范本修改 Topic Sentence Writing.ppt

1、Topic Sentence Writing,Through Brainstorming,traveling,Step 1: Activate Information,Traveling money, time, partner, transportation, vocation, gain knowledge, relax, build a strong body, have fun, be cheated, dangerous, learn sth out of book, an unforgettable experience, colorful life, fresh air take

2、 adventure, make friends, aboard ones sight, a good memory, culture, food, view, positive emotion, people, meet the bad guy, make family worried, different lifestyles, climate, weather, background, religious of belief, custom, geography,Step 2: Classify by Coloring!,Traveling money, time, partner, t

3、ransportation, vocation, gain knowledge, relax, build a strong body, have fun, be cheated, dangerous, waste, learn sth out of book, an unforgettable experience, colorful life, fresh air take adventure, make friends, aboard ones sight, a good memory, culture, food, view, positive emotion, meet the ba

4、d guy, make family worried, custom, different lifestyles, climate, weather, background, religious of belief, geography,Step 3: Cluster!,Traveling vocation, learn sth out of book, have fun, relax, build a strong body, an unforgettable experience, take adventure, make friends, fresh air, aboard ones s

5、ight, colorful life, different lifestyles, a good memory, positive emotion, gain knowledge, meet the bad guy, make family worried, waste, dangerous, be cheated, custom, money, time, partner, transportation, food, culture, view, religious of belief, geography, climate, weather, background,Step 4: Gen

6、eralize & Write Topic Sentence!,Group 1 Group 2 Group 3,Group1,vocation, have fun, relax, a good memory, aboard ones sight, build a strong body, gain knowledge, positive emotion, learn sth out of book , an unforgettable experience, make friends, fresh air, take adventure, different lifestyles, color

7、ful life,Further Classify!,Prepare for topic sentence writing,vocation, have fun, relax, a good memory, aboard ones sight, build a strong body, gain knowledge, positive emotion, learn sth out of book , an unforgettable experience, make friends, fresh air, take adventure, different lifestyles, colorf

8、ul life,A good memory for the vocation. (topic sentence 1) An unforgettable experience to obtain benefits. (topic sentence 2) An opportunity to enjoy a colorful life. (topic sentence 3),Judge & Generalize!,Further Generalization!Thesis statement,A good memory for the vocation.(TS1) An unforgettable

9、experience to obtain.(TS2) An opportunity to enjoy a colorful life.(TS3),People can be benefit from traveling.,Phrase outline,Topic: Traveling Thesis: People can be benefit from traveling. Outline: I. a good memory of vocation A. a chance to get rid of boring daily life B. have a good time during tr

10、aveling II. an unforgettable experience to obtain benefits A. have different experiences B. gain more knowledge out of book, do good to health C. leads to a positive emotion III. an opportunity enjoy a colorful life A. make friends with different people B. enjoy different lifestyles,Sentence outline

11、,Topic: Traveling Thesis: People can be benefit from traveling. Outline: I. Traveling can be a good memory for your vocation. A. Its a chance to get rid of boring daily life. B. You can have a good time during traveling. II. You will have an unforgettable experience to obtain benefits. A. Different

12、places will give you different experiences.,B. Traveling more can make you gain more knowledge out of book, and do good to your health. C. Traveling leads to a positive emotion . III. Its an opportunity for you to enjoy a colorful life. A. You can make friends with people who comes from different pl

13、aces. B. You can enjoy different lifestyles in you journey.,Traveling,Nowadays, tourism becomes more and more popular all over the world. People are fond of traveling to different places according to their vocation and money available. In my opinion, I think there are three main reasons to show the

14、benefits from traveling. Firstly, traveling can be a good memory for your vocation. When you feel tired and stressful during your work, study, or life, you can make yourself a meaningful traveling. You will feel relax, and have a lot of fun in your traveling which can be a good memory in your life.

15、Secondly, you can have an unforgettable experience to obtain benefits. Travel to different places can make you see different views, taste different food and drinks, or even experience different culture. So travel more can aboard your sight, build you a strong body, and gain your knowledge out of book .Besides, all these advantages can give you a positive emotion. Thirdly, its an opportunity for you to enjoy a colorful life. In your boring daily life, you may be fed up with meeting the same people day after day. However, du