初中英语人教版七年级下册写作课件.ppt

1、,Topic writing ： Friends Zhang Xiaoli,Unit9 What does he look like?,He is a famous actor. He is of medium height. He has short straight hair and a big nose. He is good at Chinese kung fu.,Who is he ?,He is Jackie Chan.,Some clues(线索):,Guessing Game,lead-in,Writing,_ _ _ _,My best friend,每个人都有自己的好朋友。

2、你心目中最好的朋友是谁，长什么样？请你以“My best friend”为题，写一篇60词左右的短文来描述你的好朋友。 要求： 1. 60词左右； 2. 语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整。,Body parts face, mouth, eye, nose, hair, leg,head,Physical appearance,Structures He/She is tall/short/of medium height/heavy/thin He/She has big/small mouth/eyes/nose. long/round face. long/short curly/strai

3、ght black/blonde hair. wears glasses/a school uniform.,Descriptive words round,long,big. small,curly, straight.black, blonde, thin, of medium height, heavy,handsome,beautiful,friendly, funny,Writing Time,用词方面:,代词主格,宾格； 名词单复数； 动词搭配；副词位置,句子方面:,篇章方面:,细节方面:,句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态； 连词使用,内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理,单词拼写；标点符号；

4、大小写,Post-writing,Checking time 1.自检 2.互查 3.组内讨论 4.组外评价,批改指导,评分表,评分标准,Show Time,1.展示组内代表作品 2.集体评价，师生合作。 发现优点，指出不足，改进可提升之处,优秀作文分享： My best friend My name is Jim, Jack is my best friend. Let me tell you what he looks like. First of all, he is very tall and handsome. He has straight brown hair but he do

5、esnt wear glasses. He usually wears jeans, a T-shirt and sports shoes. I like him because he is really cool and fun, and he is good at soccer.,开门见山，道出好朋友的名字。,直接点明喜欢自己朋友的原因，升华主题。,从他的外貌、穿着等方面描述自己的好朋友，逻辑清晰，层次感强。,My best friend Everyone has his best friend. I also has a best friend. Her name is Mary, a

6、middle school student. Let me tell you what she looks like. She is beautiful. She has a round face and a small mouth. She also has a long black hair and big eyes. She usually wears a pair of glasses. We can usually see she wears red dress and white shoes. Mary is a kind and nice girl and she often helps me study. So I like her very much.,先有总起句引出主题，再简单介绍自己朋友的基本信息。,全文采用不同句式来描述她的外貌、穿着等方面，语言丰富，有质感；。全文使用“but, and, also”等连词使行文连贯，而且有层次感。,结尾从不同角度描述她的特点，从而为作者喜欢她提供理由。,本文思路清晰，结构完整，内容丰富,英语写作四步曲：一审二列三写四抄,审,列,写,抄,细,全,美,准,五确定,确定是否需要标题 确定体裁（叙述、议论、应用文等） 确定时态 确定人称 确定格式,一列要点二列重点词语句式,1、选择恰当的连词 2、句子