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1、,英语书面表达,English Composition Writing,Speaking For another, _. Finally, _.,_ has brought a number of benefits to us. is a beneficial activity, in which we can obtain many advantages. First of all, _. Also, _. Most importantly, _.,We are all aware that everything has its two sides. _ is no exception.,开

2、头:,优点：,缺点：,结尾:,1）In spite of these disadvantages, I think _ does more good than harm to people. And the disadvantages, since they have been pointed out clearly, will be dealt with effectively.,2）Weighing the two sides, there is no denying the fact that _ has produced great effects on society.,3）To c

3、onclude, I would say that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.,4）In sum, _ does more good than harm to _. We must take a correct attitude towards _. We should take full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantages.,（2）利弊型的议论文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)_作文题目_.

4、In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in _题目议题_. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, _优点一_. And secondly _优点二_. Just As a popular saying goes, every coin has two sides, _讨论议题_ is no exception, and in another word, it still

5、has negative aspects. To begin with, _缺点一_. In addition, _缺点二_. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of _讨论议题_ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the _讨论议题_.,2) 巧用衔接词,1) 表示平行或选择关系 as well as,

6、 together with, not onlybut also., rather than 2) 表示转折关系 however, in spite of, otherwise, while 3) 表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand. 4) 表示因果关系 therefore, as a result (of), owing to, due to, thanks to,5）表示时间、顺序关系 firstly, secondly, , for one thing . for another, eventu

7、ally 6）表示递进、强调关系 whats more, in addition, worse still, moreover, furthermore, above all 7）表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance, in other words, and so on 8）表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion,1) _education is beneficial to us students. 不可否认，教育对我们学生是有 益

8、的。 2) _ education is very important to us. 全世界都知道，教育对我 们是非常重要的。 3) _education concerning quality leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问，我们有关素质的教育是令人不满意。,3) 优美句型,There is no denying that,It is universally acknowledged that,There is no doubt that,4) _using the frogs to kill harmful insects _it wont crea

9、te any pollution. 使用青蛙捕捉害虫的优点是它不会制造任何 污染。 5) _ people found what environment meant to us. 直到多 年之后人 们才发现环境对我们来说意 味着什么。 _people find what environment meant to us. 6) _we cant afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵，经不起浪费。,An advantage of,is that,It was not until many years later that,Not until many years later di

10、d,So precious is time that,7) _always stay healthy. 只有借着做运动，我们才会始终保持健康。 8) _, Im still unable to find a suitable place to live in. 虽然我已经很努力 了，但是我依然找不到合适的居住地。,9) _ignore the value of reading. 我们 绝对不能忽略读书的价值。 10) _that the authorities concerned _ proper steps to solve the environmental problems. 该是有关

11、当局采取适当的措施来解决环境问题的时候了。 11) We _ lay _much emphasis on education. 我们在怎么强调教育也不为过。,Only by taking exercise will we,Hardworking as I am,On no account can we,It is time,took,can never,too,12) _good interpersonal relationship plays an important role in our life. 显然，良好的人际关系在我们的生活中扮演着重要的作用。 13) We should _pr

12、otect our environment. 我们应该不遗余力的去保护我 们的环境。 14) Protecting frogs _protecting our environment. 保护青蛙与保护环境息息相关。,15) _some effective measures, we can finally protect the earth. 因为一些有效的措施，我们最终才能保护地球。,It is obvious that,spare no efforts to,is closely related to,Thanks to,16) _ we are admitted to universiti

13、es. 过不了多久我们就会被大学录取。 17) _Mo Yan has won the Nobel Prize in literature. 我印象最深的就是莫言获得了诺贝尔文学奖。 18) _we have to protect frogs _they are friends of man. 我们必须保护青蛙的原因是它们是人类的朋友。,19) _effective actions we take, _life we will live. 我们的措施越有效，我们的生活就会更好。,It will not be long before,What impresses me most is that,

14、The reason why,is that,The more,the better,Steps,Contents,Description (Para 1),Analysis (Para 2),Solution (Para 3),“kiss” the wall; is caught by; drink so much; cant stand normally,a great danger; forbid drinking; raise awareness towards safety; make stricter laws,spread out the approaches; our self

15、-conscience ; pay enough attention to,Exchange and discuss your partners composition, then give each other a score according to the following criteria.,Pair work,考场作文TIPS,取悦评卷人 润色文章原则,有清晰的整体脉络 有自然的段间衔接 经典的用词用句 有整齐美观的书写 用词“老辣” 用句经典: 倒装、强调、虚拟 名人名言,题型,对比观点 (2或3选1) 说明利弊 图表作文 解决方法 阐述主题 应用文,说明利弊,说明事物现状(一句

16、带过）,Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)作文题目. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in 题目议题.,说明利弊, 事物本身 的优缺点 展开,Its advantages can be seen as follows Generallyspeaking,itiswidely believedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsas follows The negative aspects are also ap

