九年级英语中考话题作文(1)第3课时

1、,博兴县第五中学 王 金 娜,中考话题作文（一）,doctors and nurses,Special holiday,cooks,Special holiday,Study is all! No time to play!,too much schoolwork,so many subjects,online exam,parents expect highly,parents endless nagging,父母期望过高,父母无尽的唠叨,pressure from the entrance exam,来自升学的压力,Task,Write a letter to anyone of the

2、friends in trouble. Give some advice and help them solve the problems.,Write a letter to anyone of the friends in trouble. Give some advice and help them solve the problems.,一审(search),（give some advice ）,（ problems, advice, wishes）,第一，二人称，一般现在时， 一般过去时，一般将来时）,（记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文）,1. Whats Nicks problem

3、? 2. What are the two pieces of advice Jack gave? 3. What are the best wishes Jack gave ?,Read the letter and answer the questions.,invitation,Jacks letter,I hope my ideas are helpful to you. Good luck.,Nick lost his bike. He was afraid to tell his parents.,1.Whats Nicks problem?,3.What are the Jack

4、 gave?,2.What are the two pieces of Jack gave?,advice,best wishes,problem,best wishes,advice,A letter to friends in trouble,I think its best not to,will,First,I think you should,If,Second,will,If,first, second, third, finally,If , will ,problem,advice,best wishes,I think you should do sth I think it

5、s best (not) to do sth ,Body,Ending,Beginning,I am very busy on Friday. At 8:00 I have math. It is not fun. The teacher says it is useful, but I think it is difficult. Then at 9:00 I have science. It is difficult but interesting. At 10:00 I have history. After that, I have P.E. at 11:00. Its easy an

6、d fun. Lunch is from 12:00 to1:00, and after that we have Chinese. It is my favorite subject. Our Chinese teacher, Mr. Wang, is great fun. My classes finish at 1:50, but after that I have an art lesson for two hours. It is really relaxing!,二列 (list),Body 要点,Ending总结,concluding sentence 结论句 -对全文的总结和概

7、括。,supporting sentences支持句 -用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论,topic sentence 主题句 -说出文中的观点、核心问题,Beginning 观点,谋篇布局列好篇章结构,三连(connect),First of all, First(ly), Second(ly), next , and then, since then, finally/ in the end/at last,Whats more, Besides, especially, not only but also, at the same time, and, also, too, ag

8、ain, and then, neithernor,On the one hand On the other hand, Some, while others,however, but, though/although,because; since; as; so; as a result,As far as I know, In my opinion, to tell the truth, I suggest/think that,1.表文章结构顺序： 4.陈述正反方的观点： 2.表示补充、增加信息的： 5.表示原因和结果的： 3.表转折对比关系的： 6.表达自己观点：,A,B,C,D,F,

9、B,E,F,D,C,E,A,关联词(connection words),仔细审题，提炼和归纳 主题句。 2. 开头常用句型： 1) .plays an important part in the. 2) As we all know, . becomes more and more. 3) As everybody knows, .is one of the most.in . 4) Many people say that. But I dont think so. 5) I will never forget the . 6)I know that 7)Im sorry/glad/happ

10、y/to ,四加(Add ),1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。 2. 结尾经典词组、句型： 1) At last/ Finally 最后 2) In a word, . 总而言之 3) In short, . 简言之 4)We hope that 我们希望 5)Lets try our best to . 6)I believe if we ., . will . 7) What a .! / How.! 8)In my opinion, 9)All in all/Above all,Beginning,Ending,They listened to the musi

11、c on the beach.,They_the music on the beach.,Sometimes I wanted to give up.,Sometimes I_ wanted to give up.,Your words were good for me.,Your words were_ _.,With your help, I could be successful.,_your help, I_ be successful.,善用词汇,+ adv.,Simile(比喻),Double negative(双重否定),五美（beautify),enjoyed,even,bri

12、ghtest stars in the dark sky,like the,Without,couldnt,I wish you can help me.,Im _ your help.,They arrived early.,They arrived_. _,I think learning English is interesting.,I think _is interesting to I find _really fun to ,He is a good teacher.,He is a teacher_ _,She is very young. She cant carry the

13、 heavy box.,She is_she cant She is not old_to . She is_ young _.,活用句式,美(beautify),looking forward to,as early as possible,who is kind and,knowledgeable.,it it,so young that enough too to,妙用引文例子,妙用引文和例子,美(beautify),For example, we can use,recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, p

14、lant more trees and save water and energy,美(beautify),常用谚语和俗语,每天一句， 积少成多， 总有一句 适合你的 作文。,中考作文注意点3： 卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加23分。,or,美(beautify),注意书写,1.查字数是否达到要求，看有无遗漏要点。 2.查是否有大小写，拼写，标点错误。 3.查文体格式是否正确规范。 4.查时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。 5.查是否有语法错误。 主谓是否一致 词组的搭配是否合乎习惯 ,六查（check）,一审-二列-三连-四加-五美-六查 一、认真审题，结构正确 二、理清思路，列出提纲 三、连词

15、成句，初步成形 四、检查修改，内容无误 五、遣词造句，争取文采 六、书写美观，锦上添花,Task time,Jim didnt pass the English exam. He wants to learn English well. Write a letter to Jim and give him some advice.,Dear Jim, Im sorry to hear that you didnt pass the English exam. Id like to give you some advice. First, I think its best to practice

16、 English with your friends. If you do, it will improve your speaking. Second, I think you could read English stories. If you do, it will help with your reading. Third, youd better keep a diary. Thats good for writing. Finally, trust yourself and stick to it . Where there is a will, there is a way. (有志者事竟成) I hope you can do better in English! Best wishes for you! Yours, Erin,Chicken Soup for the Soul,Problems and worries are normal in life. We grow with pains. But please remember: no pains, no gains. Lets learn from pains and enjoy more gains！ 问题和烦恼在生活中随处可见。我们的成长是苦涩的。但是请记住：