小学英语作文课件

1、English Writing,评价的标准,1、文章是否有内容？,（是否离题？是否切合话题？）,2、文章是否有标题？,3、文章是否具有语法错误？,（是否书写正确？）,A）标点符号；B)大、小写；C) 单词拼写；D)书写；E)句型、时态,4、好词好句 （是否采用名言名句，好的句型句式，是否真实地表达自己的感情？）,5、字数是否达到要求？,Look And write,看图作文,How to write a picture story?,Go over the requirement（person, tense, style）,Go over the pictures（who, what, whe

2、re, when, why, how),Write a passage （using connectives and adding details and specific information. ),基本篇章结构 点题（时间、地点、人物、事件） 事件的起因 事件的发展/过程 事件的结果 扣题,Using connectives,并列 转折 3. 因果 4. 其他,and, bothand,but, however, though, while,so, therefore, because,when, suddenly, immediately, as soon as , unfortuna

3、tely, sothat , finally, as a result, What was worse,Sample 1,根据下列图画中 Tom 骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。 短文要写得连贯、完整。,1. Go over the requirement,1. topic : 2. Tense( generally): 3. Person:,A story （a traffic accident),past tense,Tom , he,Tom /ride a bike Along the street/road A few days ago/ the other day/ one day

4、,2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),A car / run fast to/run into him Tom/ fall off his bike Suddenly,2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how

5、),The driver/ frightened/ run away,2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),A woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch,2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how),Key words,sentences

6、,ride a bike /run fast to,When Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him.,hit him /fall off his bike,The car hit him. And he fell off his bike.,be frightened /run away,The driver was so frightened that he ran away.,see the accident /remember the number /call the police /be caught,A woma

7、n saw the accident and remembered the number of the car. She called the police. Finally，the driver was caught.,3. Writing a passage,Passage 1,Tom was riding along the street. A car ran fast to him. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver was frightened. He ran away. A woman saw the acci

8、dent. She remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman. The driver was caught.,passage 2,The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car wa

9、s so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver was caught and punished for his

10、 wrong doing.,Passage 3,The other day, Tom was riding along the street when he saw a car run fast towards him. He turned left quickly but it was too late. The car hit him and he fell off his bike. The driver of the car was so frightened that he ran away as fast as he could. He was soon out of sight, leaving Tom helpless on the spot. Fortunately, a woman happened to see it and remembered the number of the car. She called the policeman and told him what had happened. Finally, the driver w