17、parent Firstly, _优点一_. And secondly _优点二_. Tobeginwith,(缺点一).Inaddition,(缺点二). To make matters worse,说明利弊,你对现状（或前景）的看法 4. 喊口号,Through above analyses, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh(胜于) the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to . From the comparison between We should do it accordin

18、g to the circumstances we are in. Only throughcan we have a bright future.,说明利弊,Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First (的优点之一). Besides,（的优点之二）. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are

19、also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that (的第一个缺点)To make matters worse, (的第二个缺点) Through above analyses, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to (我的看法) (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we shoul

20、d take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, (对前景的预测),漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点,影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面,Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?,1.The character of this gala is that it relates peoples lives,2.The most striking feature of this gala is its tradition

21、ally close link with ordinary peoples lives.,3.Young people dont want to watch TV ,so they pay attention to other forms of celebration.,4.Young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.,_,_,_,_,影响给分的因素之二： 文中所采用的语言材料,人靠衣装，文靠词装,A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；

22、,B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;,Practice,Find some similar words or phrases of the followings,good 2. think 3.clever,perfect excellent outstanding pleasant wonderful favorable magnificent,in ones opinion/view hold the view that it is widely shared that ,wise bright smart intelligent cute,改变句子结构,与众不同,1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发

23、生过一次大地震。,A strong/big earthquake happened in Tangshan in the 1980s.,There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.,A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tang Shan in the 1980s.,2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.,I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.,Your letter of August 15th re

24、ached/got to me this morning.,改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化,1.He got excited when he heard the news. _ the news, he got excited. 2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty. _, the girl went home. 3.I studied Chinese, English and Physics at school. _include Chinese, English and Physics . 4.It was ea

25、rly in the morning. Mr. Smith was in his garden. He was watering flowers. _, Mr. Smith was watering _.,Hearing,Hungry and thirsty,The main subjects I studied at school,Early in the morning,in the garden,使用强势句式，增强语句表现力,1.We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. _we were to see crops and

26、 vegetables growing well! 2. Radio broadcasts didnt begin until 1920. It was_. 3.He never speaks about his own family. Never_. 4.A notice is saying ”Please Save Water” on the wall. On the wall_. 5.Though he is a child, he knows a lot. _.,How glad,not until 1920 that radio broadcasts began,does he sp

27、eak about his own family,is a notice saying ”Please Save Water”,Child though/as he is, he knows a lot,影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅,上下贯通、一气呵成 正确而巧妙地使用好连接词,and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.,1.表递进 .表转折 .表因果 .表目的 .表归纳,but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite afte

28、r all,on the contrary,on the other hand.,because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.,in order that,so that,for the purpose of.,in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole.,如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？,Many houses and school

29、s were destroyed. More than five million people are living a hard life now. The students there need help and schools should be built. Students can return to classes soon.,William Shakespeare (2008高考湖南卷书面表达)Do you know Hamlet? Have you read The Merchant of Venice? These two great works are both writt

30、en by William Shakespeare, my favorite English writer and the man of all ages! Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world, I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world; I love him because h

31、is poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! Since “Life is a stage”, we are actually all actors and actresses. On this stage, everyone had his own role to play. and I will try my best to pl

32、ay my role well.,_,影响给分的因素之四：文章的思想,Simple sentence(简单句): Hearing the news, he was happy.,B) Compound sentence A（并列句）: He gave me a book but I forgot to bring it back home.,C) Compound sentence B（复合句）: What he is doing has nothing to do with me.,“规范的英语句子”就是我们经常讲的三种句子：,1.学会使用规范的英语句子,Here are 3 ways to

33、 make sentences:,I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：,1)借助名词短语做同位语,如：李立，男，19岁，1991年生；籍贯：广东。,Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 1991.,2)借助介词短语做定语,如：李飞, 男，10岁，棕色短发，穿白色茄克。,Li Fei is a ten-year-old boy with short brown hair and in a white jacket.,如：有了Tom的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。,With the help of Tom, we soon found the

34、ir village.,4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语,如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。,They were standing under the big tree, waiting for the president. Standing under the big tree, they were waiting for the President.,3)借助介词短语做状语,II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：,如：他给我很多钱，我不要。,I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you.,如：我刚走到拐角处，就见到你

35、了。,He gave me a lot of money but I refused.,III. 用好从句和引导词写出规范的复合句：,1) 名词性从句,如：老师生气。原因：王力迟到。,That Wang Li came late to school made the teacher very angry.,2) 定语从句,如：中国,地处亚洲东部；特点：地大物博、人口众多。,China, which lies in the east of Asia, is a great country with a large area and population as well as rich natur

36、al resources.,I was deeply moved by this, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.,3) 状语从句,如：雷锋还活在我们心中，我深受感动。,2、灵活运用九种句式,有意识的将下列句式结构运用到作文中去，可以迅速地让我们的作文靓起来。重要的是我们要学会如何灵活的变通、巧妙地运用到考试作文中去。,1. People grow rice in the south of China. Rice is grown in the south of China. 2. They have printed

37、 one and a half million copies of the dictionary since 1986. One and a half million copies of the dictionary have been printed since 1986.,一、主动句与被动句的互换。,二、将陈述句改为倒装句。,I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time. Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time. 2.

