初中英语写作基础训练.ppt

1、初中英语写作基础训练-My Friend,Basic Training For English Writing,My friend,Warming up : Guessing Game,Who is she ?,I have a good friend. She is 21years old . She is beautiful with big eyes and long yellow hair. She is one of my classmate and roommate. She is easygoing、kindhearted and gets on well with us.,Ho

2、w to describe a person,1、appearance： face, facial expression, body, clothes 2、personality,Step 1: Lets learn some vocabularies at first.,Vocabulary studyappearance,Face: round face 圆脸 square face 方脸 beautiful 长相完美 good-looking 长得好看 average/plain looking 长相普通 ugly 长相丑陋,Stuff on face,Beard 络腮胡 moustac

3、he 上唇上的小胡子 Spots 斑 Scar 伤疤 Freckles雀斑（复） Wrinkles皱纹,Eyes,Nose,Big eyes Small eyes Sparkling/bright/shining eyes 闪闪发光的双眼,High-bridged nose 高鼻梁 Flat nose 塌鼻子 Noble nose 好看的鼻子,Hair style：,Bob 女士齐短发 Ponytail 马尾辫,Bald 秃顶的 Crew hair 平头 Spiky hair 刺头 Wavy hair 波浪发 Curly hair 卷发 Straight hair 直发,Figure/buil

4、d,Short and stout 矮 胖 Medium build 中等身材 Overweight 超 重 Plump 丰 满 Perfect figure 完美的身材 Muscular 肌肉的 Tall slim 高 瘦 Slender/ slim 苗 条,personality,Lets see the qualities of a good friend.,The qualities of a good friend,Find the adjectives in the following chat and write five of them on your paper.,The q

5、ualities of a good friend,Word puzzle,Word puzzle,英语作文中描述人物品质的词汇,1.害羞的 shy 2.乐于助人的helpful 3.友好的friendly/kind 4.安静的 quiet 5.沉默的silent 6.耐心的 patient 7.仔细的careful,8.精力充沛的energetic 9.外向的out-going 10.勇敢的brave 11.诚实的honest 12.热心肠的warm-hearted 13.容易相处的easy-going,Basic Training For English Writing,Step 2 :

6、information gap,live in,Where does he/she live?,Get your answer by asking questions: 通过互相提问获得缺失信息，为写作准备素材,study at,hobbies,Do well in,personalities,sex,was born on,appearance,Information gap,Is Zhang Hua a boy or a girl?,Where does he/she study?,When was he/she born?,Whatre his/her hobbies?,What doe

7、s he/she looks like?,What does he/she do well in?,What do you think of him/her?,live in,No.308, Xingfu Road,Zhang Hua,study at,No.1 High School,hobbies,all kinds of， favourite ， play football collect stamps,do well in,all the subjects， esp. English,Character,kind，honest everyone likes him,sex,a boy,

8、was born on,May 21st, 1997,tall/height,1.8 metres tall with a height of 1.8m,Basic Training ForEnglish Writing,Step 3:prewriting,What aspects should be included?,典型句型,My friends name is*. He/She is * years old. He/Shes from*. He/She has (beautiful) long/short black/brown hair. He/She likes . His/Her

9、 favorite is/are He/She thinks its He/She always/usually/sometimes/often/never does sth.(生活习惯) I think he/she is(我的评价),英语作文中描述人物爱好的词汇,I like chatting with you recklessly and care for nobody after class .,How to combine all the separate sentences into a real composition。 如何将这些零散的句子变成一篇流畅的文章？,Linking

10、words,Basic Training For English Writing,Step 4:writing,练习：用英语写一篇短文, 介绍你朋友李华的基本情况.短文应该包括下表所列全部内容：,姓 名： 李飞 性 别： 男 身 高： 1.75米 出生年月： 1997年7月 就读学校： 合肥一中 特 长： 英语、电脑、 （去年在全校英语竞赛中获第一名） 业余爱好： 游泳、篮球、看书、流行音乐 性 格： 为人友善，人见人爱,Model writing（参考范文）： Li Fei, a boy who is 1.75 metres tall, was born in July, 1997. He

11、studies at Hefei No.1 Middle School. He likes computer and English best and he is very good at them. Moreover, He won first prize in the school English competition. In his spare time he enjoys reading and listening to popular music. His favorite sports are swimming and playing basketball. Since he is warm-hearted, everyone is fond of him.,Basic Training For English Writing,Step 5: peer checking,Exchange writings,Group work,组长收齐本组作文，按照图示与箭头所指的相邻组交换作文,1,2,3,4,5,Group work: choose the best one,beautiful