent immediately to rescue the villagers of the flooded areas. They supplied the villagers for fresh vegetables and food. Some medical teams came to direct them to have a healthy diet. Poisonous food and deadly animals were not allowed to be eaten and the water was made cle

20、an before be drunk. The doctors told them to pay special attention to their healthy. Supplies and money from all part of our country were sent to support them. Soon after, nothing returned to normal. That was a sign of victory.,which,had,with,dead,being,the,everything,health,parts,Sat. July 14, 2012

21、 Sunny Our class visited Mount Yuntai in Jiaozuo, Henan Province, on July 14th. It is famous for its beautiful and unique landscape. We gathered at the school gate at 7:30 am. Two hours later we arrived at the foot of Mount Yuntai by bus. Then we set about climbing in groups. At noon, we gathered at

22、 the geological museum to watch some exhibits, which show how geological structures form. Later we had our picnic lunch and took a break. At 2:00 pm, we continued our exploration and met at Zhuyu Peak at 4:00 pm. After taking a group photo, we walked down the mountain. At 6:00 pm we returned to scho

23、ol. It was really an unforgettable trip. I felt excited and amazed by the beauty of nature.,My Opinion on Cheating in examinations Nowadays more and more students are found cheating in the exams. Reasons may vary from person to person. Anyway, they can be generalized as follows: To begin with, with

24、endless examinations flooding in, some students may have difficulty working them out. Also, some students are too lazy to focus their attention on their studies. Besides, others cheat for high scores to please their parents and teachers. Personally, I think it is wrong to cheat in the exams, for one

25、 thing, it goes against the rules of schools; for another, itll result in the crisis of ones honesty. Therefore, we should devote ourselves to study and try to make progress with our own efforts.,Im very glad to receive the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thinking about the question

26、 you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finished your studies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in our country. It will be quite easily for you to find good job. In fact, I know a few big company in our city hope to hire people like you. For other reason I think it will be too more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. And this is only my point of view. It is up to you to make a right choice.,asked,ago,