38、 We did not realize our mistakes until at that time. Not until at that time did we realize our mistakes.,三、将简单句改为强调句,Smoking did great harm to his health. It was smoking that did great harm to his health. 2. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents. It is through hard work that our money

39、 is earned by our parents. 3. He went there yesterday. He did go there yesterday.,四、将两个简单句合并为并列句,1.You can do it. I can do it. One of us must do it. you I must do it. 2.I want to buy this bike. I dont have enough money. I want to buy this bike, I dont have enough money.,Either,or,but,五、将两个简单句合并为复合句,

40、1. 同位语和同位语从句 Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games. _, _, won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games. 2) The word is true. The president will give our school a speech. _ is true _ the president will give

41、 our school a speech.,Liu Xiang,an excellent athlete,It,that,2. 定语从句 1) The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing, and its slogan is One World, One Dream, The 2008 Olympic Games, _ _ 2) In my opinion, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting. In my opinion, the Great Wall an

42、d the Summer Palace _ 3) Yesterday, we went to the East Gate, and we bought a lot of clothes. Yesterday, we went to the East Gate, _ _,One Dream, will be held in Beijing.,are the two places which are well worth visiting.,where we bought a,Whose slogan is One World,lot of clothes.,3. 主语从句 1) His wond

43、erful performance on the stage impressed me. most was his wonderful performance on the stage. 2) It satisfied me. The dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes. the dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes. 3) I learned from the story that as long as we h

44、ave patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams. as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams.,What impressed me,What satisfied me is that,What I have learnt from the story is that,推荐句型,What surprises astonished satisfied impressed me is th

45、at What I would like to suggest advise put forward is that What matters most is that What I learnconclude from the story is that,4. 表语从句 推荐句型： is no longer what it used to be. 1) 我的家乡不再像以前那样了。 My hometown is no longer what it used to be. 2) 他不再是以前那样了。 He is no longer what he used to be.,5. 状语从句 结果、程

46、度 sothat ; such that 让步 no matter how what when where. =whatever, however, whenever, wherever 时间 was doingwhen , as soon as, the moment, the next time, every time,1)不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的克服他们。 _ _, we should learn to overcome them independently. 2) 我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有人叫我。 I _ along the road _ suddenly I hea

47、rd my name called.,No matter how many difficulties there,was walking,when,are ahead of us,六、将两个简单句合并为一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句,1. Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things. Different people have different opinions about it. Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary thing

48、s, about different people have different opinions. 2. Many boys learn to smoke. It does harm to their health. Many boys learn to smoke, _ _,which,which does harm to,their health.,七、it 作形式主语或形式宾语句型,1. You pretend to know what you dont know. Its no good. Its no good pretending to know what you dont kn

49、ow. 2. It is easy to get on with Pam. I find. I find it easy to get on with Pam.,八、分词结构代替状语从句,If you work harder, you will do better in the exam next time. _, you will do better in the exam next time. 2. Because my friend was frightened of losing his job, he said nothing to the police. _, my friend

50、said nothing to the police.,Working hard,Frightened of losing his job,九、 将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with 引导的短语或者复合结构。,With + 宾语+ adj./ adv./ 介词短语/ to dodoingdone 常用句型 with a population of. with a total area of with a long history of years,1) 这个地区占地2000平方千米，人口10万。 This area covers an area of 2000 square kilo

51、meters, _ 2)我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的学生来参观。 _, it attracts a large number of people. 3) 我们学校是一所有100多年历史的名校。 Our school is a famous one _ _,with a population of 100,000.,With many flowers surrounding our school,with a history of over 100 years.,4）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。 _, the boy dared not go to school. 5) 这两个男人

52、早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。 The two men went to bed early, _ _. 6) 他睡觉的时候嘴巴张得大大的。 He sleep _.,with candles burning a night long,With homework not finished,with his mouth wide open,表达个人观点的用语,I think/ I firmly believe that in my opinion, / in my view,. personally speaking, As far as I am concerned, In my point of

53、view, . I agree with somebody/ something. I agree that I agree to do,常用句子,No matter how difficult English may be, you should do your best to learn it. Nothing can prevent us from realizing the four modernizations. As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.

54、 Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldnt say a word. There is no denying (the fact) that the new management method has greatly increased the production.,常用句子,I take it for granted that they will support this idea. It is true that we must make our greater efforts; otherw

55、ise, we cannot catch up with the developed countries. We will be successful as long as we insist on working hard. To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other choice. As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the book. As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was solved.,常用句子,As is known to u